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Name:Victor Daniel Aponte Fuentes

a)more effective b)health c)entertainment

-Methodic -Stressed -Being distract

-Intelligent -Develop right hemisphere -Funny

-Agility -Helps stimulation -More attentive

ESSAY

Some people are debating whether games have the same importance for adults
and childrens.american investigations shows that it is important for both.In my way
of thinking the benfits of games is for this two generations for that reasons.

First playing games make them more effective. To begin with, games becomes you
in a methodic person.to illustrate, New York times show that people who play a lot
of games have thirty percent more ways to solve something. To continue, it makes
people more intelligent .For example, my cousin plays always video games and
has the best grades of his school.Finally,then agility to do something is incredible.
It is a fact that you are effective if you entrain your brain. For that reasons you can
be an effective people.

On the second place, it helps your health.first,games de-stresse you.It is a fact if


you distract your mind with something, you forget your problems .Besides,playing
games develop the right sicle of you brain.to show about it,scientist says that one
of ten people are more creative just for playing games.To finish, videogames help
your stimulation. For example, if you play a lot of games you become a happy
person.there are my reasons to justify it.

To end with,games entertains you no matter the age.the beginning, you becomes
in a funny person.to sum up, playing games are equal important for both sides for
this examples. I recommend to play games for being a better person.
Name:Victor Daniel Aponte Fuentes

a)more effective b)health c)entertainment

-Methodic -Stressed -Being distract

-Intelligent -Develop right hemisphere -Funny

-Agility -Helps stimulation -More attentive

ESSAY WITH MISTAKES

Some people are debating whether games have the same importance for adults
and childrens.american investigations shows that it is important for both.In my
way of thinking the benefits of games is for this two generations for that reasons.

First playing games make them more effective. To begin with, games becomes
you in a methodic person. To illustrate, New York times show that people who
play a lot of games have thirty percent more ways to solve something. To continue,
it makes the people more intelligent .For example, my cousin plays always video
games and has the best grades of his school.Finally,then agility to do something is
incredible. It is a fact that you are effective if you entrain your brain.for that
reasons you can be an effective people.

On the second place, it helps your health.First,games de-stresse you.It is a fact if


you distract your mind with something, you forget your problems .Besides,playing
games develop the right sicle of you brain.To show about it, scientist says that one
of ten people are more creative just for playing games. To finish, videogames help
your stimulation. For example, if you play a lot of games you become in a happy
person. There are my reasons to justify it.

To end with, games entertains you no matter the age. The beginning, you
becomes in a funny person.To sum up, playing games are equal important for both
sides for this examples. I recommend to play games for being a better person.

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