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Writing

How to get 6 or more bands in writing module.

 In writing exam focus on only your exam topic .


 Use hard and difficult vocabulary.
 Don’t use more time 1 word use their synonyms.
 Must use proverb and idioms which is more helpful in
get high band .
 If you use more synonyms you get 7 or more bands in your ielts
exam.

 Use synonyms dictionary in your phone . and write common useful


synonyms in your book .
 Example = useful , without , apply , etc........

 Read ielts related essay book and note down difficult and hard
vocabulary in your note book

 Example = ielts easy booster book . etc .....


 Note down is not important . you must use more time difficult
word in your writing and speaking module.
 Use internet for essay .

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Idioms and phrases

1 = a bed of roses = easy

Example = life is not a bed of roses .

2 = a piece of cake = easy

3= ABC = NO knowledge about subject .


Example = some people do not know the abc of heritage building .

4 = at a stretch = in continually .

Example = in the world population increase at a stretch .

5 = Acid test = final test

Example = my ielts exam is my acid test .

6 = back up = support .

Example = with government back up people get good qualitiful education


.

7 – behind bars = in prison .

Example = all criminal should be behind bars .

8 = born with silver spoon in mouth = born in wealth and luxury .

9 = burning question = a very important question .

Example = alcohol is burning question in the world .

10 = call for = require .

Example = every people call for pay tax to government .

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11 = close one ‘s eyes = ignore

Example = government close their eyes in health fild .

12 = cut down = reduce .

Example = smoking habit cut down our age .

13 = every now and then = from time to time .

Example = government should provide basic requirement every now and


then .

14 = from pillar to post. = from place to place

Example = even qualified engineer and doctor are running from pillar to
post .

15 = go hand to hand = closely connected .

16 = haves and have nots = the rich and poor .

Example = in the eyes of god , there is no different between haves and


have not .

17 = in full swing = using full efforts .

Example = the people use technology in full swing .

18 = in hot water = in trouble and in problem .

Example = now a day many people have not money that’s reason they
become in hot water .

19 = in the long run = finally.

Example = in the long run , brazil scientist invent new bio – cycle.

20 = ins and outs = all the details .

Example = students get ins and outs about basic science and technology.
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21 = jack of all trades . = multi - skilled person .

Example = now day with technology people become jack of all trades .

22 = keep away = avoid .

Example = many people keep away fast food .

23 = keep on = continue ,on continually .

Example = government should keep on food quality.

24 = keep up = maintain .

Example = many people keep up their health life .

25 = kith and kin = friend and family member.

Example = i chat with kith and kin in social application .

26 = knock down = demolish .

Example = pollution is knock down earth environment .

27 = make up one ‘s mind = decide .

28 = mess up = spoil .

Example = chemical is mess up river water .

29 = of late = recently .

Example = the brazil scientist invent new bio cycle .

30 = once and for all = definitely and finally .

31 = once in a blue moon = very rarely .

32 = once in while = occasionally.

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33 = part and parcel = an essential part .

Example = music is a part and parcel of every one life .

34 = put an end to = stop .

Example = government should put an end to all wrong work in health


department .

35 = Razor’s edge ( tight corner ) = critical situation .

Example = we all come across in razor’s edge in our life .

36 = Red letter day = memorable day .

Example = my 21 birth day is my red letter day .

37 = sail in the same boat = be in the same condition .

Example = now a day air pollution and water pollution is sail in the
same boat .

38 = spick and span = neat and clean .

Example = now a day it is hard to find spick and span water source
in our city.

39 = take a back seat = give less importance .

40 = take it = believe .

Example = i take it that money is important part of every one life .

41 = take up = engage in.

Example = every people take up their hectic life .

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42 = the order of the day = common .

Example = corruption in government is the order of the day.

43 = time and again = many time .

44 = tit for tat .

45 = turn over a new leaf . = change for the betterment .

Example = government ban plastic bag which is turn over a new leaf.

46 = uphill task = very difficult task .

Example = solve all criminal cases is uphill task for government .

47 = work out = solve .

Example = government should do work out on health department .

48 = step in to one ‘s shoes = follow.

Example = in teaching English i have stepped in to my mother ‘s shoes.

49 = in thick and thin = in good and bad times .

Example = my friend help me in my good and bad time .

50 = in hot soup = in problem.

Example = the student are in hot soup due to strike .

51 = apple of my eyes = very dear .

Example = i am the apple of my eyes of my parents .

52 = . Think on your feet - Adjusting quickly to changes and making fast


decisions.

Example - A good sales man must be able to think on his feet to close the deal.

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53 = chalk and cheese = total opposite.

Example = my brother and me are chalk and cheese by nature.

54 = on moon \ on cloud nine = very happy .

Example = i am on moon \ on cloud nine as my student get the visa .

55 = at the eleventh hour = at the last movement .

Example = exams at the eleventh hour .

56 = Tricks of the trade : - Clever or expert way of doing something.


Example - Being into the construction business for last 10 years, I know all tricks
of the trade.

57 = an arm and a leg = Very expensive

Example = It cost me an arm and a leg to take my trip to Australia.

58= over the moon = Extremely pleased or happy.

Example = I was over the moon when he asked me to marry him.

59= jumping the gun. = Doing or starting something too early.

Example = You are taking your IELTS test next week?? Aren’t you jumping the
gun. You’ve only just started studying.

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60 = .Back to the drawing board! = When an attempt to do something fails
and it's time to start all over again using different methods.

Example = Oh well, I got 5.5 in IELTS again.Back to the drawing board!

61= put all your eggs in one basket. = Putting all of ones resources into
one possibility

Example = Are you putting all of your savings into that company? Don’t put all
your eggs in one basket.

62 = over the top = Excessive.

Example = Everything she does is very over the top. She can’t just have a few
drinks – se has to get really drunk.

63= until the cows come home. = For a very long time.

Example = Unfortunately I think he’ll be studying for IELTS until the cows
come home. His English is very poor.

64 = under the weather = Unwell.

Example = he’s feeling under the weather today so he won’t be going to work.

65 = working against the clock = We're really working against the


clock now. We must hurry.

66 = Break a leg. = Good luck.

Example = So you have the IELTS test today??Break a leg.

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67 = Dead wood - People or things which are no longer useful or
necessary.

Example - The company bought in a lot of new computers. They no longer


want the dead woods.

68=Get the axe -- lose the job.


Example - The projects team was undergoing a major restructuring,
recruitment executives were the first to get the axe.

69= Fever pitch - When a feeling is very intense and exciting, it is said to
be at a fever pitch.

Example - His love for music hadreached a fever pitch before he became a
world known musician.

70 = Blood, sweat and tears - Something that requires a lot of effort and hard
work.

Example - Being the team of Indian cricket team is not just a matter of luck for him, it is his
blood, sweat and tears which has got him here.

71= Have on the brain - Thinking or talking about it all day long.

Example - He has just got engaged. Now, he has his fiance on his brain all the time.

72 = . Fling yourself into - Doing something with a lot of energy and


enthusiasm.

Example - Flinging himself into the exercise routine is the reason for his good physique.

73 = . Raring to go -Being very eager and enthusiastic about the idea of doing
something.

Example - My parents wish to see the animals. They are raring to go to zoo.

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74= . Hang on by fingernails -Continuing to do something in a very difficult
situation.

Example – many people hang on fingernails in my india.

75 = Pull out all the stop - Doing everything you can to make something
successful.

Example - The deadline for the project is fast arriving; we have pulled out all the stops for
timely completion.

76 = Sink your teeth into - doing something with a lot of energy and enthusiasm.

Example – Ankit joined the badminton coaching classes. he sank her teeth into the practice
sessions.

77 = . Stand one's ground -- Maintaining your position.


Example - IN FAST MOVING WORLD MANY PEOPLE STAND ONE’S GROUND .

78 = . Fish out of water- Feeling uncomfortable in unfamiliar surroundings.


Example - Being a french, I felt like a fish out of water in the group of Japanese.

79 = Go great guns - Being successful.

Example - Ram's preparation for the final exams is going great guns. He scored
90% marks in the practice test.

80 = . Sink or swim - fail or succeed.

Example - The test will decide if he sinks or swims.

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81= Hit the road running - - Start performing immediately.

Example – many people hit the road running . when they start new
company work .

82= . Top dog - Very successful group, company, person, country etc.

Example – now a day many company become a top dogs in my country .

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Education bullet point

INTRODUCTION
1 = The famous English philosopher francis bacon said

“reading make a full man”

2 = Education has become one of the most important tools in


countries development.

3 = Education give large amount of idea and knowledge.

4 = Education is a unique ability of our human being .

5 = Education is a vital part of every body ‘s life .

6 = Education is chief defence of a nation .

7 = Education is the transmission of civilization .

8 = Education is a countinuing process from the minute we are


born until we die.

First and for most


1 = Education has become a priority of many parents seeking to secure a
good future for their children in the rapidly changing world.

2 = i think some time that basic qualities and kindness , self –


confidence ,and just a good sense of human gained from study
and educational communication.
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3 = Good education is the earnest of success in the future .
and

success means the ability to term your dream going in to


reality.

4 = Education is provide excellent platform and develop their


analytic skills.

5 = Education is basic requirement to live a good life .

More and more


1 = book (education ) is student real companion.

2 = Education can make amenity full future.

3 = Education give large amount of tremendous ability.

4 = Education is development mind gradually.

5 = Education is improve to perfect knowledge and become


better professionals.

6 = student achieve huge amount of information .

7 = student is very enthusiastic about different study .

8 = in today ‘s era man can stand no war without education .

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9 = Education widens a person’s mental horizon.

10 = young age is the foundation of one’s life = as it is right


said

“ children are like soft clay and you can mould them in
any shape you want “.

11 = the achieve of knowledge by providing valuable information


on like a history , geography book ,novel ,ets..

12 = but some time (book ) is very harmful like a pornography


book.

Description about violence .

13 = student can cultivate their interpersonal skills.

Conclusion
1 = Education without life like a life without colour.

2 = Education is best ability.

3 = knowledge is wealth .

4 = Education is the ability to meet life’ s situation .

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Environment , pollution
,global warming bullet point .

Introduction
1 = From past until now, human destroyed nature and with
increasing technological usages, industrialization and
modernization, this demolition has occurred with more speed.

2 = Environment is a victim of human development and


selfishness of mankind.

3 = man has derived energy by burning fossil fuels such as


coal, oil and natural gas. Excavation and burning of fossil fuels
on a large scale for factories and automobiles has disturbed the
ecological balance of nature and is leading to pollution and
global warming.

4 = = Probably the most worrying threat to our planet at the

present time is global warming.

5 = global warming poses serious threat to mankind , wildlife


and ecosystem of the planet.

6 = = we have observed a major shift in climatic condition of


planet earth.

7 = global warming is a serious issue.

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First and for most
1 = The predominant factors resulting in the warming of the
earth are the emissions of CO2.

2 = . CO2, which damages the ozone layer, comes from several


sources, but the most problematic are those coming from the
burning of fossil fuels from power plants.

3 = . This releases thousands of tones of CO2 into the


atmosphere every year. Another cause of these emissions is the
burning of gasoline for transportation,

4 = , forests store large amounts of carbon, so deforestation is


causing larger amounts of CO2 to remain in the atmosphere.

5 = more over countries are becoming more industrialized and


dumping waste in the atmosphere without realizing its harmful
effect and severity of the issue .

6 = factories and vehicles result in emission of carbon gases


and fumes which are depleting the ozone layer surrounding the
earth.

7 = utilization of fossil fuels and other hazardous chemicals are


other reasons of global warming.

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More and more
1= there are many causes behind global warming . but it is
most due to greenhouse effect .

Greenhouse effect is a phenomenon where gases such


as carbon – dioxide trap heat from the sun which causes the
global temperature to rise above optimal level..

2 = rising temperatures due to global warming would result


in melting of polar ice- caps.

3 = In order to make more profit, some manufacturers and


factories are only keen on the pursuit of profits, caring nothing
about the protection of environment and the recycling of waste
water.

4 = . The exhaust gas and irritating noise impair peoples health


greatly. The prosperity of economy is obtained at the cost of
peoples health and the damage to environment.

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Solution
1= Some near-sighted local governments are only concerned
about economic development but pay little attention to
environmental protection, misunderstanding that economic
development says for their achievements and that environmental
protection only wastes money.

2= the manufacturers and factories should consider not only


economic profit but also social benefit. If the government and
people can join hands in solving environmental problem, we will
enjoy an azure sky and flower fragrance in the near future.

3 = government should enforce strict policies and regulations


to control the emission of carbon gases from industries .more
focus should be made on using alternative petroleum product
that are environment friendly . industries that are certified
green should be charged lower tax.

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4 = environment education message and awareness program


should be organized on television .

5 = people should select green vehicles for their transportation


requirement .

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6 = they should dump the waste properly , prefer to work in
certified industries

.7 = here are potential ways to solve these problems, or at least


reduce the effects.

. Firstly . governments need to reduce our dependence on fossil


fuels and promote alternatives. Plant-derived plastics, biodiesel,
wind power and solar power are all things that are a step in the
right direction, but governments need to enforce the limits on
CO2 emissions for the polluting industries in their countries for
these to be effective.

8 = Secoundly Also, individuals can play a part by making


lifestyle changes. People should try to buy cars with the best fuel
economy, and only use their car when really necessary. They can
also switch to energy companies that use renewable energy
rather than fossil fuels..

Finaly small things like buying energy efficient light bulbs,


turning off electricity in the house, and planting trees in the
garden can help.

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9 = If governments want to decrease the fuel usages, they
should try to generate or increase the capacity of other energy
sources such as solar or wind energy.

. For example in many countries they have produced some hybrid


cars that are working with electricity or compressed hydrogen
instead of fuel.

10 = In these methods each vehicle has a tank of hydrogen


rather than fuel. Hydrogen and oxygen are mixture with other
materials and it generates water as a clean fuel.

11 = . Or other example I heard in some restaurants in Brazil


that can also be exemplary: scientists have invented new method
to supply electricity from the bicycle rising.

For this purpose they contrive some stable bicycle and generate
electricity of restaurants with power of cycling. If anybody wants
to eat free meals, they can cycle for 20 minutes.

Conclusion

1 = = That will make our mother Earth greener and a better


place to live in.

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Health bullet point .
Introduction
1 = the biggest philosopher j. Thomson said that

“health is the vital principle of bliss.”

2 = In this world, many people are deceasing by various


types of health problem because the lack of appropriate health
education and preventive actions..

3 = = An increasing concern for many governments around the


world is the declining health of their citizens due to a poor diet.

First and for most


1 = , we can’t absorb every food value we need for our body.
So, supplementary medicine and vitamins are sometimes very
effective for us..

2 = If you take several medicines every week, you’ll become


dependent and that would interrupt the natural immune system of
your body.

3 = = People these days often have little choice but to depend


on fast food or ready meals that are high in sugar, salt and fat
due to the pressures of work.

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More and more
1 = = Firstly, many restaurants do not purchase fresh foods
since they would like to decrease the cost of meals. They do not
attend to the cleanliness and hygiene of foods.

2 = Hence, some people get poisoned from eating in


restaurants. It is particularly dangerous for children because they
are more vulnerable and can be easily ill from the poor quality of
foods.

3 = , many people eat using the same dishes and drink from the
same cups and bottles which are not even properly cleaned. If
these things are not cleaned properly, they can be extremely
dangerous for human health.

Solution
1 = , the fundamental principle to remain fit and live a healthy
life is in doing physical exercises regularly.

These exercises not only help in attaining a good physique but it


also improve the metabolism and blood circulation in the body.

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2 = When someone watches the television, s/he finds a lot of
diet or exercise programs.

3 = Some people also become interested in special diet and


physical exercise. So, they do Yoga twice a week, and take a
preventative medicine every day.

4= Yoga is not a hard and rigid physical exercise and yet helps
many people to stay in good health.

5 = On the other hand, some people believe that the best way to
stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life with a
balanced diet, regular work and leaving bad habits.

6 = That is why government should expend huge amount of


money from health budget for cure related education as well as
preventive measure.

7 = , exercise, sports, entertainment etc. can decrease the


chances to become these patients.

Making parks, playground, and cinema hall can influence people


to do exercise, which can protect the people from these intense
sickness.

8 = Lot of people try to exercise, visit doctors regularly and eat


prescribed diets for good health.

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8= They regularly go to gym or enjoy running or take a
preventative medicine and they think taking these extra
measurement to remain healthy is necessary..

9 = In order to encourage and motivate people to walk more,


one can make walking tracks covered with shades to reduce heat.

10 = . Government should also hold health awareness programs


and should emphasize the importance of walk.

11 = i would argue that although individuals must take own


responsibility for what they eat .

Governments also have a role to play as only they can supply


food .

It is only through this combination that we can improve people


‘s health.

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CONCLUSION
1 = WALKING IS BEST MEDICNE OF HEALTH BECAUSE

It is medically proven that walking is a very good exercise to


acquire right balance in body structure..Ritesh patel

2 = the first wealth is health .

3 = health and cheerfulness mutually beget each other.

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(Technology bullet point )
Normal

1 = Technology is an important thing in people’s life and it


clearly helps us to adapt with the period of development.

1 = technology ( computer, mobile,etc ) is important ,but


they can be dangerous too , so we must be careful when
we use them .

2 = the world is becoming a global village.

3 = science has revolutionised each and every field.

4 = technology is more beneficial for mass people and


introduced or introducing in current day.

5 = technology is being constantly up-graded to our self .

6 = modern technology has entered in each and every field .

9 = there is a stiff competition now a day each and every field .

10 = technological advancement is information availability and


flexibility of communication.

11 = the technological development in recent years are more


important and helpful for mass people .

12 = technology is still progressing and the development of


technology will continue .

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13 = the poin of view recent development is more accessible for
mass people .

14 = technological development are far and more impressive

15 = the major advantage is that with technology (computer ,


mobile ) you can research easily everywhere.

16 = due to advancement and technology the world has a small


a phase .

17 = with the invention use of computers ,mobile ,devices


internet and other latest technology people can now access to a
range of information very easily.

18 = i believe that in near future by (computer , mobile )


technology you can do almost everything.

19 = in near future technology will organize of all operating


system work on our mind thoughts.

2 0 = technology (computer . Mobile) it also make life more


colourful .

21 = technological knowledge is make great human life .

22 = student understanding of technological knowledge which can


improve the level of technical research and make great
contributions to the technical science.

23 = technology will change the human life .

24 = I think (mobile , computer ,etc )will never take place of


human beings .........

AND ( technology ) .........closely related to .....( human culture )

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Technology negative bullet
point.
Media and t.v internet
1 = i agree with the statement that cinema and violence affects
the young people in our society .

2 = tv and cinema today do show a large amount of violence


and violence on the streets has increased .

3 = children being more vigilant when they see violence in these


media .

4 = hacking a bank’s website and getting information .

5 = hacker terrorist use modern technology and blocking airport


system an do accident in air or road.

6 = = tv can be a great source for education if properly and


prudenty watched and also can be a negative factor for some
people if their program choice is negative .

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7 = tv is a great source of knowledge sharing but the programs
choice must be prudent to learn something from it and most of
the people fail to do so .

8 = = there are very few people who might mis-use the easily
information and can try to do harms to others .

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Technology ( positive bullet point )
Media t.v and internet
1 = media is play a vital role in our life.

2 = media is important part of everyday life .3 = media brings


us views of different people over same issues .

4 = also media brings all of us at a single platform where we


learn about multi cultures.

5 = people receive information through communication channels


like a t.v radio and news paper .

6 = many countries have regulated the freedom of media.

7 = media is play a good role in forming our country’s current


politics , sports , and other issues .

8 = it is equally important to ensure the freedom of media and


publication of unbiased news.

9 = internet and t.v as the main stream of media play a very


important role in information transformation .

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10 = the vital impact of media can not be disregarded.

For example = multi cultural cities like Toronto AND Tokyo


.............

Media plays a important role in unifying people from multi nations


.

11 = i belive media is having a tremendous impact on people ‘s


mind and perspective.

12 = ( media and tv ) a strong tool for a government to


communicate with mass people to deliver a message .

13 = they can tell us what happened in the world right away with
every impressive dynamic picture .

Example = during the world cup many people watched tv and


enjoy live telecast .

14 = media is publication of unbiased news.

15 = they present a colourful and vivid world in frond of us .

16 = internet and t.v bring about many conveniences to us .

17 = internet and t.v can transform information instantly .

19 = Technology which can keep us abreast with the world .

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20= technology which can keep us connected with the world .

21 = people can study history , culture , language and cooking


skill from some education programs on tv or internet .

22 = people can get entertainment from internet or tv .

23 = which are many and intresting and exciting electronic


games and adventures .

24 = t.v and internet have so profound influence in our life .

25 = tv is main source of information

26 = ( media and tv )channels like discovery national geography


and news channels have been successfully broad casting
education channels and they are hugely popular around the globe
( world) and do globalization.

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Population bullet point
Introduction.
1 = Today’s world faces an immense explosion of population. In
most countries, population has been increased alarmingly.

2 = Increased population is a serious problem not only in poor


or developing countries but also in developed countries.

First and for most


1 = Many countries of the world are currently experiencing
problems caused by rapidly growing populations in urban areas.

2 = , overpopulation causes starvation. More land is required to


provide accommodation to the people. Thus the land available for
farming is used for accommodation purpose.

3 = . Generally, in poor countries technological development is


less. Due to less land available for farming, starvation comes
often in this type of countries.

More and more


1 = . Government is not enough capable that can provide a
quality education to all the children. Thus it leads to
unemployment.

2 = = Crime rate is increasing due to unemployment

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. Land available in big cities is very expensive. Common or middle
class people are not in capacity of buying houses.

3 = In developing and rich countries where most of the cities


have become crowded, government faces a great challenge of
providing good public services.

4= Health services have become very poor in specially developing


countries due to overpopulation. Water, electricity and other
resources are limited available.

5 = I believe the government should be largely responsible. Firstly,


it is vital that. the state provides essential housing and healthcare
for all its citizens.

Solution
1 = There can be two possible solutions for the problem of
overpopulation. Government must provide education to the people
to limit the size of the family.

2= . Woman, who is pregnant and does not want to give birth,


should be allowed to have an abortion.

3= . Government can form some revolutionary rule like ‘one child’


policy.

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Conclusion
1 = = conclusion I will say overpopulation is a serious issue and
must need great attention to overcome.

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(crime bullet point )

Introduction
1 = Firstly, there are many crimes that jeopardize the lives of
society. Crimes like religious wars, cyber crimes, robbery, addiction
to drugs etc.

1 =, several factors have led to increases in youth crime.

2 = . As the generations pass on, the way people thoughts


regarding issues related good and bad also changed.

3 = but crime has continued to increase throughout the world,

4 = Crime is a serious and growing problem in most societies.

First and for most


1 = Over the last few decades, many cities around the world
have seen alarming increases in the levels of youth crime.

2 = Another factor is the increasing levels of poverty around the


world.

We have seen with globalization the rich get richer and the poor
get poorer,

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More and more
1 = Secondly, there are few other crimes which disturb society's
peacefulness. Crimes like terrorism, Murders, Gang rape etc. come
into this category.

These are the crimes which will have adverse effects threatening
the lives of innocent people

for these types of cases, capital punishment is first and final


punishment.

2= All these crimes start with a single person who involves many
innocent people to have a role in crime scene.

3= fear crime

they think that a fear of crime is a state of mind perpetuated by


the media.

For example, we are constantly bombarded with negative news


stories about crime and violence on our streets.

Solution of reduce crime


1= Governments should increase the numbers of police in local
communities and more ‘neighbourhood watch’ schemes should be
encouraged, both of which increase safety and deter crime

2 = The media should also be encouraged to present more


positive stories in the news .

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For example = divya bhaskar is issue no negative news in every
day news paper.

3 = = the government could focus its resources on the causes of


crime, which would lead to less crime in the future.

4 =governments must continue to research the various methods


of crime reduction to ensure effective policies are in place.

Conclusion
1 = Despite the well-known saying that goes "an eye for an
eye", punishing murder with another murder still remains by no
means justifiable

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(traditional vs international bullet poin

traditional
1 = traditional skill is the heritage from our ancestor. So we
have responsibilities to take care for it. And country have their
own uniqueness.

2 = world has many seen many kinds of ...( music , food etc
.)

3 = (Music , food etc. )....... has dissimilarity function for every


region in the

world.

4 = ( music , food etc .) ... identify country culture .

5 = (music , food etc ) delivering our emotion.

6 = (music , food etc ) delivering our feeling .

7 = it is the duty of citizens of a national to preserve the value


of their national costume and traditional .

8= i still do not believe that national costume or traditional

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(dresses )have lost their importance.

9= traditional uses = occasions , like marriage and festival


dancing program , culture festival ,ets,

10 = india is a different (music , food etc ,) and culture


country and change (music , food etc ,) state to state . and
each (music, food etc ) connected each emotion

11 = (music, food etc ) also have aim to differentiae among


many countres or reions.

for example =

these (music, food etc ) have become (india) culture identify.

12 = traditional (only music) as a medium for communication


eith people.

13 = traditional (music ) more significant than the internatinal


.

14 = some people argue that the traditional experience shouldn't


be saved.

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International
1 = now a day people often (use ) international ( food music
,ets )

2 =people mostly use international (music-food ,ets ) only for


entertainment time

3 =AS the place of life is increasing people are avoiding to (


wear).traditional (dresses ) in their routine.

4 =they still are a source of inspiration to modern fashion and


trends and have maintained their importance.

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Traditional and international.
1 = Globalization and information technologies made wonderful
changes in ........(music , food . etc )

2 = which is traditional skills can combine with technology and


traditional skills still have great position in order to technological
development.

3 = The development of technology is huge advantages for


‘traditional skills’.

Using the technology we can improve these skills and while


trying to introduce new innovations to combine technology and
traditional skills.

For example = . For instance, ‘hand art painting’ is one of


traditional skills, people can make a new creation by using
technology touching use ‘Photoshop’.

And other example is =

people wear similar clothes, rather than traditional costumes, and


eat from the same types of restaurants such as KFC and MAC
DONALD and their branches are present all over the world.

Sanjeev kapoor is also globalized in food field

. they cook international and traditional food like Italian dhosa


, chaines dabeli , etc ,

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( Traffic bullet point )

Introduction
1= Traffic problem becomes the biggest concern of many
countries in the world, not only because of the environmental
pollution caused by the exhaust gas and irritating noise..

2 = Traffic congestion has been becoming a major social problem


not only in developed cities but also in third world's town.

First and for most


1= Transportation is one of the human tools of development.

2 = . Quality of transportation of individuals and goods affects


strongly on economic growth.

3 = the sales of private cars increase by 5,000 every month.

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Solution
1 = Those problems are economical, environmental and social
problems.
Most of the experts in field of ‘Urban Planning and
Transportation’ admit that decreasing number of private cars
is the best effective way to solve all the previously
mentioned problems.

2= There are many ideas which can help reduce private cars in
the streets like public transportation, car pooling, and encouraging
bicycles as transport modes.

3 = These actions can be: improving public transportation,


providing discount on bicycles, giving priority to public
transportation through special bus lanes and raising fuel prices
etc.

4 = people argues that the public transport system increase the


traveling time and give cold comfort to commuters.

5 = with the common transport system is the best option to


bring down city traffic clogging. Buses and trams create less
traffic jam by its slow moving nature.

6 = With the passage of time from 20 century till now


transportation demands and needs have been greatly increased.

Dramatic increase of numbers of cars especially in last three or


four decades forces all states to establish bridges, tunnels,
highways etc.

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These different kinds of infrastructures and superstructures
create less traffic

7 = Moreover, avoiding unnecessary overtaking and similar


driving activities come about by use of common traffic vehicles.

8 = a government should encourage the use of public transport


and limit the ownership of private cars. Due to the economic
development, many citizens can afford a private car.

Conclusion
1 = = That will make our mother Earth greener and a better
place to live in.

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