Appendix 3

Table Description of Students’ Grammatical Errors

S Student’s Writing Error Correction Causes of Errors Total of

classification Errors
1. I have a family. My - Addition (6) I have a family. My - Interlingual
mother name is Merry. My - Omission (2) mother’s name is Merry. My Transfer (11x)
father name is Sarnoto. My - Verb Tense (2) father’s name is Sarnoto. My - Intralingual
brother name is Pindho And - Word choice brother’s name is Pindho And Transfer (9x)
My name is Adinar Zahra (2) My name is Adinar Zahra - Context of
Nabillah. You can call me, - Incomplete Nabillah. You can call me, learning (2)
Rara. I’m is the last child in this sentence (1) Rara. I’m the last child in my
A family. We live in Bekasi, jawa - Spelling (1) family. We live in Bekasi, West
barat. - Capitalization of Java.
Z We have pointed nose. (2) We have pointed nose.
Two of four people in family - Meaning not Two of four people in family,
22 errors
N they have brown eyes is so clear (3) they have brown eyes is so
beautiful. and other have a dark - Run-on beautiful and other have a dark
black eyes is so elegant. I and sentence (1) black eyes is so elegant. My
mom have a long hair. but my - Word order (3) mom and i have a long hair but
hair colour not same with my hair color is not same with
mom, because colour my hair my mom, because my hair is
follow colour hair my dad. My same with my dad. My brother
brother is very handsome with is very handsome with his
the eyebrow is wouw…nice. eyebrow.
and his tall. If my family and i feel
If I and family feeling bored. My family and i go to

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bored. I and my family go to refresh everything is make us

refreshing everything is ganna happy and fresh. This is my
be we happy and fresh. This is family, where is your family?
my family, where your family?

2. Hello, my name Jali. I - Addition (4) Hello, my name is Jali. I - Intralingual

have the best family in the - Capitalization have the best family in the Transfer (10x)
world. They are my father (2) world. They are my father’s - Intralingual
prayugo, my mother - Omission (2) name is prayugo, my mother’s Transfer (2)
A Juminten and my brother - Verb tense (2) name is Juminten and my - Context of
Jaelani. They are very support - Spelling (3) brother’s name is Jaelani. They learning (2x)
M me in everything I do. That is - Word choice are very support me in
why I call them the best family. (1) everything I do. That is why I
14 Errors
my father is a police man and a call them the best family. My
good my father, he protect father is a police man and a
every people when they need good father, he protects every
some help. he always teach me people when they need some to
about everyting that makes me help. He always teaches me
clalver, good boy and good about everything that makes me
attitude with other people. clever, good boy and good
attitude to other people.
In my family there are 4 - Singular (1) In my family there are 4 - Interlingual
3. people’s, my father, my mother, - Word order (2) persons, my father, my mother, Transfer (5x)
me and my elder brother. My - Addition (3) my elder brother and me. My - Intralingual
father name is Agus Supriyadi, - Word form (1) father’s name is Agus Transfer (7x) 12 errors
he is a business man, my - Verb tense (3) Supriyadi, he is a business man,
mother name is Ida maikawati, - Spelling (1) my mother’s name is ida
A and my elder brother name is - Incomplete maikawati, and my elder

Alfin Nur Windu. And now, I
N will description my mother.
My mother has a oval face,
W sharp nose and elips eyes, she
has a white skin, and short
body, she is a kind people, she
always protect her family. and
never angry.
If my father, he has oval fase,
sharp nose and white skin, but
he has long body, he is
handsome like a my elder
brother, he has red hair, he
always give me inspiration. he’s
my everything in my life, and
we always happy together.
I have a family. I lived
4. with my father, my mother, and
my little sister. We lived at
jalan Garuda X no. 5, central
Kalimantan. Well, let me
A introduce my family to you.
A Firstly, is my father. My
S father was born at 11
November 1974. And now, he
is 42 years old. He is a strong
man ever I know. You know,
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sentences (1) brother’s name is Alfin Nur
Windu. I will describe my
mother now. My mother has
oval face, sharp nose and elips
eyes, she has a white skin, and
short body, she is kind person,
she always protects her family,
and never angry.
If my father, he has oval face,
sharp nose and white skin but
he has long body. He is
handsome like my elder
brother. He has red hair. he
always gives me inspiration.
he’s my everything in my life.
and we are always happy
together.
- Verb tense I have a family. I lives - Interlingual
(11) with my father, my mother, and transfer (2x)
- Addition (1) my little sister. We lives at - Intralingual
- Meaning not jalan Garuda X no. 5, central of transfer (17x)
clear (3) Kalimantan. Well, let me
- Word order introduce my family to you. 19 errors
(3) Firstly, my father was
- Word choice born on November 11st,1974.
(3) He is 42 years old now. He is a
- Singular strong man ever I know. You
Plural (1) know, it’s not easy to be a

it’s not easy to be a father. He
must to hard work for his
family.
Next, is my mother. She
is my super mom. She was born
at 9 June 1974, same with my
dad. My mom is a beautiful
woman and clever. She have so
many schedule everyday. She
must to wake up early then
prepared for my little sister
before going to school. After
that, she clean the house and
cooked for my dad. When all
finish, she must go to her
restaurant for prepare and
cooked. Then, she sell all the
food.
Last, is my little sister.
Her name is Kintan, but I also
call her Dede. Kintan is a
naughty girl. She always make
my room angry of her behavior.
But, sometimes she’s a good
girl too. No matter how naughty
she is, I always loved her.
However, that’s my
family. I always loved them all
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father. He must to hard work
for his family.
Next, she is my super
mom. She was born onJune 9th,
1974, same with my dad. My
mom is a beautiful woman and
clever. She has so many
schedules everyday. She must
to wake up early then prepares
for my little sister before goes
to school. After that, she cleans
the house and cooks for my
dad. When all finish, she must
go to her restaurant for prepares
and cooks. Then, she sells all
the food.
The last, her name is
Kintan, but I also call her Dede.
Kintan is a naughty girl. She
always makes my room angry
of her behavior. But,
sometimes she’s a good girl
too. No matter how naughty
she is, I always loves her.
However, that’s my
family. I always loved them all
 :u

 :u
5. There are 5 people’s in my
family. they are, my father, my
mother, my brother, me and,
B my sister. I love they so much.
A My father has seems job
K with my mother, there are
seller. Everyday they always
wake up early morning to
preaper the breakfast and after
we go to school, they go to the
market for open the store. by
the way my father’s name is
Nur Muhamad, he’s the best
father ever for me, and my
mother’s name is Anis
Anikwati. She is beautifull
woman ever too. My brother’s
name is Muhammad sultan
Rifaldi, he is in University now.
He’s smart, handsome, and
good boy. My sister’s name is
chumairo Nur Anisa, she is in
grade 7 Junior High School of
Wahidiyah. She’s cute girl,
smart and shy girl. I love they
so much, because without they
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- Singular (1) There are 5 persons in my - Interlingual
- Word order (2) family. They are my father, my Transfer (9x)
- Spelling (3) mother, my brother, my sister, - Intralingual
- Word choice and me. I love them so much. Transfer (6x)
(3) My father’s job is same - Context of
- Capitalization with my mother, they are a Learning (2x)
(1) seller. Everyday they always
- Article (2) wake up early morning to
- Word form (4) prepare the breakfast and after
- Run-on we go to school, they go to the
sentence (1) market to open the store. By the
way, my father’s name is Nur
Muhamad, he’s the best father
17 errors
ever for me, and my mother’s
name is Anis Anikwati. She is a
beautiful woman ever too. My
brother’s name is Muhammad
sultan Rifaldi, he is in
University now. He’s smart,
handsome, and good boy. My
sister’s name is chumairo Nur
Anisa, she is in seventh grade
Junior High School of
Wahidiyah. She’s a cute girl,
smart and shy girl. I love them
so much, because without them
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I can’t live here happly, I can’t live here well, because

because they support very their support is very important
important for me. for me.
I have a family. I life in - word choice I have a family. I live in - Interlingual
6. mamuju, Sulawesi barat. I (5) Mamuju, West of Sulawesi. I Transfer (11x)
have a mother, father, and - Capitalization have mother, father, and sister. - Intralingual
sister. My father name is (7) My father’s name is sutrisno transfer (13x)
sutrisno he’s job is sawit - Addition (6) his job is a gardener. My - Context of
coconut gardener. My mother - Word Order mother’s name is Domini her learning (7x)
B name is Domini she’s job is (7) job is a seller. My mother sells
W seller. My mother sell meat - Verb tense (4) meat ball, noodle, and sate. All
ball, noodle, and sate. All of - Meaning not of that is very nice to eat. My
that is very nice for eat. My clear (2) sister’s name is Yuli wijayanti.
sister name is Yuli wijayanti. She live in Ngawi now with my
Now she life in ngawi. Follow grandmother and her uncle. She
my grandmother and mu is 22 years old. 31 errors
uncle. She’s age is 22 years. My name is Budi
My name is Budi Wijayanto. I study in Senior
Wijayanto. Now I school in High School of Wahidiyah,
wahidiyah senior high school, Kediri. I am 16 years old. My
Kediri. My age is 16 years. My mother goes to Ngawi every
mother go to ngawi every year. year. Exactly in every
exactly in every Ramadhan Ramadhan month and my
month and my father go to father goes to Ngawi 1 time on
ngawi 1 time on there years. I there years I want to go to west
very want for my big family of Sulawesi because I haven’t
can meet on one time. And I go there for 10 years.
want go to Sulawesi barat

because 10 years I not yet go
there.
7. Hello, My name is Fani
Firsadiono. I was born in
Sidoarjo, 14 of February 1998.
I am seventeen years old. I am
student in senior High School in
Bhakti Dharmawan, of
Sidoarjo. And now people call
C me Fani. I have a sister. My
O sister’s name is Penny Nouva
A Utari. She job is a employee of
pharmacy in Sedati, Sidoarjo.
My sister’s twentytwo years
old now. She was born in
Sidoarjo, 04 of November
1994. She has white skin,
slanted eyes, and chubby check.
My father’s name is Budi
Permono. He is a employee of
Bank Jatim. He has white skin
eyes and tall. My mother’s
name is Sri Rahayu. She is a
house wife.
I stay in Sidoarjo city. My
hobby is listend music and
mistreat my friends in class.
My favorite music group is
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- word order Hello, My name is Fani - Interlingual
(2) Firsadiono. I was bord in Transfer (6x)
- word form Sidoarjo, on February 14th,
(2) 1998. I am 17th years old. I am
- word choice student in senior High School
(1) in Bhakti Dharmawan, of
- Verb tense Sidoarjo. And now people call
(2) me Fani. I have a sister. my
sister’s name is Penny Nouva
Utari. Her job is a employee of
pharmacy in Sedati, Sidoarjo.
My sister’s 22nd years old now.
She was born in Sidoarjo,
November 04th, 1994. She has
white skin, slanted eyes, and
chubby check. My father’s
name is Budi Permono. He is a 6 Errors
employee of Bank Jatim. He
has white skin eyes. and tall.
My mothers name is Sri
Rahayu. She is a house wife.
I stay in Sidoarjo city. My
hobby are listening music and
mistreating my friends in class.
My favorite music group is
ungu. I wish in future to be the

ungu. I wish in future to be the
member of police and I have
restaurant Nusantara which
have a taste food. That about
me thanks of attention see you.
My grandparents live in a - Verb tense (1)
traditional house called omah - Word choice
8. Joglo. It is a stage house which (1)
is about 2.5 – 3 meters high.
The house is made of wood
D which has a lot of carvings on
A the walls. The front part is for
family. Then, the next part is
the central room. It has rooms
on the left and right side as
bedroom. After that, the last
part is mburitan. We use this
room to relax and chat. My
grandmother also uses this
room for cooking.
In behind of the house,
there is a little of flower garden.
Also, there is many birds with
differ of various. Every I am
visited, I am very happy.
Because I can see and pick
fruits.
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member of police and I have
restaurant Nusantara which
have a taste food. That about
me thanks of attention see you.
My grandparents live in a - Interlingual
traditional house called omah Transfer (1x)
Joglo. It is a stage house which - Intralingual
is about 2.5 – 3 meters high. Transfer (1x)
The house is made of wood
which has a lot of carvings on
the walls. The front part is for
family. Then, the next part is
the central room. It has rooms
on the left and right side as
bedroom. After that, the last
2 Errors
part is mburitan. We use this
room to relax and chat. My
grandmother also uses this
room for cooks.
In behind of the house,
there is a little of flower
garden. Also, there is many
birds with differ of various.
When, I visit there, I am very
happy. Because I can see and
pick fruits.
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9. My family life in Kediri. I - Word choice My family live in Kediri. I - Interlingual

have father. I have mother. One (3) have father. I have mother, Transfer (11x)
big brother and one young - Addition (5) elder brother and younger sister - Intralingual
D sister my father is Nanang - Article (2) my father’s name is Nanang Transfer (4x)
G Sugiarto. He is police and my - Spelling (1) Sugiarto. He is a police and my
W mother is Sumiati she is - Word order mother’s name is Sumiati She
lecture, and my brother is (4) is a lecture. And my brother is
Angga S.W. He is univercity Angga S.W. He is university
students and my young sister students and my younger sister
still child and her old still two is still child and her old is still
year two year
Oh yes! And my name is Oh yes! And my name is
15 Errors
Dezas Gian Waskito. Am is Dezas Gian Waskito. I am is a
students of Senior high school students of Senior high school
wahidiyah my age is 16 years of wahidiyah. I am 16 years
old. I born in Sambas. west old. I was born in Sambas.
Kalimantan on November 4. West of Kalimantan on
1999. November 4. 1999.
10. my name is Diyah - Capitalization My name is Diyah - Interlingual
Januarti. I have the house. my (5) Januarti. I have a house. My Transfer (6x)
house located in the jalan - Word choice house is located in the jalan - Intralingual
kemang 11, Jambi city. my (5) kemang 11, Jambi city. The transfer (4x)
D house coloured is white. there - Verb tense (1) color of my house is white. - Context of
16 Errors
J are the bathroom, bedroom, - Spelling (3) there are the bathroom, learning (6x)
families room, kitchen. and - Run on bedroom, families room,
visitor room. In the visitor sentence (1) kitchen, and visitor room. In
room there is a chair. It is - Omission (1) the visitor room, there is a
coloured is blue. In the my chair. It is blue.
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house of the three bedroom. I In my house, there are

live in the second room of my
house. in the my bedroom of
the mattress, pillow. mirror,
cupboard, chair and doll. In the
families room of the television,
table and calendar. In the
kitchen of the pan, stove.
11. I want to introduce my - Article (3)
self, my name is farida Alfiyah. - Addition (4)
You can call me Rida. I am - Word Choice
from south borneo. I am (3)
student in Senior hight school - Spelling (1)
wahidiyah. - Plural-
F I have a great father, my singular (4)
father name is kamarudin. He - Capitalizatio
A is a hard working for his n (2)
family. my father is disiplint - Verb tense
man and always care all about (1)
his family. my father have tall
body and steadi body. His job
is business man. he has brown
eye and sharp like eagle. he has
brown skin and straight hair.
my mother name is Sulastri.
My mother is house wife. She
three bedroom. I live in the
second room of my house. In
my bedroom, there are
mattress, pillow, mirror,
cupboard, chair and doll. In the
family room, there are
television, table and calendar.
In the kitchen, there are pan,
and stove.
I want to introduce my - Interlingual
self, my name is farida Alfiyah. transfer (15x)
You can call me Rida. I am - Interlingual
from South of borneo. I am a transfer (1x)
students in Senior hight school - Context of
wahidiyah. learning (2x)
I have a great father, my
father’s name is Kamarudin. He
is a hard worker for his family.
18 errors
my father is a discipline man
and always care all about his
family. My father has tall body
and steady body. His job is a
business man. He has brown
eye and sharp like eagle. He
has brown skin and straight
hair. My mother’s name is
Sulastri. My mother is a house

has a gentle heart like a silk.
She has round face with cubby
cheek. She has short body,
white skin, black eye.
I have younger brother. He
is Muhammad Alfatih Billah.
he has small body and very
handsome face. He has clear
brown eye and sharp nose. He
still baby. I always love and
miss my family.
12. Hello…my name is
Fatkhur Roziqin. I have best
family the world. I have father,
her name is Kirsudin. He is
love family so much and many
F support family. he is
R handsome. His job is farmer. I
love my father.
I have mother. His name
is Rukoyah. She is beautiful.
She is work wife house. my
mother is very good. my mother
always love me.
I have 2 brother. the
first brother name is Ngabdul
Muzayin. And the second is
khamid khozin. Khamid’s the
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wife. She has a gentle heart like
a silk. She has round face and
cubby cheek. She has short
body, white skin, black eyes.
I have younger brother.
He is Muhammad Alfatih
Billah. He has small body and
very handsome face. He has
clear brown eye and sharp
nose. He is still baby. I always
love and miss my family.
- Addition (4) Hello…my name is - Interlingual
- Word choice Fatkhur Roziqin. I have the transfer (8x)
(2) best family the world. I have - Intralingual
- Omission (1) father, his name is Kirsudin. He transfer (4x)
- Verb tense (2) loves family and support her
- Word order family. He is handsome. His
(1) job is farmer. I love my father.
- Singular I have mother. His name
plural (1) is Rukoyah. She is beautiful. 12 Errors
- Meaning not She is a wife house. My mother
clear (1) is very good. My mother
always loves me.
I have 2 brothers. The
first brothe’sr name is Ngabdul
Muzayin. And the second
brother’s name is khamid
khozin. Khamid always loves

person always love and guard
me. I love my brother.
I lived in a traditional
13. house. my house called Krang
Bade or Rumah Aceh.
It is a stage house which
is about 2.5 – 3 meters high.
There are stairs at the front to
F enter the house. The house is
N made of wood which has a lot
of carvings on the walls. It is
rectangular and extends from
east to west. The roof is made
of sago palm leaves.
Let me tell you about
inside of the house. The front
part is for family Then, the next
part is the central room which is
called seuramoe teungoh. it has
rooms on the left and right side
as bedrooms. for your
information, it is higher then the
front room. The last is
seuramoe liket we use this room
to relax and chat. This room for
cooking. My parents store items
on the bottom part of their
house.
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and guard me. I love my
brother.
- Verb tense (3) I live in a traditional - Interlingual
- word choice house. My house is called Transfer (1x)
(1) Krang Bade or Rumah Aceh. - Intralingual transfer
- Punctuation It is a stage house which (3x)
(2) is about 2.5 – 3 meters high. - Context of learning
- Run on There are stairs at the front to (3x) 7 Errors
sentence (1) enter the house. The house is
made of wood which has a lot
of carvings on the walls. It is
rectangular and extends from
east to west. The roof is made
of sago palm leaves.
Let me tell you about
inside of the house. the front
part is for family Then, the next
part is the central room which
is called seuramoe teungoh. It
has rooms on the left and right
side as bedrooms for your
information, it is higher then
the front room. The last is
seuramoe liket, we use this
room to relax and chat. this
room for cooks. My parents
store items on the bottom part
of their house.

My name’s Ima Tazkiyatun
14. Nafsiyah. I am child the first
from Mr. siswantoro and Mrs.
I Siti Mulyati. I have two sister
T and one brother is M. Arya Jati
N Laksana. My father is laborer
and my mother is house wife. I
am 16 years old.. Now, Iam
class X at Senior High School
of Wahidiyah. I stay at
Boarding school of Kedunglo
Al-Munadhdhororh, Kediri. my
parent, my sister and my
brother live at east lampung.
Age my sister Rahma is 13
years old, Aini 3 years old and
my brother Arya 9 years old.
Now, Rahma class VII at
junior High School of Al-Islam,
Aini not yet school and Arya
class III at SDN Labuhan Ratu
IV. I miss them.
15. My name is Latifa
Damayanti, I have a big family.
first, my father his name
Dadang Suprayogi. He is
L always give me a support. his
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- Word order My name’s Ima Tazkiyatun - Interlingual transfer
(8) Nafsiyah. I am the first child (11x)
- Spelling (1) from Mr. Siswantoro and Mrs. - Intralingual
- Plural Siti Mulyati. I have two sisters Transfer (8x)
singular (1) and a brother is M. Arya Jati
- Word choice Laksana. My father is a laborer
(2) and my mother is a house wife.
- Addition (5) I am 16 years old. I am X grade 19 Errors
- Article (2) in Senior High School of
Wahidiyah. I stay at Boarding
school of kedunglo Al-
Munadhdhororh, Kediri. My
parent, my sister and my
brother live at east of lampung.
My sister is 13 years old, Aini
is 3 years old and my brother is
9 years old. Rahma is VII grade
in junior High School of Al-
Islam, Aini haven’t study and
Arya is 3 grade in SDN
Labuhan Ratu IV. I miss them.
- Omission (2) My name is Latifa - Interlingual
- Article (2) Damayanti, I have a big family. Transfer (8x)
- Word Form (2) The first, my father’s name is - Intralingual 12 errors
- Addition (4) Dadang Suprayogi. He always Transfer (4x)
- Word Order (2) gives me support. His jobs is a
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D jobs a sailor. He was born, sailor. He was born in Surabaya

Surabaya 11 september 1965. on September 11th, 1965. I love
I love you so much my father. you so mush my father.
My mother, she was born My mother, she was born
31 mei 1966. She is Artiyah. on Mei 31st, 1966. Her name is
and I have sister. Her name is Artiyah. and I have a sister. her
Latifa Ruly Ardini. He was name is Latifa Ruly Ardini. She
born in Malang, 7 Oktober was born in Malang on October
1991. his gender is girl, she has 7th, 1991. Her gender is female,
slanted eyes, flat nose, thin lips, she has slanted eyes, flat nose,
and with white chubby chick. thin lips, and with white
and I love you so mush my chubby chick. And I love you
sister. so mush my sister.
And I hope my family And I hope my family
always happy forever. always happy forever.

My name is Lina Rosyidah. - Capitalization My name is Lina Rosyidah. - Interlingual

16. my nick name is Lina. I have a (5) My nick name is Lina. I have a Transfer (6x)
family with one brother, one - Word Choice family with a brother, a sister, - Intralingual
sister, father and mother. I am (1) father and mother. I am born on Transfer (8x)
born on August 13, 2000 in - Verb tense (1) August 13, 2000 in Jakarta. My - Context of
Jakarta. my brother name is - Word order brother’s name is dzukhulqin Learning (5x)
L dzukhulqin adzim, he now class (7) adzim, he is XI grade in senior
R XI in senior high school of - Plural high school of wahidiyah. He
wahidiyah. he was born on Singular (1) was born on March 27, 1999 in 19 errors
March 27, 1999 in Jakarta. He - Omission (2) Jakarta. He have body is tall,
have body is tall, with hair - Addition (1) curly hair. I and my brother
curly. I and my brother same - Article (1) wear glasses. My sister’s name

wear glasses. now, my sister.
she is name Lu’lu syafa’a
wahdiyati, born on September
18, 2006. She is now in class 2
elementy school. my sister is
work hard, he is name Zainal
Arifin and my mother is house
wife. She is very good and
pretty. I and my family life
happily.
17. Hello, my name Entis
sutisna. I have the best family
in the world. They are my
father, Ateng Sanjaya, my
mother, Netty herawati and my
young sister, Sulastri. They are
M very support me in everything I
A do. That’s why I call them the
H best family. my father is a
A police man, he working
everyday in Bandung police
department. he is a good and a
good father, he protect every
people when they need some
help. he always teach me about
everything that makes me
clever, good boy and have good
attitude with other people.
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is Lu’lu syafa’a wahdiyat born
on September 18, 2006. She is
2 grades in elementary school.
My brother is a hard worker,
His name is Zainal Arifin and
my mother is a house wife. She
is very good and pretty. I and
my family live happily.
- Addition (5) Hello, my name is Entis - Interlingual
- Capitalization sutisna. I have the best family Transfer (6x)
(2) in the world. They are my - Intralingual
- Verb tense (8) father, Ateng Sanjaya, my Transfer (10x)
- Word Choice mother, Netty herawati and my - Context of
(1) young sister, Sulastri. They are Learning (2x)
- Word form (1) very support me in everything I
- Meaning not do. That’s why I call them the 18 errors
clear (1) best family. My father is a
police man, he works everyday
in Bandung police department.
he is a good and a good father,
he protects every people when
they need some help. he always
teaches me about everything
that makes me clever, good boy
and have good attitude with
other people.

Next, my mom is a teacher
in elementary school of
wahidiyah, she teach there was
ten years, and she never forget
with her duty for her family.
and the last is my young sister
sulatri. She cute and smart,
she is 3 years old, she is gonna
be can walking. that so funny
when she struggle to stand and
walking. she often fall down
but she always smile and smile
without give up to try. I love
her so much and I promise will
protect her and love her
forever.
18. I have a family. My father is
taylor. He’s name is
Muchammad Khusairi. My
mother name is Siti fathima.
She is from Surabaya. I have a
younger brother, he’s name is
Farchan Ali Nasrulloh. And I
M have a younger sister, she’s
Q name is Maftuchatun Najicha.
She is a student in Junior High
School of Plumbungan. We stay
in Sidoarjo, on Dungus wetan. I
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Next, my mom is a
teacher in elementary school of
wahidiyah, she teachs there was
ten years, and she never forgets
with her duty for her family.
And the last is my young sister
sulatri. She is cute and smart,
she is 3 years old, she want to
walk. That so funny when she
struggle to stand and walking.
she often falls down but she
always smile and smile without
give up to try. I love her so
much and I will protect her and
love her forever.
- Article (1) I have a family. My father is a - Interlingual
- Word form (3) taylor. His name is Transfer (3x)
- Addition (1) Muchammad Khusairi. My - Intralingual
- Word choice mother’s name is Siti fathima. Transfer (3x)
(1) She is from Surabaya. I have a
younger brother, his name is
Farchan Ali Nasrulloh. And I
have a younger sister, her name 6 errors
is Maftuchatun Najicha. She is
a student in Junior High School
of Plumbungan. We stay in
Sidoarjo, on Dungus wetan. I

have tree siblings. My mother is
a house wife. She has fat body,
white skin, kind, and beautiful.
My father has tall body, white
skin, and handsome. My sister
has tall body, white skin, short
hair and beautiful. My brother
has white skin, sharp nose, short
hair, handsome, funny and
chubby. My family life happly.
I have a family. the name
19. my mother and father of
Sumarni and kasidi. The
name my sister ratna mufidah
and my name Makrifatul
Hidayah. I life in Lampung.
M My mother is wife house. my
H mother have a Black eye. hair a
long. black colour. have a skin
white. and then my father is a
hard worker. He is have a tall
body. have a sharp nose. skin a
black. hair is thick. have a skin
white.road eye. and colour
black. have a skin white. a
body tall and thin. She is very
kind. have a hair long. she is
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have tree siblings. My mother
is a house wife. She has fat
body, white skin, kind, and
beautiful. My father has tall
body, white skin, and
handsome. My sister has tall
body, white skin, short hair and
beautiful. My brother has white
skin, sharp nose, short hair,
handsome, funny and chubby.
My family live happy
- Word Order I have a family. The name - Interlingual
(5) of my mother and father are Transfer (13x)
- Omission (8) Sumarni and kasidi. The name - Intralingual
- Addition (1) of my sister is ratna mufidah Transfer (5x)
- Word choice and my name is Makrifatul
(1) Hidayah. I live in Lampung.
- Article (1) My mother is a house wife. My
- Singular mother has Black eyes, long
plural (2) black hair, white skin and then 18 errors
my father is a hard worker. He
has tall body, sharp nose, black
skin, thick hair, white skin,
broad black eyes, white skin,
tall body and thin. She is very
kind, long hair her job is a gas
factory. I love my family very
much

job a gas factory. I love my
family very much
20. Hy, I am Rohmah. I was
life 15 years in Nganjuk with
my life family. I have four
sister and one brother. but, one
of my brother and one of my
M sister was die when my age was
R 9 years old. My father’s name
S is Mochammad sajidin. he is a
entrepreneur and my mother’s
name is Titi sudarmini. my two
sister name are Nur Alifah
Dewi and Sri rejeki Utami. My
first sister a dokter in Bali’s
hospital and my second sister a
student in university wahidiyah.
In my family. All my sister
have a white skin with brown
eyes, straight hair and thin lips.
but, not me. You know! I have
a yellow skin, black eyes, curly
hair and big lips. we have a
chubby cheeks with round
face and sweety. I am really-
really happy a family like they
are. And I love family.
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- Verb tense (1) Hy, I am Rohmah. I - Interlingual
- Spelling (1) haven’t live 15 years in Transfer (9x)
- Singular Nganjuk with my family. I - Intralingual
Plural (2) have four sisters and a brother, Transfer (4x)
- Word order but one of my brother and one
(2) of my sister was die when I am 13 errors
- Addition (2) 9 years old. My father’s name
- Word form (1) is mochammad sajidin. He is a
- Omission (4) entrepreneur and my mother’s
name is titi sudarmini. My
sister’s name is Nur Alifah
Dewi and Sri rejeki Utami. My
elder sister is a doctor in Bali’s
hospital and my younger sister
is a student in university
wahidiyah.
In my family. All of my
sister have a white skin with
brown eyes, straight hair and
thin lips, but not me. You
know! I have a yellow skin,
black eyes, curly hair and big
lips. We have chubby cheeks,
round face and sweet. I am
really happy with family like
they are and I love family.
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My house right now, it is in - Spelling (1) My house right now, it is in - Interlingual

21. the 27 dormitory. The - Omission (2) the 27 dormitory. The Transfer (6x)
N building’s colour is white. And - Punctuation building’s color is white. and - Intralingual
A have two floor. I live in here (1) have two floors. I live here with Transfer (7x)
A with 27 family. There are Fia, - Singular 27 families. There are Fia, - Context of
Tarbi, Rida, Vira, rima, Wanda, plural (2) Tarbi, Rida, Vira, rima, Wanda, Learning (2)
Ega, Egi, Tia, Nadia Sof, Nadia - Word Choice Ega, Egi, Tia, Nadia Sof, Nadia
HAM, Evi, Tutus, Lia, Datul, (1) HAM, Evi, Tutus, Lia, Datul,
Rina, Ita , Azkiya, Lestari, - Verb tense (5) Rina, Ita , Azkiya, Lestari, 15 errors
Fatim, Frida, Nanda, Maya, and - Word order Fatim, Frida, Nanda, Maya, and
Firoh. (2) Firoh.
All of them in 10th grade of - Run on All of them in 10th grade of
senior high school of sentence (1) senior high school of
wahidiyah. in my house. There wahidiyah. in my house. There
are staircase, five bathroom, are staircase, five bathrooms,
and three room. In every room, and three rooms. In every
there is 40-50 cupboard. room, there is 40-50 cupboards.
Actually, my live is so Actually my life is so
happy with them. Until, happy with them. Until,
suddenly there is a bad news suddenly there is a bad news
come. Greenfly ask to my come. Greenfly asks to my
family in 27 dormitory to family in 27 dormitories to
move to the different house. move to the different house.
Yes, im so sad. Very sad. Yes, I am so sad. Very sad.
Really really sad. And sad so Really sad. And sad so much.
much. The greenfly doesn’t know
The greenfly don’t know if if my new family and I were
I am and my new family was happy here. They always

happy in hear. They always
disturb our happiness. But im
try to strong. I still hope. If I’m
not separate with my 27 family.
I know and I’m believe
God more here me. There my
hope. For the last description. I
will great to my 27 family. if im
happy have the little family like
you are. Love you so much 27
family. Although, there is an
issue if we are will separated.
Hello, my name is
22. Nadroh Nur Sayyidah. I have a
big family. I have father. He is
name Sunoyo. He is love
family so much and many
N support family. He is
N handsome. His job is driver. I
S love father.
I have mother. She is
name Endang Resmiati. She is
beautiful smart and kind. she is
work wife house and seller. My
mother always love children.
I have 2 brother. first
name is Agung budianto. His
job is driver. He is very god
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disturb our happiness. But I am
strong. I still hope. If I’m not
separate with my 27 families.
I know and believe. God
more here me. I hope for the
last description. I will great to
my 27 family if I am happy
have the little family like you
are. Love you so much 27
family. Although, there is an
issue if we are will separated.
- Word order Hello, my name is - Interlingual
(3) Nadroh Nur Sayyidah. I have a transfer (1x)
- Meaning not big family. I have father. His - Intralingual
clear (1) name is Sunoyo. He loves Transfer (6x)
- Word choice family and support his family.
(1) He is handsome. His job is
- Spelling (1) driver. I love father.
- Verb tense (1) I have mother. Her name
is Endang Resmiati. She is
beautiful smart and kind. She is 7 Errors
a house wife and a seller. My
mother always loves her
children.
I have 2 brothers. His
name is Agung budianto. His
job is driver. He is very good

and handsome. And second
name is Ari hidayat
wahyudairto. His job is office
bank. He is very god and
handsome. I love brother and I
love family.
I want to introduce
23. myself. My name is Nida
Muhliya Barkah. I am student
in senior high school of
wahidiyah I live in the
dormitory because my home
very far away. My home is in
the east Borneo.
My father name is Didi.
N He is 48 years old. He’s job is
M civil servant. My father has tall
B body, curly hair, tan skin, and
brown eyes. My father hobby is
read a boot and watch
breaking news. My father
characteristic is hard working
and gentle. My mother name is
kustaniah. She is 44 years old.
He’s job is teacher. My mother
has tall body, straight hair,
white skin and brown eyes. My
mother hobby is gardening. My
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and handsome. And one of my
brother’s name is Ari hidayat
wahyudairto. His job is in
office bank. He is very good
and handsome. I love brother
and I love family.
- Article (1) I want to introduce - interlingual
- Addition (3) myself. My name is Nida Transfer (6x)
- Verb tense (4) Muhliya Barkah. I am a student - intralingual
- Word order in senior high school of transfer (5x)
(1) wahidiyah I live in the
- Singular dormitory because my home is
plural (2) very far away. My home is in
the east Borneo.
My father’s name is Didi.
He is 48 years old. His job is 11 errors
civil servant. My father has tall
body, curly hair, tan skin, and
brown eyes. My father hobby is
reading a boot and watching
breaking news. My father
characteristic is hard work and
gentle. My mother name is
kustaniah. She is 44 years old.
Her job is a teacher. My mother
has tall body, straight hair,
white skin and brown eyes. My
mother hobby is gardening. My

mother characteristic is funny
and lovely.
I have two sisters. My
elder sister name is Fitria
Handayani. She is 21 years old.
She has tall body, short straight
hair, white skin and brown eyes.
Her hobby is read a book. My
elder sister characteristic is
stone head and discipline. My
younger sister name is Halimah
Nur Sya’bana. She is 9 years
old. She has short body, log
straight hair, tan skin and brown
eyes. Her hobby is playing and
help mother.
24. I have a family. my father’s
name is Munib and my
mother’s name is Sriminingsih.
I have one brother. His name is
Abdul Haris.
N My father was born in
F Malang but he stay in
K Kalimantan. My father’s job is
teacher. He is 40th years old. He
has slanted eyes, flat nose, thin
lips and fat body. His weight is
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mother characteristic is funny
and lovely.
I have two sisters. My
elder’s sister name is Fitria
Handayani. She is 21 years old.
She has tall body, short straight
hair, white skin and brown
eyes. Her hobby is reading a
book. My elder sister
characteristic is stone head and
discipline. My younger’s sister
name is Halimah Nur Sya’bana.
She is 9 years old. She has
short body, log straight hair, tan
skin and brown eyes. Her
hobby is playing and helping
my mother.
- Word choice I have a family. my - Interlingual
(1) father’s name is Munib and my Transfer (7x)
- Article (2) mother’s name is Sriminingsih.
- Verb tense (2) I have a brother. His name is
- Spelling (3) Abdul Haris.
- Omission (1) My father was born in
Malang but he stays in
Kalimantan. My father’s job is
teacher. He is 40th years old. He 7 errors
has slanted eyes, flat nose, thin
lips and fat body. His weight is
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65 kg and his tall is 160 cm.
My mother stay in Malang.
Her job is teacher. She is 36th
years old. She has slanted eyes,
flat nose, thin lips and fat body.
his weight is 60 kg and hiss tal
is 158 cm.
My brother stay in Kediri.
he is 12th years old. He has flat
nose, slanted eyes, thin lips and
brown skin. His hoby is
playing. Play football play toy
car etc. he is so cute.
I have a family. there is my
25. father, my mother and my
brothers. We are live in Bogor.
We are happy family.
My father name is Ateng
N Snjaya. he is born on 10
N oktober 1965 in Sumedang. he
is fat. he has brown skin, thick
eyebrow, eye like me, not to
harp nose, thin mustache, and
lip like me. He has black
straight hair and handsome. He
like listen music with earphone.
he is work in Hotel atlet century
park, Jakarta.
65 kg and his tall is 160 cm.
My mother stays in
Malang. Her job is a teacher.
She is 36th years old. She has
slanted eyes, flat nose, thin lips
and fat body. His weight is 60
kg and his tall is 158 cm.
My brother stays in Kediri.
he is 12th years old. He has flat
nose, slanted eyes, thin lips and
brown skin. His hobby is
playing football, playing toy
car etc. He is so cute.
- Singular I have a family. There is - Interlingual
plural (3) my father, my mother and my Transfer (8x)
- Omission (2) brothers. We live in Bogor. We - Intralingual
- Addition (2) are happy family. transfer (8x)
- Verb tense My father’s name is Ateng - Context of
(7) Snjaya. He was born on Learning (1x)
- Capitalizatio October 10th, 1965 in
n (1) Sumedang. He is fat. He has 17 Errors
- Word choice brown skin, thick eyebrow,
(1) eyes like me, not to harp nose,
- Word form thin mustache, and lip like me.
(1) He has black straight hair and
handsome. He likes listening
music with earphone. He is
work in atlet century park,

My mother’s name is Netty
Herawati. She is born on 25
Oktober 1970 in Jakarta. She is
fat since she have first child.
She has white skin, thin
eyebrow, almond eye, not to
harp nose, thick lip, and pointed
chin. She has black long
straight hair. She look beautiful.
She like travelling and shop.
My brother’s name is
Shidqi Sunan Fadilah. he is
born on 07 Sept 2005 in Bogor.
he is emaciated and baby face.
he has thin lip, short black
straight hair, and she is so
funny. he like play football with
his friend. I love my family.
26. It is my house. my
grandparents live in a simple
house and a traditional last one
time ago.
It is a stage house which is
N about 2.5%-3 meters high.
A There are stairs at the front to
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Jakarta.
My mother’s name is Netty
Herawati. She was born on
October 25th, 1970 in Jakarta.
She is fat since she have first
child. She has white skin, thin
eyebrow, almond eyes, not to
harp nose, thick lip, and
pointed chin. She has black
long straight hair. she looks
beautiful. She like travelling
and shop.
My brother’s name is
Shidqi Sunan Fadilah. he was
born on September 25th, 2005
in Bogor. He is emaciated and
baby face. He has thin lip, short
black straight hair, and she is so
funny. he likes play football
with his friend. I love my
family.
- Verb tense (2) It is my house. my - Interlingual
- Spelling (1) grandparents live in a simple transfer (2x)
- Addition (1) house and a traditional last one - Intralingual
- Word form (1) time ago. transfer (3x)
It is a stage house which is
about 2.5%-3 meters high.
There are stairs at the front to

enter the house. The house is
made of wood which has a lot
of carvings on the wall.
It has room on the left and
right side as bedrooms we use
this room to relax and chat. My
grandmother also use this room
for cooking. You know, my
grandparents strore items on
the bottom part of their house.
Well, I love spending my
holiday at my grandparents
house.
Hello, my name is Nurul
27. Khasanah. I have best family
the world. I have father. He is
N name Sutrisne. He is love
H family so much and many
support family. He is
handsome. His job is farmer. I
love father.
I have mother. She is name
Rumiati. She is beautiful. She
is work wife house. my mother
is very good. my mother always
love children.
I have 2 brother and 1
younger brother. My brother
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enter the house. the house is 5 Errors
made of wood which has a lot
of carvings on the wall.
It has room on the left and
right side as bedrooms we use
this room to relax and chat. my
grandmother also uses this
room for cooks. You know, my
grandparents store items on the
bottom part of their house.
Well, I spend my holiday in my
grandparent’s house.
- Addition (2) Hello, my name is Nurul - Interlingual
- Word order Khasanah. I have the best transfer (11x)
(3) family in the world. I have - Intralingual errors
- Verb tense father. His name is Sutrisne. He (6x)
(2) loves family so much and
- Omission (1) supports his family. He is
- Meaning not handsome. He is a farmer. I
clear (1) love father.
- Article (1) I have mother. Her name is
- Singular Rumiati. She is beautiful. She
plural (1) is a house wife. My mother is
- Word choice very good. My mother always 17 errors
(5) loves children.
- Spelling (1) I have 2 brothers and I
younger brother. My brother’s

he name is Ibnu Huda and
Sururi Abdullah. There job in
Telkomsel shop in Kediri and
PT shop and drive in Jakarta.
there very handsome. And
very good. I love my brother
I have 1 younger brother.
He name is Ibnu ifan, he a
student in SDN kunjang 1. He is
very handsome, good and
diligent. I love my family.
28. I have a family. My family - Addition (4)
are father, mother, brother. My - Word choice
father’s name is Partono. My (1)
mother’s name is Ida - Spelling (1)
Machnuna. And my brother’s
name is Mahendra Wahyu
P Agung.
I My father’s was born in
Pasuruan. My father’s job is
Bisnis partner. He is 40th years
old. He has slanted eyes, flat
nose, thin lips, his tall 175 cm
and his weight is 65 kg
My mother was born in
Sidoarjo. My mother’s job
tailor. She is 38th years old. She
has slim body, white skin, her
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name is Ibnu Huda and Sururi
Abdullah. His job is in
Telkomsel shop in Kediri and
PT shop and a driver in Jakarta.
He is very handsome. And very
good. I love my brother
I have a younger brother.
His name is Ibnu ifan, he is a
student in SDN Kunjang 1. He
is very handsome, good and
diligent. I love my family.
I have a family. my family - Interlingual
are father, mother, brother. my transfer (6x)
father’s name is Partono. My
mother’s name is Ida
Machnuna. And my brother’s
name is Mahendra Wahyu
Agung.
My father’s was born in
Pasuruan. My father’s job is a
Bisnis partner. He is 40th years
old. He has slanted eyes, flat
nose, thin lips, his tall 175 cm 6 errors
and his weight is 65 kg
My mother was born in
Sidoarjo. My mother’s job is a
tailor. She is 38th years old. She
has slim body, white skin, her
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tall is 158 cm and her weight is tall is 158 cm and her weight is
55 kg. 55 kg.
My brother was born in My brother was born in
Pasuruan. He is student of Pasuruan. He is a student of
senior high school. He is 17th senior high school. He is 17th
years old. He is flat nose, thin years old. He has flat nose, thin
lips, slim body, brown skin. His lips, slim body, brown skin. His
tall 169 cm and his weight is 50 tall is 169 cm and his weight is
kg. His hoby is playing 50 kg. his hobby is playing
football, game online, and football, game online, and
reading. reading.
29. Hello..! my name is - Singular Hello..! My name is - Interlingual
Ronaldo, I have 3 brother and plural (2) Ronaldo, I have 3 brothers and Transfer (9x)
2 sister my father name is - Addition (3) 2 sisters, my father’s name is - Intralingual
Sudar and my mother name is - Spelling (3) Sudar and my mother’s name is Transfer (1x)
Romiah I setai in Kediri city - Word choice Romiah. I stay in Kediri city 10 Errors
R Bandar lor since born. I have (1) Bandar lor since born. I have a
A happy family and always make - Verb tense happy family and always make
K me fell happy. (1) me fell happy.
I have 2 brother hi was I have 2 brothers, he has
working and 1 sister his worked and my sister has
meriet. merried.
30. My name is Shaumi - Word order My name is Shaumi - Interlingual
Damayanti. I have a big family. (5) Damayanti. I have a big family. transfer (7x)
I have father. He is name Moh. - Word choice I have father. His name is Moh. - Intralingual
Djufri. He is love family so (2) Djufri. He loves family so Transfer (6x)
S much and many support family. - Addition (2) much and many support family.
D he is handsome. He job work - Verb tense He is handsome. His job is in
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office. I love father. (1) office. I love father.

I have mother, she is - Omission (1) I have mother, her name is 13 Errors
name Musyarofah. She is - Singular Musyarofah. She is beautiful.
beautiful. She is work wife plural (2) She is a house wife. My mother
house. my mother is very good. is very good. My mother
my mother always love always loves children. I love
children. I love mom. mom.
I have 1 a sister and 2 I have a sister and 2
brother. my sister is name brothers. My sister‘s name is
Fatma Amilia. She is work in Fatma Amilia. She works in
pabric in Sidoarjo. She is pabric in Sidoarjo. She is
beautiful. and very good. I love beautiful and very good. I love
my sister. my sister.
I have 2 younger brother. I have 2 younger brothers.
he name is Khoiron Nahdiyyin Her name is Khoiron
and Hilman Wahyudi. They are Nahdiyyin and Hilman
a student. They very good and Wahyudi. They are a student.
diligent. They are handsome. They are very good and
And I love my family. diligent. They are handsome.
And I love my family.
31. I have a little family. there - Word choice I have a little family. There - Interlingual
are Mr. Is Subiantoro to be a (7) are Mr. Is Subiantoro to be a Transfer (10x)
king and his queen is Mrs. - Singular king and his queen is Mrs. - Intralingual
Maryati. And one couple that, plural (3) Maryati. And one couple that, Transfer (1x)
get 2 children. There are - Capitalization get 2 children. There are - Context of
Shavira Nadia Marista and (1) Shavira Nadia Marista and Learning (1x)
S Irsyad Akbar Pualam. - Verb tense (1) Irsyad Akbar Pualam.
N Everyday Mr. Is Subiantoro - Addition (3) Everyday Mr. Is Subiantoro 12 errors

M work to be a bussinesman. Mr. - Omission (2)
is Subiantoro is a gentle man,
loyal, lovely to her family, and
handsome. Mr. is Subiantoro
allways honest to her family.
also Mrs. Maryati. She is
beautifull, have a kind heart,
lovely, loyal, honest. She to be
house wife in home’s Mr. Is
Subiantoro.
Shavira Nadia marista is
first child from mr Is
Subiantoro and Mrs. Maryati.
Shelife separate from her
family. she life and school in
Kediri. she still to be student in
the pondok Kedunglo. She have
one young brother. His name
Irsyad Akbar Pualam. He still
school in the elementary school.
He is naughty, handsome,
players, lovely.
Just it, more? Other time yes
 Miss much and more my
Miss much and more my
family
I have mother, father, one - word choice
32. younger sister and younger (1)
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work to be a businessman. Mr.
is Subiantoro is a gentle man,
loyal, lovely to her family, and
handsome. Mr. is Subiantoro
always honest to her family.
And also Mrs. Maryati. She is
beautiful, kind, lovely, loyal,
and honest. She is a house wife
at home’s Mr. Is Subiantoro.
Shavira Nadia marista is the
first child from Mr Is
Subiantoro and Mrs. Maryati.
Shelife separate from her
family. She lives and school in
Kediri. She is still a student in
the pondok Kedunglo. She has
one young brother. His name is
Irsyad Akbar Pualam. He still
school in the elementary
school. He is naughty,
handsome, players, lovely.
Just it, more? Other time
yes 
family
I have mother, father, a - interlingual
younger sister and younger transfer (6x)

brother. my mother name is - addition (5)
Romsaidah. She is house wife. - capitalization
T She is beautiful, calm, kind. She (4)
W has thin lips, long hair, dark
brown eyes, and a half sharp
nose, slim body. my father
name is Suswadi. he is a
wiraswasta. he has tall body,
brown eyes, sharp nose. he is
handsome, calm, kind. my
younger sister name is Zaidatul
Inayah. She has long hair,
brown eyes. She is a student in
Junior high school of
wahidiyah. she is beautiful but
arrogant. My younger brother
name is faelasofa Salfata
Zuardi. he is a baby. he has
brown eyes. Sharp nose
(maybe, tomorrow if he
teenager). and all in my family
has “langsat” white skin. this is
my family.
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brother. My mother’s name is - intralingual
Romsaidah. She is a house transfer (4x)
wife. She is beautiful, calm,
kind. She has thin lips, long 10 Errors
hair, dark brown eyes, and a
half sharp nose, slim body. My
father’s name is Suswadi. he is
a entrepreneur. He has tall
body, brown eyes, sharp nose.
he is handsome, calm, kind. My
younger sister’s name is
Zaidatul Inayah. She has long
hair, brown eyes. She is a
student in Junior high school of
wahidiyah. she is beautiful but
arrogant. My younger brother’s
name is Faelasofa Salfata
Zuardi. he is a baby. He has
brown eyes. Sharp nose
(maybe, tomorrow if he
teenager). and all in my family
has “langsat” white skin. This
is my family.