Mrs. Cramer
Comp 1 Pd. 7
4 Oct. 2018
Synthesis Essay Rough Draft
Are college fraternities causing severe bullying and exclusion throughout college?
Colleges have seen an increase in self harm and depression because of bullying within
fraternities. Bullying is becoming a serious issue that can have serious out comes. Bullying rates
have increased in high school all the way down to middle/elementary school, but it has strongly
increased in college settings where it sometimes can be put in the “dark”. Out of all college
students, bullying was more popular in students that were part of a college fraternity. Over one
hundred thousand students drop out of school every year or switch to online schooling because
of bullying, (according to a research project done by Buffalo State University of New York).
Bullying in colleges within fraternities have increased greatly because of hazing, cyber uprising,
One reason why colleges have experienced bullying in fraternities is because of hazing.
Hazing is the practice and imposition of strenuous, sometimes humiliating, tasks and
performances that act as an initiation/entry of the fraternity. Fraternities are making students
complete extreme tasks that sometimes can result in injury or even death. This has become very
serious and has cost people's lives. Humiliation can come from these tasks from members of the
fraternities. Fraternities believe this is usual tradition, and believe it is used as a way to “earn”
your way into the group. They use intimidation tactics to persuade people to participate in
hazing. Many schools have set up rules and have programs with cops to reduce the practices of
hazing for safety and anti-bullying purposes. Some colleges even have punishment and
suspension for these practices. This is one reason why campuses are experiencing high amounts
Another reason why bullying within colleges has increased is because of cyber issues.
Everybody now a days is linked to technology in some way. Our whole world is ran by
technology. Although, technology is very beneficial, it can have some negative effects. Cyber
bullying is becoming a great problem in the us. Cyberbullying has also been linked to colleges
and fraternities. Cyber bullying is one of the most popular type of bullying as of two thousand
eighteen. It is easier for a high school/ college aged student to participate in cyber bulling
because it is hidden behind a screen and most of the time can become unnoticed, even when it
does the most damage. College fraternities have been linked to cyber bullying because of the
popular use of social media. Not only are members of fraternities bullying others, they
themselves are getting bullied. Cyber bullying has become a political issue and it is progressing
throughout high schools and colleges. That is one reason why bullying within college fraternities
Lastly, bullying within colleges and bullying has increased because of the exclusion of
others. College fraternities exclude others making people feel left out. People of LGBTQ+ are
often left out or harassed by college students especially of college fraternities. Although colleges
are beginning to become more diverse between races, sex, and religion, there are still bullying
and harassment issues that continue. LGBTQ+, race, and religion has become a political topic
and has been very popular the past few years. Fraternities and sororities are gender based and can
be very diverse, but they sometimes tend to leave out and exclude anyone who is different than
Misongy is the practice of dislike, or ingrained prejudice against women. Women are often as
well excluded our harassed from/ by college fraternities. This is another reason why bullying has
In conclusion, the expanding internet and cyber issues, exclusion of LGBTQ+ students/
the practice of misongy, and the practice of hazing are causing bullying and harassment within
college fraternities to increase. This is causing colleges to completely ban fraternities all
together. Fraternities are a way to make new friends and socialize, but currently they are creating