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by Nicolas Mason
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no pc
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out parallel
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Comment 1
no quotations--You must have at least one quotation in your paper to demonstrate that you
know how to introduce a quote properly and to quote properly.
QM Length c
T his paper does not come close to meeting the minimum length requirement of the assignment.
Maximum: 1300
Additional Comment
380
QM order of paper
Put your outline af ter the works cited page.
QM 3
Your title needs to ref lect the main idea of your thesis more directly.
QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
Additional Comment
If you do not document the sources of your inf ormation, you are plagiarizing.
QM 7
Incorrect citation f orm
Additional Comment
Check all of your parenthetical citations to make sure you have used the assigned f ormat.
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QM out parallel
You need to work on making your subtopics parallel.
QM outline alignment
Your outline is not aligned properly. Please see the "Sample Outline" page in the Research
f older, which is in the Content area of Blackboard.
QM out f ormat
incorrect outline f ormat
Please see the "Sample Outline" page in the Writing Inf ormation f older, which is in the
Inf ormation & Books area of Blackboard.
QM out title
T he title of your essay goes here.
QM out cap
Capitalize only the f irst word of the topic (unless there is a proper noun which should be
capitalized).
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QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to f ix the problem.