Smoking should be banned in public area

Have you ever come home with the stench of smoke clinging
to your clothes?or inhaled a cloud of smoke as a group of
smokers passed,causing youto cough and choke?neither
experience is pleasant,and this is why smoking should be
banned in public areas.many countries today have laws that
prohibit smoking in public places.it is because smoking
affects not only the person who smoke but also non smokers
as well.secondhand smoke is the third leading cause of
preventable death(after active smoking and
alcohol),according to the manitoba medical association.they
also say that the smoke contains over 4,000 chemicals,50 of
which are known to be cancerrelated.secondhandsmoke has
been linked to heart and respiratory
disease,lung,breast,cervical,and nasal sinus cancers,strokes
and miscarriages.in children,dangers include sudden infant
death syndrome,fetal growth
impairment,bronchitis,pneumonia,asthma and middle-ear
disease.smoking is a dangerous habit that not only affects the
smoker,but those around him or her.banning the smoking in
public will keep non-smokers safer.people who smoke
subject themselves to deadly duseases by choice.why should
non-smokers be forced to be around it?
A. Generic structure
1. Thesis
Have you ever come home with the stench of
smoke clinging to your clothes?or inhaled a
cloud of smoke as a group of smokers
passed,causing you to cough and choke?neither
experience is pleasant,and this ia why smoking
should be banned in public areas.
2. Arguments
Many countries today have laws that prohibit
smoking in public places.it is because smoking
affects not only the person who smoke but also
non smokers as well.secondhand smoke is the
third leading cause of preventable death(after
active smoking and alcohol),according to the
manitoba medical association.they also say that
the smoke contains over 4,000 chemicals,50 of
which are known to be cancerrelated.secodhand
smoke has been linked to heart and respiratory
disease,lung,breast,cervical,and nasal sinus
cancers,strokes and miscarriages.in
children,dangers include sudden infant death
syndrome,fetal growth
 impairment,bronchitis,pneumonia,astma and
middle-ear disease.
3. Reiteration/conclusion
Smoking is a dangerous habit that not only
affects the smoker,but those around him or
her.banning the smoking in public will keep non-
smokers safer.people who smoke subject
themselves to deadly diseases by choice.why
should non-smokers be forced to be around it?
B. Languange focus
1. Modals
Should,will
2. Action verbs
Come,cause,prohibit,say,affect,inhaled,
3. Thinking verbs
Is known
4. Adverbs

5. adjective
medical
6. noun
countries
7. connectives
 Fast food
fast food are life threatening.obesity can
come from eating fast food that’s bought
often.however,fast food is one people who
are coming home of the easiest and cheapest
ways of eating.it saves a lot of time and
money,especially for Everyone should think
twice before deciding to eat fast food.there
are many health risks when it comes to eating
food that’s made within a matter of
seconds.the food is not properly taken care
of,which leads all the way back to where the
food is originally produced.the health risks
that come from eating so much from
work.there are many health risks when it
comes to eating food,so think twice before
eating fast food.
Generic structure
 Thesis
Everyone should think twice before
deciding to eat fast food.there are
many health risks when it comes to
eating food that’s made within a
matter of seconds.
 Arguments
The food is not properly taken care
of,which leads all the way back to
where the food is originally
produced.the health risks that come
from eating so much fast food are life
threatening.obesity can come from
eating fast food that’s bought often.
 Reiteration/conclusion
However,fast food is one of the
easiest and cheapest ways of eating.it
saves a lot of time and
money,especially for people who are
 coming home from work.there are
many health risks when it comes to
eating food,so think twice before
eating fast food.
Languange focus
1. Modals
Should,can
2. Action verbs
Eating,deciding,produced,work
3. Thinking verbs
Think
4. Adverbs
Home
5. Adjective
care
6. Noun
Food
7. Connectives
however
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