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Through the first sight, the viewer might get no idea from the story by seeing the insane

sadness of a
young boy with a box in his hands, but with no doubt, this short movie is beyond just a disappointed
atmosphere.

In my opinion, the whole story had a positive rout, which went on plot by plot. The accident meeting Commented [MM1]: Word choice: bumping into a girl …
of a girl and a boy with two different points of view, created a smart contrast among them, however,
Alrey’s (the boy) explanation of his mother , being a very nice person to any bodyanybody , was kind
of a common point for them which made Clair (the girl) to illustrate her lively mentality in order to
have an influence on Alrey’s almost negative attitude.

Post Post-it shows a way expressing love toward any small or maybe worthless thing around us and Formatted: Font: Italic
to stop being vulnerable from the surrounding events. Formatted: Font: Italic

In short, the Post Post-it can have a pleasant psychological effect on people who are spending their
youth, acting hostile and apathetic toward their surrounding and this fact made me give it thumbs
up and you should watch it as my recommendation.

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