SYMBOLS TO GIVE FEEDBACK ON FORM

SYMBOL MEANING EXAMPLE

SP Spelling The maneger is a woman.

SP
P Punctuation I live work, and go to school in Huancayo.
P
VT Verb Tense I never work as a cashier until I got a job there.
VT
SV Subject-verb The manager work hard.
Agreement SV

ᶲ Unnecessary word The student she studies all the time.

ᶲ
ᶺ Word missing Please don’t me that question anymore.
ᶺ
PL Plural Apple are the most nutritious fruit.
PL
ww Wrong word She is embarrassed. She is going to have a baby.
ww
wf Wrong form Most women are honesty.
wf

DOUBLE SPACING AND FEEDBACK ON CONTENT

Write an academic paragraph answering the following question:

PROMPT
How important is education in people’s life?

THE IMPORTANCE OF EDUCATION

Aside form any question, education considered a wonderful aspect of anyone personality. It separate Commented [MA1]: This is a good first try, but your topic
sentence could be more specific.

you from other in the universe. Education make a person to be better used in society. It gives you
SV
knowledgeable about other people. And also it keep you open mind to another point of view. Education helps
ww
you to take a correct decision. I remember a time when I was a little girl, my father told me about a rich man,

his father was a business men and he had one child he bought him everything. But he did not let him attend

school because he had already all that he needs: big houses and lots of fancy clothes. So he think if his son go

to school it will waste his time. But after his father’s death the son did not know how to take care of himself. In Commented [MA2]: I like this example a lot!

my opinion, it would have help him if he had a high education. Commented [MA3]: This is a nice paragraph but you could
improve it by providing more details about the rich man and his
son. Why, exactly, did he not allow his son to go to school? What
kind of problems did the son face living on his own?