Sarah Proulx
Professor Moore
ENGL 1302.08
22 April 2017
Mental illnesses have been a big dilemma for a long time and has been researched by
many people in a wide variety of fields. Giving teens medication over time to treat what they
have has shown that medication is not the best thing most of the time. Instead of treating teens
with just medication adolescents should find better ways to cope with mental illnesses because
some treatments are negatively affecting them over time. Mental illnesses in adolescents are
increasing drastically over time. Some of the problems that has been a factor of increasing these
mental illnesses is sociocultural aspects such as parents. Being a parent is a big responsibility and
if the parent of the teen does not watch out for their child or does not give them enough attention
the teen can then potentially create a mental illness such as depression. Parental characteristics
can contribute towards the development of problems such as depression in adolescents (Agerup,
par.1). Though, it is not only the parents but also teachers and peers. Present technology and the
variety of treatment methods that are being used are also some factors in a teens mental illness.
Sociocultural aspects such as family life has a big impact on adolescents, especially the parents
or guardians of the teen. Technology is an industry that keeps growing worldwide which is very
helpful in our society, but it can also be scary for those people like teens roaming the internet
who are getting cyberbullied. There are also treatment methods such as medication that effect the
adolescent. These three things play a major role in an adolescents life. Though if the guardians
of these teens and the teens themselves alter these lifestyle choices just a bit it can make a
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positive change in their life reducing the teens mental illness. Most of the time people are born
with the mental illness even if they do not start showing signs till later on. If they are not born
with the mental illness than usually the person goes through something traumatizing like people
who get Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). These three things that have an impact on an
adolescents life are things that can increase their mental illness easily and therefore would like to
reduce the stress these three subjects induce on the teens. Some ways to reduce the mental
illnesses in teens is to have the parents or guardians of the adolescent engage more with each
other, make known of the regulations of online cyberbullying and instead of a vast variety of
Families have an immense impact on the emotional stability of their teens. Parents who
are overly involved can exert a lot of pressure on a teen. Those parents who are not involved at
all in the teens life can make the teen anti-social which can lead to depression or the opposite of
manic which can lead to angry outburst. Parents should be close to their children and let them
know they care about them if they do not show it as much. When caregivers are loving and
responsive, children develop secure attachments, acquiring a model of self as loved and valued,
and a model of others as warm and loving (Konishi, par.2). The parents of the adolescent should
spend more personal time with the teen, without being over protective they should set a side time
to make sure the teen is okay and let them talk and tell the parent what is going on in their life.
The biggest part a parent can do for their teen is to let them know that they are there for them.
Parents influence the development of their children by serving as role models (Evans, par. 10).
Children usually follow in their parents footsteps. The way parents act around the adolescent and
treat them is who they are going to grow up to be. Being an indulgent parent would be the best
for a growing adolescent and more efficient in helping their teen who is going through mental
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illnesses. Indulgent parents try to remove outside constraints without endangering the welfare of
the child. Furthermore, indulgent parents provide their child with adult rights but not adult
responsibilities (Evans, par. 14). If parents try their best to be indulgent parents it will take
stress off of the parents shoulders because they will not have to worry as much about their
adolescent feeling as though they had to hide their mental illness. It would help the adolescent
with the mental illness they obtain because they will feel as though they are free from
responsibilities but their parents will still be behind them showing them the way and supporting
them with what they are going through. Not all parents know that their teen has a mental illness
and sometimes the teen does not know they have one either. Though if the adolescent has a
mental illness it is most likely to show more in their adolescence. Once shown then hopefully the
parents of the teen will take action towards getting them the help they need.
Technology is over taking adolescents over the generations. Adolescents are depending
on technology such as internet websites to interact with people instead of socially interacting
with them face to face. Although teens are meeting new people and talking to friends more often,
now it can also be dangerous because there are cyber bullies out there that will not stop even
when the adolescent is at their worse with their mental illness. Parents can help decrease the
internet time that the adolescent has but that would be controlling them which will make them
act out in anger. The adolescent themselves need to be aware of what could happen and the
parents need to monitor what their teens are on. Not just parents but teachers are trying to help
out the teens. Due to the negative impact of cyberbullying on students, schools must take action
to reduce incidents both inside and outside of school (Stauffer, par. 10). When the adolescents
are not at home and at school it is the schools job to watch over the students well-being. Davids
law was made newly in 2017 to help prevent and stop cyberbullying. With technology advancing
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not only does the parents and adolescents have to stand up against it but also society. Even if
parents think their teens are not being cyberbullied they should still educate them about what can
happen to those who cyberbullies. Then the adolescents do not cyberbully others and they know
Besides adolescents being on a wide variety of medications the better thing to do would
be to do behavioral therapy. When being put on a lot of medication, especially at a young age, it
does a lot of harm to the body mentally and physically. Physically when teens take a wide variety
of medication they can gain a lot of weight or vice versa become skinny. Numerous effects can
happen when taking multiple medications at once. Even correctly prescribed and correctly used
medicines can harm through side-effects or unanticipated allergic reactions, ranging from minor
to potentially fatal (Reynolds, par.1). All medication has side effects and usually those are
precautions that do not end up happening. Though if each medication has a side effect those
mixed together the person is bound to have something severe happen to them. Besides the body
being effected and damaged by the multiple medications being used, the brain is also effected.
When starting many medications all at once like some adolescents have to go through what
happens is they start to depend on the medications. Then every time the adolescent feels a certain
way that they are told they should not be feeling such as depression they take another dosage of
medication. When adolescents start doing this and start medicating themselves with all the
medication that was prescribed to them it often leads to an addiction or they overdoes. What
behavioral therapy will do for these adolescents is that instead of taking medication after
medication they can learn how to deal with the emotions they are trying to hide. There are many
types of behavioral therapy that an adolescent can go through it just depends on what their
situation is. Behavioral therapy is the best thing an adolescent can do instead of being prescribed
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and taking medications. Behavioral therapy is something that the adolescent can use the rest of
their life and use during any situation that they are in. This technique helps them get to know
who they are and how they react to things along with how to deal with an emotion like
depression in a healthy manner when they start to feel that way, rather than feeling an emotion
like depression and acting manic upon it. Adolescents should go through behavioral therapy if
therapy is better for the adolescent physically and mentally, it also has no side effects and can
By taking these three steps adolescents can easily get most of the stress off of them and
be able to resume a better stress free life. If the parents are there for them and work with them
and also the teachers and peers in their life then the teens will know that they have someone to
turn to if anything is bothering them and not feel self-conscious or scared thinking they are
alone. Monitoring technology is an important thing that is going on and again if the guardians of
the adolescent watches over them and what they are doing then the guardians will know more
about what their child is going through. Also, teens will not being getting bullied as much
because if the parents of other children are watching what they are doing then the parents of the
bullies can put a stop to it. Then there is behavioral therapy which will comfort the teen and help
them the rest of their lives. Behavioral therapy teaches the teen how to deal with their emotions
in a positive way without relying on medication. If they all work together and keep up these three
things being proposed it will create a better and more relaxing life for the adolescent as well as
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