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This compliance report summarizes the suggested revisions for Melvin Escano's graduate thesis on Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation's printing services. Key recommendations include narrowing the focus solely to printing services, revising the title, introducing literature on printing presses, widening the target market beyond VMUF students, improving figures and tables, checking computations, specifying printer specifications, modifying the organizational chart and employee salaries, and placing formulas before computations. The report aims to improve the quality and accuracy of the thesis.
This compliance report summarizes the suggested revisions for Melvin Escano's graduate thesis on Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation's printing services. Key recommendations include narrowing the focus solely to printing services, revising the title, introducing literature on printing presses, widening the target market beyond VMUF students, improving figures and tables, checking computations, specifying printer specifications, modifying the organizational chart and employee salaries, and placing formulas before computations. The report aims to improve the quality and accuracy of the thesis.
This compliance report summarizes the suggested revisions for Melvin Escano's graduate thesis on Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation's printing services. Key recommendations include narrowing the focus solely to printing services, revising the title, introducing literature on printing presses, widening the target market beyond VMUF students, improving figures and tables, checking computations, specifying printer specifications, modifying the organizational chart and employee salaries, and placing formulas before computations. The report aims to improve the quality and accuracy of the thesis.
Martin Posadas Ave., San Carlos City, Pangasinan, 2420, Philippines
GRADUATE SCHOOL COMPLIANCE REPORT Name : Melvin Joel J. Escano Program : Master in Business Administratiojn Title : Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation Publishing and Printing Services Adviser : Michael Armas, MBA, CPA Chairman : Jose Emmanuel C. Mandapat, DA Members : Marcelo G. Paz, PhD : Efren Y. Ignacio : Date of Defense : August 19, 2017
Section/Page Comments / Suggestions Compliance
General Comments Consider focusing on Printing Services. Exclude Publishing all throughout your manuscript.
Revise pagination in accordance
with the institutional format. Title Change title to: Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation Printing Services Chapter I Use: In the city of San Carlos, there is only one well-known Printing Press
How do you serve the
customers in an inspiring environment?
Project Background, use: the
researcher who was inspired by his mother
Why is it that your target
market is exclusive to VMUF students only? Please widen the scope of your clienteles.
p.12: delete validity and
reliability of the instrument Introduction should be found in a new page. In your introduction, provide literatures or studies about printing press.
Project Background: Spell out
CPA the first time you use it in your study.
Research Design, use: in this
study, the researcher was guided
p.12: use past tense.
Chapter II Use, the proponent chose
p.15, in the comparison with
the competitors
p.19: make the layout a bit
clearer and larger
avoid cut tables
use: Academic Year, not
curriculum year.
Table 2: specify the fee for
layout, apart from the printing fee.
p.16: specify the above data
Please get a soft copy of the
VMUF Map from Maam Liezl Acena (Head, VMUF Marketing Department)
Discuss in your market area the
presence of a store front.
Rephrase the 1st paragraph of
your Market Share
Table 5: Specify the different
colleges. Promotional Strategies: include social media. Chapter III Improve your figure 1 in page 34; it should be found in 1 page. The figure number and figure title should be below the figure.
Figure 2 in p.36: include arrows.
Table 8 could be divided into
Table 8a (items 1-5) and Table 8b (items 6-14)
p.35: after figure 1, remove she
from he/she.
p.35, use: inform the client
p.37, use: College of Education /
Special Science High School Building. The location of the business should be beside the CoE / SSHS building.
Table 23: please check the
computation of your footing.
Include the specification of
printers.
p.43: Organizational Chart
should include VP for Administration and University President. Specify the job responsibilities of your employees.
Modify the salaries of the
employees.
p.45, use: Graduates of ICT
Courses.
p.53, p.54, p.55: avoid cut
tables. Payback Period (p.67): formula should be placed first, followed by the computation. Recorder: Carlo Paul C. Sana