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This script about the Romantic Poets was obviously a ‘Researched Document’ but it
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portrayal was written to demonstrate an accessible, entertaining approach to what would
normally be deemed a ‘high brow’ subject. London Zones 1 & 2
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quite obscure search strings; it only takes about 20 minutes to read through and it gives an
alternative, but academically sound perspective, to some of the poets’ quirkier sides. Give it
a read, let me know what you think, please.
LEICESTER SQUARE TUBE STATION EXIT
NEWS VENDOR (Presenter)

(Shouting – fade up audio)
Standard! Standard! Romantic Movement! – Scandal! Read all about it! Scandal! Get Your
Standard! Standard!
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LEICESTER SQUARE TUBE STATION EXIT – WIDE
Presenter walks towards the news vendor.
CUT TO
LEICESTER SQUARE TUBE STATION EXIT – CLOSE-UP PRESENTER
PRESENTER
Scandal? Romantic Movement? Hmmm Poets? I suppose it makes a change from politicians.
Presenter buys the paper
NEWS VENDOR
(Salutes casually)
Thanks Gov.
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LEICESTER SQUARE – WIDE
We see our Presenter walk on reading paper and the news vendor in the background still
pitching
NEWS VENDOR
Standard! Standard! Romantic Movement! – Scandal! Read all about it! Scandal! Get Your
Standard!
CUT TO
LEICESTER SQUARE
PRESENTER
Romantic Poets? Sex? Drugs? Wild! Or what? This is nothing like the Poetry I studied at
school?
CUT TO
OPENING TITLES
CUT TO
CLASSROOM – OLD FASHIONED (Hawkshead)
Presenter walks in as teacher, (cap, gown and cane) he goes to the front of the class of
which he is also part.
PRESENTER – TEACHER
(Dull droning voice – enthusiastic only when telling off pupils)
Right! Tuesday! Second period! Time for Poetry! Now Pay Attention!
PRESENTER – PUPIL
(Con dential – TC)
Remember these dull dull lessons?
William Blake was born in 1757 Listen boy! This is poetry!
PRESENTER – PUPIL
Show me the poetry! Show me the poetry!
William Wordsworth was born in 1770 Samuel Taylor Coleridge was born in 1772. Pay
attention! Wake up child!
PRESENTER – PUPIL
Child?
Lord Byron was born in 1788 Percy Bysshe Shelley was born in 1792 John Keats was born in
1795 You need to know this laddie!
PRESENTER – PUPIL
You don’t! It’s not when – it’s how they lived – and the Romantic poets certainly lived.
John Keats died in 1821 Percy Bysshe Shelley died in 1822 Is this boring boy? Look alert!
PRESENTER – PUPIL
(Con dential – TC) )
Exciting fascinating characters doing exciting fascinating things. Rebels with a cause.
Lord Byron died in 1824 William Blake died in 1827 Samuel Taylor Coleridge died in 1834
YOU! Pay attention!
PRESENTER – PUPIL
(Con dential – TC) )
Pay attention? To this? C’mon I’ll show what it was all about.
Presenter (the pupil) gets up and walks out
You get back in your seat, boy, Right report to the headmaster. Right now!
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LEICESTER SQUARE
Presenter still reading paper – continued from opening scene as if without break
(V.O.fading)
William Wordsworth died in 1850. William Blake was born in 1757 Presenter reads from
newspaper occasionally looking to camera
PRESENTER
Says the Romantic Movement started in 1797
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NETHER STOWEY
Presenter still reading the paper
PRESENTER
Like so many new directions in the arts Gilbert & Sullivan, Lennon & McCartney, Chas &
Dave or Pearl & Dean it began with a partnership.
Presenter continues walking through the village
PRESENTER (CONT’D)
Two hundred years ago it was the same with Poetry. We even know the exact time and
place.
Presenter walks out of shot
DISOLVE TO
GREAT TRACK
Presenter walks into shot
PRESENTER
4-30 in the afternoon – 13th November – 1797 – here at The Great Track – Nether Stowey
– Somerset – England.
Presenter starts walking (montage the next few lines)
Coleridge and Wordsworth. They walk – 40 miles! They talk – poetic philosophy? They
write – a movement is born! They looked at what had gone before and said – let’s change
this – let’s have poetry from the heart – Poetry of the people – by the people – for the
people. They re-wrote the rules. Poetry would never be the same again.
CUT TO
BELL INN, WATCHET
We see Presenter walk to the Bell Inn
PRESENTER
They stopped here for the night, the Bell Inn, Watchet, Somerset An forgotten but seminal
location for world literature.
Presenter enters
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BELL INN, WATCHET – INT
We see Presenter enter, pick up a pint from the bar and take a seat.
PRESENTER
Here Coleridge began writing his Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner.
VOICE OVER POET
It is an ancient mariner,
And he stoppeth one of three.
‘By thy long grey beard and glittering eye,
Now wherefore stopp’st thou me?
PRESENTER
(aside to poet)
Whoa, great poetry – but it’s very long and I’ve got a different tale to tell.
VOICE OVER POET

(stutters to a stop on next line)
The Bridegroom’s doors are open wide.
Presenter picks up his next pint – the empties are mounting up
PRESENTER
This is the right sort of place for poetry. But – Scandal? Anyway? Why Romantic Movement?
Why here? Why then? What’s it all about?
CUT TO
EXPERTS
Tell about the social situation, the changing world, American independence. French
Revolution I’ll give you the de nition of the Romantic Movement WW and STC knew they
were starting something new, they planned it, knew they would upset people.
CUT TO
Another pint for Presenter
PRESENTER
These guys – Blake, Wordsworth, Coleridge, Keats, Shelley and Byron – they were the pop
stars back then. . And they have lots in common with today’s pop stars too. .
CUT TO
TOP OF THE POPS PASTICHE
DJ – SMASHY/NICEY STYLE
They certainly do, mate. Like the Beatles in the 60’s, Punk in the 70’s, computers in the 80’s
and rappers in the 90’s Wordsworth and his gang were the innovators in their time. And just
as wild. They didn’t throw TV’s out of hotel windows, or park cars in swimming pools. But
scandals came just as thick and fast.
(Alan Freeman style countdown)
Straight in at number 5 it’s Cockney John Keats and his hot new Nightingale Ode.
Lover Boy Byron’s She walks in beauty falls 2 to 4 – looks like lover boy’s not going all the
way this time – is this the rst time?
Into the top 3 and stuck at number 3 for the 2nd week – William Wordsworth with his juicy
Lucy. Is living with three girls slowing the old boy down?
At 2 – up from last weeks number 10. Will he soar to that top spot with his Skylark?
Swinging Shelley, he’s always up for a lark! Not’arf!
And still at number 1 for four weeks now – it can’t get any higher, but Sam Coleridge
reckons he can – sail on you Ancient Mariner.
That’s it for this week poem pickers – all right – stay bright.
Till next time – keep in rhyme!
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PRESENTER
The people loved the romantic poets, when they published new poems fans went crazy,
lined up all night at bookshops – Byron’s second book sold 8,000 copies in it’s rst day. But
– just like some modern day icons, Blake didn’t make it big until he was dead.
Presenter puts down another pint glass – one of several – we see him leave
But we’re getting ahead of ourselves.
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BELL INN, WATCHET – EXT
Presenter walks out of the pub, stands by the doorway.
PRESENTER
Wordsworth said: “The child is father to the man.” So let’s see what in uences were at work
on these kids. William Blake was born rst – we’ll start there.
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LONDON – CARNABY ST
PRESENTER
Blake was born on 28th September 1757 here near Carnaby St London – also birthplace of
the swinging sixties. At four – William saw his rst vision “God’s face pressed against the
window”. By nine he was seeing whole trees lled with angels. Blake was very close to
Robert his youngest brother, they: “Delighted in each others company like lovers”. It’s said
the word ‘lovers’ was not too strong! He left home at 14 – to learn the craft of engraving –
and to see more visions.
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WESTMINSTER ABBEY – EXTERNAL
PRESENTER
Working in Westminster Abbey he often saw Christ and the apostles walking up and down
the aisle. He also saw the remains of Longshanks, King Edward the rst – when his tomb
was opened 500 years after his death.
CUT TO
WESTMINSTER ABBEY – EXT
PRESENTER
A bit weird? Blake said the King’s face was like chocolate with eshy eyeballs still moving
in the sockets.
Bite’s cadbury’s ake
CUT TO
LAKE DISTRICT
We see Presenter skipping through owers and long grass – frilly shirt – slow motion
pastel dream
PRESENTER
Wordsworth was born in Cockermouth in 1770. He said his early life was a “Giddy Bliss”. But
in reality he was a little bugger! Always in trouble.
Still running through grass camera pulls back to reveal him being chased by teacher – alt –
stepping stones pull out to see two kids he’s pushed into the river
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LAKE DISTRICT – HAWKESHEAD
PRESENTER
Then calamity – His mother died. His sister Dorothy went to live with an aunt. He was sent
to Boarding school here in Hawkshead. At 13 his father died – the effect – He matured
even more quickly – enjoying female company – he even took dancing lessons, strictly to
increase his girl meeting opportunities.
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LAKE DISTRICT – FIELD LOCATION
We see Presenter walk from woods to elds and stand by a dry stone wall.
PRESENTER
Walking these woods and elds he began to write his rst poetry – and to explore his
sexuality, he may well have had his rst physical encounter behind this very wall.
SHEEP (V.O.)
Baaaa!
(Changes to orgasmic ba)
Presenter raises eyebrow
PRESENTER
Amazing how well some kids cope with tragedy, compared with our other heroes, young
Wordsworth seems very well adjusted.
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OTTERY ST MARY
Bridge and Riverbank walk
PRESENTER
Samuel Taylor Coleridge was born October 1772 in Ottery St Mary Devon, the youngest of
ten. Fighting his brother Frank, who had ‘crumbled his cheese’ young Sam thrust a knife into
him, then frightened of his parent’s anger, ran away and spent a freezing October night
sleeping on a riverbank.
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SCHOOL – EXT
PRESENTER
At 8 his father died – Sam was sent to Blue Coat School, London. It was a strict, Spartan
regime.
We see Presenter walk towards the school and peer in through a window.
Caught crying on his rst day a master shouted at him:
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SCHOOL – INT
Presenter dressed as schoolmaster with cane and also as Coleridge bent over desk – cut
between
VOICE OVER POET
Boy! The school is your father!
Boy! The school is your mother!
Boy! The school is your brother!
And your sister!
The school is your rst cousin, your second cousin, and all your relations! Boy! Let’s have no
more crying!’
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SCHOOL – EXT
Presenter turns away from the window and walks to camera
PRESENTER
At Blue Coats he was given opium – to ease his rheumatics – and his sore behind! He
quickly become addicted. (ASIDE) To the opium not the caning! That Blue Coat School!
Phew, pretty tough! Bet no one messed with his cheese though.
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BYRONESQUE LOCATIONS – POSSIBLY HARROW SCHOOL
PRESENTER
Young Byron had a poor start, with his father already dead and a moody and erratic mother
who scolded and beat him – his only respite – their maid May Gray, who comforted and
caressed him – often to a pleasurable climax. (ASIDE) Was this in her job description? In
1794 age 10 he became 6th Baron Byron of Rochdale when his grandfather was hit by a
cannonball. He excelled at Harrow school. But without May Gray to lend a hand – fellow
pupils provided sexual grati cation. At 15, propositioned by a neighbour, Lord Ruthyn,
Byron said: “I am the hunter not the hunted.” When he told his mother she ew into a
jealous rage – it seems she had been bedding Lord Ruthyn herself. Byron said his youth
was: “A turmoil of physical passions and desperate emotions” – he wasn’t joking.
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KEATSISH LOCATIONS
PRESENTER
John Keats was a cockney, born in London. After his father died. Keats and his two brothers
were sent to boarding school in the countryside – En eld. His mother died soon after –
Young John was distraught – hid under his school desk – refused to come out. He left
school at 14 became an apprentice surgeon.
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LONDON – ST MARY LE BOW
PRESENTER
John Keats – a Cockney poet? Gor-Blimey Guv’nor. Would you Adam and Eve it?
CUT TO
ETON
PRESENTER
Shelley was sent to boarding school aged
The other boys called him “A girl in boys clothing”. He couldn’t play schoolboy games –
marbles – leapfrog and – – worst crime of all – he hated cricket!
Presenter is pelted with lots of cricket balls.
PRESENTER
At 14 he went to Eton. Back then Public Schools were places of “Bullying, riot, sodomy and
occasional classical grammar”. Shelley only hated the rst two. A curious friendship grew
with Dr. Lind, the King’s doctor. He encouraged Shelley’s unorthodox behaviour. Shelley –
Set himself on re – intent on ‘raising the devil’. Shelley – Watched Saturn through a
telescope – convinced aliens lived there. His fascination with chemistry, still linked to
alchemy, was the nal straw. His father said he was mad – wanted him committed. Dr. Lind
said Shelley was ‘just growing up his own way’.
CUT TO
ETON – CRICKET GROUND/PAVILION
PRESENTER
An arsonist? – An alchemist? – Little green men? I wonder why they called him ‘Mad
Shelley’?
OK – it’s out of short pants and goodbye childhood. But Poetry? – These kids? – Any kids?
– Was it really the thing?
CUT TO
EXPERT
Comments about kids with guitars, dj’ing nowadays poetry was the cool thing back then,
Links to current pop stars
CUT TO
CAMBRIDGE – VARIOUS LOCATIONS INC PUNT
PRESENTER
What’s next? Depends on your background – For the poor – get a job – for the rich –
university? Wordsworth, Coleridge and Byron came here to Cambridge. Wordsworth in 1787.
Presenter as sixties hippie-student with spliff & umbrella sits under the willows on the
river bank
Always a cool dude – dressed in style with an umbrella, the coolest fashion statement.
When he discovered the joys of student life – Drinking and whoring – He rebelled against
the conventional lifestyle. More important – when he met his sister Dorothy again after 9
years there was an: “instant buzz of attraction”. Revolution in France roused his passionate
temperament. Fellow student, Robert Jones, got the physical bene t. They spent a summer
walking through France and Switzerland. 30 years later, Jones – still a bachelor clergyman
– reminisced on his Wordsworth summer:
VOICE OVER POET
“Seldom a day passes that I do not think of William with feelings of inexpressible affection.”
PRESENTER
Hmmm Robert Jones, prostitutes, his sister too? – Wordsworth was taking all the extra
curricular options.
CUT TO
CAMBRIDGE LOCATION MONTAGE
PRESENTER
Coleridge’s Cambridge was chaotic. He checked out the pubs – partied all night – got deep
in debt. He checked out the babes – at church on Sunday – he fell helplessly, but
hopelessly, in love. To solve his problems. He borrowed more money To buy a lottery ticket
Certain he’d win his fortune, x his nancial affairs and patch up his broken heart. Luckless
as ever. He ed to London – joined the Dragoons as Silas Tomkyn Comberbache. I guess
plain John Smith lacked poetry! His brothers paid his debts, bribed an of cer to declare him
insane, then sent him back to Cambridge. He left again soon after – without a degree – but
with a new vision. Were the dragoons right? Was Coleridge mad? If he wasn’t, I think Silas
Tomkyn Comberbache may well have been.
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CAMBRIDGE BYRON LOCATIONS
PRESENTER
Byron was plagued with guilt – His erotic River Cam skinny dipping parties with other
young students – went far beyond schoolboy fumbling Tormented by his sexuality Byron’s
life became a merry go round of whoring and half-hidden homosexual affairs. He lled his
lodgings with an endless parade of prostitutes – to prove his masculinity. Then he fell in
love – with a 15-year-old Cambridge choirboy. But his homosexual affairs were dangerous.
Sodomy was a capital offence – social class no protection. Byron left Cambridge with a
degree, and his sexuality resolved – If it’s got a pulse -it’s fair game. That Byron – what
stamina! I think he did most of his studying in bed – and he wasn’t too particular whose
bed it was!
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OXFORD LOCATIONS
PRESENTER
Shelley studied at Oxford for less than six months. He met Thomas Hogg, and together they
wrote The Necessity of Atheism saying God was absurd. It was condemned as blasphemy.
Every copy was burnt.
Presenter juggles burning book
It might have ended there, but Shelley had sent copies to every bishop in Britain. He was
summoned before the college masters and expelled. Sent back to London, expelled,
disgraced, his book burnt. Mad Shelley? I bet he was!
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LONDON – GUYS HOSPITAL
PRESENTER
Keats too poor for university became a doctor, nished his apprenticeship then moved to
Guy’s Hospital to become a surgeon. But his was heart given to poetry – his rst poem
published in 1816 – along with most young men, he dressed the part – turned down collars
– open necked shirts – scarf – long hair – moustache – the full Byronic image. He became
less attentive to his studies, telling a friend: “During a lecture, there came a sunbeam in the
room, and with it a whole troop of creatures oating in the ray; and I was off with them to
Oberon and Fairyland”. Keats quit surgery and became a full time poet.
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LONDON – ST MARY LE BOW
PRESENTER
Sunbeams? Oberon? Fairyland? John Keats – a cockney poet – Gor-Blimey Guvnor? Would
you Adam and Eve it?
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LONDON – SOHO
PRESENTER
Blake lived further down the social scale. His life – a working class struggle. His early poem
The Chimney Sweeper, a protest against the abuse of children helped introduce new law.
Parliament made it illegal to send ‘climbing boys’ under 8, up lighted chimneys –
Presenter sitting in a tin bath by a re, loads of bubbles
and they had to be washed once a week.”
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LONDON – EROS
PRESENTER
He foolishly fell in love with “ irt and ibbertigibbet” Polly Wood. She allowed him “to keep
company with her”. But she “kept company” with other men too. And laughed at his
marriage proposal. Devastated – Blake left work – lodgings – friends.
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LONDON – SOUTH OF THE RIVER
PRESENTER
Moved to Battersea – and the arms of innkeeper’s daughter – Catherine Butcher. He told
her about Polly Wood. He said: “Catherine, do you pity me?” She said: “Indeed I do.” He said:
“Then – I love you.”
CUT TO
EXTERNAL OF LONDON CHURCH
PRESENTER
He married her – on the rebound.
CUT TO
CHURCH -INT
Wedding scene – Presenter dressed as bride and groom
PRESENTER THE GROOM
So – teenage years nearly gone. Facing the future as men – Where do our heroes stand?
PRESENTER THE BRIDE
Blake’s married.
PRESENTER THE GROOM
Byron’s sex mad.
PRESENTER THE BRIDE
Wordsworth’s a revolutionary.
PRESENTER THE GROOM
Coleridge’s a catastrophe.
PRESENTER THE BRIDE
Shelley’s an atheist.
Long shot from end of church
PRESENTER THE BRIDE AND GROOM
And John Keats – a cockney poet. Gor-Blimey Guv’nor. Would you Adam and Eve it?
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BYRONESQUE DARK AND MOODY
PRESENTER
When the bottles were empty – the carriages gone – the women asleep – Byron started to
write It became his three in the morning routine – the only spare time in his continuous
round of sex and drink. It was said “He wrote his best when a cunt(bleep) was near the
inkstand’.” That word Bleep. The very rude one we don’t use today – 200 years ago was in
common use.
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KEATSISH LOCATION
PRESENTER
Keats liked to party too. Wordsworth was guest of honour at one dinner Keats attended.
Every time he started to speak Keats shouted drunkenly:
VOICE OVER POET
“Do let me have a look at that gentleman’s organs.”
PRESENTER
Eventually thrown out – he was still laughing and shouting:
VOICE OVER POET
“Who is that fellow? Allow me to see his organs once more.”
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BO PEEP – HASTINGS
PRESENTER
Keats found romance – on holiday – at Bo Peep, near Hastings. He met – Isabella Jones – It
was his rst sexual experience She inspired his second book of Endymion, with the power of
her romantic love.
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LONDON – LAMBS CONDUIT STREET
PRESENTER
Back in London they met again – secretly – Isabella was a kept woman – kept by someone
else. Was she also to thank for the nal book of Endymion? Keats nished it while staying
home soothing a nasty little rash – She’d given him the clap!
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MAYFAIR LOCATION
PRESENTER
Blake and wife Catherine’s early married life was more ordinary – a few rooms on Green
Street – in the heart of London’s Mayfair, 200 years ago geese squawked in the street. He
was regretting their hasty marriage. Catherine’s Christian, charitable love was not the erotic
sexual love he craved. He hated his dependency. He felt trapped. As a child it was needing
his mother’s care. As a man it was needing Catherine – for his sexual needs. Sex was his
constant tormentor.
VOICE OVER POET
I saw a chapel all of gold
That none did dare to enter in,
And many weeping stood without,
Weeping, mourning, worshipping.
Vomiting his poison out
On the bread and on the wine.
So I turn’d into a sty
And laid me down among the swine.
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PRESENTER
And laid me down with swine? – For Blake, sex was a secret, guilty, animal act.
Presenter starts to undress walking along behind a hedge.
Exploring his sexual fantasies – he covered manuscripts with perverted motifs.
Presenter sits on bench and takes off shoes
PRESENTER(CONT’D)
Whether he committed these fantasies – in the esh – is doubtful, indeed often impossible.
Presenter now almost naked
He and Catherine moved out of the city to Lambeth – 200 years ago all meadows and
parkland.
Presenter, naked, walks away from camera towards the Tower of London
He turned to theosophy and naturism. Friends would nd Blake seated in the garden
reading to Catherine, both of them naked. Blake would say: “It’s only Adam & Eve you
know.”
Presenter starts to gather up his clothes
Then – as the French Revolution became the Reign of Terror – He became disillusioned and
depressed.
Presenter still nude rushes round picking up clothes
On the other hand Wordsworth, excited by the French Revolution, travelled to France to join
the action. But the only action he found was an affair with Annette Vallon.
CUT TO
EXPERT
When news broke they’d had a daughter. His allowance – and his adventures – were
stopped. Back in England he made a fresh start at Racedown House in Dorset – with his
sister Dorothy. He would be a poet – she – lady of their house.
CUT TO
Presenter is looking over a hedge getting dressed
PRESENTER
Annette Vallon, wrote to Dorothy, asking her help. But Dorothy was not the one to appeal
to.
Presenter nishes dressing and walks out from behind the hedge
PRESENTER(CONT’D)
She wanted her brother William for herself. Coleridge left Cambridge and married Sarah
Fricker for all the wrong reasons. They moved to Nether Stowey.
CUT TO
NETHER STOWEY
PRESENTER
Coleridge soon saw his mistake, but it was too late. He had a wife he did not love, no
money, and no prospects. He started to write – his only option. He visited Wordsworth and
sister Dorothy at Racedown. He stayed a week – then returned to Nether Stowey taking the
Wordsworths with him. Wordsworth and Dorothy moved into Alfoxden Hall to be near
Coleridge – they spent everyday together – Walking the Somerset countryside, day and
night.
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WOODS – NIGHTIME MONTAGE
Presenter carries an old fashioned lantern as he walk through a wood.
PRESENTER
The fruit of their partnership – the ‘Lyrical Ballads’ – published the following spring –
startled the literary world. Its brave new inspirations – began The Romantic Movement –
changing poetry forever. It was a de ning moment for English, even World literature and
Culture that still echoes in our daily lives 200 years later. But, as so often, the importance of
their work wasn’t recognised on their own doorstep. Wordsworth was evicted from Alfoxton
Hall and Nether Stowey.
The lantern blows out – darkness
The Romantic Movement would ourish elsewhere.
Presenter re-lights the candle
For Coleridge, it was bitter disappointment. Working with Wordsworth had given his life
meaning and direction.
CUT TO
NETHER STOWEY
PRESENTER
Coleridge was left in Nether Stowey. With the wife he did not love. And with self-doubt. Was
his work second rate? Wordsworth’s was magni cent!
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LONDON – OFF OXFORD STREET
PRESENTER
Shelley – sent down from Oxford, disgraced, took rooms on Poland Street. His father
ashamed and disgusted by his atheism stopped his allowance and banned him from home.
He was broke. His sisters sent him money – via schoolgirl Harriet Westbrook. A relationship
developed – encouraged by Harriet’s conniving older sister Eliza who saw Shelley as a good
catch.
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EDINBURGH
PRESENTER
Eliza helped Shelley and Harriet elope to Edinburgh. He was 18 she was 16. Shelley invited
his friend Thomas Hogg to join them for the honeymoon. Shelley kept pushing Hogg and
Harriet together, until she complained Hogg was trying to seduce her. Shelley hoping to
share his innocent young wife with Hogg, said:
VOICE OVER POET
“She is prejudiced, I hope it will not always be so.”
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LYNMOUTH
PRESENTER
After time spent travelling they arrived in Lynmouth. Here he spread anti-Christian
pamphlets – tied to balloons blown over the countryside or sealed in bottles thrown into
the sea He also wrote his rst important poem – Queen Mab. A plea for revolution,
republicanism, free love and vegetarianism.
VOICE OVER POET
Nature rejects the monarch, not the man; The subject, not the citizen;
for kings and subjects,
mutual foes, forever play
A losing game into each other’s hands, Whose stakes are vice and misery.
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LONDON
PRESENTER
Shelley chose poetry as the best way to reach young open minds, with his political, social
and sexual freedom message. The same message still preached by today’s young rock and
rap rebels. But Shelley was losing control. Back in London Eliza said: ‘Harriet – leave
Shelley – come home – it’ll bring him to his senses.’
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LONDON ALT LOCATION
PRESENTER
It didn’t. He met 16 year old Mary Godwin. Four weeks later at her mother’s graveside
Shelley pledges undying love for her.
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LADDER AT WINDOW
PRESENTER
Another 3 weeks Shelley and Mary elope – In true Shelley style he takes her sister Clare,
too. It’s a fast coach to Dover and a night crossing to France.
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‘CALAIS’ BOARDING HOUSE
PRESENTER
Mary’s stepmother is close behind them and they wake to her banging on their bedroom
door, screaming: “Mary – Clare – come home!” Wilful and headstrong as only teenagers can
be, they ignore her and travel on.
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LONDON
PRESENTER
6 weeks later, back in London, Hogg pays Shelley a visit – and, unlike Harriet, Mary gladly
shares her favours with him too.
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LONDON ALT
PRESENTER
Byron, at 21, said a grand tour would prepare him for his political career in the House of
Lords – though more likely he just wanted to escape his creditors. He and friend John
Hobhouse travel through Portugal, Spain, Malta, Greece and Turkey. Byron took his valet
Fletcher, and 14 year old Robert Rushton as his bedwarmer.
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LONDON
EXPERT
In Turkey Byron found the sexual scene so savage and bizarre he sent young Robert home,
fearing for his safety. Byron observed: “In England the vices in fashion are whoring and
drinking, in the east Sodomy and smoking.” The barbarism of the Turks, which rst Byron
found exciting, began to pall. The party moved on to Athens where Hobhouse and Fletcher,
disgusted by Byron’s behaviour, left him. Here he stayed a year, living life as he wished –
boasting 200 conquests – politically correct before his time – half were male – half female.
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LONDON
PRESENTER
His eastern tour inspired Childe Harold a poem of dissolute youth seeking spiritual
refreshment. It was an instant hit – Byron an overnight sensation – a Star. He’d invented
the golden best seller formula that still works today – exotic characters having exotic sex
in exotic places.
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COUNTRYSIDE LOCATION
PRESENTER
Blake retreated into his visions. Walking and talking in the Sussex countryside with the
spirits of – Milton, Old Testament prophets and his brother Robert.
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SOUTH MOLTON ST LONDON
PRESENTER
Eventually re-energized Blake returns to London – 17 South Molton St. His visions
continue. Wife Catherine says: “I am very little in Mr Blake’s company; he is always in
Paradise.” His real life was spent in poverty and obscurity. Blake won’t achieve recognition
in his lifetime.
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LOCATION ALT
PRESENTER
But in his last days his star does begin to rise. He publishes Jerusalem, the result of 14 years
work.
VOICE OVER POET
And did those feet in ancient time Walk upon Englands mountains green? And was the holy
lamb of God On England’s pleasant pastures seen
PRESENTER
Blake achieves cult status. To honour his great mind Phrenologist James Deville makes a
cast of his head – but to Blake’s anger, the cast removes his few last hairs.
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LOCATION ALT
PRESENTER
Meeting John Varley a collector of mystical art. Blake sees his main chance. Varley asks for a
portrait of William Wallace. Wallace’s spirit turns up on cue and Blake starts painting. Blake
then insists Edward the rst keeps standing in front of Wallace and won’t move unless he’s
painted rst. Varley gets two portraits – Blake gets two fees.
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THREE FOUNTAIN COURT.
PRESENTER
Blake lived with visions even in death. On Sunday 12th August 1827. Blake ill in bed;
Catherine sat by him. He said: “Kate, you have been a good wife, I will draw your portrait.”
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BLAKE’S GRAVE
A few hours later Kate reports:
VOICE OVER POET
“His countenance became fair, his eyes brighten’d and he burst forth singing of the things
he saw in heaven. He died like a saint.”
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BLAKE’S GRAVE
PRESENTER
So William Blake – rst to leave us. – What can you say? – He never lacked vision? Unlike
say Wordsworth and Dorothy, whose next vision was a trip to Germany. But they weren’t
made welcome. Was it their weird brother – sister attachment?
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EXPERT
Explore his relationship with Dorothy and women in general, i.e. Lucy. They returned,
setting up home together in the Lake District. Love is revealed in Wordsworth’s Lucy poems.
Secret passions – Sad endings – the fate of their love.
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LAKE DISTRICT
VOICE OVER POET
She lived unknown,
and few could know
When Lucy ceased to be;
But she is in her grave,
and, oh, The difference to me!
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GRASMERE COTTAGE
PRESENTER
As you’d expect, a celebrity setting up home with his sister arouses public curiosity, interest
in his private life was increasing – He had to be discreet. So, was it for love, to protect his
relationship with Dorothy or for extra spice that he married his cousin Mary? She joined
Wordsworth and his sister Dorothy at Grasmere – A cosy ‘menage a trois’
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EXPERT
Coleridge visited Germany too, but for a different purpose – was he happier away from his
wife and kids. He returned when his second son died – weighed down by guilt – he’d
abandoned his family. Explore. his guilt he soon left them again – to visit Wordsworth at
Grasmere. And to fall in love with Wordsworth’s sister in law – Sara Hutchinson. Explore –
Sara was everything his wife was not, thoughtful, warm and full of good sense and humour.
She’s the Asra of his poetry.
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LAKE DISTRICT
VOICE OVER POET
Dear Asra, a woman beyond utterance dear This love which ever welling in my heart Now in
its living fount doth heave full Now over owing pours through every part Of all my frame,
and ll and changes all.
PRESENTER
Sara – Asra. Who could miss this transparent anagram? Surely not his wife.
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EXPERT
That summer he took his family to live at Greta Hall, Keswick – Close to the Wordsworths –
and Sara. His wife hated the north and the Wordsworths even more. Jealous of the time
Coleridge spent with them. Explore Always subject to depression – Coleridge’s mind began
to crack. Explore The public clamoured for more of his brilliant Poetry – but he couldn’t
write Wordsworth’s poetry overwhelmed him – he felt inadequate. Explore And – was he
married to the wrong woman.
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LAKE DISTRICT VARIOUS
PRESENTER
His escape – laudanum – opium mixed with alcohol – he was doing a pint a day. It was a
vicious downward spiral. Keats also wanted to feel the inspiration of the wild northern
scenery. He took a 600 -mile walking tour through the Lake District and Scotland. But the
effect it would have on his work was overshadowed by events. Back in London Tom his
brother was dying of consumption. Keats quit writing – rushed home to care for him. Tom
died aged 19.
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LONDON – HAMPSTEAD/HIGHGATE
PRESENTER
Only days after Tom’s death Keats met Fanny Brawne Keats loved Fanny,and Fanny was
good for Keats,too. But without an income to support her Keats couldn’t have his Fanny. He
left London to make his fortune – writing in solitude. Over worked – driven. Tormented –
missing his Fanny. Depressed – grieving for Tom. He wrote to her:
VOICE OVER POET
“I have two luxuries to brood over, your loveliness and the hour of my death. O that I could
possess them both in the same minute.”
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LONDON HAMPSTEAD/HIGHGATE
PRESENTER
In February 1820 Keats staggered home coughing up blood saying: “Bring me a candle, let
me see this blood – I know the colour of that blood – I must die. He had consumption.
Throughout summer he got worse. Summoning enough strength to walk to Fanny Brawne’s,
he stood outside sobbing. She took him in while he planned a trip to Italy – the climate his
only chance of life. On 17th September with friend Joseph Severn he sailed on the Maria
Crowther.
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‘ROME’ LOCATIONS
PRESENTER
After weeks at sea and 10 days in quarantine. They came ashore on his 25th birthday. His
illness in its nal stage, his body shaking, in delirium, his mind gone. Keats begged for
laudanum to end his life. 4pm 23rd March 1821 he called:
VOICE OVER POET
“Severn – Severn – lift me up for I am dying – thank God it has come.”
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‘ROME’ ALT
PRESENTER
His self penned epitaph: “Here lies one whose name was writ in water.” echos his belief that
his fame would be eeting? He couldn’t have been more wrong.
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LONDON -ST MARY LE BOW
PRESENTER
John Keats – the Cockney Poet – just 25 and brown bread – Gor-Blimey Guv’nor. Would you
Adam and Eve it?
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LOCATION AT SWYNFORD PADDOCKS USING SEVERAL ROOMS AND GROUNDS – BREAKING

UP SCRIPT INTO SEPARATE SHORT SHOTS AND SCENES
PRESENTER
Byron’s poem Childe Harold made him the darling of society. And especially of a married
noblewoman – Lady Caroline Lamb. She labelled him: “Mad, Bad and Dangerous to Know.”
He was her obsession. He tried to end the affair – She disguised herself as a page, pulled a
knife on him – begged him not to. She became hysterical – burnt ef gies of him in the
street – graf tied ‘Remember Me’ on his walls and books. She nally lost control and sent
him one last gift – her pubic hair – bloodied where she’d cut them too close. Convinced she
was mad, He ed. . . To an even madder affair with his married sister Augusta. They were
warned of the consequences. But for Byron, it was the heaven and hell he relished. He felt
guilt. He felt anguish. He felt the most passionate love of his life. It was his best seller
formula – Exotic characters – Augusta and Byron. Exotic sex – Forbidden Incest. Exotic
place – Six Mile Bottom. They needed a smokescreen of respectability to continue the
incestuous affair. And Annabella Milbanke was the perfect fall girl. She’d worshiped Byron –
in a strictly non sexual way – for years. He proposed – She accepted – It was disaster. On
honeymoon they hardly spoke – The thought of sleeping with her horri ed him – His black
moods and heavy drinking terri ed her – as with pistol and dagger in hand he stalked the
house at night. He taunted her with his sex crimes – the number and variety. After the
honeymoon Annabella, unaware of the gossip, invited Augusta to stay. Byron taunted her
even more – hinting of his and Augusta’s past. A year after their marriage they had a
daughter. Byron said he hoped she and the child would die in labour. A month later
Annabella left him. Her parents leaked news of his behaviour. His madness -His cruelty –
His homosexual affairs – His incest. Societies’ knives were out – he must leave England
forever. He travelled through Europe – a lost, wandering soul. He thought of suicide – he
thought of the joy it would give his mother in law – he thought of sexual adventures – he
travelled on.
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EXPERT
Shelley, Mary and Clare hit the road again and in Switzerland meet Byron, who Clare knew
very well. Byron and the Shelley’s bonded instantly. In the evening they read Gothic tales by
candlelight – Byron reads Coleridge’s Christabel to such effect Shelley runs from the room
screaming.
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SWYNFORD PADDOCKS
VOICE OVER POET
A snake’s small eye blinks dull and shy; And the lady’s eyes they shrunk in her head,
Each shrunk up to a serpent’s eye,
And with somewhat of malice, and more of dread,
At Christabel she looked askance!
One moment–and the sight was ed!
PRESENTER
Mary provides Byron with the customary sexual hospitality. Byron, being greedy, takes
Shelley too.
Presenter walks to bookcase takes out book – Frankenstein
Byron inspires Mary Shelley to write Frankenstein – the monster’s soulless character
mirrored Byron’s soulless existence, repulsive in its loneliness yet desperate for sympathy.
Presenter walks in front of empty bed
The Swiss party breaks up.
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LONDON – SERPENTINE
PRESENTER
The Shelley’s return to London – to nd that Harriet’s committed suicide – drowning in the
Serpentine. Shelley is free to marry Mary.
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SWYNFORD PADDOCKS
PRESENTER
The Shelley’s and Clare are soon back travelling and in Italy meet Byron again. Now pay
attention. The relationships become confusing. Basically – it’s a free for all. .
Presenter walks in front of the same bed lled with wriggling and writhing bodies under
the covers.
Shelley is sleeping with Clare. Byron is sleeping with Mary. Shelley is sleeping with Mary.
Byron is sleeping with Shelley. Despite the sexual scandals Shelley and Byron’s genius lift
them above criticism. They are the glitterati. European nobles and American tycoons were
eager to spend time in their company. Earthly sins forgiven for heavenly poetry.
(T C) I think I could handle a bit of this poetic lifestyle myself.
Presenter jumps into bed with everyone else.
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EXPERT
In the summer of 1822 the Shelley’s begin their usual bizarre sleeping arrangements –
setting up house with friends Edward and Jane Williams in Italy. Shelley’s last poems –
written to Jane Williams.
VOICE OVER POET
Though thou art fair and kind
The forest ever green
Less oft is peace in Shelley’s mind
Than calm in water seen.
EXPERT
Shelley and Williams both keen sailors had a yacht built – the Don Juan. Out sailing a storm
blew up – the Don Juan was lost. Their badly mutilated bodies were washed ashore; Shelley
was only recognised by the copy of Keat’s poems in his pocket.
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BEACH
PRESENTER
Byron and friends Hunt and Trelawny cremated them on the beach throwing salt, wine and
frankincense onto the burning bodies, an ancient Greek ritual. Poetically Trelawny rakes
through the ashes to retrieve Shelley’s heart for Mary to keep. Un-poetically it turned out to
be his liver he took to her.
Presenter turns away from the re
Another poet dies an early rock star death. Only three left standing.
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LONDON LOCATION
PRESENTER
Coleridge’s drug addiction got worse. No one understood withdrawal symptoms. More
opiates the only cure. He became obsessive – hating his idiotic expression and fat vacant
face. His marriage had gone wrong and nally his wife left him.
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EXPERT
Explore Back again to London, living alone above a chemist shop, handy for his opium. A Dr
Gillman offered him a 6-month cure – a last attempt to beat his habit. He thought he was
winning but Coleridge had secret supplies hidden under the hedge. The six-month cure
stretched until his death 15 years later.
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COLERIDGE’S GRAVE(S)
PRESENTER
His Highgate grave once bore his self written epitaph:
VOICE OVER POET
Stop, Christian passer-by!
Stop, child of God,
And read with gentle breast.
Beneath this sod A poet lies,
or that which once seem’d he.
O, lift one thought in prayer for S.T.C.
PRESENTER
The thought, and prayer, should have been: “S.T.C. R.I.P.” A few years ago they dug him up
and moved him here – now the builders are back and he may be on the move once more.
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‘VENICE’ Locations
PRESENTER
Byron moved to Venice, for the sexual ambience and of course, the culture. Marianna his
rst Venetian lover, was also his landlord’s wife. Soon he’s telling friends of another lover:
Her name Margarita. Marianna confronted Margarita who responded: “If he prefers what is
mine to what is yours, is it my fault?” His nal Italian escapade was a Contessa Teresa. He
spent afternoons at her house, telling friends: “If I come away with a stiletto in my gizzard I
shall not be astonished.” At 35, he left her to ful l his Romantic dream – to free Greece
from the Turks.
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‘GREECE’ – Locations
PRESENTER
Byron took a house in Missolonghi with his nal lover – Lukas a 15-year-old boy. On 15th
January 1824 aged 36, he suffered a convulsion. The cure – 8 leaches at his temples didn’t
work. His death was slow, agonising and painful. Then he was butchered. The people of
Missolonghi got his lungs. The rest of his body – the heart, brain and intestines packed
separately – were sent back to England – for a State funeral procession along Oxford Street
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BYRON’S GRAVE
PRESENTER
Then nally buried at Hucknall Torkard.
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LAKE DISTRICT
PRESENTER
Back at Grasmere – three became four. Sara, Wordsworth’s sister in law, moves in too.
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EXPERT
Coleridge records witnessing Sara Hutchinson and Wordsworth making love. He watched,
jealously envying, Wordsworth’s group relationship – and he wanted Sara. But attention
and adulation from three women crippled Wordsworth’s creativity. Explore decline of
powers. With his nest work behind him he settled into establishment life – becoming poet
laureate in 1843.
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LAKE DISTRICT
PRESENTER
In 1850 Wordsworth died in his sleep – the last of the great romantic poets. . . . . . and the
end of the Romantic Movement. Or was it? What have they left us – apart from magni cent
poetry?
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RELEVANT IMAGES
MONTAGE OF EXPERTS COMMENT ON THE ROMANTIC IDEAL:
Listen to your heart. If you can dream it – you can do it. To climb the mountain – because
it’s there. To boldly go where no man has gone before. .
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OLD FASHIONED CLASSROOM
PRESENTER THE TEACHER
Lord Byron died in 1824 William Blake died in 1827 Samuel Taylor Coleridge died in 1834
YOU! Pay attention! Wordsworth died in 1850
Presenter the pupil gets up from the class.
PRESENTER
Dates and statistics aren’t poetry, but those guys were
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Presenter the pupil in front of class
PRESENTER THE PUPIL
Romantic Poets? They were. Exciting fascinating characters – they lived exciting fascinating
lives. Without tabloid kiss and tells, without cheque book journalists ferreting out the hot
gossip, without the telephoto’d paparazzi lenses, the same salacious stories that ll today’s
front pages were being told about these guys 200 years ago. Sex, Drugs, Rock n Roll? – they
ain’t nothin new!
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LEICESTER SQUARE TUBE STATION EXIT

NEWS VENDOR (Presenter)

LEICESTER SQUARE TUBE STATION EXIT – WIDE

Presenter walks towards the news vendor.

LEICESTER SQUARE TUBE STATION EXIT – CLOSE-UP PRESENTER

Presenter buys the paper

LEICESTER SQUARE – WIDE

CLASSROOM – OLD FASHIONED (Hawkshead)

Remember these dull dull lessons?

William Blake was born in 1757 Listen boy! This is poetry!

Show me the poetry! Show me the poetry!

Presenter (the pupil) gets up and walks out

Says the Romantic Movement started in 1797

Presenter still reading the paper

Presenter continues walking through the village

Presenter walks out of shot

Presenter walks into shot

Presenter starts walking (montage the next few lines)

BELL INN, WATCHET

We see Presenter walk to the Bell Inn

BELL INN, WATCHET – INT

Here Coleridge began writing his Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner.

VOICE OVER POET

And he stoppeth one of three.

‘By thy long grey beard and glittering eye,

Now wherefore stopp’st thou me?

VOICE OVER POET

The Bridegroom’s doors are open wide.

Presenter picks up his next pint – the empties are mounting up

BELL INN, WATCHET – INT

Another pint for Presenter

TOP OF THE POPS PASTICHE

(Alan Freeman style countdown)

BELL INN, WATCHET – INT

But we’re getting ahead of ourselves.

BELL INN, WATCHET – EXT

Presenter walks out of the pub, stands by the doorway.

WESTMINSTER ABBEY – EXTERNAL

WESTMINSTER ABBEY – EXT

Bite’s cadbury’s ake

LAKE DISTRICT – HAWKESHEAD

LAKE DISTRICT – FIELD LOCATION

Presenter raises eyebrow

Bridge and Riverbank walk

Caught crying on his rst day a master shouted at him:

VOICE OVER POET

Boy! The school is your father!

Boy! The school is your mother!

Boy! The school is your brother!

And your sister!

Presenter turns away from the window and walks to camera

BYRONESQUE LOCATIONS – POSSIBLY HARROW SCHOOL

LONDON – ST MARY LE BOW

Shelley was sent to boarding school aged

Presenter is pelted with lots of cricket balls.