Bianca Grino
5/22/18
Engl.123
A Lasting Legacy
The poem, “Not marble, nor the gilded monuments” by William Shakespeare, is a
Shakespearean sonnet that has the specific structure with quatrains and one couplet. This poem
also follows the same basic scheme other Shakespearean poems have which is abab cdcd efef gg.
For classic shakespearean poems there is usually no complete story. In this specific
Shakespearean sonnet we could see the message of the poem head to a specific direction with
one meaning entirely, but once it heads to the couplet the direction of this whole poem would
end up saying the opposite or turn completely around with the whole meaning. I believe for this
Shakespearean sonnet, William Shakespeare was trying to tell a person that their legacy will
continue to live on and outlast anything in this world, but not until that person sees his self-worth
will he finally become the legacy that will outlast “sluttish time.”
In this poem William Shakespeare sends a strong message about a person’s legacy. This
message is pretty evident in the whole poem because majority of the time he’s talking about a
person who will outlast monuments of famous princes. He uses phrases and words that really
emphasize the idea of a lasting legacy. In the poem there was a section that said, “Gainst death
and all-oblivious enmity/ Shall you pace forth; your praise shall still find room/ Even in the eyes
of all posterity” (Lines 9-11) In those lines alone he describes that this person’s legacy will
continue to last through inevitable events like death, and this says a lot because death is
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something that will last forever and he’s saying that his legacy will last against death and enmity.
The word choices that he uses really puts that strong message. Since he also used the word like
posterity which basically means “all future generations of people.” he’s continually saying that
this person in the eyes of future generations of people will continue to live on. Basically meaning
that his legacy will last forever. Not only does the word choice really emphasize the message this
poem is trying to give, but also the imagery that William Shakespeare uses is pretty effective. In
the poem he says, “ But you shall shine more bright in these contents/ Than unswept stone,
besmeared with sluttish time./ When wasteful war shall statues overturn,/ And broils root out the
work of masonry” (3-6) In this section he describes that this person is going to stand out even
when broils start to destroy masonry. For that part I imagine how plants would grow through
things like stone in long periods of time. Just thinking about that section of the poem really
helped me imagine that this person’s legacy will live on in very long periods of time. Although
the message was mostly about how the legacy of this person will live on forever, this was only
the first portion of the poem. Everything in this poem can flow into one direction before it gets to
the couplet.
In this specific Shakespearean sonnet the structure contains quatrains and then one
couplet. The couplet in this specific poem actually changes the direction of the entire message
that William shakespeare was trying to say in the beginning. On the first quatrains of his poem
he really emphasizes the idea of someone’s legacy lasting through things like death and broils.
Although once the poem gets to the couplet the whole direction of the message goes the opposite
way. This way of writing is called a reversal, when the poem seems like it’s going in a complete
specific direction, but once it gets to the two lines it turns completely around. In this poem the
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couplet says, “So, till the judgment that yourself arise,/ You live in this, and dwell in lovers’
eyes.” (13-14). These are the last two lines of the poem which is the couplet. There are different
interpretations that could be said about these last two lines, but I think that William Shakespeare
used this couplet and made a reversal. What he said on the first line I interpreted it as the writer
telling that person that until you finally see yourself worth will legacy finally live on through
things like death and doom. This whole poem went through one complete direction in the
quatrains describing and emphasizing how this person’s name or legacy will live through things
like death, but getting to the couplet completely changes it because it saying that this person
doesn’t even see himself or herself as something worth it in life. That’s what led me to thinking
In Shakespearean sonnets they are mostly works of literature that have undeveloped
narratives. The structure of these sonnets have a lot of twist and turns, but personally I think
that’s what gives it character which can emphasize the theme. A lot of Shakespearean sonnet
focus on themes like love, time, passion, or reason. According to the Salem Press Encyclopedia
of Literautre, “The organization of the sequence seems somewhat haphazard. Within it are
several groups of poems that clearly belong together, but they do not form an entirely satisfying
narrative. Shakespeare uses his half-untold story as a basis for poems upon many familiar
Renaissance themes: love, time, mutability, the conflict of body and soul, passion and reason”
(Rickards 1). In this poem specifically he was really focusing on the theme about time and
reason since he was talking about a person’s legacy and how he view himself is preventing him
from becoming a legend he knows he could be. The way it was written as a reversal at the
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couplet really got this specific point across and it does seem confusing at first, but I think that’s
Overall this whole poem had a lot of twists and turns that were very confusing to interpret
at first. William Shakespeare focused a lot about the theme that involved time and reason. His
word choice really helped emphasize the points that he made in his whole poem, using words
like death, which is something that lasts forever and comparing it to someone’s legacy helped me
see the connection with his point. The imagery in his poem also helped get his point across
because the reader can really imagine the periods of time he is describing. The way he also made
the reversal with the couplet contributed to the idea of twist and turns being made in these kinds
of sonnets, but again I still think it further emphasizes the meaning behind the poem that people
should really see their self worth if they want to become a legacy that will last forever.
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Work cited
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Shakespeare, William. [ Not the marble, nor the gilded monuments.] The Norton
Introduction to Literature, edited by Sarah Tobourg, W.W. Norton and Comapny Inc.2017,
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