Louie Zumstein
RWS 100
November 6, 2017
and one of the most disputed decisions that had to be made in American history was the
decision to invade Iraq. With the goal to end Saddam Husseins dictatorial reign and
destroy Iraqs remaining weapons of mass destruction, U.S. forces were sent into Iraq in
March 2003. The public argument against the U.S. invading Iraq is made by Jimmy
Carter in an opinion editorial and Ted Kennedy in a speech. Through assumptions made
about both of their audiences, they are able to effectively contribute to their appeals to
logos, ethos and pathos while establishing arguments against the war.
In a New York Times opinion editorial titled Just War -- or a Just War? (March 3,
2003), the 39th President of the United States and Nobel Peace Prize recipient Jimmy
Carter establishes that if the United States was to enter into a war with Iraq it would be
an unjust one. Through his use of facts, connecting to the audience and calling on his
time as president, President Carter is able to develop and support the argument that if
the U.S. were to enter in to a war in Iraq it would be an unjust one. In this piece the
former president complicates the issue of war for the readers of this editorial in order to
prove that the United Sates intervention would be unjust. The fact that this was
published in the New York Times shows that Carter is writing to an intellectual audience
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which may be very patriotic, but also very intelligent and knowledgeable in the Iraq
conflict.
Throughout this opinion editorial Carter makes sub-claims that are used to support
his overall argument. These ideas stated by Carter throughout his piece are used to
show what he thinks would call for war. The five claims that he believes are key are,
The war can be waged only as a last resort, The attackers must have legitimate
authority sanctioned by the society they profess to represent, The peace it establishes
must be a clear improvement over what exists, The war's weapons must discriminate
between combatants and noncombatants, and Its violence must be proportional to the
Carter takes advantage of who he assumes his audience is and focuses on appeals
to logos. In submitting an op-ed to the New York Times, a highly regarded newspaper,
Carter assumes that his audience is going to be a highly intelligent and educated
population. As such a prominent topic of discussion, the decision to invade Iraq is one
that Carter assumes his readers are going to be well versed in. With the assumption
that the audience is well versed, comes the assumption that they have an opinion on
the war. Carter wrote this piece to complicate the idea of the Iraq war for the reader and
productively get his intended argument across to his audience through his use of
rhetorical appeals such as stating his former profession and background, and real world
examples from qualified sources. These strategies aide in his appeals to ethos. To an
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educated audience like this one, it is not necessary to remind them that carter was
This is included not only to build his credibility as a reliable source of International
affairs but to also stir remembrances of similar issues during Carters term in office
which cements his capability to comment on this decision. Carters background allows
him to be an expert on this matter and when he writes, Although there are visions of
peace and democracy in Iraq, it is quite possible that the aftermath of a military invasion
will destabilize the region and prompt terrorists to further jeopardize our security at
that expert opinion Carter is able to support his claim that if the war was to happen it
would be unjust because the peace that would be established would not be a clear
improvement of what already stands in Iraq. Quoting General Tommy R. Franks is used
to validate the claim that for the war to be just the weapons used must be able to know
the difference between combatants and non combatants. Using the Generals words,
collateral damage (Carter), shows that even one who would be commanding the
military knows that there is going to be damage to things like schools, mosques and
homes, this allows Carter to influence his audience even more because of the Generals
Appealing to the audiences logic is the best way for Carter to get his audience to
agree with his argument. As they are readers of a qualified paper he knows what can
help him connect to and persuade his audience the best way possible. To logically
support the claim that war needs to be the last resort, and that for this war there are still
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options that have not been explored further Carter uses examples from interactions
between government leaders from the U.S. and the United Nations. Carter states, In
the case of Iraq, it is obvious that clear alternatives to war exist. These options --
previously proposed by our own leaders and approved by the United Nations -- were
outlined again by the Security Council on Friday(Carter). This shows that even the
government realizes there are other non-violent options that could increase the chances
of avoiding war. Carter supports his claim that because attackers must have authority
sanctioned by the society they represent the Iraq war would not be justified through
analogies from the Secret Council. Carter writes, The unanimous vote of approval in
the Security Council to eliminate Iraq's weapons of mass destruction can still be
honored, but our announced goals are now to achieve regime change and to establish a
Pax Americana in the region, perhaps occupying the ethnically divided country for as
In doing so he appeals to his audiences logic because he is showing that the U.S. and
their new objectives is something the Security Council does not support. The last sub-
claim made by Carter is that for the war to be considered just violence needs to be
equal to the injury that the U.S. has suffered. In support of that claim Carter recalls
Saddam Husseins crimes and the lack of evidence that he was tied to the terrorist
attack of 9/11, this connects to the logic of the audience because as intelligent readers
he assumes that to truly believe and agree with an accusation they would need a strong
Carter is able to use rhetorical strategies in his piece that contribute to both
appeals to ethos and logos. Carter writes with a deep understanding of his audience,
and this allows him to use appeals to ethos and logos hand in hand. The layering of
these appeals allow Carter to constantly establish a source then provide a logical fact
(September 27, 2002), former senator who was elected to senate nine times Edward
Kennedy argues that Iraq does not pose enough of a threat to the United States that
would justify a war. By referencing past ways the United States handled situations as
well as stating facts on the current state of Iraq Kennedy is able to support his argument
against this war. In this speech, Kennedy is able to argue against this war in order to
convince his audience that war is not the path that should be traveled at this time. This
In comparison to that of Carter, the arguments of the opinion editorial and speech
are somewhat similar. Both argue that the war should not be fought, but one difference
though is that in Kennedys speech he believes that the war should not be fought at this
time, as there are alternatives that have not been exhausted yet. In this speech,
Kennedy cements his views against the invasion of Iraq through rhetorical strategies
that are aimed to connect to his audience of students at Johns Hopkins School of
somewhat young age they are still attendees of such a prestigious school which focuses
on international affairs. Through those factors they are expected to be very intelligent
In support of his argument there are claims that Kennedy makes in his speech that
contribute to his goal of convincing those listening that the threat that Iraq poses does
not justify going to war effectively based on the assumptions he makes about his
audience. Kennedy believes that President Bush believes genuinely that the way he is
pushing the nation is the right way, Kennedy compares the U.S. invading Afghanistan
with the possible invasion of Iraq and a uses a spread of emotionally charged language
say it plainly: I not only concede, but I am convinced that President Bush believes
appealing to ethos, this builds his credibility as a speaker because he is showing to his
intelligent audience that he understands that there is another point of view to be looked
affairs, Kennedy is aware that they would be swayed by logical facts regarding past
instances in the U.S. He refers to the involvement of the United States in Afghanistan
which occurred only a short time before this speech when he states, Just a year ago,
the American people and the Congress rallied behind the President and our Armed
Forces as we went to war in Afghanistan. Al Qaeda and the Taliban protectors who gave
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them sanctuary in Afghanistan posed a clear, present and continuing danger. The need
shows that there is a lack of focus in the Bush Administration because energy that
should be focused in Afghanistan is being pushed towards Iraq, which Kennedy does
of this and appeals to pathos. To make the audience feel a certain way emotionally is a
tactic Kennedy believes to be effective. He refers to 9/11 which was such a disastrous
time in U.S. history when he says, That is the true spirit of September 11th - not
to defend our values and the value of life itself (Kennedy) this allows Kennedy to make
the audience emotional and therefore allowing them to be swayed easily on a level
Through rhetorical strategies that appeal to ethos, logos and pathos Jimmy Carter
and Ted Kennedy make their arguments to their specific audiences in an effective way.
By understanding who the audience might be they are both able to make assumptions
on their audience which help their appeals and therefore allow them to establish their
Works Cited
Carter, JImmy. Just waror a Just War? New York Times, Opinion Editorial 9 MARCH