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University of Saint Louis
Senior High School
Tuguegarao City, Cagayan
I. Proposal Defense
a. Introduction
The panelists suggested that surveys and studies regarding
suicidal ideation among the youth/adolescents should be
incorporated in the background of the studies instead of
surveys pertaining to suicides since the study is focused on
the ideation not the suicide alone.
The panelists also suggested that the main objective of the
study should be revised. The main objective of our proposed
study is to know the main factors of suicidal ideation and
what actions should take in order to prevent and cope-up
with such ideation among the SHS students. But the
panelists suggested that the researchers must show a proof
or a study first if there is really an existing suicidal ideation
among the SHS students before determining the factors. So
the main objectives of the study will befocused on studying if
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there is really an existing suicidal ideation among the SHS
by determining their level of suicidal ideation.
Proper citation should be incorporated
b. Literature Review
The panelists suggested that the studies to be gathered
should be more focused on the youth/adolescents and should
not incorporate studies regarding adults or other age brackets.
d. Appendices
The panelists suggested that the questionnaire provided is
better to be adopted from the internet
e. Other areas
a. Introduction
The panelist suggested that studies regarding suicidal
ideation among the youth/adolescents is insufficient. More
studies should be added that focuses on suicidal ideation
among the youth.
Proper citation should be incorporated
b. Literature Review
The panelist suggested that the literature reviews which are
not inclined in the study should be removed.
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c. Methods
The mode of the data gathering or the sampling techniques
which includes the target number of respondents should be
properly indicated
d. Appendices
The panelist suggested that the questionnaire should not be
focusing on suicidal behavior but rather in suicidal ideation.
a. Introduction
Personal life value can both focus on positive and the negative
Explain and add more significant factors that can affect on how the
adolescents value their personal lives.
b. Research Simulacrum
Simplify the title of the research simulacrum
c. Methods
The statistical tools that being used for the study should be
elaborated clearly
d. Results
Make sure to use proper terms
a. Abstract:
The terms to be used should be third-person point of view
Don’t use the term USL
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b. Introduction:
There are a lot of manifestation regarding life value, do not only
focus on certain points
Personal life value can both focus on positive and the negative
Explain well the factors that can affect on how they value their
personal life
c. Research Simulacrum:
Set a parameter
Include also about the difference not only the effects
d. Results
Explain further why does the number of male and female are the
same
Make sure to use proper term
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