Jazmyn McCallum
Professor Thomas
UWRT 1103
10 April 2018
The feedback I received for my first and second drafts were taken into consideration as I
completed my final draft. I noticed that there was a constant battle between incorporating my
thoughts and statistics equally. A noticeable adaptation from my first draft to my final draft was
inclusion of more statistics and studies. I wanted the claims I made to be supported by evidence
so that I was not biased throughout my entire paper. I am appreciative of the commentary I
received because it helped me notice different perspectives on my paper that I would not have
noticed on my own. During the process of composing my thesis paper I realized that each of our
student learning outcomes play a key role in understanding our writing from different
perspectives as well as composing our writing so that it is presentable and engaging for the
reader.
Learning?
Imagine this, you’re sitting in your literature class when suddenly your professor
announces that you have to complete a research paper about the Industrial Revolution by the end
of the week. In this situation you have no prior knowledge of this transition in history and, most
importantly, you do not have access to any technological device for assistance. Where do you
start? Maybe you decide to use books to begin your research. You choose to go to the library but
you need to figure out how to navigate through many of the endless aisles in order to find books
related to your research topic. Once you find your books, you have to check them out and carry
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them back home. As you read through the first textbook you come across certain words that you
aren’t familiar with such as “fortuitous” and “enervating.” What do you do next? You cannot use
Google. Now you must find a dictionary and hope that it has clear definitions for the words you
are unfamiliar with. Suddenly the deadline for this research paper seems like it’s approaching at
What is the relevance of the predicament above? Before the early 2000’s the main source
of information in most schools were books. Textbooks were constantly incorporated by teachers
in their curriculum until school officials decided to take a new transition in the methods of
instruction in the classroom environment. Now, laptops and tablets are seen in almost every
classroom in today’s society; however, the recurrent use of these devices have brought about the
concern of technology’s impact on students’ learning. Are computers negatively affecting our
work ethic? Does the constant use of technological devices hinder attention spans? Is technology
Although many are supportive of the “technology-in-classrooms” idea, there are many
who hesitate at the mention of such a transition. During an interview about perspectives on
technology Lisa Baldwin, high school chemistry teacher at Great Barrington Massachusetts,
argues, “they need more skills that are different from ‘spit, spit, there’s the answer.’” Although
not all teachers think alike, many traditional style teachers complain that technology is
interfering with students’ learning because of how easy it is for them to find answers to
problems. Instead of taking the time to think and find ways that lead to a solution, like students
prior to this technological transition, students are using search engines like “Google” to find
answers to surface knowledge types of questions like the year of the Boston Tea Party. Although
I agree that technology can cause some students to use cheating to their advantage, not every
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student chooses this method to learn. There are certain sites such as Chegg and Khan Academy
that provide users with explanations of certain topics and practice sets to help students improve
their understandings of certain subjects. In addition, many schools are using different programs
Since many school officials are aware of the concern of cheating when students write their
essays, systems like the two mentioned were created to help point out when a student may have
used the copy-and-paste option and where they got their information from. This helps the
educational environment minimize the amount of plagiarism and reinforce their student honor
Well, what about during class time? Many teachers complain that laptops in the
classroom provide distractions for students using the device and those around them. A 2012
learning between different groups of students: laptop users, non-laptop users and those who
were/weren’t in the line of view of their peers’ laptops. The results of the first part of the
experiment (containing only laptop users and non-laptop users) indicated that students who were
multitasking on the laptop scored 11% lower on the post-lecture comprehension test as opposed
to those who did not use the laptop. The second portion of the study resulted in participants who
were in view of their multitasking peer scoring 17% less on the post-lecture comprehension test
compared to those who were not in view of other laptop users (Sana et al.). In many of my large
classes I have witnessed students who decided that online shopping or watching videos unrelated
to the class was more important than actually paying attention to what the lecturer has to say. I
believe this all connects to what Rebecca Schuman, an adjunct instructor at the University of
Missouri, argues in her article, “In Defense of Laptops.” “Students should be old enough to
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decide for themselves whether they want to pay attention in class-and to face the consequences if
they do not,” (A.B#4). I sympathize with Schuman because too many people focus on
technology being a distraction and not how the user chooses to utilize technology. In order to
help students grow up to become successful adults, they need to learn beforehand that they will
have to make decisions on their own and face the consequences that come afterward.
In today’s society, people are more prone to exposure to technology at a young age.
Technology is one of the most commonly used items in our everyday lives and continues to
evolve. Instead of focusing on how technology can affect students negatively, some teachers can
use it to their advantage. James M Lang, English professor at Assumption College, informs
readers in his article “Playing with Technology” about his experiences using polling systems in
his classes. Though he was hesitant at first, he chose to incorporate one electronic polling service
called PollEverywhere in his classes and was astonished by the results. He noticed more students
were participating in discussions rather than only a few outspoken students voicing their
opinions on a topic. He used this system to ask for feedback about students’ comfort level with
certain topics to see if he should move forward on topics or remain on that topic a little longer
until more students became comfortable with it. “Done as a poll, all of the students got to express
their opinions, and could quickly see how their peers felt — something I know they found
illuminating as well,” (A.B#1). This illustrates how the use of technology can increase the
connection not only between students and their teachers but with their peers as well.
necessary to paint clear pictures of historical events, such as the Industrial Revolution, in the
minds of curious individuals. Technology can provide different methods of learning to assist
students with their complete understanding of certain material. “Sixty-five percent of people are
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thought to be visual learners and thirty percent are better through auditory methods,” (A.B#5).
These statistics explain why different audio-visual learning techniques have been used
learning strategies by allowing students to get a visual of information (videos and pictures) and
While technology can have its benefits in the classroom, I am aware of the concerns of
technology’s effects on retention for learning. Different researchers have suggested that people
who read digital text retain less information as opposed to people who read printed text. “People
comprehend less when they read on a screen because screen-based reading is more physically
and mentally taxing than reading on paper,” (Jabr). This was proposed due to the process of
steadily staring at the computer screen and having to constantly scroll up and down just to find
information that you read previously. Previous studies have shown that aside from the
navigational issue of reading online documents, people feel as though they do not have a sense of
control while reading online. When reading books, the readers are able to flip through pages
instead of scrolling down a series of pages on a screen. Readers are also able to highlight
important keywords and write side notes when analyzing the printed text which gives the reader
a sense of control in understanding the text (A.B#5). Many engineers and manufacturers have
noticed this issue and are using different strategies to adapt technology so that they can meet
these needs for the user. For example, options such as the highlighter function and the “Ctrl + F”
function have been added to help readers pinpoint and navigate through the on-screen text so that
their reading experience isn’t so physically exhausting. In contrast to what some researchers say
suggested technology to be a benefit. “Studies have shown that technology has the ability to
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increase pupil engagement, resulting in better information retention and, therefore, greater results
accuracy in a testing environment,” (Berger). In a study published in 2015 involving 4th through
6th grade elementary Montessori students, technology was integrated in the classroom for a 6-
week period. The students were placed into two different groups: one with technology
incorporated in the lesson and the other without it. When technology was incorporated in the
classroom teachers used YouTube videos and PowerPoints to assist with the lessons. Results
from this study showed that there was a 16% increase in accuracy based on the short answer
responses for the lessons that involved technology (Tosco).While research is still going on, there
is no specific answer for whether or not technology increases or decreases retention for learning;
however, technology can still be used in ways to help students retain information and prepare for
tests. Websites like Quizlet are made to help students learn and remember vocabulary words and
questions through the use of flashcards, quizzes and games. “When you look at the front side of a
flashcard and think of the answer, you are engaging a mental faculty known as active recall,”
(Cohen). Active recall is an efficient learning technique that refers to the process of being
engaged in activities that promote analysis, synthesis and evaluation of content. The frequent
practice of active recall can help students retain information for a longer period of time and
Research has also shown that quizzes have been known to help students retain
information. Though some argue that the idea of constant quizzes can bring anxiety to students
and hinder their learning, studies have suggested otherwise. A 2013 study with 70 high school
students showed that students who were given weekly quizzes did significantly better on tests
compared to students who only took the midterm exam. As mentioned earlier, Quizlet provides
the user with different forms of quizzes that are made in a random order to help increase the
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user’s retention of the material. The tests made on Quizlet are not limited to multiple choice tests
but also includes fill in the blank questions. While multiple choice questions focus more on a
person’s ability to recognize a word or phrase, fill in the blank questions allows students to take
the time to think about the material that they can recall and how it relates to the question. In
addition to tests, Quizlet provides the user with games to help with remembering the material.
Unlike tests, games allow a more entertaining aspect of learning information. Instead of simply
learning the material, the user is able to have fun in the process of doing so.
Another concern that has risen in this debate of technology in classrooms is how
technology affects students’ health. It is safe to say that students need good health in order to
properly focus and learn the material at hand. There have been many complaints about how the
constant action of staring at a computer screen can damage one’s vision. “Depending on the
model of the device, glare, pixelation and flickers can also tire the eyes. LCDs are certainly
screens can cause eyestrain, headaches and blurred vision,” (A.B#5). LCD stands for liquid
crystal display which is a type of screen that is used for computers, TVs, tablets, etc. Headaches
have been a common complaint from people who stare at computer screens for long periods of
time. Though I concede that the overuse of technology can cause headaches based on my own
experiences, I still insist that there are ways around this issue. Several researchers and
optometrists have offered suggestions for ways to avoid these health problems from prolonged
use of technological devices. One strategy proposed by many optometrists is the 20-20-20 rule.
“Every 20 minutes spent using a screen, you should try to look away at something 20 feet away
from you for a total of 20 seconds,”(Marcin). This allows a person’s eyes to completely relax and
gives your brain a chance to focus on something else. Other suggestions for resolving this issue
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are to clean your computer screen to reduce the glare and to sit an arm’s length away from the
Aside from the internal medical issues, physical health is another concern that school
officials have had in regards to technology. The continuous act of typing has been suggested to
cause pain and repetitive stress on the fingers. Some researchers have suggested that carpal
tunnel syndrome (CTS), a painful condition of the hand due to pressed nerves, can by caused by
the continual act of typing on a keyboard. Since there are many jobs and instances where people
have to work at a computer all day, health specialists have provided suggestions for ways to help
lower the risks of getting CTS. These methods include taking breaks from the repetitive task
(typing), massaging your hands, and positioning your wrist correctly. Although constant typing
can have negative effects on physical health so can prolonged handwriting. “Physical
writing...has been correlated with causing focal hand dystonia,” (“Is Typing Healthier than
Handwriting,” 2017). Focal hand dystonia is a neurological condition that affects a muscle or
group of muscles which causes involuntary muscular contractions. This shows that both the
incessant act of handwriting or typing can have negative consequences on health. Another
physiological aspect to focus on is the back. Before laptops were common in the educational
environment, several students had to take their textbooks to and from school. “A heavy weight
carried in backpacks can distort the natural curves in the middle and lower backs, causing muscle
strain and irritation to the spine joints and the rib cage,”(Triano). To accommodate for this
complication, manufacturers have made some laptops more lightweight so that they are easier to
After researching and analyzing my findings I have concluded that technology can be
beneficial for one’s learning, when used right. My point is not that everyone should always use
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technology in the classroom but it should be taken into consideration. Like many things,
technology has its benefits and drawbacks. Though it allows users to have access to different
sources of information, it can allow students to use cheating to their advantage. The
physiological and psychological effects of the use of technology all play a role in the decision of
whether or not technology is beneficial for the user. In the end it all comes down to how the user
learns best. Knowing what resources help you learn best is important because education is a
fundamental part of one’s life and their ability to comprehend the world around them. While
some people learn better when given books to read and paper tests, others may learn better when
given e-books and online tests. I believe the classroom setting should have a middle ground in
the amount of technology and books available so that every student’s learning is taken into
consideration.
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Work Cited
Lang, James M. “Playing With Technology.” The Chronicle of Higher Education, 12 Dec. 2017,
Richtel, Matt. “Technology Is Changing How Students Learn, Teachers Say.” nytimes.com The
Feinberg, Robbie. “Do Laptops Help Learning? A Look At The Only Statewide School Laptop
Program.” Audio blog post. National Public Radio. Maine Public, 18 Aug. 2017. Web. 18
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Schuman, Rebecca. “In Defense of Laptops in the Classroom.” Slate. The Slate Group, 15 June
Jabr, Ferris. “The Reading Brain in the Digital Age: The Science of Paper versus Screens.”
www.scientificamerican.com/article/reading-paper-screens/
Taylor, James. “How Technology is Changing the Way Children Think and Focus.” Psychology
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Berger, James. “The Role of Technology in Engagement, Memory, Retention & Exam Success.”
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