Emmalie Rawlings
English 1050
Stephanie Maenhardt
4 July 2018
Imagine, a young woman with black hair and small eyes. She is scared, homesick, and
excited for what the future holds. She is finally on her way to America. She told her family and
friends goodbye as she paid for her ticket with the only money she has left and stepped onto the
boat that led to a beacon of hope, success, and freedom. She grew sea sick throughout the days
and was relieved to step foot onto Angel Island, but everything there wasn’t as promising as it
had seemed just a few months ago. She was all alone and subject to cramped living spaces,
interrogations, and was kept there for days without an explanation. This was the reality of nearly
175,000 Chinese immigrants that passed through Angel Island in the 30 years of its operation.
(About Angel Island) . We look back on the experiences of immigrants and apologize profusely
for what we have done to them, but we don’t realize the ways we are doing it now. It is
instinctual for us to have prejudices and discriminate towards others. Anything or anyone that we
have not had experience with is considered “different” and “bad”. We create a negative
connection to them, their language, or their country of heritage simply because they are unlike
us. Humans tend to cultivate a community and if anything seemingly intrudes on that
community, it is a risk. That is what has happened in the past with African Americans rights,
Women's Rights, and now, LGBTQ rights. Diversity is something that has proudly been put on
the front line of America for hundreds of years, but that title has been dragged through a lot of
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rough patches. Americans needs to recognize that the title of Diversity cannot be kept without an
Throughout the history of this country we have learned a lot about immigration and the
big role that it plays in our everyday lives, but we have also learned about some of the negative
consequences of it. When the founding fathers first established this country they recognized the
cultural ambiguity of it and attested to help these immigrants by including freedom of religion,
expression, and speech. Of course, these things influence everyone but they can specifically be a
great pull for immigrants to come to America. It has become an increasingly popular thought that
immigration needs to be more seriously controlled or stopped completely. The people who are
coming to America are similar to those who came in the past; they simply want a better life for
themselves and have the hopes and dreams of achieving some sort of success in America. The
diversity in immigrants means change in communities and in individuals and has been a huge
influence in the development of America. Whenever someone travels or lives in a different area
they bring new traditions, cultures and thought processes with them.
Immigration has been seen as a great problem the last few years but seeing the
perspective of it in the past vs the perception of it now is incredibly interesting. The article titled,
“We Are All Third Generation”, brings up great points of how immigrants change generation by
generation. The author considers the fact of how we are all “third generation”, that we are all
immigrants. Another student summarized this article well by saying that, “First generation
chooses between freedom and what they see as slavery. Second generation is a combination of
contempt and avoidance for the old world. This creates third generation in which success is
expected and they feel very little respect for the past. (Amanda Pope, Week 2).” Our cultures all
change and develop over time but it has become very common for people of the third generation
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to not recognize greatness of their diversity. Culture is lost in people as they come to America
because even though it is a melting pot of diversity, it also melts away cultural traditions.
We as a society have adapted to a great amount but even if the diversity has been
accepted as a whole, the individual needs to recognize it as well. Somehow as people have been
focusing on diversity and acceptance we have created more barriers and more and more
discrimination. Diversity is something that should be celebrated, especially in a country that puts
such a great focus on it. Instead, some Americans have the same thought process of those before
and during World War 1 and see different as something that needs to be fixed. The Eugenics
movement became very popular during this time and it has similar thinking of some of these
Anti-Diversity Americans. We have made great strides in our treatment of those with disabilities
but a select few will continue to tear down their rights. Women have gained their equal rights
and have created a force of “Feminism” to make sure that they will remain that way in the future
because someone will always try and take it away from them, and they will be ready. We used to
treat anyone that was different than us, that held different beliefs, had a different first language,
and a different culture some sort of disease while really their life here is the essence of the
“American Dream”.
The article, “More Than Just A Shrine” was first published in print on November 3rd,
1985 in The New York Times paper and was a wakeup call for many Americans. Similar to the
thoughts of “We Are All The Third Generation”, Mary Gordon discusses the assumptions we
make about diversity and also the forgetfulness we have about the past of immigrants. Often we
think about the past as a blocked off, boarded up piece of our lives but it plays a great deal of
influence in who we are and why we are where we are today. We don’t realize how this history
can so easily be repeated if not considered. Mary Gordon considers the changes of diversity as
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she says, “But as the century progressed, the economy worsened, eugenics became both
scientifically respectable and popular and World War I made American xenophobia seem rooted
in fact (Gordon).”
Americans don’t seem to see these past mistakes as guidelines of what not to do in the
future, instead they take those thought process and that discrimination and carry it with them into
the future. Despite all the difficulties of immigrants a great difficulty found is the prejudice that
resides in Americans hearts when they arrive here. Many equate their level of intelligence with
their communication ability, which still needs to be improved since coming to a new country.
Education for immigrants is a great trial on children because the children are expected to learn
how to read and write in English, their second language, when they can’t even accomplish that in
their first language. Our prejudices and discriminations become very apparent when we break
people down simply because they have “broken English”. The opinions and emotions of “broken
english” is captured very well in the article “Mother Tongue”, by Amy Tan. “I am ashamed that I
am just now recognizing this bias. Hearing someone struggle with language, in ways, made me
think they struggled with intelligence. Not so. “Broken” English is definitely an unfair term. It
now feels like a derogatory term. When, in reality, speaking more than one language, requires
higher skills and intelligence. (Kimberlie McDaniel, Week 3).” Another powerful perspective of
diversity is from the article, “How to Tame A Wild Tongue”, she gives a very interesting
perspective of those who speak ESL by including different languages throughout her piece.
Immigrants come to America for hope and success but instead are face with comments such as
this, “If you want to be American, speak ‘American’. If you don’t like it, go back to Mexico
Americans need to realize that this country has been founded on Diversity and
Immigration. Diversity is something that cannot be kept without an acceptance and celebration of
the differences that make up our history and our uniqueness. We as a country have developed to
an amount that discrimination and prejudices should not be as popular as they are. It is human
nature to feel at risk with those that we do not understand or seemingly not have things in
common with. If Americans reach out of the comfort zone of discrimination and try to break
down barriers, great changes can happen in the future. Americans say that they are accepting of
everyone while the actions of the people do not follow suite. Prejudices start with the individual
and can change with one step into acceptance of differences and diversity.
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We have all felt a little outcasted and different. Sometimes it might be because of how we
dress or speak; the languages we use. Mary Gordon's’ article, “More Than Just a Shrine”,
explores the meaning of our differences and the importance of embracing them. This article was
first published in The New York Times Magazine in print November 3, 1985. Gordon seems to
be writing this article not in a form of persuasion but purely to inform and to motivate the
audience. As she mentions he own personal experiences the reader understands that she
understands the struggles of what she is discussing, giving the author more credibility for the
future points.
As she tells of her experience of visiting Ellis Island the reader can understand through
tone the emotions that she is feeling. Gordon relies a great amount on Ethos and Pathos by
describing in detail the pain and struggles of the past and how it felt to be visiting a place that
played such a big role in her ancestors lives. When she does include logos, with facts or statistics
about Ellis Island or the Immigrants that passed through it, she uses the factuality of something
In some ways even Gordons sentences are organized in such a way to make us think more
deeply and emotionally about the topic. Each paragraph begins with a experience of Ellis Island
and then continues with emotions of it, and tends to end with a link to her and the past and us and
this history. Using the ending paragraph as connection between the first is very important
because it gives the readers a sense of closure of Ellis Island. Gordon uses her last words to give
inspiration to how we should remember the people of the past and recommit to not have it
happen again in the future. He powerful experiences throughout the paper left you with a real
understanding of the pain the immigrants must have felt while coming to America. Her use of
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Logos gave more definition and context to the pathos and ethos and drew on the readers
Work Cited
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Gordon, Mary. “MORE THAN JUST A SHRINE.” The New York Times, The New York Times,
https://slcc.instructure.com/courses/457546/discussion_topics/2458666?module_item_id
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