Y11 FMP Feedback Form - Audio Visual Shahlaa and Jordi

A) Identify a minimum of 3 things that could be improved in the video/poster/audio FMP project you
are feedbacking/reviewing.

B) Explain to your peer how it how it could be improved. You should include a technical explanation
of how the problem should be fixed, even if the footage must be reshot, you must explain how the
person could avoid making the same mistakes again.

Example:

A Video project

Issue: Character/s have not clear goal

How to resolve it: If the character has no clear identifiable goal, this is probably due to lack of a clear
narrative or a script all together. Produce a scrip, even if there is not a lot of lines that the
actors/characters must say, a good narrative has to be able to be read/written. You may still use some
of the shots you have already, but you must go back to the drawing board. Find a goal for your main
character/s, something they must achieve and take them on a journey from that has a clear and well-
defined beginning, middle/development and ending/resolution or even a cliff hanger.

FMP project by:__________________________

Reviewed by: __________________________

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