CONTENTS
Definitions
In the training materials, a person attempting to achieve competence is referred to as a
participant. In your own training situation this person may be referred to as a student, a
learner, or a trainee. Similarly, a person teaching this competence is referred to as a
facilitator. In your own training situation, this person may be referred to as a teacher, mentor,
trainer or supervisor.
Symbols
Throughout the training package you will see a range of symbols. This is what they mean:
Symbol Meaning
Glossary
Access and Equity
Refers to the fact that training should be accessible to everyone regardless of age, gender,
social, cultural, religious or educational background.
Assessment
The formal process ensuring training meets the standards required by industry. This process
is performed by a qualified assessor within an agreed framework.
Context of Assessment
Specifies where, how and by what methods assessment should occur.
Elements
The skills which make up a unit of competence.
Evidence Guide
These are guidelines on how a unit should be assessed.
Fair
Does not disadvantage particular candidates.
Flexible
Acknowledges that there is no single approach to the delivery and assessment of
performance in a competency-based system.
Formative Assessment
These are small assessment tasks done during training. They assist in making sure that
learning is taking place and also give the trainees feedback on their progress.
Key Ability
Abilities that underpin all work performance. These are collecting, analysing and organizing
ideas and information, communicating ideas and information, planning and organizing
activities, working with others and in teams, solving problems, using technology, using
mathematical ideas and techniques.
These abilities are graded in different levels as follows:
Level Characteristics
Performance Criteria
This is used to judge whether an individual has achieved competence in a unit.
Qualified Assessor
A person who is qualified to assess.
Range of Variables
This details the range of different contexts that may apply to a particular unit.
Reliable
Uses methods and procedures that engender confidence that competency standards and
their levels are interpreted and applied consistently in all contexts and to all trainees.
Summative Assessment
The assessment done after training of the completed unit of competence to ensure that
trainees have achieved the performance criteria.
Unit descriptor
A general description of the competency standard.
Valid
Judgement on the same evidence and criteria will produce the same assessment outcomes
from different assessors.
Information Sources
The following list of references may be used to obtain more information.
COFFEY, Margaret P.
Communication Through Writing. Prentice Hall International,1987
DWYER, Judith
The Business Communication Handbook. Second Edition. Newcastle: MBC Managing
Business Communication, 1990.
GEFFNER, Andrea B.
How to Write Business Letters. Second Edition. Barons Educational Series, Inc., 1995
GEFFNER, ANDREA B,
Business English, Third Edition. Barons Educational Series, Inc.: 2000
POE, Ann
More Business Letters. Second Edition. McGraw-Hill, 1998
READERS DIGEST
Write Better Speak Better. Readers Digest Asia Ltd., 1972
BSDC-501
Report Writing for Managers and Supervisors. BSDC-501: 2000
Unit Title
Writing Brief Messages in Industry
Unit Descriptor
This unit aims to develop the skills, knowledge and attitude required to plan, edit and write,
brief messages in industries in Batam.
2. Write effective brief messages 2.1 Uses appropriate staging required to plan and write brief
within an organisation messages in the workplace
Defining the problem
Gathering information
Categorising and sequencing information
Making notes
Writing first draft
Editing and presenting final draft
2.2 Uses appropriate style for writing brief messages in the
workplace
2.3 Uses appropriate vocabulary and common abbreviations
Range of Variables
This unit applies to industry employees interested in developing their written communication
skills.
The development of written communication skills includes writing routine workplace
documents.
Written communication may include but is not limited to:
Memos, faxes, e-mails
Formal reports
Informal reports
Statistical reports
Investigative reports
Spoken communication may include but is not limited to:
Face to face conversation
Telephone conversation
Formal interview
Meetings
Information sources may include but are not limited to:
Media
Industry associations and organisations
Industry journals
Computer data, including internet, CD ROMs
Personal observations and experience
Context of Assessment
This unit may be assessed on or off the job. Assessment should include a form of practical
demonstration, plus a range of methods to assess underpinning skills and knowledge.
Checklist
Demonstration of the Validity of the Content Plan with respect to Key
Competency Standard Components.
1 1.1
1.2
1.3
1.4
2 2.1
2.2
2.3
Range of Variables
Underpinning Skills and Knowledge
1.2 Identifies different types of brief Participants are divided into groups of 4
messages received and written in the Each group examines a variety of brief messages written by employees of the organisation
workplace:
Identify types of brief messages written. If necessary, facilitator provides
Fax some guidance by indicating one or more types.
E-mail establish features that are common to all brief messages
Memo Participants report their findings to their class
Facilitator compiles findings on the board and provides comment
OHT 2
Complete Task 3
What skills, knowledge and attitude do I want How will I transfer the skills, knowledge and attitude to the participant?
the participant to have?
1.3 Recognises various parts of brief Use examples of work related brief messages for this activity.
messages received and written in the
The facilitator leads the discussion, encouraging input from the class. The group identifies
workplace
as many features related to the format and layout of brief messages as possible. Explain
the purpose of these features.in terms of format and layout
OHT 6-8
1.4 Uses appropriate format and layout for Use examples of work related brief messages for this activity (the teacher may provide
brief messages in the workplace some examples of brief messages).
This session must be very interactive. Facilitator leads the discussion to establish the
distinctive features of different types of format and layout of brief messages. Participants
may be divided into groups of 4.
Results of discussion must be shared with the group.
OHT 9
H0 1-6
What skills, knowledge and attitude do I want How will I transfer the skills, knowledge and attitude to the participant?
the participant to have?
2.1 Uses appropriate staging required to This session must be very interactive. Facilitator leads whole group discussion in
plan and write brief messages in the brainstorming session re Golden Rules for Writing Memos, Faxes and E-mails. Encourage
workplace input from participants.
Defining the problem Establish the stages required to plan and write brief messages. First focus is Defining the
Gathering information problem.
Categorising and sequencing Participants are divided into groups of 4.
information Participants discuss how they select and organize information in a logical order and then
Making notes report the results of their discussion to the class. The facilitator summarizes the results of
Writing first draft each groups discussion.
Editing and presenting final draft Input by facilitator on taking notes. This should be accompanied by practical demonstration.
Discuss importance of editing. Select brief message written by participants. Whole class
editing
Whole group activity summarise all stages of planning and writing of brief messages
Task 9 making notes
OHT 10-16
HO 7-9
What skills, knowledge and attitude do I want How will I transfer the skills, knowledge and attitude to the participant?
the participant to have?
2.2 Uses appropriate style for writing brief Input by facilitator on paragraph structure.
messages in the workplace.
Participants practise writing paragraphs, using Topic sentence, Elaboration and Evidence
Revision: Recognise audience (reader). Discuss strategies to attract and maintain readers
attention
Whole group discussion. Appropriate style for writing memos, faxes and e-mails
How does one make ones message simple, clear, concise and precise?
Participants work in groups. Complete activity set out in HO 11-13
HO 10- 15
What skills, knowledge and attitude do I want How will I transfer the skills, knowledge and attitude to the participant?
the participant to have?
2.3 Uses appropriate vocabulary and Examine vocabulary in OHT 29
common abbreviations
Facilitator, with the help of participants, compile a list of
Vocabulary commonly used in memos, faxes and e-mails
Abbreviations commonly used in memos, faxes and e-mails
Participants work in groups of 3. Write a memo / fax / e-mail using vocabulary and
abbreviations
Each group gives their completed writing to another group for editing.
OHT 29-30
HO 16
OHT 1
Purpose and audience of brief messages
in the workplace
Group work
OHT 2
Purpose and audience of brief messages in
the workplace
Purpose
OHT 3
Purpose and audience of brief messages
in the workplace
Audience
People to whom the brief message is directed
Employees within the organisation
Employees from other organisations
Customers
Audience analysis
Who is your audience?
Select material appropriate to your audience
Put yourself in your audiences place
OHT 4
Purpose and audience of brief messages
in the workplace
OHT 5
Types of brief messages in the workplace
OHT 6
Types of brief messages in the workplace
Memoranda
OHT 7
Types of brief messages in the workplace
Faxes
OHT 8
Types of brief messages in the workplace
E-mail
Get the address right (key in or copy and paste
recipients e-mail address into the To field
Use CC field for addresses of people who are
not main recipients of message but need to be
kept informed
Specific
Meaningful
Appropriate
Relevant
Thoughtful
Openings / Greetings / Salutations
Closings / Signing off
OHT 9
Format and layout of brief messages
Memorandum
MEMO
To:
Cc:
From:
Date:
Subject:
Memorandum
MEMO
To: All Staff
From Administrative Officer
Date 27 June 2002
Subject Operating Instructions for New Copying Machines
1. A new photocopier has been installed in the general office. All staff are
welcome to use it.
2. To ensure the copiers survival, it is important to keep the following procedures
in mind.
a. Use the machine for no longer than 30 minutes at a time.
b. After use, allow the machine to cool for at least 5 minutes
c. Make sure the switch is turned off after use.
3. Please speak to me if you have any questions about the machine.
HO 2
Format and layout of brief messages
Memorandum
MEMO
To: Mr Leung
From Jim Langridge
Date 23 June 2002
Subject Purchase of Accounting Computing Packages
Memorandum
Batam Publishing Co-Memo
Jalan Cemara Mas No. 43
Green Court, Batam, 29432, Indonesia
Phone, Fax, E-mail
MEMORANDUM
To: Indra Mohamed
Cc: Geoff Williams, Julie Astuti
From: Paul Brunker
Date: 30 June 2002
Subject: Additional Typing Staff
The workload in the editing department has reached the stage where we need two additional
typists. I have surveyed the overall requirements of the department and found this need is
justified on the following grounds:
1. In the past six months we have employed four additional editors but, so far, no more
typists for the department.
2. The workload in the last quarter of 1987 was up by 200 per cent and present
indicators are that the first quarter of 1988 will continue this trend.
3. The extra work being generated by our expansion has meant our existing ten typists
have each been working an average of eight hours a-week overtime. In other words,
the department is generating 80 hours of regular overtime per week.
4. Penalty rates mean it costs 50 per cent more to work this much overtime than it
would to employ two extra typists.
5. The continued use of overtime cannot continue. Our typists are feeling the pressure
in several ways, especially in constant fatigue and tension and in an increase in
typing mistakes.
6. Overall, the two extra typists would save the company money and lead to a more
efficient and accurate typing output.
HO 4
Format and layout of brief messages
Indonesia Australia Partnership for Skills Development Page 31
Batam Institutional Development Project
Writing Brief Messages in the Industry
Section 4 Delivery Strategy Handouts and Overhead Transparencies
Faxes
University of Batam
Jalan Cemara Mas No. 43
Green Court, Batam, 29432, Indonesia
Phone, Fax, E-mail
FA C S I M I L E T R A N S M I TTA L S H E E T
To: From:
Personal NA
Dear Chander
I am happy to answer any queries you may have about this contract.
Regards
Retno Muklas
Dear Samantha
As I mentioned in my e-mail yesterday, I am still experiencing problems with On-line Access.
Initially, I was able to get through the whole process up to the time I got the message, From
Account is not allowed to transfer.
Yes, I confirm that I am logging in with member number 0981276. Now I have the additional
problem it wont accept my password. Can you help, please?
As a matter of urgency, I need to transfer some money to the account to which my mum is
signatory. Can you organize this transfer, please?
Please transfer $1,000.00 from Multi Access Account No.789345 to Multi Access Account
No. 567877. Can you please send an e-mail advising me when the transaction is complete?
Regards
Rima Slamat
HO 6
Format and layout of brief messages
E-mail
From: "Erna Pyara" <ernapy@indosat.net.id>
To: "Frederica" <ffontana@agmin.net.it>
Subject: Fw: Job No. 3319 Primary Education Expert
Date: Saturday, 22 June 2002 7:40 AM
Dear Ms Pyara,
Thank you very much for your interest. I will consider your CV for our forthcoming projects
and insert it in our database. Unfortunately, we usually work with the other side of the globe,
Africa, Central Europe, Latin America, but anyway your C.V.seems very interesting and I'll
keep it in mind.
Have a nice holiday.
Frederica
Florentino. 82
22359 Florence, Italy
Tel.: 0049/40/ 60 30 6-300
Fax: 0049/40/ 60 30 6-339
E-mail: recruiting@agmin-management.de mailto:recruiting@agmin-management.de
Homepage and Job Opportunities: www.agmin-group.de http://www.agmin-group.de
HO 7
OHT 11
Format and layout of brief messages
HO 8
OHT 12
Planning and writing brief messages
Appropriate staging
Gathering information
HO 9
Hints on note-making
OHT 16
Planning and writing brief messages
OHT
Planning and writing brief messages
17
Paragraph Structure
A paragraph consists of a series of sentences built
around one main idea.
OHT 18
Planning and writing brief messages
Remaining focused
OHT 19
Planning and writing brief messages
HO 10
OHT 20
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
Business-like:
As per your request, please find enclosed herewith
the data on unemployment in Batam.
Natural tone
As you requested, I am enclosing the data on
unemployment in Batam
OHT 21
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
HO 11
OHT 22
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
HO 12
OHT 23
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
HO 13
OHT 24
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
OHT 25
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
OHT 26
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
HO 14
OHT 27
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
HO 15
OHT
Appropriate style for writing brief messages
28
Sentence Structure
Use simple, short and compact sentences to
ensure that they are correct and coherent.
A simple sentence expresses one idea.
Read your report aloud. It helps to identify a
poorly constructed sentence.
Punctuation
Why is punctuation important? Function of punctuation?
OHT
Uses appropriate vocabulary and
abbreviations 29
Compile a list of
Vocabulary commonly used in memos / faxes /
e-mails in your workplace
OHT 30
Uses appropriate vocabulary and
abbreviations HO 16
PS postscript
p.p. per pro (on behalf of)
c.c. or cc carbon copy to
ref. reference
Rd Road
St Street
Sq. Square
c/o care of
enc or encl enclosed
& Co. and Company
Ltd Limited
Corp. Corporation
attn for the attention of
What is a brief message? What is your understanding of the function of brief messages?
Consider the following questions:
What is the purpose of a brief message?
Why do we write brief messages?
When do we write a brief message?
Who reads the brief messages?
What types of brief messages are written in your workplace?
How often do you have to write a brief message?
Task 2
We can increase your productivity and decrease absenteeism by providing this on-
site care center at a competitive price.
Consider carefully the following benefits of choosing our firm: increased productivity,
improved employee morale, decreased absenteeism, decreased tardiness, and the
knowledge that you have selected the premier provider of day care services.
Example Two
To: Great Valley Personnel
From: Quality Improvement Team
Subject: Parking Lot Lights
Date: June 18, 2002
Additional lights will be installed on the perimeter of the parking lot this summer. There will
be a total of 11 new lights, three in each side lot and five along the back lot.
These lights should create a safer environment. If you have any questions, call any member
of the quality team. Enjoy.
Example Three:
Welcome to your Mr. Espresso Machine! In order to use this product properly, you must
follow some simple directions. If you follow the directions, you will enjoy a delicious cup of
espresso or cappuccino.
1. Have a stainless steel container to froth milk.
2. Make sure your machine is plugged in.
3. Place the approximate amount of espresso in the dispenser shown in Figure 1.
4. Be careful not to touch the machine while brewing.
5. Froth milk by inserting the plastic cable into the stainless steel container.
6. Enjoy your favourite topping.
Task 3
Summarise your findings and present these to your facilitator and group for comment.
Task 4
Staff is advised that this visit will occur on Tuesday of next week. Main idea
There will be a presentation to the group by senior staff and a Secondary details
chance for discussion between delegates and ourselves.
Lunch will be provided in the Board Room and staff is invited to Secondary details
attend.
Task 5
Task 6
Task 7
Task 8
Task 9
As you know, one of the reasons for the introduction of laptops in Northern Branch was to
provide us with feedback before we decide whether to provide laptops for staff in other
departments. The Board has asked me to submit a report on your experiences by the end of
this week. I talked to some of you informally about this last month. During my brief visit I
noticed a group of people in the canteen playing some kind of computer game and I heard
from a senior manager that he only uses his for writing letters a job for a secretary, surely?
So, that I can compile a full report, I would like everyone to let me know what they personally
use their laptop for, what software they use and how long per day they spend actually using
it. It would also be useful to find out how their laptop has not come up to expectations, and
any unexpected uses they have found for their laptop, so that others can benefit from your
experiences.
RDB
Task 10
Work in pairs. Research shows that employees perform better when they feel appreciated
and recognized. Write a good news memo / fax / e-mail to applaud a colleague or an
employee. In this message, present the good news and any details of that news. Couch
negative elements in between the good news and benefits. List reader benefits to reinforce
the news and close with a goodwill ending.
Exchange your completed message with another pair. Edit the message and make
suggestions for improvement.
Task 11
Using these excerpts from actual letters, rewrite the sentences with a reader or you
attitude.
1. I read your ad for communications writer and said to myself, This job is perfect for
me.
2. Im writing to request that you do not me as a part-time writer. Instead use me as a
consultant.
3. Im at your service if this matter is worth discussing.
4. I am looking for interesting, part-time work.
5. I live less than 15 minutes from your office, which is convenient for me.
6. I would like to work for a firm like yours.
7. I enjoyed talking with you on the phone about my proposal.
8. I investigated this subject at length and would like to report it all here.
9. Im taking this course because it is required.
10. Did I miss anything at the meeting yesterday?
Task 12
And similar rationale must be presented to defend against searches of desks, filing
cabinets, briefcases and purses.
Once youve established a policy stating that all communications are subject to
monitoring by management, should you then listen to personal phone calls and
survey personnel.
I do not advise listening in to personal calls, says Stevenson. There are common
law rights of privacy among the states to consider. A court may well ask , why did
you decide to listen to the conversation?
Note that some state have laws that explicitly deny employers the right to listen in on
personal phone calls. Check with your attorney.
Task 13
2 Parking in the lot adjacent to the building will be restricted by space allocation
designation for workmens vehicles and the four outermost spaces will be reserved for
foremen of the construction crew so employees should make other arrangements for
parking during that time frame and consider implementation of vehicular co-
transportation.
3 Please be advised that the new software has the capacity for analyzing sales figures
and budget figures. The end result will be a report that basically shows the difference
between the two.
4 Due to the fact that Friday is Good Friday, we will close early for the purpose of
allowing employees to spend time with their respective families on that day.
5 The consensus of opinion is that the end result will be very favourable.
6 I would like to take this opportunity to thank you in advance for your kind
consideration.
7 Although we have mutually agreed upon the end result, the true facts may still come
out.
Task 14
Task 15
Task 16
2. In the event that your bill has already been paid, kindly disregard this reminder.
3. Due to the fact that your subscription has not been renewed, the next issue of Run!
will be your last.
5. Pursuant to our telephone conversation of Friday last, I would like to verify our
agreement.
6. Subsequent to last months meeting, several new policies have gone into effect.
8. Our deluxe model copier is on the order of a Rolls Royce in terms of quality and
precision.
Task 17
I regret to inform you that we are completely booked up for the week of August 22.
We have no rooms available because the National Word Processors Association will
be holding their convention at our hotel during the week of August 22. As you will
surely understand, we have to reserve as many rooms as possible for members of
the association.
If you cant change the date of your trip, maybe you could find the doubleroom with
bath that you want at another hotel here in Batam.
Cordially,
Task 18
Task 19
2. Unnecessary 5. Erred
Carnage Millionaire
Wierd Misanthrope
Judgment Lieutenent
3. Roses 6. Adjournament
Goverment Caucus
Absence Contagious
churches Digestible
Task 20
You can reach me by telephone at any time this afternoon or tomorrow morning. Our
office hours are 8.30 to 5 you can leave a message for me, to call you back if
necessary
Task 21
2. Unless you send us this information, we will not process your claim.
3. Until your receive our permission, you may not begin the job
4. If you sent your resume, as you claim, we did not receive it.
6. Due to an error in processing your order, it will be billed more than once to your
account. A credit has been issued and we hope you have not been inconvenienced
7. We regret to inform you that the merchandise you ordered is not available. Because
of this, we have been forced to cancel your order.
8. Please dont hesitate to call us if you have trouble understanding these instructions.
9. If you took the test, as you claim, we have failed to receive your score.
10. Unless you send us this data, we will not issue your coverage.
Task 22
2. Although the freelance market has dried up in recent years, I am still available for hire.
3. But as any freelancer knows, things blow hot and cold and I am certainly not booked
to full capacity
5. We note in your letter that you claim not to have received your order.
Task 23
1. There was a technical problem. The assembly line was stopped. The workers were
sent home early.
The workers were sent home early when the assembly line stopped due to a technical
problem.
2. Your letter to us was posted yesterday. Our letter to you was posted yesterday. The
letters crossed in the post.
3. Our company has a long tradition. Our letter look old-fashioned. We are trying to
modernise the companys image. All our correspondence should be word-processed.
4. Short sentences are easy to write. Short sentences are easy to understand. Long
words can be confusing. A simple style of writing letters is recommended.
Task 24
If you work in
3. One of the most difficult aspects of corresponding with people you have not met face-
to-face is establishing a personal relationship with them in order to show them that
you are not just a letter-writing machine but a real person.
Writing to people
Task 25
Sentence 1 works better than sentence 2 because who opened the shop is less important
than when it opened.
2. It was announced by the vice president that refunds will be given to customers
concerned about harmful chemicals in the product.
5. Please be advised that you are requested to call the provost as soon as possible.
8. Fewer incidents were suffered by students last year than ever before.
9. It was stated in the report that our sports programs rival the Big Ten.
10. It is my estimation that you will complete your thesis sometime next year.
Task 26
Eliminate the passive voice in the following sentences, replacing it with active verbs / writing.
2. Experts were involved in helping us to formulate the guidelines for the syllabus.
3. The kind of behaviour that can be disruptive to the team cannot be permitted by
managers.
6. On June 1, information was requested by you about the upcoming Graduate Record
exam.
7. It was announced by the president that raises will be given to all employees
complaining about inflation.
8. Please be advised that you are requested to contact this office as soon as possible.
9. It is expected that you will be billed for the flowers next month.
10. It was stated by the lawyer that the victim could not be responsible.
1. I read your ad for communications writer and said to myself, This job is perfect for
me.
Im responding to your advertisement for a communications writer. I would like to put
my writing expertise to work for your company.
2. I would like you to consider hiring me as a part-time writer. My consulting experience
will benefit your company in the following ways..
Im writing to request that you do not hire me as a part-time writer. Instead use me
as a consultant.
3. Im at your service if this matter is worth discussing.
I would like to meet with you soon to discuss your exciting opportunity.
4. I am looking for interesting, part-time work.
Perhaps I could fill your need for a part-time worker.
5. I live less than 15 minutes from your office, which is convenient for me.
Your location is so convenient. I would have no trouble arriving on time, even in bad
weather.
6. I would like to work for a firm like yours.
My experience and education could benefit your firm.
7. I enjoyed talking with you on the phone about my proposal.
My proposal could help you cut costs and increase productivity.
8. I investigated this subject at length and would like to report it all here.
My research indicates the following five items you might need to know.
9. Im taking this course because it is required.
This required course addresses many important facets of my career.
10. Did I miss anything at the meeting yesterday?
What did you cover at the meeting yesterday?
1. Inexorable 4. Primarily
Mercyful Merciful Principal
Potable Principle
Arboreal Receit Receipt
2. Unnecessary 5. Erred
Carnage Millionaire
Wierd Weird Misanthrope
Judgment Lieutenent Lieutenant
3. Roses 6. Adjournament Adjournment
Goverment Government Caucus
Absence Contagious
Churches Digestible
I am afraid that we have not been able to contact you be telephone. My secretary
called throughout the day yesterday at half-hourly intervals but was told that you
were not available. Please contact me as soon as possible because we need to
check a number of details in your order.
You can reach me by telephone at any time this afternoon or tomorrow morning. Our
office hours are 8.30 to 5.00. You can leave a message for me to call you back if
necessary.
1. Although I havent worked for months, I have years of experience in data processing.
I have years of experience in the data processing area.
2. Although the freelance market has dried up in recent years, I am still available for hire.
I am available to provide freelance work for you.
3. But as any freelancer knows, things blow hot and cold and I am certainly not booked
to full capacity..
I am available to serve your organization in a freelance capacity.
4. I am writing to request that you do not hire me as a part-time writer.
Consider me for a full-time or part-time job.
5. We note in your letter that you claim not to have received your order.
We are sorry you didnt receive your order.
1. There was a technical problem. The assembly line was stopped. The workers were
sent home early.
The workers were sent home early when the assembly line stopped due to a technical
problem.
2. Your letter to us was posted yesterday. Our letter to you was posted yesterday. The
letters crossed in the post.
Because your letter to us and our letter to you were both posted yesterday, the letters
crossed in the post.
3. Our company has a long tradition. Our letter look old-fashioned. We are trying to
modernise the companys image. All our correspondence should be word-processed.
Our company has a long tradition but our letters look old-fashioned and, as we are
trying to modernise the companys, all our correspondence should be word-
processed.
4. Short sentences are easy to write. Short sentences are easy to understand. Long
words can be confusing. A simple style of writing letters is recommended.
Because short sentences are both easy to write and understand and long words can
be confusing, a simple style of writing letters is recommended.
5. A letter should have a personal touch. People like to be treated as individuals. It is
unwise to use a style that is to informal with people you dont know very well.
Although a letter should have a personal touch and people like to be treated as
individuals, it is unwise to use a style that is too informal with people you dont know
very well.
1. As requested, I enclose our new catalogue and feel sure that you will find within many
items to interest you, particularly our new range of colours that will brighten up your
office and keep your staff feeling happy.
I am sending you our latest catalogue, as you requested, and I feel sure that it
contains plenty to interest you. Can I draw your attention to our new range of
colours? These will brighten your office and help to keep your staff feeling happy.
3. One of the most difficult aspects of corresponding with people you have not met face-
to-face is establishing a personal relationship with them in order to show them that
you are not just a letter-writing machine but a real person.
Writing to people you havent met face-to-face is difficult. The hardest part is
establishing a personal relationship with them, so that you can show them that you
are a real person, not just a machine that writes letters.
Qualifications of Assessors
In most cases assessments will be undertaken by the facilitator. However, other
appropriately trained teachers or program managers with good English Language and
communication skills may assist in this process.
Assessors must use assessment methods that are
Valid
Reliable
Fair
Practicable
Summative Assessment
These are formal assessment tasks designed by assessor to ensure that participants
successfully achieve the underpinning skills and knowledge.
Suggested Assessment
Assessment in this module is not an isolated activity at the end of the course. One
assessment task may address more than one element/performance criteria.
Consequently the assessment tasks listed in this section have been designed to assess
participants performance in an integrated task which will demonstrate their performance in
all elements as assessed against performance criteria. One assessment task can
incorporate more than one element.
Assessment Task 1
Assessment Task 2
Assessment Task 3
Write the section of your training program dealing with features that are characteristic to
memos, faxes and emails. Draw up a list of the various parts common to each type. Explain
the function of each part.
Assessment Task 4
You walked in on someone last week copying a 150-page book which is against all aspects
of the voluntary code which employees agreed to respect.
You dont want to restrict use of the copier, not to issue individual copy cards to police the
machine. Yet it is getting to the stage where some action will have to be taken to prevent
abuse.
Assessment Task 5
Remember to explain why you want the graduate information and how it will help you in your
current job.
Use the suggested planning and writing schedule outlined in Assessment Task 4
Assessment Task 6
Further
Underpinning Skills and
Assessment tasks Yes No training
Knowledge
needed
Purpose and audience Examine workplace faxes, memos and emails
Format and layout Design format and layout for companys
Memorandum
Facsimile Transmittal
Distinctive features of memos, Write section of training manual dealing with characteristic features of
faxes and e-mails memos, faxes and emails
Write effective brief messages Plan, write, edit and evaluate work related memos, faxes and emails
Unit: BSDC-501
Writing Brief Messages in Industry
Trainee Name:
Assessor Name: .
Signatures
The trainee has been informed of the Signature of assessor:
assessment result and the reasons for the
decision
Date:
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