Student Writing Goal: My writing goal is to be on topic throughout my essay. There are specific instructions needed
and I will stick to it.
Instructions:
1) Re-read the paper (and teacher feedback).
2) Complete this reflection sheet.
3) Revise the paper accordingly and highlight any changes.
4) Submit the revision and this reflection sheet.e
How did you perform in relation to the expectations of the writing rubric?
I received an 80 on the assignment because I had some mistake that I needed to fix up. I was able to fix up the
mistakes and add more into my essay. With the help of Ms. Figueroa, I was able to fix
What aspect of this piece did you do well? (give example/quotes to support claims)
The aspect of this piece that I believe that I did well was I stayed on topic throughout the whole essay. Even
if I had different topics that followed with the theme, is stayed in topic within the paragraph.
What will you do better in your next writing assignment, and how will I do it?
In the next writing assignment, what I will do better is to make sure I only include the quotes needed. I
needed to make sure that I am on topic. Make sure that I don’t repeat and I use the correct facts and statistics.
To what degree of success did you achieve your previously stated goal(s)?
I was able to achieve my previously stated goals because my teacher helped me. I was able to learn how I
would stay on topic.