LO3: Create and deliver an audio visual presentation about your adaption idea.
• Your pitch could take the form of a PowerPoint presentation or a Prezi.
• Feedback should take the form of a written report, written or verbal response.
When presenting and pitching your idea and planning materials consider:
• Your verbal and nonverbal communication
• Room layout
• Appropriate equipment – tested
• Structure of your pitch
• Content of your slides
• Resources / Information pack
• Opportunities for feedback – this forms the basis of LO4
P5 Pitch your developed adaptation idea to a potential investor for feedback, including:
Information about the creative product the adaptation is based on
The treatment or proposal they developed for their idea
The storyboard they produced for their idea
Information on feasibility of possible adaptation
How the activity covers the requirements of the assessment/grading criteria, including how
and where the activity took place:
Storm pitched her adaptation idea to a small audience of six. Her pitch was well prepared with slides
and visuals. Her delivery was clear but a little too fast and therefore her presentation seemed very
short.
Storm discussed the intellectual property on which her idea was based and gave an overview of her
proposal and storyboard.
In the audience feedback segment we discussed some possible modifications and ideas for
improvements including potentially aiming the product at a wider target audience and ideas for
exhibition with release dates and merchandising including tapping into the Japanese horror target
audience. Budgets and casting were also discussed. Discussions around the story board focused on
how the micro elements could be improved to generate meaning and drama more effectively,
particularly in terms of editing and music.
Witness name: Ginny Walton Job role: Teacher
A witness statement is used to formally record the observation of a learner. This includes
describing what the learner is doing in relation to the grading/assessment criteria. The
witness can also (where appropriate) make reference to the level of performance by the
learner of a given activity.
Assessors are professionally competent to describe the activity and the level of
performance. Other witnesses, with competence or knowledge in the subject, should only
comment on performance where they feel confident to do so (and in agreement with the
assessor).
Witness statements:
Once complete:
• the assessor will use the statement to judge whether the evidence presented meets
the standards required by the grading/assessment criteria for the unit.
• where the witness is someone other than the assessor, often it will be necessary for
the assessor to make contact with witnesses to ensure:
a) the witness statement is authentic
b) the assessors interpretation of the witness statement is accurate.