Bun Tsukamoto
5/3/17
English C Block
Throughout the Junior year, I have written total of 6 essays and learned
gaining knowledge about the new skills and paying deep attention to those
new skills. Especially, thesis and transition words are my two biggest
previous essays. In the SEE Essay, which was a first essay of the junior year,
my thesis even was not answering the prompt. The given prompt was Have
you ever traveled to a place that you found very meaningful and rewarding?
Write an essay that persuades others to visit this important place. However,
scared experience for people in Japan. I realized the fact that it was
completely nothing to do with the prompt given after I received the essay
writer should not repeat the same pattern of the word. For example, I have
stated, They are both mentally strong, and they both have something more
important to them than family. (Bun, 2016) On the other hand, I correctly
used the skill in The Things They Carry Essay, which Id mentioned, In the
chapter, he took his daughter to the battle field because he wants his
daughter to see the field and feel the war. (Bun, 2017) Overall, I have
improved a lot in the thesis as a better writer who could answer the prompt
throughout the junior year. In the SEE essay, I start off the paragraph with
the basic knowledge about the transition word. In the Great Gatsby Essay,
there was only five transition word found in the whole essay. However, there
was a total of eleven transition words found in the Things They Carry
the Slavery Essay, it appeals to be a big issue that I overuse weak verbs like
to go or to do. Comprehensively, stronger sentences definitely be an
vulnerabilities and become a better writer such as thesis and transition word.