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opportunities to explore narrative features such (much like another piece of literature). Like young
as setting, character, plot, and genre (Ostenson). adult novels, games can provide rich, complex worlds
Indeed, games often use multiple genres, engag- for students to write about that may feel more rele-
ing students in reading complex, multimedia texts vant to their experiences than other classroom texts.
(Adams). Moreover, games can provide opportuni- Alternatively, games can invite students into
ties to develop critical literacy when students analyze a scenario that requires argumentation, much as
games and gameplay as cultural artifacts, much like Michael’s experience with Super Mario Kart might
other novels, plays, and poems (Burwell). have inducted him into the dynamics of driving
Less attention has been paid to how digital, (for better or for worse!). In an essay from Good
online games might be used to promote students’ Video Games and Good Learning: Collected Essays on
writing. Hannah R. Gerber and Debra P. Price have Video Games, Learning and Literacy, James Paul Gee
provided a notable exception, offering ideas for using describes how some games are designed as “prob-
specific games to prompt expository, persuasive, and lem spaces” in which the “fun of the game is learn-
narrative writing in ing how to solve problems and gain some degree of
Like young adult accordance with the mastery over both the problems and the tools that
novels, games text types distinguished compose the core of the game” (143). That is, games
can provide rich, by the Common Core can require that students use argumentation as a tool
complex worlds for State Standards for to solve a problem in the game. Although problem
students to write English Language Arts. solving within the game does not necessarily require
about that may feel Argumentative writ- the ability to articulate one’s knowledge that is often
more relevant to ing receives a special required by educational activities, Gee points out
their experiences place in the Common that such explicit learning could be done “out of
than other Core State Standards game, with related activities” (144). Indeed, design-
classroom texts. across disciplines and ing educational experiences that may include video
grade levels. However, games and that require skillful—and fun—problem
the National Assessment of Educational Progress solving, using (academic) tools such as argumenta-
(NAEP) “Writing Report Card” recently found that tion and writing, are among the principles behind
only 27 percent of eighth-and twelfth-grade students game-based curricula or “gamification of instruction”
performed at the “proficient” level on argumentative (Kapp). In this kind of teaching, problem solving in
writing tasks (NCES). How might digital, online the game can be explicitly related to addressing larger
games support students’ argument writing? challenges within and beyond the classroom. This
relationship between game and community was cre-
WRITING ABOUT AND ated in the classroom we studied: students composed
WRITING IN THE GAME arguments to solve problems in the award-winning
Gerber and Price have suggested that students can educational game Quandary (Learning Games Net-
write about the moral and ethical issues raised by a work), which was designed to teach argumentation,
game like BioShock or the power dynamics of Grand and students subsequently connected those argu-
Theft Auto’s portrayal of women. And Catherine ments to writing for community advocacy and envi-
Burwell has shown that popular genres such as the ronmental action outside of school.
“Let’s Play” video, in which players record game-play
with voice-over commentary and invite subsequent SEEING GAMES AS VEHICLES
responses in online discussion forums, require anal- FOR SOCIAL ACTION
ysis, interpretation, and uses of evidence similar to Available online for free at www.quandarygame.org/,
those taught in school writing genres. In these situa- Quandary asks players to assume the role of space
tions, the game is the subject of the written argument colony captain on faraway planet Braxos. When the
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colony’s public well becomes contaminated by a local arguments. In their letters, students could advocate
parasite, the captain must consult the colonists, sort- for one of three potential responses to the Kaleido-
ing facts, opinions, and potential solutions, before scope incident:
selecting two possible courses of action to present 1. Should Kaleidoscope pay to dig new wells
to the colony, and then recommending one solution for local residents?
(with arguments for and against) to the Colonial
2. Should residents have to pay for clean water?
Council back on Earth. Potential solutions to the
water contamination problem include the following: 3. Should those residents with clean wells share
their water?
nn Convince the Colonial Council to pay for
the digging of a new public well. Thus, Quandary’s conflict paralleled the local
dilemma. As students composed arguments to solve
nn Allow the colonists to pay for clean water the problem in the game, they also prepared to write
from an uncontaminated well that belongs arguments for social action beyond the classroom—
to one colonist, the construction chief. arguments for an authentic audience and purpose.
nn Take over the construction chief’s well and Students engaged in peer response and optional
provide all colonists with free access. writing conferences with their teacher before turn-
ing in final drafts of their letters. At the end of the
Quandary’s science- fiction “water war” scenario month, they also filled
(one of several dilemmas that the game offers) has out a post- unit ques- As students
national relevance after the water crisis in Flint, tionnaire that asked composed arguments
Michigan, during which lead and other toxins them to rate their expe- to solve the problem
tainted the drinking water of residents as a result of riences with the game, in the game, they
cost-cutting measures by the city government (Ken- with peer response, and also prepared to
nedy; Smith and Bosman). This national crisis has with writing confer- write arguments for
continued to unfold in other cities such as Newark, ences and to describe social action beyond
New Jersey (Leyden). Thus, problem solving via what, if anything, had the classroom—
argumentation in Quandary is an opportunity to changed about their arguments for an
compose arguments about a larger social issue. writing as a result of authentic audience
However, the connection was more immedi- these activities. As
and purpose.
ate for the 114 seventh-grade students (five classes) researchers, we helped
at the southern, suburban, public school where we design the assignment and materials but did not par-
conducted our one-month study of a unit on writ- ticipate in the teaching of the unit. In addition to
ing for social action. Two months earlier, an acci- collecting students’ writing and their post-unit ques-
dent at the nearby Kaleidoscope fertilizer plant had tionnaires, we conducted interviews with students.
leaked millions of gallons of acidic water laced with We focus here on one student who changed his posi-
radioactive byproducts into the ground, potentially tion on the water contamination issue after playing
contaminating not only the water supply of the sur- the game.
rounding community but also the state aquifer. (All
names of people, places, and local institutions have INVITING AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
been replaced with pseudonyms.) Unfortunately, neither the state governor nor the
After playing the game, students wrote advo- department of environmental protection responded
cacy letters to the state governor and the department to the students’ letters. This lack of response is, in
of environmental protection, using recent sources our experience, a common challenge of approaches
from news outlets such as NPR.org and the Pulitzer- to teaching writing that try to provide a real audi-
prize-winning South City Times in composing their ence for students’ writing beyond the classroom and
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to, thereby, empower them to use writing for social perspective” into consideration might seem over-
action. As proponents of these approaches ourselves, stated, it is worth noting that middle school marks
we wonder: How can students learn to use writing a transition in the Common Core State Standards
effectively for advocacy when their audiences (peo- from writing opinion pieces to writing arguments
ple in power) do not respond? Luckily, Quandary that begin to consider counterclaims. These ques-
furnished opportunities for students to test out their tionnaire responses seemed like first steps toward
arguments on multiple audiences within the world a more nuanced understanding of how real-world
of the game. arguments can incorporate conflicting perspectives
Students commented on this experience in their and address multiple audiences.
post-unit questionnaires, in which they rated their Quandary allowed students to test potential
experiences with the game and completed two open- solutions to the “water war” dilemma, with facts
ended prompts: “After playing the game, I realized that might serve as supporting evidence, on various
that . . .” and “What changed in my writing after this characters in the game to gather arguments for and
was . . . .” A majority of students rated the game as against their eventual recommendation to the Colo-
both highly enjoyable and useful. Across five classes nial Council back on Earth. Figure 1, from screen-
and 114 students, one hundred wrote in their post- capture recordings of students’ game-play during this
unit questionnaires that the game had made them stage of the unit, shows Dr. Canon, the colony’s doc-
more aware of different audiences’ perspectives on tor, responding to potential solutions (blue circles)
their arguments. supported by facts (red pentagons) that a student has
The following are examples of students’ inserted in the corresponding slots.
responses to the prompt, “After playing the game, I In this way, students received a variety of reac-
realized that . . .”: tions from different characters to their developing
nn “Not everyone agrees, but I
think that’s good.”
nn “Many people have different
ideas and a compromise will
not always be made.”
nn “I should take everyone’s ideas
into consideration, not just
those I agree with.”
nn “You have to take all
perspectives into view when
you plan your writing/make a
decision.”
nn “I have to appeal to difference
audiences with different
information.”
These understandings came through
hearing reactions to their arguments
FIGURE 1.
from multiple characters with differ-
In this screenshot from Quandary, students test combinations of
ent perspectives in the game. While the solutions and facts, receiving feedback on their arguments from the
idea of taking “all ideas” and “everyone’s game’s characters. CREDIT LINE TO COME.
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arguments. Within the game, these different audi- their recommendations to the Colonial Council. For
ences’ reactions served as feedback about whether an example, despite warnings from the colony historian
argument (solution + relevant facts) was convincing. that “two wells might connect to the same water
For example, one student, DJ, changed his mind source,” many students initially recommended that
about which solutions to recommend after hearing the Council pay to dig a new public well. Figure 2
the colonists’ reactions. Initially, he had proposed to shows a possible ending based on this solution, in
have colonists pay for clean water, reasoning that to which colonists bemoan the fact that the new well is
take over the construction chief ’s private well would similarly contaminated.
be unfair. But DJ was surprised at the construction “After playing the game, I realized that, if Kalei-
chief ’s reaction: “It’s that guy’s well, and taking it doscope did dig new wells, they would have to find
over when he had it built at his own expense, that a different water source,” wrote one student in her
didn’t seem right to me . . . I mean you should pay post-unit questionnaire. Or as DJ put it in his letter
for clean water if it’s not yours. But . . . he said, ‘If to the state governor, “If you don’t do anything about
they don’t want to pay me then they don’t have to, this, then the waste could affect the [state] aquifer,
but if they want to pay me then pay me.’” which means all of [the state].” Seeing the conse-
In his post-unit questionnaire, DJ wrote that quences of this decision in the game thus had impli-
after playing the game he had realized “that you need cations for the arguments students made in letters to
to look at all viewpoints before jumping to a conclu- the governor about political action in response to the
sion.” Other students also changed their arguments Kaleidoscope leak.
after playing the game. Another student wrote, In their post-unit questionnaires, more than
“What changed in my writing after this was . . . one-third of the students also wrote about realiza-
my solution. It wasn’t the best for the people in the tions concerning the consequences of their decisions.
game, so it probably wasn’t the best for the people in For example, students wrote the following responses
[our] county.”
In the world beyond the class-
room, not all voices carry equal
weight, and some audiences are not
disposed to listen. Quandary, too,
offers characters whose reactions
are more indifferent. Nevertheless,
the game invites students, acting as
space captain, to consider the differ-
ent perspectives of all twelve colonists
before presenting their decision to
the Colonial Council. And as their
comments suggest, a willingness
to hear other perspectives, and to
change one’s mind, may be import-
ant for those who will be future citi-
zens and perhaps leaders in their own
communities.
SEEING CONSEQUENCES
FIGURE 2.
Quandary also allowed students to In this screenshot of one ending to Quandary, students get to see the
see the consequences for the colony of consequences of a possible argument. CREDIT LINE TO COME.
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to the prompt, “After playing the game, I realized nn “My claims are much stronger, and I started
that . . .”: to add counter-claims to balance my letter.”
nn “Certain choices that could be good at the nn “More info . . . it’s going to the Governor,
moment, could be bad the next.” so I need more info.”
nn “The outcome of what would happen if the nn “I put just enough evidence, and the
[state] government made a decision.” evidence related to my topic and supported
my reasons.”
nn “Having an issue like bad water is a bigger
deal than I thought it was.” In the game, using evidence became a means of ral-
lying support or addressing counterclaims—and of
nn “How the Kaleidoscope accident could do a
solving a problem on behalf of the colony. Students
lot of damage to the people around them.”
also received comments about their use of evidence
nn “That I should be very careful about how from peer review and from writing conferences with
and when I use my facts.” their teacher. But in their responses above from
These realizations came from seeing the conse- the post-unit questionnaires, students linked these
quences in the game of their arguments about the changes to playing the game and to the opportuni-
water contamination problem. Meanwhile, the ties it provided to test out their arguments on mul-
actual consequences of the Kaleidoscope leak may tiple, diverse audiences, as well as to see the conse-
take years to play out in real time. quences of those arguments for the community.
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MICHAEL B. SHERRY is a former middle school and high school English teacher and has
been an NCTE member since 2008. At the University of South Florida, Tampa, he teaches
future English teachers and studies teacher response to student writing. Contact him at
mbsherry@usf.edu.
An NCTE member since 2008, ANN M. LAWRENCE is the codirector of the Tampa Bay
Area Writing Project and teaches prospective and practicing writing teachers at the
University of South Florida, Sarasota-Manatee. Her research focuses on argument literacy,
inquiry writing, and disciplinary cultures. She can be reached at annlawrence@sar.usf.edu.
Summer Time
There is time to listen to the crunch
of the runner’s shoes as she passes the house;
there will be time later to follow in her steps.
There is time to listen to the morning’s last crickets
and tree toads chirping and croaking, their timid
voices fading along with the anonymity of dark.
There is time to listen to the words on the pages
now spread across my lap. Later I will set aside
pens and paper and with tools borrowed
from my brother, build something permanent—
but something now, too, is being built, something
that takes its own time and tools.
Later too I will take my daughter to the dentist.
I will look up—annoyed, then amused—across my book of poetry
and listen to a woman argue with her grandson over how much her pillow cost.
Later still I will mark the day off on the calendar,
filling its square with a large red X—not with the
incriminating marks of a teacher correcting students’ papers
but with the solemn mark of a pirate who knows
the value of a good map.
—GREG SCHREUR
GREG SCHREUR, an NCTE member for most of his eighteen-year career, teaches
English at City High Middle School in Grand Rapids, Michigan. He has published a
variety of articles, essays, and stories, but he proudly displays a framed collage of
rejection slips in his classroom. He can be contacted at schreurg@grps.org.
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