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Topic : Some people believe that school children should be given

homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

With the development of education, many teachers in school give

children homework to enable them to practice all of things they have Commented [Office1]: Không dung từ này trong writing nha
em

learned in class. Some people think it is very necessary and important

for children while others believe that homework is not essential. Both Commented [Office2]: Chỗ này dung necessary nó phù hợp
hơn

side of this argument will be discussed in my essay below. Commented [Office3]: Both sides

On the one hand, homework is essential for children life. By

homework children can revise their lesson, which make them easy to
remember and understand thoroughly all things they were taught by
their teachers. Homework not only help children pass the exam
Commented [Office4]: It is commonly knowledgeable that
homework is an effective method that enables students/
children to do sth
Commented [Office5]: Chữ WHICH thay cho cả vế nên em
phải them s sau make nha em
Commented [Office6]: Content

uncomplicated but also enables them not to waste time for doing Commented [Office7]: They need to absorb
Commented [Office8]: Helps
something with bad aims. For examples, some students use their free Commented [Office9]: Sai

time for playing video games or going to the places where are not
suitable for their age. (Đoạn này em ko có linking words để chuyển
các ý nha em. VD: first, second, …)
On the other hand, some people believe that students have not to do
the school assignments by their lecturers because they always think
that children feel tired and stressful. If children spend their time for
doing homework, they do not have time to play outside or take part in
their favorite activity. Sometime children feel very tired if they have
met a deadline because of their school assignments. As a result,
without homework, students can do anything they want in their free
time. They can discover many things around them, make them have
more experience in life and become an active person.
Personally, I suppose that homework is necessary for children to
increase their skill and practice their lesson. Sometime children need
to be explained more about the natural life but if they balance time
for homework and play suitable, I think children can grow up more
better.
Commented [Office10]: Câu topic sentence của em quá dài
=> It is also undeniable that a huge pile of homework is not
always appropriate method applied in education.
Commented [Office11]: Sometimes
Commented [Office12]: Cái này là câu đkien loại mấy vậy
em ?
Commented [Office13]: Văn nói
Commented [Office14]: RUN ON sentence
Commented [Office15]: Their skills
Commented [Office16]: Put their lessons in practice
Commented [Office17]: More ko đi chung better nha em
WRITING TASK 2 EXERCISE _ Trần Thị Kim Thoa
Some people believe that school children should not be given
homework by their teacher whereas others argue that
homework plays an important role in the education of
children. Discuss both view and give opinion.
It is true that homework is an essential part of education for school
children, some of them think that homework helps them enormously, Commented [Office18]: Them này refer cho ai?
Commented [Office19]: Help / support không đi với
whereas others are of the opinion that it has very little value for enormous ( chỉ từ , lượng từ ) nha em

students. Even though it brings some disadvantages, such activities are

often considered to be advantageous due to various reasons.
On the one hand, Homework can bring basic benefits to both teachers
and school pupils. Firstly, homework is a significant factor, which
impact on the education of children. Because if they want to have Commented [Office20]: Which impacts

better score in their tests, they have to practice more and more before Commented [Office21]: Score ko đi với better => higher

doing their tests. Secondly, some higher education nation as American, Commented [Office22]: Thừa

Switzerland, France is not seem homework is a good method, and

quality of student in their nation on the top of the world obviously. Commented [Office23]: Thứ nhất:
Some + Dtu số nhiều nha em
Is not seem => some… do not recognize homework as a good
School day is already long enough and children may too exhausted method.

after class, children need time to relax and play after school stress. Commented [Office24]: Bỏ

On the other hand, however,I believe that it is more beneficial for Commented [Office25]: Trước HOWEVER là ; nha em.

children to have homework. Firstly, homework is a good way to

reinforce students’ learning. If no homework exercises are given to Commented [Office26]: Student learning habits

students, it is impossible for them to remember the materials that they

have learned at school. Secondly, children can develop a sense of
perseverance and become more disciplined by doing their school
homework regularly. It is clear that homework is irreplaceable because
children spend on doing homework, the more likely it is for them to
achieve higher scores. Commented [Office27]: The higher scores

In conclusion, although having no homework for students might

seem sensible, I believe that homework still plays a vital role in
school’s education systems and children’s learning.
Name: Le Nguyen Khoi
Topic: Some people believe that school children should not be given
homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that students have not to do the school
assignments by their lecturers while others believe that the Commented [Office28]: Assigned by their teachers

homework is indispensable in the education systems in each other Commented [Office29]: Each thôi em

country. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before reasoned

conclusion is drawn. Commented [Office30]: A reasonable conclusion

On the one hand, the setting of homework also has an important role
to play in the education system. The biggest advantage of homework Commented [Office31]: Plays an important role in …

is that it enables students to open their books, notebooks and revise

their lesson after getting up home. In order that, they do not forget Commented [Office32]: Supporting student have a good
preparation before joining classes as well as imprinting
vividly in their mind.
what they have been taught at schools. Actually, doing homework has Commented [Office33]: Gom chung ý trên

also learned the lessons once again at home and this will definitely
improve their grades. Furthermore, home assignments are of great Commented [Office34]: Câu này thầy ko hiểu ý em

use for teachers to keep track of their students; in other words,

making sure that they acquire an exact and comprehensive
understanding of the lessons. By this way, the teacher could easily
follow and enable their pupils to boost their level of knowledge
Commented [Office35]: Furthermore, home assignments
take integral part in erecting teaching activities in parallel,
thanks to which teacher may supervise and control students
in an efficiently logic way. For instance, …
On the other hand, homework can also be an unwanted burden for
the majority of children. Most pupils spend a plenty of time at school, Commented [Office36]: Unpredicted burden for the vast
majority of students.

they are already exhausted and full of stress by the time. If they take
their time to do home assignments, they do not have time to relax
their mind or join in their favorite activities such as hanging out,
playing video games, surfing the Internet or even spending time with
their family. Moreover, when students are forced to do homework,
they are less likely to focus on what they do. They are able to cheat by
copying answers from their notebook or Internet. This action will not
give the benefit for them in any way. ( em xem lại cách diễn đạt nhé,
quá DÀI DÒNG và LÊ THÊ)
To summarize, giving a large number of homework definitely be
discouraged. However, abolishing homework is not the solution. I
personally believe that giving a reasonable amount of homework is
certainly beneficial to their children.
Nguyễn Gia Huy

Topic: Some people believe that school children should be

given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue
that homework plays an important role in the education of
children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that teachers should not give homework for
their students, while others believe that homework will benefit
students with their education. Both sides of this argument will
be discussed in my essay below.

On the one hand, homework have many benefits. Firstly, it helps Commented [Office37]: Has nha em , HW không đếm được

students revise the lessons which they are taught on day. As

students do homework at home with their concertation, they
can find what they have not understand yet, that gaps in their
knowledge will be improved by asking their friends or their
teacher on the next day. Secondly, students have chance to Commented [Office38]: Firstly, it is significant that HW is
also a good method in making student revise and fulfill all

train their academic skills. They have to do homework by drawbacks through completing those extra activities. This
helps student carve and put theory in practice without any

applying the knowledge that they have learn in school, they hesitance.
Commented [Office39]: Have learned
must find the way to solve the tasks by themselves, they have
to arrange their time to complete exercises before they go to
school, as a result, when they do seminar test or final test, they
can have appallingly good grade. Commented [Office40]: Em viết lại đoạn này vì nó quá dài

On the other hand, it is think that homework is an unnecessary Commented [Office41]: Sao hai độg từ bên cạnh nhau vậy
em ?

burden on children. Many parents agree that school day is long

enough for their children, the children is too tired for learning
when they return home. They have to join in outside activities to Commented [Office42]: Too + adj + for O + to do sth

relax, improve their health and ready for the next school day. Commented [Office43]: Run-on sentence

Futhermore, without homework, students have more free time

to discover everything around them. This helps they have more Commented [Office44]: Them

experience in life, they will be useful things for them when they
have to stand on their own feet.

In conclusion, a small amount of homework can help students

in their education. However, with a huge amount of assignment,
it is useless and it can also have impossitive affect on life of Commented [Office45]: Negative
Commented [Office46]: Effect nha em
students.
WRITING TASK 2 EXERCISE _ Nguyễn Thành Văn
Some people believe that school children should not be given
homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Certain people strongly argue that homework is not essential for

student at low education while others believe homework is
irreplaceable. Personally I think homework is just one of many Commented [Office47]: Assigning HW is …

methods in education.
On the one hand, many people denied doing exercise at home
because of some reasons. Firstly, curriculum at school is enough, Commented [Office48]: Is … enough ?

homework make children more tired instead of relax after school. Commented [Office49]: HW makes
Commented [Office50]: Relaxing
Obviously, sitting extra class is a trend in Viet Nam, student usually Commented [Office51]: Joining extra classes is…

exhausted after school and these classes, so homework seems as Commented [Office52]: Students are usually exhausted

overload for children. Secondly, some higher education nation as

American, Finland is not seem homework is a good method, and
quality of student in their nation on the top of the world obviously.
Children should spend their time on what they really passion and
recognize themselves. Commented [Office53]: Secondly, with high ranking
education like America or Finland, HW is not the preferable
one due to its side effects on student’s mental development.

On the other hand, however, homework still play an integral role in Commented [Office54]: ; however,
Commented [Office55]: still plays an integral part
educating child. Children spend time on homework instead of
immersing in video game. As a result, it reduce youth crime. Besides, Commented [Office56]: cái này về ý của con diễn chưa khéo
ðSpending most of time on HW instead of video game is
also seen as helpful method to prevent them from eye
children can learn how to manage their time as doing exercise. They diseases or skipping meal that may affect their health
seriously.
must know how to balance between doing exercise and
entertainment. Applying what they learn at school in real life seem as
a good method also. It is clear that homework is irreplaceable but the
among of exercise should be considered.
In short, from my point of view, doing exercise at home is a good
method in education. But homework should be not too much to avoid
stress for child.
HỒNG PHÚC
While some people still think that homeworks for children are not Commented [Office57]: HW không đếm được nha em

essential in schools, others see homework as a key factor in the Commented [Office58]: Consider

education of children. Both sides of this argument will be discussed Commented [Office59]: Bỏ of children nha em

in my essay below.
On the one hand, there is no question that it is not appropriate to Commented [Office60]: Em đã đặt giả định ở đầu rồi=>
there is no question that HW should not be assigned to…

give homework to children due to some negative effects on the

development of children. Firstly, children's ages need to be more
fun and exploring to be developed comprehensively. If children Commented [Office61]: Firstly, … câu này irrelevant với đề
nha em, em lập outline ra sẽ thấy

spend a much of time to do homework, they will be pressured to Commented [Office62]: Spend + Ving

score due to the hopes of their parents, which is really dangerous in Commented [Office63]: With the hope of

educating of children as these pressures will make them feel

helpless and unable to reach their full potential, especially when
they are compared to their peers. Secondly, It's easy to understand Commented [Office64]: Which creates various adverse
impacts on children’s development. To be more specific, …

that when a child has plenty of time to thinking, experience life and
is not pressured for some deadlines to focus on what they are
interested in, they will be able to work their full potential that can
help them find their passion sooner.
On the one hand, homework has brought many benefits and has
become an integral part of our education of children. Just studying
Commented [Office65]: It is also understandable that
student could use up their potential to reach the highest
target providing that they were not put in pressure or
imposed any limitations in their study.
Commented [Office66]: There are many cases that HW is so
beneficial with paramount importance role in education.

in class is not enough, so it is important to give homeworks for

children so that they can help them understand and remember the
lecture longer. One thing is for sure that if children do not practice
exercises, it will quickly forget the knowledge. Moreover, giving Commented [Office67]: Văn nói
ðEm tìm cách diễn đạt lại đoạn này nhé

homeworks will help kids get used to the pressures of their future
lives, such as working environment as they grow up without being
distracted. Beside that doing homework will help children increase Commented [Office68]: Moreover, doing HW enables
student get acquainted with adapting the new environment
and enhancing their social skills effectively.
their logical ability and give them the ability to think better.
In conclusion, i would argue that teacher should not encourage to
give homeworks to children at school, but it should not deny the
indispensable role of homework.
Full name: Phan Thi Nga
Date: Feb. 4th, 2018

WRITING ASSIGNMENT

Topic 2: Some people believe that school children should not be

given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that
homework plays an important role in the education of children.

There are many people think that homework has a great impact on
student’s education development, while other people argue that
homework is not a compulsory task that should be given. I will
discuss both views in the following essay.
In one hand, completing homework brings many benefits to Commented [Office69]: On the one hand

student’s self-improvement. Firstly, it helps student to identify how

well the lesson and material are being understood in the class. The
time for home exercises give students opportunity to review the
class material and consolidate their knowledge from school better.
Moreover, the homework also teaches students other needed skills
Commented [Office70]: Well là trạng từ
Commented [Office71]: Run-on sentence
Commented [Office72]: Không có the

in life and educational environment as well. To be detailed, Commented [Office73]: Hai cái này ko liên quan nhau

homework plays an important role in teaching students how to

manage their time, how to set priorities or how to solve their
problems independently. Commented [Office74]: Điều này dẫn đến ????

In another hand, the practice at home sometimes influences the Commented [Office75]: On the other hand
Commented [Office76]: Practicing at home
student’s developmental process negatively. One clear example is
the lack of school and family activities. Basically, educating
children is not only about knowledge but also about physical
activities which are created from collective activities or daily living
activities. Furthermore, taking a lot of time for study at home Commented [Office77]: Thầy chưa hiểu ý bạn
Commented [Office78]: Studying
sometimes make students being overload if they have to complete Commented [Office79]: Makes

homework every night. This is also one of the most important

reason leading to cheating in education when students tend to copy Commented [Office80]: Reasons

another assignment in order to finish their mission. Commented [Office81]: Tasks

As the result, every educational method has its own advantages and Commented [Office82]: In conclusion,

disadvantages whether or not school should give homework. But in Commented [Office83]: Dài dòng
Commented [Office84]: Hạn chế dung BUT vì nhiều nguyên
my view, homework should be an elective task that students can nhân

choose to complete their learning. Commented [Office85]: Sai ý

Thu Huong-Writing task 2 (topic 2)

Some people believe that school children should not be given
homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe strongly that homework influences positively

in the students’ education while others argue that teachers should
not give homework for their students. In this essay, I will mention
both the benefits and the disadvantages of doing homework as
following.
On the one hand, homework brings many advantages for students.
First, homework helps students to master their knowledge and pass
their exams. After a while students complete their tasks, homework
helps them to memorize their lessons which taught in classrooms, Commented [Office86]: Which was taught

and pass their tests easily. Besides that, homework affects Commented [Office87]: Pass này động tư của CHU NGU nào
?

significantly self-studied skills in students. They know how to Commented [Office88]: Câu này vô nghĩa rôì

assign their tasks and how to manage their time by themselves to Commented [Office89]: Organize nha em
Commented [Office90]: Nên gom cụm lại, không được viết
avoid missing deadline. By this way, they enable to apply for a new lung tung ra

job easily and success in future. Commented [Office91]: Em xem lại ý này nhé

On the other hand, homework is not essential for student in fact.

Firstly, homework makes them stressed and tired. For example,
students have the massive number of homework. They have to stay
up late regularly and try their best to finish their tasks on time.
Gradually, it would be able to harm to their health. Since students Commented [Office92]: Staying up late every night leads to
some adverse impacts on students’ health.

have studied all day at school, they need a break or need to take
part in outside activities to relax. Furthermore, homework also Commented [Office93]: Lặp từ

affects the relationship between students and their teachers. For

instance, their teachers give them too much homework and they
disable to complete their tasks in time. Consequently, students do Commented [Office94]: There is some clear evidence that
the relationships between students and teachers are
collapsed totally due to pressure brought by HW.
not like their teachers and give negatively feedback due to
overloading.
In conclusion, everything always has two sides. Although
homework brings many advantages in the education, personally I
think it still remains many problems.
Some people assume that teachers should not assign children
homework while others contest for their opinion that homework takes
an integral part in the education for children. Both sides of this Commented [Office95]: Educating children

argument will be discussed in my essay below.

On the one hand, homework has bunch of advantages that help a Commented [Office96]: A bunch of

lot for children in their study process. Firstly, if children finish Commented [Office97]: Support children effectively in…

homework before at home, it could help them concentrate more in

class. Preparing the lessons before every class, children could Commented [Office98]: Câu ĐK loại mấy vậy em ?

understand more about the lecture of teachers. Secondly, homework
also enhances their academic achievement in school. Teachers give
homework to the students is a way to encourage them to work hard
when exams draw closer, so that children could keep all the lessons in
mind.
On the other hand, homework is seemed to be an unwanted
burden. Children always spend hours in school with all the strain so
Commented [Office99]: Having a good preparation before
entering into class enables students to absorb new lectures
easily.
Commented [Office100]: Secondly, doing homework is also
useful in enhancing academic performance especially as the
exam is coming. It is no exaggeration to state that the more
careful students prepare for their homework, the better
performance they may get, which makes HW recognize its
vital role in improving student’s learning capacity.
Commented [Office101]: Unpredicted

homework is seen as their best enemy. Children work with motivation Commented [Office102]: Run on sentence

thus all the result would become really bad if they are forced. Beside
that homework even occupies so much time of the children. Many Commented [Office103]: Besides that

children have to sit still for hours just to finish their homework
meanwhile all the outdoor activities and family meeting are no longer
appear in their free time.
In conclusion, homework absolutely make children memorize all the Commented [Office104]: Makes

lessons and improve their grades in class. But everything has its pros
and cons, homework does too, too much homework is not always
good; children also need physical activities that helps brain work
effectively to boost grades indirectly.
Name: NGUYEN VU ANHTRUNG TOPIC 2 WRITTING
Some people believe that children should not be given homework
by their teacher whereas others ague that homework plays an
important role in the education of children. Discuss both view and
give opinion.

People agued that homework is essential in education of children,

while others think it is not completely necessary for teaching nowsday.
These two opinion will be discussed and compared in the next parts.
On one point of view, there are countless advantages that
homework brings to students. First of all, students are able to get the
picture of knowledges after finish their lectures by doing their assigment.
Not only that, they may have a chance to widen their knowledge as
finding and solving solution by themselves. Secondly, giving homework is
an effective manner, which ensure educators to keep track of their
students. Since, teachers are allowed to evaluate learners abilities and
have the appropriate method for their classes.
On another points of view, there is a part of disadvantages in
processing homework. First, Learner might be under pressure because
they have to face with number of homework. Students nowadays have
variable courses in their school, as there are hundreds of assignments that
they have to finish, which lead them to confused experiences in their life.
Secondly, It is really difficult for educators to provide appropriate level of
homework from the understanding abilities of students. Since there are
remain a few students get bored because their unfinished problem or easy
done homework.
In conclusion, homework enable student to practice and develope
their knowledge, but how can we construct a logical and sensible method
in homework? Commented [Office105]: Viết lại ngay vì chỉ có 234 từ

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1. Qúa cẩu thả ( dưới 250 từ )
2. Bài thiếu ý, không thuyết phục ( điểm task response chỉ
có 3.0 thôi )
Nếu em còn cẩu thả như này , thầy sẽ KHÔNG CHẤM BÀI
EM LẦN NÀO NỮA.
Huỳnh Hoàng Nguyên
Education is one of the most important concern of children as it gives Commented [Office106]: Concerns

they much knowledge and skills to serve for their life . While there Commented [Office107]: Thứ nhất much chỉ đi với danh từ
k odd => skills ?

are some drawbacks to giving homework for student , some other

people strongly belive that homework is essential . I will discuss both Commented [Office108]: Em tìm cáh diễn đạt lại câu này
ðVIẾT LẠI MO BAI NHA EM

of these views in my essay below.

On the other hand , many person belive that homework has some Commented [Office109]: On the one hand
Commented [Office110]: Many people
disadvantages for students . Firstly, schooling has become a burden Commented [Office111]: Believe

for children , exercises makes they overloaded and tired. Particularly , Commented [Office112]: Exercises make
Commented [Office113]: Them
they do not have spare time for other development activities such as
relaxing , playing sports , participating extracurricular activities.
Secondly , homework also affects their health because they have to
spend constantly hours to do it . As a result , student will feel Commented [Office114]: Doing

depressed , they will find many reasons to avoid trying to do Commented [Office115]: Avoid doing

homework even they want to play truat.

On the other hand, homework is significantly irreplaceable for many
reason. First of all, exercises make children practice skills, review the Commented [Office116]: Reasons

knowledge they have learned in the classroom. For example, children

can practice more issues related to mathematics or natural sciences.
Beside that , it help children having the basics of the next lesson
maybe reading a chapter in the book at home to discuss the class.
Moreover, homework also help children familiar with major topics,
take time, and seek out external sources such as library, on the
Internet, or information from parents themselves.Finally, homework
help children learn to work overtime, as well as help children form
their initial skills in arranging time. When children are in elementary
school, especially when they are in high school, students who are hard
at doing exercises often earn higher scores than others in periodic
tests. That is the reson why teachers and parents always put high
demands for learning, want children to do more exercises.
To sum up, homework brings some disadvantages for children but it
also has a positive effect on education. Commented [Office117]: Em mắc hang loạt những lỗi rất cơ
bản, em về check lại những lỗi GRAMMAR nha em.
Topic 2: Some people believe that school children
should not be given homework by their teachers whereas
others argue that homework plays a important role in the
education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that the teachers must not given
homework for their pupils, while the others maintain
homework has essential position in curriculums of children.
Both sides of this argument will be discussed in my essay
below and my personable opinion will in my conclusion.

The homework must not be exist, people think that. First, it

just made pupils have stressful, who study long day at
school. Pupils will have more free time to play and study at
the same time, if they do not have homework. As the
knowledge was collected during play will easy to memorize
and this way is more faster to absorb. Children can learn how
to think creatively, innovatively, critically, independently with
ability to connect. Some government already have apply this
way in curriculum, such as Finland, Singapore.
However, homework also have many profit. This will inspire
children learn how to deal or solve problems; furthermore is
patient. Last and not least, homework can reduce rate of
criminal and some other problems. Pupils have homework
will stay home studying, when the others do not have
homework will pay the time to play video games, social
network and so on. Also, pupils can learn the way manage
leisure time, which must balance between study and
entertainment.

In conclusion, teachers must give homework for their

students, but the quantity of homework must limited. Which
make stress for students. It is over curriculum and it is not
good way to study and develop. Commented [Office118]: Em bị thiếu từ

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Đinh Nhật Kiều Phương

Some people believe that school children should not be given

homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that
homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Disuss both of these views and give your opinion.

People have different views about the effectiveness of give

homework for their student, while some may argue that homework
will benefit students with their education. Both sides of this
argument will be discussed in my essay below.
On the one hand, homework have many benefits and help to student
in study. Firstly, students remember the lessons which they are
taught at school. For example, students do homework, homework
does improve or enhance children's performance at school.
Secondly, this can also be beneficial in terms of applying important
knowledge. Take such as, they have to do homework by applying
the knowledge that they have learned in school,
school mathematics helps students to improve solving problem
ability which can be employed later in business or anything relate
to the calculation.
One the other hand, school-time today is extremely long-lasting,
which sometimes lead to fatigue. So some think that homework is
an unnecessary burden on children. Many parents agree leisure time
and hanging out with school peers is as beneficial for students'
development as the time spending in classes. Taking Finland
achievements in education as an example, this nation is applying no
homework programme, and the students here are better at studying
around the country.

In conclusion, it is my firm belief that children benefit better and

fully develop when solving a small or a huge amount of homework. Commented [Office119]: Em bị thiếu từ

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Hiếu Nghĩa
Some people believe that school children should not be given
homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that
homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

It is said that homework is unnecessary and some people say

homework is indispensable for everyone . Personally i think having
a good workout is not result of self-effort .
On the hand , homework is unnecessary after school time . Firstly ,
children should not study too much . Currently , many parents
impose child too much should young children are often very
pressured , it strange expression as prone to self-discipline .
Secondaly , young people must have the passion for your own .
None of us have our own private passion , so the time for it's also
very important , passionate , easy to focus on to make it so in
addition to learning should be for young to develop a potential in
them .
On the other hand , besides studying at school homework is useful .
Firstly , should do your homework to be able to remember the
knowledge teachers taught in school . Teachers teaching only part
remaining is the try to practice of each students , want to study well
, they must attempt to do exercises numerous at home to improve
your ability . Secondaly , do homework help students understand
the lesson thoroughly . The amount of knowledge in class is not
enough , students need to do more homework and create ways to
solve assignment , do home work help students nentality .
It is agrue that homework take much of your time , conversely , a
stream of other comments that the homework is impossible not to
have. In my opinion , doing exercises is necessary for everyone
because it help us to improve the school work excellent .
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others argue that homework plays an important role in the education
of children.
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students, others believe that it is a vital part for educational Commented [MOU121]: Lặp cấu trúc

programmes, I would argue that it would be better to reduce the

amount of homework.
On the one hand, homework brings many beneficial effects on
student's progress. Firstly, the knowledge that students are retrieved
during class seems as short-term memory created by our brains. It
certainly disappeared during a short time. However, the action of
practicing homework has enabled the brain to transform short-term
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progress. Secondly, some majors required hard-working personality as

a priority to be successful such as learning a new language. For
example, a person could not communicate fluently and confidently
with the native speaker without practicing learning vocabulary or be
speaking English at home regularly. Commented [MOU123]: ?

On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial to suggest the

effective number of assignment for students. The first reason is that
homework has caused many harmful impacts on students' mental
illness. Nowadays, students in Vietnam have spent at least 8-hour Commented [MOU124]: Many research pinpointed that
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learning in the morning at school and the afternoon is for extra-
curriculum courses. However, they still have to complete their
homework submitted on the following day. As can be seen, with an
exam-driven curriculum educational system, many students face
mental-illness and the worst situation is suiciding. Secondly, to
encourage studying the spirit of students, the effective number of Commented [MOU125]: Doing homework is seen as a
behind factor that makes ….

homework play an important role. With the number of homework

which balances with other activities of children would increase their
interest in learning and produce more productivity rather than
learning under pressure with a fear called “study”.
In conclusion, it seems to me that homework should be limited in
order to have a better result for both student and school.
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education. While some may say that this is a waste of time and
unnecessary, I believe that homework do more good than harm.
There are many reason why some people argue against giving more
homework. Firstly, homework does not improve children’s
performance at school. For example, Finland is applying no homework
program, which makes them become the most selected nation of
studying overseas. Secondly, school-time nowadays is quite long,
which lead to some poor performance and even bad behavior of
children. Finally, leisure time and hanging out with friend is equally as
beneficial for student as time spending at school.
Despite of above argument, I would argue that an amount of
homework is essential. The main reason is that children have to
develop and advance their knowledge to handle their schoolwork. For
example, math encourages students to improve solving problem
ability which can be used later in life. Having these skills in CV can
impress many university or business employer.
In conclusion, while there are some disadvantages of doing
homework, i believe that children can benefit and develop while
solving their homework.
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Topic 2:
Some people believe that should not be given homework by their
teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important
role in the education of children.

Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that students should not be given homework by their

teachers. While some individuals say that it is important that they
should do homework to develop their education. I will discuss both
sides of this argument in my essay below and give my personal view in
the conclusion.

On the one hand, the idea that school children should not be
given homework by their teacher does have a number of benefit. Commented [MOU128]: Run on

Firstly, they can spend time on doing another thing. Students can
examine their favorite subject in free time instead of doing homework
which has been taught by their teachers in class. Secondly, having a
number of thing between exercise in homework and it in examination.
Sometimes, teachers give hard exercise to their students, so it makes
school children passive in thinking when they do easy exercise in the
examination.

One the other hand, I believe that homework plays an important

role in the education of children. The first benefit is that this could
give condition for every student to review new knowledge which has
been taught by teacher. For example, if teacher teach new
mathematic formula but he doesn’t give example exercise for it,
school children will not understand the using of this formula. Another
benefit is that students can save time in review knowledge for final
exam. Because, homework helps them to remember new formula, so
students can remember when they read again to review.

In conclusion, while not doing homework does have some

benefit, it seems to me that advantages in education of children with
doing homework, which is very important.
Writing task 2 Exercise – Võ Thanh Bình

Topic: Some people believe that school children should not

be given homework by their teachers, whereas others
argue that homework plays an important role in the
education of children. Discuss both of these views and give
your own opinion.

Some people believe that homework is an effective way to

help student deep understanding learning the lecture. But
the others think that it is not completely necessary for
student to do homework. The pros and cons of homework
will be proved in this the essay.
One the one hand, people think that homework play an
important role in education, we are clearly have two
reasons for that. First of all, Many students do not have
good self-education so homework is the most effective way
to learn. Secondly, the main purpose of homework is to
help students learn to work overtime, as well as to help
students form their initial skills in arranging, arranging, and
arranging time.
On the other hand , Many people think that doing too
much homework will cause the bad effects on the student.
Firstly, Homework make students stress more because
after school they are tired of the amount of knowledge
they have learned in class. Secondly, The students have a
little time for friends, family and extracurricular activities.
Rather than after school, students can participate in their
favorite activities, especially sports. These activities are
very useful for the development of students in adulthood.
In conclusion, Homework give us many advantages or
disadvantages of education for students. If the homework
were used in an affective ways, the homework could help
the student grow much. Commented [Office129]: Em bị thiếu từ

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1. Cẩu thả ( dưới 250 từ )
Some people believe that school children should not be given
homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of
these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that homework enables students enhance knowledge and

improve their skill, others think it is not necessary for children to
complete schoolwork assigned at home. In this essay, the pros and cons
of homework are proved.
On the one hand, homework plays a vital role to student could review
what they have learnt in school and practice skills. Firstly, students
may be go back afterwards and think about the lesson of teachers to do
homework by yourself. It enables them save time as they need not
search documents on the web or any source. Secondly, it gives parents
a chance to see and teach their children. Besides, children
understanding how to take responsibility for their part in the
educational process and it is an effect.
On the other hand, homework limits their progression and makes a
pressure . Firstly, children being passive in searching learning materials
and comfort to the usual stereotype. They could not discover any new
knowledge and experience the different types of learning as they are
easily bored. Secondly, homework causes children to receive very little
rest and they could not get household tasks for parents. It can be
stressful for the students especially for young kids because they always
try as much as possible to complete the homework.
In conclusion, homework gives the advantages or disadvantages
depend how to use. Parents and teachers should choose the best way
for children enable develop comprehensively. Commented [Office130]: Em bị thiếu từ

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TUYET NHUNG

Many people believe that doing homework after school time
will be the best way to review and enhance knowledge whereas
others believe that it is better to spend time with family and
social activities. I would argue that without homework is much
more reasonable.

On the one hand, homework is essential for well-being
education. Firstly, children do not have enough time for
acquiring all lessons because they learn some different subjects
at school time. Therefore, homework is vital to ensure that
children can review and clearly understand by themselves.
Secondly, doing exercise will become good habit for reading
books, self-educating and preparation new lesson. Finally, it
also helps children to control time for studying and others
activities.

On the other hand, there are a variety reasons why children
should go back home without homework. Firstly, knowledge at
school time is enough in whole day. In fact, children spend over
8 hours per day at school for studying with Math, English, Art
and others subjects. Secondly, children should be relaxed and
take part in social activities with family instead of doing
exercise. This may help them to enhance communicate skill and
self-growth.

In conclusion, I agree that children should spend time for others
activities after school despite the many benefits of the
homework.
Some people believe that school children should not be given
homework by their teacher,

whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the

education of children.

Discuss both of these view and give your own opinion.

There are many debates between the family and the school about the
homework assignment. While people suppose that homework is
necessary for their child, some others against. In my opinion, I quite
agree with the first consider.
One the one hand, the parents do not agree about their child’s task at
home around a variety of reasons. Firstly, they believe that study in
extra class is only exit in the nation with obsolete education. In fact, in
developed countries where have the advanced education in the world
such as Finland, Switzerland, ... students almost no homework.
Morever, learning is essential but just only a part of the formation and
development of the child. The proof is that, outside the class, they need
to be activitive, entertained, or even assisted for their family.
On the other hand, schoolwork can bring a lot of benefits behind what
is called a mission. First, by reinforce the knowledge learned in the
classroom through doing homework assignment, It will help children
remember longer lesson, stimulate the ability to think creatively as well
as able to apply as instructed by teacher. Futhermore, from the
assignments, the school also wants to train children to manage their
time properly by arranging their own schedule. A smart kid will know
how to adjust his time so more and more time spent playing. In this
particular section I strongly agree with this.
In conclusion, if the amount of homework is too much, it will become a
burden not just for any child. However, if the distribution is reasonable,
I think it will significant improvement both the learning and the
arrangement skill for the future of the child.
Topic 2: Some people believe that school children
should not be given homework by their teachers whereas
others argue that homework plays a important role in the
education of children. Discuss both of these views and
give your own opinion.

It is clear that homework is one of the most essential parts of

every education systems around the world. Although many
people argue that homework should not be given to children,
I would argue that homework is the irreplaceable part of
education system.
On the first hand, doing schoolwork brings a various of Commented [MOU131]: One

benefits to students. Firstly, student can have a self-revising

their lectures at home, which is the most effective way to fully
understand and keep in track with the lessons. Meanwhile,
they can seek for other easier and more effective ways to
solve problems by themselves, which can enhance their
problem-solving skills. Secondly, doing school exercise also
provides children with a well-prepared for new lessons. More
specifically, besides practicing, those homework is also given
for the purpose of preparing for the incoming lectures, which
gains some knowledge before classes.
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might be suffered from some negative effects. Firstly,

children might be suffered from information-overloaded when
having too much tasks at home. As the result, they might fall Commented [MOU133]: Many

behind with their studies because of being stressful and tired

of doing those tasks. Moreover, children would also be
suffered from pessimistic and boring when they could not find
out the way to solve the tasks. More specifically, they would
wonder that why they could not come up with the solution
when other students could.
In conclusion, its seem to me that it is needed to give
homework to children because without doing homework,
children would fall behind with their studies.
Many people think that it is unnecessary to give students
homework while others believe that homework is an essential
factor in children’s educational development. I will discuss both of
these views in my essay bellow.
On the one hand, homework has no benefit in studying process of
students. The main reasons is that children should spend time on Commented [MOU134]: Reason

another activities rather than studying. Besides mental

improvement, social communication and physical training also play
important roles in the growth of children. For instance, in
Vietnam, having more than ten hours per day on classes at school
and additional teaching center, the rest of the day is only enough
for eating and sleeping, children have no time on outdoor
activities. It leads to the serious decline on immunity system or
nerve system. That’s why more and more children in Vietnam have
autism or easier have ill when climate change.
On the other hand, homework brings lots of advantages for
students developing completely not only on education but also on Commented [MOU135]: To

characteristic. Firstly, the knowledge is learned in school remains

longer in brain. For example, almost math formulas is complex,
unless children do more exercises, it is difficult to remember and
understand the formula’s purposes. Secondly, homework keeps
children on working and studying cycle. Therefore, students know
the way to arrange time and how to adapt to the pressure
environment. It is useful when students grow up, maybe they not
face to stress or negative thoughts on the working places.
In conclusion, it seems to me that homework is good for students
if the quantity are suitable with their timetable. Students have
both study and another activities to completely development.