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Mind Map
how to make
Contrasting
Advantages and Disadvantages
COHESION IN WRITING
keys Different
Ways to say what aim or purpose
Some
Words meaning aim
Five Ways to improve Writing
To
Words meaning approximately
The four Cs in writing
There are
Options about
What you say when concluding
to give final
To
emphasizing something important
With repetition
Saying again what your aims were
summarizing
Conclusions
From the personal point of view
What you say when giving your opinion
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Introduction
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1. Abstract Generalities
In the written reports, it is the first part of it, directly following the title page
and proceeding the introduction.
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These two sections can be grouped together into one brief statement
summarizing why the experiment was performed in the first place? What was
the question trying to be answered? Science is an exploration for truth. It is all
about curiosity and answering questions to find out why and how things work.
The scientific method is a clear example of this; first state a problem or
question and then try to determine the answer. This section is the statement of
the original problem. It is the reason behind why an experiment is being done.
This should not include many details, rather it should be a simple statement. It
can even be stated in one or two sentences at the most.
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In other words, what did all of your hard work and preparation tell you about
the question you set out to answer. This contains only the crucial results
obtained. The crucial results are those that are necessary to answer your
original question posed. Without these results, the experiment would have
been useless. The results should be stated briefly and should not be
explained; they should only be mentioned. It is very similar to the results
section of your paper, but it highlights only pertinent results used to draw
conclusions. An average length for this section is two or three sentences at the
most. This number can vary however, depending on the complexity of the
experiment, and so these length guides are just that, guides, not rules.
1.2. Conclusions
This is the end of your abstract, directly hinging on the results obtained. This
is the "so what" part of your experiment. "So what" refers to what the results
mean in the long run. You need not include how you drew your conclusions,
only the final conclusion. This should directly follow the results so the reader
knows what results led to what conclusions. This is the equivalent to the
discussion part of the paper, but again, like the rest of the abstract, it needs
to be stated briefly and succinctly. You do not need to explain how you
deduced the conclusion from the results obtained, only the end conclusions.
After you have stated this, the abstract is complete.
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2. Cohesion in Writing
Cohesion is revising to make sure that your words, ideas, and paragraphs fit
together. Without cohesive sentences, readers feel like they are reading a long
list of unrelated ideas. They often have trouble remembering what you said.
They also have trouble understanding how these ideas connect to one another,
which may mean that they dont understand the main point in your essay.
When writing is not cohesive, its very difficult to be an effective communicator.
Cohesive Papers:
1. Group similar ideas together
2. Constantly refer back to the thesis or main idea
3. Use a well-defined structure that is easy for the reader to follow
Incorporating these connecting words and phrases into your essays will help
the reader understand how your sentences and ideas relate to one another:
Using this phrases and coordinating conjunctions (and, so, yet, but, or, for)
will ensure that your reader can follow your meaning, and trust your voice as a
writer.
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i. Check the first sentence in each paragraph. Ask yourself: does this
sentence explain the connection between the ideas in the previous paragraph
and the ideas that Im about to discuss?
ii. Check the first few words in each sentence. Ask yourself: Have I
made it clear exactly how this idea relates to the previous one? Will readers
be able to move smoothly from one idea to the next?
Example: Instead of using two disjointed, short sentences like She ran
outside. Her shoe fell off, I might make the sentences more cohesive by
emphasizing a connection. Id change it to: She ran outside so quickly that her
shoe fell off.
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Example: If the purpose of my essay is to argue that the death penalty should
not be used in the U.S., Ill want to make sure that each of my paragraphs
helps defend my opinion. Rather than beginning a paragraph about innocent
people being mistakenly executed using this system with the vague words
Innocent people in the U.S. are dying every day Id make my writing more
cohesive and remind the reader of my main purpose by saying The death
penalty system allows our country to take away innocent lives, therefore it
should not be used as a form of punishment.
iv. Underline the subject in longer sentences. Check to make sure that
youve placed the subject as close to the beginning of the sentence as possible,
rather than hiding it in the middle or towards the end.
Example: If my paper is about the effects of global warming, Ill want to avoid
sentences like this: There are several harmful effects on our environment like
global warming and people not cleaning up their garbage. That sentence is
confusing because it drags on too long and does not emphasize any particular
main point; it also mentions garbage, which doesnt really relate to what Im
talking about at all. It would be better to change the sentence to: Global
warming is the most dangerous environmental problem that we must face.
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Abstract
Returns and findings from three strategies of data collection are compared.
Each strategy contains personal interviews, telephone interviews, and mail
questionnaires in different combinations-one mainly personal, one mainly
telephone, and one mainly mail. All three strategies are based on area
probability samples of households in Alameda County, California. The test was
made on two separate studies, with identical questionnaires used in all
strategies within each study. The responses from the three strategies were
found to be highly comparable. Rate of return and rate of completeness of
questionnaires were high for all three; substantive findings were virtually
interchangeable; and there was little difference in validity. The only important
difference was cost per interview which varied considerably by strategy.
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Abstract:
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iv. The courtesy: the writer must be polite and avoid informal words, or
expressions that might confuse the meaning.
To develop a good writing is of great value when the final decisions will be
taken. Therefore, the information given might be fundamental to take an
action. Formality is used in business writings, like: CVs and letters of
application, End of term papers, discursive essays, Factual descriptions,
Reports, Formal letters. Informality is common in emails and informal letters.
Following the next tips, will assure a positive answer by the reader of the
message, creating a positive action: To get the services, to hire an employee,
to buy a product, and so forth:
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Below you will find different ways to develop and connect ideas in a formal
writing like reports, summaries, essays and abstracts. The bold words could
be replaced to write your own concepts.
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i. Approximately 30% of adults who have the disease will die from it.
ii. There were about 50 people at the meeting.
iii. The amount of caffeine in one can of cola is roughly equivalent to four
cups of coffee.
i. Young male drivers have far more accidents by comparison with other
groups.
ii. Mortality rates are lower for women as compared with men.
iii. In contrast to the South of the island, the North is still untouched by
tourism.
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3.10. Saying again what your aims were at the conclusion of an essay.
i. In my opinion,..
ii. I think that,..
iii. In my view,..
iv. In this writers view,..
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Reinfrocement Activities
Reinforcement
Activitys Description Activitys File
Activitys Name
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Glosario
About: Alrededor
Achieve: Alcanzar
Advantage: Ventaja
Agree: Estar de acuerdo
Aim: Objetivo
Approximately: Aproximadamente
Attempted to: Pretender
Benefit: Beneficio
Bold: Negrilla
Cause: Causa
Certainly: Efectivamente
Challenge: Reto
Circa: Cerca de
Compared to/With: En comparacin a/con
Comparing: Comparar
Contrasting: Contrastar
Cure: Cura, remedio
Cut: Cortar
Decline: Disminuir
Decrease: Disminuir
Disadvantage: Desventaja
Effect: Efecto
Emphsizing: Enfatizar
Essay: Ensayo
Explaining: Explicar
False; False
Firstly: Primero que todo
Furthermore: Ms an
Generalizations: Generalidades
Giving: Dar
Goal: Meta
In order to: Con el fin de
Increase: Incrementar
Insecure: Inseguro
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Glosario
Issue: Dificultad
Lead to: Liderar, dirigir
Lower: Ms bajo
Making: Haciendo
Means: Significar
Opinion: Opinion
Opposite. Contrario
Others: Otros
People: Personas
Provide: Proveer
Purpose: Propsito
Reason: Razn
Result: Resultado
Right: Correcto, exacto
Rise: Levantar
Roughly: Casi lo mismo
Saying: Decir
Share: Compartir
Someone: Alguien
Summaries: Resmenes
Sure: Seguro
Therefore: Por lo tanto,
Things: Cosas
Trouble: Problema
True: Verdad
Try to: Tratar, perseguir
View: Punto de vista
Ways: Manera, forma
Which: El cual
Without: Sin
Writers: Escritores
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Recursos bibliogrficos
http://www.duoc-teachers.mundomas.com/index.php
http://writing2.richmond.edu/training/project/biology/abslit.html#
sample1. Recovered and compiled by: CARDONA, A.N. October
18, 2012.
Writing Handbook at Longman Exams Dictionary (2007). Fourth
Impression, Pearson Education Limited, England. P.WH-36-38,
WH59-83.
Credits
Compiled by: Cardona. A.N. (2013). Curriculum
Designer/Instructor at the Virtualization Project. Centro de
Servicios y Gestin Empresarial-CESGE
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Control De Documento.
Construccin Objeto De Aprendizaje.
GOOD WRITING IS AN ART.
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