beds. Brady sighs, I guess. The two teenage boys grab a basketball and run out of their foster home doors. They gather around their foster brothers and pick teams. Me and Michael will be captains! Andrew announces. Michael chooses first, then Andrew, then Michael and the pattern continues until there are two left-Brady and a boy named Eric. uhhh not much of a choice here. So, Eric. Not to mention, Brady never usually plays with his brothers. Brady, get over here. Youre on our team, Andrew says with a look of defeat. Andrew tells Brady he is guarding Michael, which is their best player. This will be easy, Michael says to Brady laughing. He starts to dribble and Brady is guarding him. He passes the ball over to Eric and Brady is still guarding Michael confusingly. Michael runs out to the wing to shoot a three off a pass from Eric when Brady jumps with MIchael and blocks the ball out of the court. Was that legal? Brady asks. The boys are standing still with a shocked look. They began to cheer and praise Brady. Dude, you are amazing, The boys told Brady. He shook his head, No, i just got lucky, dude. They threw him the ball to shoot from the three point line. Swish. They boys cheered once again and kept giving him the ball to shoot and do more cool tricks. After the sun started to go down, the foster mom yelled for them to come back in, because it was a school night. They ran in and got ready for bed. Brady, you need to try out for the school basketball team! Michael told Brady. I dont think I am cut out for it, but Ill try it, He answered. The next morning, Brady visited the coach and asked to be on the team. What grade? Freshman? The coach asked Brady. No. Senior, Brady answered back confusingly. Youre telling me this is your first year playing every? Brady nodded his head and the coach opened his eyes wide in shock. Well, everyone starts somewhere, the coach said with a smile on his face, practice starts after school. After school, Brady attended practice and surprised everyone on the team. Brady, I am going to throw the ball near the basket and I want you to jump and throw the ball into the basket, said one of the players. The kid threw him an alley-oop and Brady jumped straight up into the air and slammed the ball into the basket. A moment of silence occurred. That is called a dunk, Then everyone was shouting with excitement. The coach was so impressed he called college coaches to come watch Brady. It was game night and five college coaches were there to watch Brady. The game started and Brady had the ball. He dribbled between his legs, made different moves, and passed the ball to one of his teammates. The ball came back to him and he shot the ball and missed. Brady continued to have an off night and did not impress the college coaches. Once Brady got home, he threw his basketball shoes out of frustration and screamed, I QUIT! He did not want to play anymore, because he believed he sucked. The next day at school, he told the coach that he was not going to continue on. The coach shook his hand and said, you had a lot of potential, son. And walked away. Brady went home and all of his brothers tried to talk with him, but he isolated himself from everyone for a couple hours. Finally, Andrew knocked on Bradys door. Come in, Brady mumbled with his face in his pillow. Brady, from day one you had it all. The talent, skills and even attitude. Dont let one bad game decide how you play in the future, Andrew said to Brady. Brady sat up and thought about what Andrew told him. I suppose I can give it one more try, replied Brady. Both of the boys smiled and hugged one another. The next day, Brady knocked on the coaches office door and asked to come in. Brady walked in and sat down by his desk. What can I help you with today, Brady? asked the coach. I would like to see if I could be back on the basketball team, Brady said nervously. The coach sat and looked at Brady for a couple seconds, smiled, and answered, Definitely, Brady. Brady smiled and shook his hand. Ill see you after school, the coach mentioned as he was walking out the door. Brady attended practice and started in every game. Eventually, tournament time came around. And again, college coaches were watching. The team made it to the state championship game. Bradys nerves were all over the place, but he took a deep breath and calmed down. The team runs out and warms up for twenty minutes. Once the timer ran out the boys sat on the bench to prepare for the players to be introduced. A six foot 5 inch senior, Brady Collins!! the crowd cheers and college coaches immediately write down his name, number, and height. The game begins and the Brady immediately steals the ball and puts down a slam dunk. The game went back and forth with whom was in the lead, but Brady was unstoppable. The show continued and the boys came out victorious. After the game, coaches ran up to Brady asking for contact, when coach K from Duke University walks up to him. Brady is in awe and shakes his hand while coach K introduces himself. I would like for you to be on my team next season on a full ride scholarship. You are good, kid. Really good, coach K offered Brady. He smiled and looked at his foster mom and she nodded her head. I would love to, replied Brady. Duke has been Bradys favorite basketball team since he was a little boy. Brady was greeted with love by his teammates once they found out he is playing for Duke next season. Brady, arent you glad I asked you to play basketball with us a couple months ago? All of the boys chuckled and boarded the bus and came home as state champions.
Rubric rating submitted on: 12/14/2017, 9:27:55 PM by danielle.cook@redstreaks.org
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Introduction 5 = Fully and 4= 3= 2= 1= 0 = No
W.3.a creatively Demonstrated Attempted to Attempted to Attempted to attempt made Your score: demonstrated Engages and demonstrate; demonstrate; demonstrate; Engages and 5 Engages and orient the a couple a few errors several errors orient the orient the reader by errors exist exist exist reader by reader by setting out a Engages and Engages and Engages and setting out a setting out a problem orient the orient the orient the problem problem (conflict), reader by reader by reader by (conflict), (conflict), situation, or setting out a setting out a setting out a situation, or situation, or observation problem problem problem observation observation and (conflict), (conflict), (conflict), and and determines its situation, or situation, or situation, or determines its determines its significance. observation observation observation significance. significance. 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Rising Action 5 = Fully and 4= 3= 2= 1= 0 = No & Climax creatively Demonstrated Attempted to Attempted to Attempted to attempt made W.3.b,c,d (1) demonstrated Uses dialogue demonstrate; demonstrate; demonstrate; Uses dialogue Your score: Uses dialogue and a couple a few errors several errors and 3 and description errors exist exist exist description description (characterizat Uses dialogue Uses dialogue Uses dialogue (characterizat (characterizat ion) to and and and ion) to ion) to develop description description description develop develop experiences, (characterizat (characterizat (characterizat experiences, experiences, events, and/or ion) to ion) to ion) to events, and/or events, and/or characters. develop develop develop characters. characters. 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Sequence experiences, experiences, experiences, Sequence Sequence events so that events, and/or events, and/or events, and/or events so that events so that they build on characters. characters. characters. they build on they build on one another Sequence Sequence Sequence one another one another to create a events so that events so that events so that to create a to create a coherent they build on they build on they build on coherent coherent whole and one another one another one another whole and whole and build toward to create a to create a to create a build toward build toward a particular coherent coherent coherent a particular a particular tone and whole and whole and whole and tone and tone and outcome (e.g. build toward build toward build toward outcome (e.g. outcome (e.g. sense of a particular a particular a particular sense of sense of mystery, tone and tone and tone and mystery, mystery, suspense, outcome (e.g. outcome (e.g. outcome (e.g. suspense, suspense, growth, or sense of sense of sense of growth, or growth, or resolution) mystery, mystery, mystery, resolution) resolution) Uses clear suspense, suspense, suspense, Uses clear Uses clear transitions growth, or growth, or growth, or transitions transitions frequently to resolution) resolution) resolution) frequently to frequently to help develop Uses clear Uses clear Uses clear help develop help develop the transitions transitions transitions the the sequencing of frequently to frequently to frequently to sequencing of sequencing of events. help develop help develop help develop events. events. 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Develops a settings settings settings Develops a Develops a theme and and/or and/or and/or theme and theme and weave it characters. characters. characters. weave it weave it throughout Develops a Develops a Develops a throughout throughout the narrative. theme and theme and theme and the narrative. the narrative. Presents and weave it weave it weave it Presents and Presents and develops throughout throughout throughout develops develops complications the narrative. the narrative. the narrative. complications complications to lead up to Presents and Presents and Presents and to lead up to to lead up to the climax develops develops develops the climax the climax and develops complications complications complications and develops and develops a clear climax to lead up to to lead up to to lead up to a clear climax a clear climax or turning the climax the climax the climax or turning or turning point in the and develops and develops and develops point in the point in the narrative. a clear climax a clear climax a clear climax narrative. narrative. Uses or turning or turning or turning Uses Uses figurative point in the point in the point in the figurative figurative language in narrative. narrative. narrative. language in language in the narrative Uses Uses Uses the narrative the narrative to develop the figurative figurative figurative to develop the to develop the plot, language in language in language in plot, plot, characters, the narrative the narrative the narrative characters, characters, events, and/or to develop the to develop the to develop the events, and/or events, and/or experiences. plot, plot, plot, experiences. experiences. Uses at least characters, characters, characters, Uses at least Uses at least one of the events, and/or events, and/or events, and/or one of the one of the following: experiences. experiences. experiences. following: following: irony, Uses at least Uses at least Uses at least irony, irony, symbolism, one of the one of the one of the symbolism, symbolism, multiple following: following: following: multiple multiple plots, irony, irony, irony, plots, plots, paradox, symbolism, symbolism, symbolism, paradox, paradox, archetype, multiple multiple multiple archetype, archetype, flashback, or plots, plots, plots, flashback, or flashback, or stream of paradox, paradox, paradox, stream of stream of consciousness archetype, archetype, archetype, consciousness consciousness . flashback, or flashback, or flashback, or . . stream of stream of stream of consciousness consciousness consciousness . . .
Rising Action 5 = Fully and 4= 3= 2= 1= 0 = No
& Climax creatively Demonstrated Attempted to Attempted to Attempted to attempt made W.3.b,c,d (2) demonstrated Uses dialogue demonstrate; demonstrate; demonstrate; Uses dialogue Your score: Uses dialogue and a couple a few errors several errors and 3 and description errors exist exist exist description description (characterizat Uses dialogue Uses dialogue Uses dialogue (characterizat (characterizat ion) to and and and ion) to ion) to develop description description description develop develop experiences, (characterizat (characterizat (characterizat experiences, experiences, events, and/or ion) to ion) to ion) to events, and/or events, and/or characters. develop develop develop characters. characters. Uses pacing, experiences, experiences, experiences, Uses pacing, Uses pacing, reflection , events, and/or events, and/or events, and/or reflection , reflection , suspense and characters. characters. characters. suspense and suspense and foreshadowin Uses pacing, Uses pacing, Uses pacing, foreshadowin foreshadowin g to develop reflection , reflection , reflection , g to develop g to develop experiences, suspense and suspense and suspense and experiences, experiences, events, and/or foreshadowin foreshadowin foreshadowin events, and/or events, and/or characters. g to develop g to develop g to develop characters. characters. Sequence experiences, experiences, experiences, Sequence Sequence events so that events, and/or events, and/or events, and/or events so that events so that they build on characters. characters. characters. they build on they build on one another Sequence Sequence Sequence one another one another to create a events so that events so that events so that to create a to create a coherent they build on they build on they build on coherent coherent whole and one another one another one another whole and whole and build toward to create a to create a to create a build toward build toward a particular coherent coherent coherent a particular a particular tone and whole and whole and whole and tone and tone and outcome (e.g. build toward build toward build toward outcome (e.g. outcome (e.g. sense of a particular a particular a particular sense of sense of mystery, tone and tone and tone and mystery, mystery, suspense, outcome (e.g. outcome (e.g. outcome (e.g. suspense, suspense, growth, or sense of sense of sense of growth, or growth, or resolution) mystery, mystery, mystery, resolution) resolution) Uses clear suspense, suspense, suspense, Uses clear Uses clear transitions growth, or growth, or growth, or transitions transitions frequently to resolution) resolution) resolution) frequently to frequently to help develop Uses clear Uses clear Uses clear help develop help develop the transitions transitions transitions the the sequencing of frequently to frequently to frequently to sequencing of sequencing of events. help develop help develop help develop events. events. Uses a the the the Uses a Uses a precise/strong sequencing of sequencing of sequencing of precise/strong precise/strong words and events. events. events. words and words and phrases, Uses a Uses a Uses a phrases, phrases, telling details, precise/strong precise/strong precise/strong telling details, telling details, and sensory words and words and words and and sensory and sensory language to phrases, phrases, phrases, language to language to convey a telling details, telling details, telling details, convey a convey a vivid picture and sensory and sensory and sensory vivid picture vivid picture of the language to language to language to of the of the experiences, convey a convey a convey a experiences, experiences, events, vivid picture vivid picture vivid picture events, events, settings of the of the of the settings settings and/or experiences, experiences, experiences, and/or and/or characters. events, events, events, characters. characters. Develops a settings settings settings Develops a Develops a theme and and/or and/or and/or theme and theme and weave it characters. characters. characters. weave it weave it throughout Develops a Develops a Develops a throughout throughout the narrative. theme and theme and theme and the narrative. the narrative. Presents and weave it weave it weave it Presents and Presents and develops throughout throughout throughout develops develops complications the narrative. the narrative. the narrative. complications complications to lead up to Presents and Presents and Presents and to lead up to to lead up to the climax develops develops develops the climax the climax and develops complications complications complications and develops and develops a clear climax to lead up to to lead up to to lead up to a clear climax a clear climax or turning the climax the climax the climax or turning or turning point in the and develops and develops and develops point in the point in the narrative. a clear climax a clear climax a clear climax narrative. narrative. Uses or turning or turning or turning Uses Uses figurative point in the point in the point in the figurative figurative language in narrative. narrative. narrative. language in language in the narrative Uses Uses Uses the narrative the narrative to develop the figurative figurative figurative to develop the to develop the plot, language in language in language in plot, plot, characters, the narrative the narrative the narrative characters, characters, events, and/or to develop the to develop the to develop the events, and/or events, and/or experiences. plot, plot, plot, experiences. experiences. Uses at least characters, characters, characters, Uses at least Uses at least one of the events, and/or events, and/or events, and/or one of the one of the following: experiences. experiences. experiences. following: following: irony, Uses at least Uses at least Uses at least irony, irony, symbolism, one of the one of the one of the symbolism, symbolism, multiple following: following: following: multiple multiple plots, irony, irony, irony, plots, plots, paradox, symbolism, symbolism, symbolism, paradox, paradox, archetype, multiple multiple multiple archetype, archetype, flashback, or plots, plots, plots, flashback, or flashback, or stream of paradox, paradox, paradox, stream of stream of consciousness archetype, archetype, archetype, consciousness consciousness . flashback, or flashback, or flashback, or . . stream of stream of stream of consciousness consciousness consciousness . . .
Falling 5 = Fully and 4= 3= 2= 1= 0 = No
Action & creatively Demonstrated Attempted to Attempted to Attempted to attempt made Conclusion demonstrated The problem, demonstrate; demonstrate; demonstrate; The problem, W.3.e The problem, situation, or a couple a few errors several errors situation, or situation, or observation is errors exist exist exist observation is Your score: observation is clearly The problem, The problem, The problem, clearly 3 clearly resolved. situation, or situation, or situation, or resolved. resolved. Provides a observation is observation is observation is Provides a Provides a conclusion clearly clearly clearly conclusion conclusion that follows resolved. resolved. resolved. that follows that follows from and Provides a Provides a Provides a from and from and reflects on conclusion conclusion conclusion reflects on reflects on what is that follows that follows that follows what is what is experienced, from and from and from and experienced, experienced, observed, or reflects on reflects on reflects on observed, or observed, or resolved over what is what is what is resolved over resolved over the course of experienced, experienced, experienced, the course of the course of the narrative. observed, or observed, or observed, or the narrative. the narrative. Reflects upon resolved over resolved over resolved over Reflects upon Reflects upon the theme(s) the course of the course of the course of the theme(s) the theme(s) in the the narrative. the narrative. the narrative. in the in the conclusion to Reflects upon Reflects upon Reflects upon conclusion to conclusion to leave the the theme(s) the theme(s) the theme(s) leave the leave the reader with a in the in the in the reader with a reader with a lasting conclusion to conclusion to conclusion to lasting lasting message to leave the leave the leave the message to message to take away reader with a reader with a reader with a take away take away from the story lasting lasting lasting from the story from the story and apply to message to message to message to and apply to and apply to life. take away take away take away life. life. from the story from the story from the story and apply to and apply to and apply to life. life. life.
Mechanics, 5 = Fully and 4= 3= 2= Attempted 1= Attempted 0 = No
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