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Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation

Martin Posadas Ave., San Carlos City, Pangasinan, 2420, Philippines


GRADUATE SCHOOL
COMPLIANCE REPORT
Name : Melvin Joel J. Escano
Program : Master in Business Administratiojn
Title : Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation Publishing and Printing Services
Adviser : Michael Armas, MBA, CPA
Chairman : Jose Emmanuel C. Mandapat, DA
Members : Marcelo G. Paz, PhD
: Efren Y. Ignacio
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Date of Defense : August 19, 2017

Section/Page Comments / Suggestions Compliance


General Comments Consider focusing on Printing
Services. Exclude Publishing all
throughout your manuscript.

Revise pagination in accordance


with the institutional format.
Title Change title to: Virgen
Milagrosa University
Foundation Printing Services
Chapter I Use: In the city of San Carlos,
there is only one well-known
Printing Press

How do you serve the


customers in an inspiring
environment?

Project Background, use: the


researcher who was inspired by
his mother

Why is it that your target


market is exclusive to VMUF
students only? Please widen the
scope of your clienteles.

p.12: delete validity and


reliability of the instrument
Introduction should be found in
a new page. In your
introduction, provide literatures
or studies about printing press.

Project Background: Spell out


CPA the first time you use it in
your study.

Research Design, use: in this


study, the researcher was
guided

p.12: use past tense.

Chapter II Use, the proponent chose

p.15, in the comparison with


the competitors

p.19: make the layout a bit


clearer and larger

avoid cut tables

use: Academic Year, not


curriculum year.

Table 2: specify the fee for


layout, apart from the printing
fee.

p.16: specify the above data

Please get a soft copy of the


VMUF Map from Maam Liezl
Acena (Head, VMUF Marketing
Department)

Discuss in your market area the


presence of a store front.

Rephrase the 1st paragraph of


your Market Share

Table 5: Specify the different


colleges.
Promotional Strategies: include
social media.
Chapter III Improve your figure 1 in page
34; it should be found in 1 page.
The figure number and figure
title should be below the figure.

Figure 2 in p.36: include arrows.

Table 8 could be divided into


Table 8a (items 1-5) and Table
8b (items 6-14)

p.35: after figure 1, remove she


from he/she.

p.35, use: inform the client

p.37, use: College of Education /


Special Science High School
Building. The location of the
business should be beside the
CoE / SSHS building.

Table 23: please check the


computation of your footing.

Include the specification of


printers.

p.43: Organizational Chart


should include VP for
Administration and University
President. Specify the job
responsibilities of your
employees.

Modify the salaries of the


employees.

p.45, use: Graduates of ICT


Courses.

p.53, p.54, p.55: avoid cut


tables.
Payback Period (p.67): formula
should be placed first, followed
by the computation.
Recorder: Carlo Paul C. Sana

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