Name: JUDY FAYE FORTIT ENVERZO_ Program/Year/Section: _BSED SCIENCE 1-4 Date: _OCTOBER 8, 2018__

WRITING WORKSHOP NO. 1-C. Evaluating paragraphs for writing mechanics – COMPLETENESS OF THOUGHT: SENTENCE VARIETY

Directions: Convert your written paragraphs into tabular format as follows. Then, break down each paragraph into numbered sentences (Columns 1&2) for classification as SIMPLE, COMPLEX, COMPOUND, or
COMPLEX-COMPOUND; and, the sentences into their compositions as INDEPENDENT CLAUSE, CONJUNCTION, DEPENDENT CLAUSE, and PHRASE.

NO. SENTENCE KIND OF SENTENCE INDEPENEDENT CLAUSE CONJ. DEPENDENT CLAUSE PHRASE
INTRODUCTION
This critique identifies the significant of video Simple Critique identifies the significant of Presentation of Group 2. The significant of the video
1. presentation of group 2. video.
The video documentary insight the 5 theories of Video documentary insights the 5 We can get the information or The video documentary
purposive communication that can we can get Compound theories of purposive Or knowledge about the insights of 5 theories.
2.
information or knowledge about the communication communication. communication theories.
theories.
BODY
The group 2 documentary shows the Symbolic The group 2 documentary shows Two person was got mistaken of Crazy and Funny Classmates
Interactions Theory; where the two person was got Complex the symbolic interaction Theory. and what their thinking about their
1.
mistaken of what their thinking about their crazy and crazy and funny classmates.
funny classmates.
Second is the Coordinated Management of Meaning; Coordinated Management of Shows the issue of LGBT LGBT Community that has
wherein it shows the issue of LGBT community that has Compound Meaning; wherein it shows the community that has separation of separation of comfort room.
2.
separation of comfort room. issue of LGBT community that has comfort room.
separation of comfort room.
The third theory was the Cognitive Dissonance Theory; Cognitive Dissonance Theory; that And, for One student is late for the To cheat to his classmates even
that one student is late for the examination and he did Complex one student is late for the examination and he did not it is not right.
3. not review for it, he decided to cheat to his classmates examination and he did not review review for it.
even it is not right. for it, he decided to cheat to his
classmates even it is not right.
The fourth theory was the Expectancy Violation Theory; Expectancy Violation Theory; Wherein the girl has a crush on Very disappointed what she
wherein the girl has a crush on their school campus and Compound wherein the girl has a crush on their And their school campus and she saw discovered on her crush
she saw it, but she is very disappointed what she school campus and she saw it, but it. because her crush is a gay.
4.
discovered on her crush because her crush is a gay. she is very disappointed what she
discovered on her crush because her
crush is a gay.
The last theory is the Uncertainty Reduction Theory; Uncertainty Reduction Theory; that That where the two girls are not The man that their always
that where the two girls are not comfortable to the man Complex where the two girls are not And comfortable to the man that their seeing in their school campus
5. that their always seeing in their school campus that is comfortable to the man that their always seeing in their school that is very quiet person and
very quiet person and not socializing others. always seeing in their school campus not socializing others.
campus that is very quiet person

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 and not socializing others.

CONCLUSION
Therefore research contains several facts and gives new Contains several facts and gives The information quality is good Gives new knowledge or
knowledge or information about the theories, the new knowledge or information And, or, by explaining and showing the information about the theories.
information quality is good by explaining and showing Complex about the theories, the information but information briefly.
1. the information briefly but may could not all the quality is good by explaining and
information that is presented is relevant. showing the information briefly but
may could not all the information
that is presented is relevant.
The communication skill for the verbal communication Communication skill for the verbal They present probably is not Background music are louder
how they present probably is not understandable because communication how they present understandable because of weak than their conversation.
of weak voice, their conversation was unheard or muted, Compound probably is not understandable Or voice.
2. it’s because the background music are louder than their because of weak voice, their
conversation. conversation was unheard or muted,
it’s because the background music
are louder than their conversation.
Their nonverbal communication skill was good the way Nonverbal communication skill was Nonverbal communication skill Facial expression and sliding of
they wave their hands, facial expression and sliding of good the way they wave their and was good the way they wave texts.
3. texts. Compound hands, facial expression and sliding their hands communication skill was good
of texts.

The video documentary shows in entertaining way by Entertaining way by inserting those People are clapping their hands Shouting and emojis that
inserting those video that people are clapping their video that people are clapping their documentary becomes funny
hands, shouting and emojis that documentary becomes Compound hands, shouting and emojis that and and entertaining.
4.
funny and entertaining. documentary becomes funny and
entertaining.

They put a text to become the video understandable, but Not all text is readable because the Not all text is readable because Text to become the video
not all text is readable because the colours of the text are Simple colours of the text are the same the colours of the text are the understandable.
5.
the same with the colour of the background. with the colour of the background. same

They present the video documentary of five theory of Five theory of communication good Video documentary of five Give information to the viewer.
communication good way, and can give information to Compound way, and can give information to and theory of communication good
6.
the viewer. the viewer. way

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