Marquez1

Blake Marquez

Professor Batty

English 101

24 May 2017

Reflection

After reviewing the feedback that was given to me by my professor and several friends;

and after rereading the essay myself several times I found that this essay did not have too many

crazy mistakes that needed to be fixed. I was particularly proud of this piece of work, however I

still took every piece of criticism I received to be extremely informative and helpful when time

to revise this essay for the final portfolio came. That being said, I did find that most of the

several mistakes I made were in my grammar and MLA formatting. So after carefully reading the

essay several more times; I went through and corrected the mistakes I had made in my grammar,

for example I had to rewrite several sentences to correct wording and make my thoughts flow

better so that the reader can get a better understanding of the argument I was trying to make.

Going through the essay I noticed several other mistakes in formatting such as the layout my

header, and my work citied page. The header I quickly fixed by putting my name right next to the

page number, and I corrected the layout of the work citied page by taking away the indent on the

first line and moving it to the second line. I also realized that I did not put my professors name

which I immediately fixed to give credit to all my professors patience and hard work.