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Reviewer: Kimberly Noe

Classmate: Yesina Patino


Educational Philosophical Statement Rubric (EPS Rubric)
Criterion Undocumented 0 Minimal 1 Basic 2 Proficient 3 Advanced 4 Comments
Unacceptable Unacceptable Acceptable Acceptable Acceptable

Idea The statement does Statement expresses Statement Using generally Using sound I love how you
Development: 3 not address the the author’s views logically sound assumptions and started out your
author’s views about about the purposes develops the assumptions and arguments, the paper with a few
the purposes of of education, author’s arguments, based statement examples of possible
education, guiding guiding educational views about in practical logically develops futures for future
educational principles, the purposes experience, the the author’s views students. I also loved
principles, understanding of of statement about the how you think it is
understanding of learning, and/or the education, logically purposes of extremely important
learning, and/or the most appropriate guiding develops the education, to keep students
most appropriate strategies for educational author’s views guiding motivated and that
strategies for teaching, but is principles, about the educational teachers are not just
teaching. The ambiguous or not understandin purposes of principles, commited to lesson
statement is connected. g of education, understanding of plans, but are also
incoherent or learning, guiding learning, and/or committed to
extremely brief or and/or the educational the most teaching students to
contains major most principles, appropriate use their educational
logical appropriate understanding of strategies for skills even after they
inconsistencies. strategies learning, and/or teaching. The graduate to have
for teaching. the most statement their dream job one
However, appropriate includes sound day. I love that you
the strategies for ethical or also mentioned how
statement is teaching. psychological important classroom
not always arguments and management is.
consistent not just practical Without it it would
and/or ones. be impossible to
convincing. teach. I think you did
a great job outlining
your paper!
Illustrative No illustrative Supporting Examples in Supporting Specific examples I think you provided
Examples: 4 examples are examples are support of examples from from the writer’s a great example from
included. inadequate or of points are the writer’s personal your personal
unclear relevance. relevant but experience are experience, experience with your
general or specific and academic work, College Coordinator.
not based in pertinent. or field You provided a great
experience. experience example of the of the
illustrate points in role model you want
a vivid or to be towards your
memorable way. future students. You
also did a great job
of describing how
you are wanting
your classroom
environment to be.

Quality of The statement is The statement, The The statement is In addition to I think that your
Writing: 3 very difficult to though statement is clear, well being clear, well writing was very
read because of its comprehensible, understanda organized, free organized, free clear and well
style, usage, has obvious ble plus two from errors of from errors of organized. It all
mechanics, or problems in two of of the mechanics and mechanics and flowed smoothly and
organization. the following areas: following: usage, and usage, and written I did not see any
style, usage and 1) written in an in an appropriate major mistakes. I
mechanics, or organi appropriate academic style, personally do not use
organization. zed, academic style. the statement: contractions in my
2) free 1) has a single, essays simply
from unifying because that is what
errors theme and I was always taught
of 2) is strongly not to do. It is more
mecha suggestive of professional not to
nics the writer’s plus it adds more
and voice. words to your word
usage, count. Other than
3) in an that, I believe your
appro rough draft was
priate great!
acade
mic
style.

Additional I think you did an outstanding job on your paper and provided many strong ideas. I really Total: 10/12
Comments loved reading about your personal experience with your college coordinator and think it is
great how you want to use them as your role model. I think your paper was very organized
and was full of valuable information for other future educators.

Reviewee: Yesina Patino Date: 3/4/2019


Evaluator: Kimberly Noe Date: 3/4/2019

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