Some people say there should be limits to what students can wear at

school. Others say there should not.

Today people cant decide what is appropriate to wear at

school. Many schools have rules about children's outfits or they have
uniforms for kids.

It is good for children to have boundaries when it comes to

clothes. First, they will learn that school is a public place where you
are not allowed to wear what you like. Second, by wearing clothes which
you like you are showing to pupils that they are not worthy. They
shouldn't feel bad because they don't have fancy clothes which their
friends have. Kids should have more respect towards school and other
students that is why they need to have limits.

On the other hand, the way how somebody dresses might be

the way how a person expresses. By there clothes, you can see a
difference between pupils. If they get lost in the crowd or you don't
know there name you can recognize them by their look. Wearing different
pieces of clothes you can show your attitude, style, and confidence which
is good because we are different and that difference makes ous unique.

To conclude, some limits must exist. Without them,

everything looks too much and there is no toleration towards school or
among pupils. In my opinion, the best solution are uniforms. Every child
will be treated equally, there won't be big differences between them, and
you can write there names on it. Parents won't spend sums of money and
kids will learn to have respect for every child no matter their social
status.

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