Group 3

Group Member :

1. Agus Wahyudhi
2. M. Daffa Govinda
3. Wahyudi A
4. Muh. Mauludi Edwin
5. Trakredha Aji B

Comment on Second Video of English Class in Friday, 19th January 2018

Mrs. Nia displayed a video of Do's and Don'ts in presentation. This video contain two types of presentation
(type A and type B). Type A gave us an example of bad presentation while the Type B contradict which
gave us an example of good presentation. These two types of presentation contain some important points
in presenting a presentation. They are language, body language, aids, voice and intonation, blocking, eye
contact, conclusion and question and answer session.

Bad (Type A) Good (Type B)

Using language that is difficult
Language to understand (book and
literature language). Using
formal languange.
The speaker talking without use
Body Language a gesture to tell the
presentation just like statue.
The speaker did not prepare the
aids or equipment that help him
for the presentation like the
Aids projector and the screen display
from the projector is too small
to see from the audience point
of view.
Using the simplest language to
tell the presentation
(paraphrase from book and
literature).
The speaker talking with a
gesture to help him convey
what he meant
The speaker prepared all the
aids or equipment that help him
for the presentation and make
sure the aids that he used works
perfectly and the layout that
appears in the projector is easy
to see.

The speaker's voice is too small

to be heard that it's very
The speaker's voice is loud so
difficult to be heard by the
Voice and Intonation the audience from the far can
audience and the speaker's
hear him clearly.
speech is so flat as no intention
to speak.
The speaker blocks the view
The speaker tell the
toward the projector so that the
Blocking presentation next to the
audience can not see clearly
projector so the audience can
what the projector is displaying.

The speaker constantly reads
Eye Contact the script without seeing the
audience.
The speaker does not close the
presentation perfectly and
Conclusion
always adds something after
concluding the conclusion.
The speaker does not listen to
the inquiring audience and
always refutes before the
Question and Answer Session
audience finishes speaking and
answers the question
incompletely
see clearly what the projector is
displaying.
The speaker sees briefly on the
text he brings and immediately
diverts views to the audience.
The speaker close the
presentation perfectly without
adding another conclusion after
concluding the conclusion.
the speaker listens to the
audiences who ask until finish
and then answer them
completely.