By
David Cramer
She walks across the room to the dresser that sits against
the wall opposite the bed and looks into the attached
mirror. She touches at her face, as if not recognizing the
reflection.
Apprehensively, she exits the bedroom into...
MARIANNE
Hello?
She pauses, listening, but there is no reply.
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CONTINUED: 2.
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CONTINUED: 3.
KYLE
Coffee would be amazing. Im Kyle,
by the way.
MARIANNE
Marianne.
After grabbing coffee from the library cafe, they return to
the table and begin to talk. They talk for hours, their
studying forgotten.
KYLE
Are you enjoying your first hours
as Mrs. Evers?
MARIANNE
I am, Mr. Evers.
KYLE
Have you I told you in the last ten
minutes how deeply Im in love with
you?
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CONTINUED: 4.
MARIANNE
You have, but I could do with a
reminder.
Kyle leans in and kisses his wife.
MARIANNE
Its funny that all of this started
with you passing me a note in the
library.
KYLE
I know. Just like in sixth grade.
You should have put little check
boxes with yes and no underneath
it.
MARIANNE
I considered it, actually.
KYLE
You did not... Well, thank goodness
you had the sense to do something.
I probably would have sat there all
night with my nose in my book.
MARIANNE
That would have been a shame. Its
such a cute nose.
MARIANNE
Kyle?
There is no reply, but in her peripheral vision, Marianne
glimpses something or someone move past the open door. She
walks towards the door.
MARIANNE
Hello?
She peers out into...
5.
MARIANNE
Oh, Im sure we will.
KYLE
Yeah, its great. Maybe Ill get to
chop some wood.
MARIANNE
Since when do you have a desire to
be a lumberjack?
KYLE
Since always. Who doesnt want to
chop down a tree?
REALTOR
Well, if you all ever need any
wood, the Millers down the block
usually have plenty extra and give
away bundles in the winter to
anyone that needs em.
MARIANNE
Thanks. Well keep that in mind.
REALTOR
Now, let me show you two the
upstairs. Like I said before, there
are three bedrooms - one master
(MORE)
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CONTINUED: 7.
REALTOR (contd)
bedroom and two smaller bedrooms
that are great for children. Do you
all have any children?
Marianne and Kyle look at each other.
MARIANNE
Nope. Not yet. But hopefully soon.
KYLE
Were been working on it. Until
then, well have an office and a
guest room.
MARIANNE
And we can always convert one of
them into a nursery down the road
if we get lucky.
REALTOR
Well, that sounds great.
MARIANNE
It does.
They exchange a smile as they exit the living room to
explore the rest of the house.
MARIANNE
Whos there?
She exits the living room into...
KYLE (O.S.)
Im home.
MARIANNE
In here...
Kyles footsteps grow louder until he enters the kitchen. He
goes to her and gives her a kiss. He moves to the counter
behind her and grabs a wine glass hanging from the wine
glass holder installed under the cabinets and reaches for a
bottle of wine.
KYLE
Ugh, what a long day. Im in
desperate need of wine... Want me
to pour you a glass?
KYLE
That smells delicious by the way.
He leans over to see what shes making and takes in the
elaborate meal shes preparing.
KYLE
Geez, youre pulling out all the
stops, arent you? Whats the
occasion?
MARIANNE
I figured we could celebrate. Can
you pass me that?
She gestures to the pregnancy test, sitting on the edge of
the counter. He turns to grab it.
KYLE
Sure. Celebrate what?
Kyle begins to hand the stick to her when he looks down and
realizes what hes holding. He looks back up to her face.
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CONTINUED: 10.
KYLE
Really?
MARIANNE
Really.
DESATURATED:
Marianne turns the page to see a photo of a newborn baby,
wrapped in the standard newborn garb, complete with a pale
blue beanie, to indicate to the world that hes a boy, and a
hospital bracelet wrapped around his ankle.
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CONTINUED: 11.
MARIANNE
Well, at least he got your nose.
Ive always hated mine.
KYLE
Oh, your nose is more than fine.
MARIANNE
You know, I know every parent
thinks their child is the most
beautiful baby ever...
KYLE
(Interrupting)
Even though some babies just look
weird...
MARIANNE
Thats not very nice.
KYLE
... but it is true.
MARIANNE
Maybe. But... he really is a
beautiful baby, isnt he?
Kyle beams at her.
KYLE
We did good.
They share a brief kiss before the room erupts in sound as
friends and family rush into the room with balloons and
flowers.
MARIANNE
Its bath time. Why dont you pick
out a book for bedtime while I
start the water, hun?
NOAH
Okay, mommy.
Marianne exits the room into...
MARIANNE
Did you pick one, yet?
He proudly holds up his choice.
NOAH
This one.
MARIANNE
Excellent choice. Okay, bath time.
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CONTINUED: 13.
MARIANNE
Okay, time for bed.
NOAH
Awww, five more minutes.
MARIANNE
You have until I get back with your
your pajamas and a towel.
She walks out into...
Marianne returns and helps him to dry off and get dressed.
NOAH
When is daddy coming home?
MARIANNE
Hell be home soon, sweetie. He had
to work late.
NOAH
He works late a lot.
MARIANNE
I know, hun, but things will
lighten up soon and hell be able
to come home sooner and tuck you in
and read to you, himself. Would you
like that?
NOAH
Yeah.
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CONTINUED: 14.
MARIANNE
Okay, time for bed.
Marianne tucks Noah in and sits in the chair beside his bed
and begins to read.
DESATURATED:
A drop of water hits the page.
Marianne wipes at her eyes, mistaking it for tears, but she
isnt crying. Another drop hits the book, and another hits
her hand.
She looks up at the ceiling, which appears wet and slightly
bulging.
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CONTINUED: 15.
MARIANNE
Hello? Is someone in there?
She jerks her head to see the door at the end of the hallway
is now shut.
She looks back into the bathroom, which is completely dry,
the bathtub empty.
Panicked, she turns and runs back through the hall and down
the stairs...
... and, grabbing the set of keys from the bowel on the side
table next to the door, runs out of the house...
... and gets into her car. She backs out of the driveway in
a hurry, knocking over the mailbox in the process.
With a glance at her house on the right, she drives off down
the road.
She looks up from the radio and sees someone standing in the
road by the mailbox. It is a woman with brown hair wearing a
yellow cardigan.
She walks back along the path leading to the front door. She
pauses a moment before opening the door and walking back
into...
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CONTINUED: 18.
Marianne screams as she turns away to run. She runs from the
room, pulling the door shut behind her as she enters...
... the hallway. She runs towards the stairs, where now an
attic ladder is extended. Not hesitating, Marianne runs to
the ladder and climbs it.
WOMAN
Its my fault...
Still frightened, Marianne pulls the hatch shut.
NOAH
Mommy?
Marianne turns around to see Noah standing in front of her,
his pajamas soaked through with water.
MARIANNE
Noah?
She begins to cry.
19.
NOAH
I forgot my bath toys.
MARIANNE
Go ahead and get in, hun. Ill go
grab them.
Marianne leaves the room.
MARIANNE
Next time, call. Its been hours.
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CONTINUED: 20.
MARIANNE
You said that three weeks ago,
Kyle. Cant you just come home for
dinner and finish your work here?
KYLE (O.S.)
There are too many distractions at
home. I wouldnt get anything done.
MARIANNE
Oh, so your wife and child are
distractions?
KYLE (O.S.)
You know what I mean...
KYLE (O.S.)
Look, if I just focus on my work
here, I can get through it sooner
and be home to actually spend time
with you guys.
KYLE (O.S.)
Whats wrong? Marianne?
The cell phone drops to the floor as Marianne sprints from
the room.
KYLE (O.S.)
Hello?
She rushes forward and reaches into the water to pull him
out.
MARIANNE
Help! Somebody help!
She lays him on the floor and feels at his neck. She slaps
at his face, which is turning blue.
MARIANNE
Come on, baby, wake up!
She pulls him into her arms and carries him through...
... the bedroom. She lays Noah on the floor and picks up her
cell phone.
KYLE (O.S.)
Hello? Whats wrong?
MARIANNE
Come home now! Noahs hurt. Ive
got to call 9-1-1.
She disconnects and dials 9-1-1, putting the phone on
speakerphone as she begins CPR.
OPERATOR (O.S.)
9-1-1. Whats your emergency?
MARIANNE
My son isnt breathing. I found him
under the water in the bathtub. Im
trying to give him CPR but its not
helping.
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CONTINUED: 23.
OPERATOR (O.S.)
Okay maam, Ive got your address
here and Ive dispatched an
ambulance. Stay on the line with me
until they get there.
KYLE
I made an appointment for tomorrow
with a grief counselor.
Marianne stares through him, not responding.
KYLE
I think that it might help us.
Silence.
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CONTINUED: 24.
KYLE
Honey, please talk to me.
DESATURATED:
Marianne opens her teary eyes. Her son is no longer in the
attic with her.
MARIANNE
No. Please no.
She drops to her knees and sobs heavily for a moment.
MARIANNE
Please.
She continues sobbing as she looks up to see the woman
standing where Noah stood just a moment ago. She is also
sobbing, their faces mirroring each others grief.
MARIANNE
Is there anything I can do? What do
you want from me?
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CONTINUED: 25.
WOMAN
Theres nothing you can do. Its
already done. Its all over.
Marianne looks from the womans bloody and bruised face to
the bloody yellow cardigan. She looks behind her at the
window.
MARIANNE
I understand.
FADE OUT
THE END