Doctor Fine
EN 103
28 April 2019
For my Visual Analysis Essay, I was inspired to turn it into a piece that goes hand in
hand with my major and what I want to do after college. Since I am on the creative
specialization/ portfolio track, I decided to do something that involved graphic design. I wanted
it to be different and creative so when reading back over the essay I kept going over and over the
paragraph that discusses what it’s made of, which eventually lead me to my idea of making a
cookbook style approach. I grabbed one of my mom’s Southern Living Magazines and flipped to
a page about Chocolate pie and opened my InDesign application and started following the
general 3 column format. I decided to pick my own complementary fonts and colors rather than
following their style exactly, but I drew a lot of inspiration for that page. Once I had converted
the parts of the painting into ingredients and directions, I thought I was done. But then I looked
at the next page in the Southern Living magazine where they had reader’s testimonials and
experiences from trying the recipe and was inspired to keep going. I thought that would be a
great way to incorporate my analysis of the painting as well. Once again, I followed their general
page layout to create my own cohesive and creative spread. I thought it was a really original and
unique idea to take these two completely different things and combine them into this graphic and
For my Photo Essay, I was more inspired by my original analysis of the poem than the
final draft so I decided to take a risk and follow that path more. I picked a few photos and put
them all in the same filter to create a consistent vibe across them so that they were seen more like
a series than a representation of each new idea. I then split up my analysis into four parts and put
the words on top of the images that corresponded the most with the message I was trying to
portray. Then, in order to add another dimension to my work, I took original quotes from my
final draft and spaced them between the photos. I wanted to tell a story more and allow the poem
to aid in this story rather than my photos supporting the explanation of the poem. It gives off a
very philosophical vibe and I really love that about it. I sought to allude to a problem instead of
just stating it as I did in my final draft to allow for personal reflection more than anything.
For my Research Essay, I decided to write a letter to Congress to propose that they stop
allowing free access to digitalized artistic content on the internet. I used all of my arguments
from the essay along with a few new ones to explain the negative effect that this ability has had
on our society. I thought of the idea while watching Footloose last night. I originally started by
trying to make a petition but soon realized that there are few to none words on a petition and I
needed to be able to state my claims, so I settled on a letter to Congress. Once it was written up, I
played a lot with font and spacing. I choose a font that resembled a type of writer because of the
prominence and knowledge that it portrays. I also decided not to put a formal letter header on it
with the date and such information in order for my argument and facts to be what stood out when
passionate about the topic once I really got started on it. It reads so much more academic and
driven than my other essays while still maintaining my own voice. Although I am proud of my
other essays, I am just blown away at how much growth I have seen in my writing throughout
this semester when comparing my Visual Analysis to my Research Essay. I believe what really
distinguishes them is my use of the so what sentences. As a writer, I forget that my audience is
not always in possession of the same information or knowledge that I am. Because of this, I have
strived to explain things more simplistically or even in a variety of ways throughout my essays.
But with that, I have to be careful because I have noticed that I am very repetitive. I commonly
start sentences with the same words or phrases and it goes completely unnoticed to my ear or eye
when revising. I have had to start using the find feature on Word to highlight cases so I can
visually see where my repetition falls in the paper and if it supports or detracts from my
argument.
grayscale when it comes to any type of creative. As an artist, I work a majority on a grayscale
because it allows for a different dimension of interpretation. To one person it represents one
thing while to someone else another and I find that to be really special. Personally, the grayscale
illustrates my creative abilities as I have turned three academic papers into a variety of works
that express an idea that was originally stated in a paper. Turning a painting into a cookbook, a
research essay into a legal letter, and a photo essay into a philosophical story, all very unique and
creative interpretations of academic papers. Overall, this project has shown me how much
growth I have had as a writer in the past couple of months and I am beyond impressed with
myself.