Connor Lord
Ms. Slivka
English 250
2/24/2017
In the realm of government, the words saving money are usually two
money has been one of the main goals on Capitol Hill ever since the meeting
of the first Continental Congress. However, some decisions that seem like
they will save money turn out to have a negative return on their
one hundred and forty science and technology advisers in an effort to save
twenty million dollars per year of taxpayer money. While it seemed like a
be extremely costly. Upon seeing the amount of money that they saved,
These job cuts led to informational deficits which in turn resulted in congress
advice on a topic they specialize in. The authors successfully support their
campaigning against the other side, they offer up detailed and creative
Upon reading the article, the first emotion that is invoked on the
reader is surprise. The authors organized the opening paragraph to make the
decision to get rid of these advisers seem absolutely absurd. They use
decision and to make them wonder how they could make such a reckless
decision. They also deliberatly underplay the fact that the decision was made
to save money, while in the big scheme of things, twenty million dollars is
not actualy that much money, roughly 12 cents per tax paying adult.
(Williams 1), People tend to think that almost anything that can be done to
save money should be done. By strongly emphasizing their own point, the
authors can make the readers believe that it is more important to make
After giving the reader the background information, Tablot and Kota
start to write using language that they know will be familiar to their readers.
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The article was published in the Science section of Wired magazine. The
authors know that the readers will be more interested and intrigued if they
play toward their interest in science and technology. Given that knowledge,
paragraph. Later in the article, a variety of possible solutions to the issue are
they have on hand to maximize the effectiveness of the solutions. The use of
pathos and a play towards the readers interests helps to get the readers
hooked and interested without having to read very far into the article.
While the first part of the article is mainly used to gain the readers
interest and give them some details about the problem at hand, the majority
decision making skills of congress, the authors offer solution after solution to
the issue in order to make it seem less intimidating. In using this strategy,
they establish a sense of hope and give the readers an optimistic outlook on
the solutions that were presented to them. Tablot and Kota also bring up the
point that as a nation that has 147 of the worlds top ranked universities,
with a way to help. At the bottom of the first page they write Theres no
shortage of options for a university seeking to reverse the Hills brain drain.
Since most public universities work with the government anyway on things
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like research and fact finding missions, there would be no problem in using
some of that research to help guide American Democracy. Using this statistic
in the article makes it even more obvious that using these public universities
to enhance the Governments decision making skills is the best option for
solving this problem. When the authors present the readers with an idea that
seems extremely obvious, they are more likely to join in with their argument.
In the final paragraph, the authors bring up a note from Bill Foster, the
only four percent of federal lawmakers who are currently serving have
from people who have experience and knowledge about the subject. The fact
the government has everything under control, but when they are calling for
help, it is important that the citizens respond to them. Bringing up this last
article argues that the government should use all the resources that they
have available to them before making a big decision. Tablot and Kota argue
that with hundreds of the worlds top universities at hand and easy access to
Works Cited
Woefully
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woefully-uninformed-lawmakers/
Income Tax
https://www.forbes.com/sites/beltway/2015/10/06/new-
estimates-of-how-many-households-pay-no-federal-income-
tax/#634adf2a61cb