Nicolas_Mason_Visual Rhetorical

Analysis Rough Draft

by Nicolas Mason

Submission date: 13-Nov-2018 09:15AM (UT C-0600)

Submission ID: 1038167851
File name: Nicolas_Mason_Visual_Rhetorical_Analysis_Rough_Draf t.docx (19.47K)
Word count: 960
Character count: 5520
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PFI3

Visual Rhet orical Analysis Word Count

t hesis in

ts

no pc

2
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36

3 28+

4
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

20 %
SIMILARIT Y INDEX
1%
INT ERNET SOURCES
0%
PUBLICAT IONS
19%
ST UDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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Submitted to Alvin Community College
St udent Paper 19%
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wvde.state.wv.us
Int ernet Source 1%

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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PAGE 1

QM Length c
T his paper does not come close to meeting the minimum length requirement of the assignment.

QM PFI3
Please f ollow instructions.
Additional Comment

From the assignment page: "You must have two, but no more than three, sources cited in your
essay. One of those sources must be the video itself , and another must give inf ormation about
the sexism in media during the time period the video was made."

QM Visual Rhetorical Analysis Word Count

Your word count:

Minimum required: 1050

Maximum: 1400

Additional Comment

781

Comment 1
Remember that you must cite a source in the introductory paragraph that gives
information about the sexism in media during the time period the video was made. T he
rest of the paragraphs must cite only the video or photographs you are analyzing.

QM thesis in
inadequate thesis
Additional Comment

You need one or two other topics f or this thesis sentence.

 QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

T hese ideas are not in the thesis.

Follow the order of the thesis.

QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
Additional Comment

If you do not document the sources of your inf ormation, you are plagiarizing.

Comment 2
Give some specif ic examples, and explain how those examples f it into the argument.

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QM 7
Incorrect citation f orm
Additional Comment

Check all of your parenthetical citations to make sure you have used the assigned f ormat.

See me

QM 36
T his paragraph needs more development.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction f ormat--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is
in the Research f older in the Inf ormation & Books area of the Blackboard class.
Additional Comment

Check all of your introductions to quotations to make sure you use complete sentences
(independent clauses) and colons as required.

Comment 3
Give some specif ic examples, and explain how those examples f it into the argument.

Comment 4
Analyze a little more in depth.
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QM out f ormat
incorrect outline f ormat
Please see the "Sample Outline" page in the Writing Inf ormation f older, which is in the
Inf ormation & Books area of Blackboard.

QM out cap
Capitalize only the f irst word of the topic (unless there is a proper noun which should be
capitalized).

QM outline alignment
Your outline is not aligned properly. Please see the "Sample Outline" page in the Research
f older, which is in the Content area of Blackboard.