Pg. 10 “I’ts(It’s) highly toxic.

Death could be immediate, or taking(take) up to half

an hour.”

I think there might be a more natural area in which to get out the 10th grade English
exposition. They ask her if Heather knows when Julie left that morning and she says
apropos of nothing that she works 10th grade English.

I like Castle harping on the “lovers” angle. And I love him playing with the initials as
well. It’s great. Very, very funny and it sounds like Castle.

Things look great.