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RINGKASAN
The errors of L2 learners are much influenced by their L1. they (errors) were the result of
interference in the learning of a second language from the habits of the first language.
Corrective Feedback (CF) does not always provide the correct form but it also forces
learners to utilize their own resources in constructing a reformulation. Direct feedbacks do
not figure out the actual performance of students’ comprehension in correcting the errors
because teachers have provided the correct one. Teachers have to invite students to be
active finding the correct one from their errors they produce
CHAPTER I
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INTRODUCTION
Errors are flawed side of learner speech or writing (Dulay, Burt, and
Krashen 1982). This occurs because errors deviate from some selected norm of
mature language performance (Dulay, Burt, and Krashen 1982). Since spoken and
written are the productive knowledge made by second language learners, the
much influenced by their L1. It is in line with the statement stated by Corder
(1967) saying that they (errors) were the result of interference in the learning of a
second language from the habits of the first language. Large corpora of errors
consistently indicate that lexical errors are the most common among second
(Hemchua, and Schmitt. 2006). This article only focuses on formal errors which
are categorized into (1) formal misselection; involving similar lexical forms
(visual and sound similarity), (2) misformation: not existing in the L2, (3)
speaking and writing. The examples of errors are taken without regarding the level
almost errors are made by the beginners because of some logical reasons such as
type), (b) The setting of their sit is male and female (vowel-based type), (c)
school are very less (calque), (b) Then, absent the students one by one
3) Distortion: (a) Teachers and students fell dissatisfaction with it
(overinclusion), (b) It can help the teacher to maximal when lern the material
(misselection and omission), (c) The condition of classroom is quite too because
It is not doubtful that second language learners acquire feedback from their
teachers to improve their second language competence. Teachers only give feedback on
students’ productive knowledge (spoken and written). As giving a corrective feedback has
been debatable for many years among the researchers, the most important of giving of
feedback should be taken into account. It is not dealing whether the errors must be
corrected or not, but what to correct and how to correct are more prominently regarded. It
is not wise to let students do the errors without correcting their errors. Some people who
encounter that errors must not be corrected should consider the better treatment to solve the
residence, English has invited many researchers to investigate EFL issues. One of the issue
is how to facilitate English learners to be good at EFL writing due to the fact that EFL
writing is difficult for most EFL learners. Writing is not only difficult for most people but
also for some successful writers (Taylor, 2009). In addition, Warburton (2006) argues that
so-called writer’s block (a total inability to write anything at all). In short, writing is
difficult to most people, it does not matter what language is used. Moreover, using a
foreign language like English in writing leads EFL learners more challenging effort than
using L1 for most learners where English is not the official language.
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Although English is not the official language where the learners live and study,
the necessity of using English in high education, like university level, plays an important
role. It indicates that English has an important factor in all levels of education, particularly
university level. Anyone who wants to study in the university generally will be required to
be able to write particular essays using English (Shiach, 2009; Warburton, 2006; Weigle,
2009; McMillan & Weyers, 2010; Greetham, 2001). An essay is commonly defined as a
short piece of writing that discusses, describes or analyzes one topic. It can tell a subject
directly or indirectly, seriously or humorously. It can also describe personal idea, or report
information. Unfortunately, Guenette (2007) argues in writing life agendas; many students
Zemach and Rumisek (2003) mention the three main part of an essay: (1)
introduction which explains the topic with general ideas with a thesis statement that gives
the main idea; (2) the body which explains and supports the thesis statement; and (3) the
conclusion that summarizes or restates the thesis and the supporting ideas of the essay.
Lewis (2008) defines errors as anything that sounds wrong which occurs when
students communicate in more complicated language. Error types then can be classified
into: (1) errors of omission, (2) errors of overuse, (3) errors of fact, (4) errors of form, (5)
errors of clarity, (6) socio-cultural errors, (7) discourse level errors, (8) local and global
errors. Meanwhile, Heaton (1991) argues the test writers in elementary level will be treated
far more tolerant than intermediate and advanced levels in treating errors. As the
intermediate and advanced learners, the university students in English Department are
expected to produce a good quality in writing an essay by eliminating those errors based on
Is the long-term effect is more important than the current (short-term effect) of
providing CF?
significance of this study is that EFL teachers have the appropriate type of corrective
feedback in EFL for university students. The output of this study gives fruitfully
information on how to improve students’ quality through direct and indirect corrective
feedback. Then, the results of this study also show the recommended types of WCF that are
study. There are three key terms used in study: (1) Perception, (2) Lexical error, (3) teacher
feedback,
CHAPTER II
Theoretical Background
Lewis (2008) defines errors as anything that sounds wrong which occurs when
students communicate in more complicated language. Error types then can be classified
into: (1) errors of omission, (2) errors of overuse, (3) errors of fact, (4) errors of form, (5)
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errors of clarity, (6) socio-cultural errors, (7) discourse level errors, (8) local and global
errors. Meanwhile, Heaton (1991) argues the test writers in elementary level will be treated
far more tolerant than intermediate and advanced levels in treating errors. There are two
lexical errors; (1) formal errors, and (2) semantics errors (Hemchua, and Schmitt. 2006).
This article only focuses on formal errors which are categorized into (1) formal
misselection; involving similar lexical forms (visual and sound similarity), (2)
misformation: not existing in the L2, (3) distortion: misapplication of the target language
or misspelling. It is strongly believed that the debate between two contradictory ideas “To
correct or not correct” arrives to the appropriate statement saying what to correct and how
to correct”. Yet, it is out of the question to correct all students’ errors. Teachers have to
focus on a certain aspect of language that must be corrected such as lexical, grammar,
semantic errors and etc. Giving corrective feedback should consider the actual students’
needs to improve their L2. In addition, different errors have different treatment based on
the learners’ proficiency. CF functions are not to give too much burden in correcting, and
every single error must not be corrected since there is no much time for teachers to correct
it. On the other hand, students would be very uncomfortable and unmotivated to face that
they have many errors in their writing and speaking. The other aspect which must be
research. The previous studies only emphasize on the effectiveness of CF and how it is
consistently.
Based on the several types of corrective feedbacks, the recent studies have
performed direct corrective feedback in their study (Ahmadi, et al., 2012; Bitchener, et
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al.,2005; Bitchener, 2008; Bitchener & Knoch, 2008, 2009, 2010; Chandler, 2003; Eslami,
2014; Farid &Samad, 2012; Hosseiny, 2014; Jamalinesari et al, 2014; Khanlarzadeh &
Nemati, 2016; Maleki & Eslami, 2013; Mirzaii & Aliabadi, 2013; Santos, et al., 2010;
Shintani & Ellis, 2013; Storch & Wiggleswort, 2010; van Beuningen, 2012; Vyatkina,
2010). Some other recent studies have also frequently used indirect corrective feedback in
examining the value of written corrective feedback on ESL and EFL writing (Ahmadi, et
al., 2012; Alhumidi, 2016; Bitchener et al.,2005; Bitchener, 2008; Bitchener & Knoch,
2008, 2009, 2010; Eslami, 2014; Hosseiny, 2014; Jamalinesari et al, 2014; Maleki &
Eslami, 2013; Mirzaii & Aliabadi, 2013; Soori, et al., 2011; Storch & Wiggleswort, 2010;
The next corrective feedback used in the previous research were meta-linguistic
corrective feedback (AbuSeileek & Abualsha’r, 2014; Bitchener & Knoch, 2010;
Bitchener, 2008; Ebadi, 2014; Farid & Samad, 2012; Kang & Han, 2015; Li, 2010;
Shintani & Ellis, 2013), focused and unfocused corrective feedback (Afraz & Ghaemi,
2012; Ellis, et al., 2008; Fazilatfar, et al., 2014; Frear & Chiu, 2015; Kao, 2013;),
conference (Tootkaboni & Khatib, 2013 ), oral meta-linguistic (Farid & Samad, 2012),
uncoded (Ahmadi et al, 2012; Vyatkina, 2010). The other types of corrective feedback were
also introduced; peer computer-mediated, recast, and deletions and mark insertion
(AbuSeileek & Abualsha’r, 2014), intensive and extensive focus on form (Rahimpoor et al,
2012), dynamic corrective feedback (Evan et al, 2011), CFT / collaborated Feedback Task
Involving learners in the context of ESL and EFL, the recent studies assume that
written corrective feedback is worthwhile for both ESL (Bitchener, et al.,2005; Bitchener,
2008; Bitchener & Knoch, 2008, 2009, 2010; Chandler, 2003; Evan, et al., 2011; Fazilatfar,
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et al., 2014; Grami, 2012; Kao, 2013; Santos, et al., 2010; Storch & Wiggleswort, 2010;
Shintani & Ellis, 2013; van Beuningen, 2012; Vyatkina, 2010) and EFL (AbuSeileek &
Abualsha’r, 2014; Ahmadi, et al., 2012; Ebadi, 2014; Ellis, et al., 2008; Eslami, 2013,
2014; Mirzaii & Aliabadi, 2013; Frear & Chiu, 2015; Hosseiny, 2014; Jamalinesari et al,
2014; Maleki & Khanlardazeh & Nemati, 2016; Rahimpoor, et al., 2012; Sanavi & Nemati,
2014; Soori, et al., 2011;Tootkaboni & Khatib, 2013) writing. In the context of ESL / EFL,
the participant from the same L1 background generally make the same error categories e.g.
the use tense, article, countable and uncountable nouns, etc. So, a researcher could
determine what errors categories should be given. On the other hand, having learners from
the different L1 background needs some consideration because of the varied linguistic
system of each language. Let’s compare in ESL/EFL writing between learners from French
and Dutch as L1 background and learners from Chinese, Japanese, and Indonesian.
The current studies also indicate that the group with corrective feedback generally
outperformed the group without corrective feedback (Ellis, et al., 2008; Ebadi, 2014;
Maleki & Eslami, 2013; Khanlazardeh & Nemati, 2016; Jamalinesari, et al., 2015;
Hooseiny, 2014; Frear & Chiu, 2015; Evan, et al., 2011; Bitchener and Knoch, 2008, 2009;
Bitchener, 2008). On the other hand, some studies report certain type of corrective
feedback is more effective than other under certain condition. For example, Li (2010) find
that the implicit feedback is better than explicit. In addition, Mirzaii and Aliabadi (2013)
report direct corrective feedback was more effective than indirect one in the context of
genre-based instruction on letters of job application. The similar finding was discovered by
Tootkaboni, et al. (2014) showing a significance of superior of direct feedback than other
for short term effect, but indirect feedback is significant for long term effect. By using
comprehensive error correction, van Beuningen, et al. (2012) report only direct CF resulted
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in grammatical accuracy gains in new writing and the pupil’s nongrammatical accuracy
benefited most in indirect CF. In contrary, in their study Jamalinesari, et al. (2015) indicate
that the class with indirect feedback improved better compared to the class with direct one.
The similar results argue the indirect feedback group outperformed the direct feedback
group on both immediate post-test and delayed post test (Eslami, 2014).
Studies which didn’t compare two of corrective feedbacks show that all type of
DCF were effective but types of feedback can be ranked in term of their importance (Farid
and Samad, 2012). With different feedback, Shintani and Ellis (2013) find meta-linguistic
helped learner L2 explicit knowledge but the effect is not so long and perhaps there is not
any effect. Vyatkina (2010) finds that all groups improved accuracy in redrafting. DCF
results better when selected errors were applied, but there is not any significant for overall
errors. Similarly, Sanavi and Nemati (2014) find that reformulation is the most effective
CF. Moreover, Kao (2013) notes that direct and meta-linguistics are effective to accurately
use of English article for long term. Other finding reports that blogs and portfolios need to
be integrated into writing in order to secure better benefit from writing practice in EFL
context (Arslan, 2014). Both overt and covert problems can be recognized spontaneously
by learners and incorporated them in their revision (Hanaoka & Izuni, 2012)
Moreover, the recent research which only apply one type of corrective feedbacks
has informed the similar findings. Ahmadi, et al. (2012) declare that error feedbacks help
learner to the better writing. This finding is supported by Santos, et al. (2010) stating WCF
makes positive effect in writing. Specifically, Shintani and Ellis (2013) show that meta-
linguistic helped learner L2 explicit knowledge for the short effect. Additionally, Rassaei
and Moinzadeh (2010) note metalinguistic feedback was more effective than recast but
recast had more stable and enduring effect. Afras & Ghaemi (2012) argue that the positive
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effect of treatment given for the learners occurs after treatment. In addition, Fazilatfar, et
al. (2014) find the significant gain for both syntactical and lexical complexity in
experimental group. Learners thought that error correction was useful in language learning
process (Incecay & Dollar, 2011). Lastly, Alhumidi & Uba (2016) state that indirect is
categories. Some studies use focused corrective feedback; simple past tense and the
definite article (Bitchener et al.2005; Bitchener and Knoch, 2008a, 2008b; Bitchener and
Knoch, 2010). It is called focused WCF because there are only one or two linguistic
twenty-three types of error category in examining ESL writing. L2 writing teachers should
be alert what linguistic features are more treatable but less teachable since it will be more
effective to give the corrective feedback which relate to L2 learners’ prior knowledge. For
example, giving corrective feedback on the use of articles in writing for elementary
students is less teachable. This is done to ensure the effectiveness of WCF which
Current studies also concern on the language features targeted which serve
learners to acquire corrective feedback like preposition (Ajmi, 2015; Bitchener et al, 2005),
grammatical errors (Chandler, 2003; Khanlardazeh & Nemati, 2016) and nongrammatical
errors (Chandler, 2003; ), spelling errors (Alhumidi &Uba, 2016), the English article
system (Bitchener & Knoch, 2008, 2009, 2010; Bitchener, 2008; Bitchener et al, 2005;
Ellis et al, 2008; Hosseiny, 2014; Shintani & Ellis, 2013; Soori, et al., 2011; van
Beuningen, et al., 2012;), the past simple tense (Bitchener, et al., 2005; Eslami, 2014;
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Maleki & Eslami, 2013), syntactic and lexical complexity (Fazilatfar, et al., 2014; Storch &
Wigglesworth, 2010), verbs (Frear & Chiu, 2015; Afraz & Ghaemi, 2012).
To make sure the positive outcome of written corrective feedback, teachers must
select certain language features targeted (the use of articles, verb tense, spelling etc) that
will be corrected. Otherwise, it will be very hard for the them to correct every error in
writing. Moreover, learners will be very frustrated because there are many errors shown by
their teachers. Therefore, teachers should not correct all students’ errors, but should only
correct those errors which are deemed necessary to correct (Alhumidi & Uba, 2016).
students progress in self-editing. In fact, teachers commonly spend much time only for
correcting errors relating to local aspects (vocabulary, language use, and mechanics) where
they do not consider the improvement of other aspects of writing such as content and
organization. Consequently, selecting error that will be corrected is finely needed by the
learners where every learner has the various inappropriate use of language based on the
level of proficiency. According to Kennedy (2010), the errors made by each proficiency
group and type of feedback teacher given indicate provision of finely tuned corrective
Most previous studies show that giving different type of corrective feedback for
certain level of learner’s proficiency is worthy to note. The studies using learners with low
proficiency have reported different findings. By involving the low level (Dutch Secondary
school students with limited language proficiency). Van Beuningen, et al. (2013) obtain
that direct corrective feedback is more effective than indirect corrective feedback for
grammatical accuracy while indirect corrective feedback is more powerful than direct
corrective feedback for nongrammatical accuracy. In addition, Eslami (2014) finds that
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indirect corrective feedback group outperformed direct corrective feedback group in using
simple past tense. Both direct and indirect corrective feedback belonged to the low
intermediate EFL students in Iran. Similarly, Shintani and Ellis (2013) claim that
metalinguistic explanation feedback is better than direct corrective feedback for low-
intermediate ESL students. The students gain accuracy and develop L2 explicit knowledge
but the effect is not durable. However, direct corrective feedback combined with other
types of feedback contribute positive effect in using English articles for low-intermediate
interesting to note that low proficiency students were encouraged in learning independently
after class and they got much improvement (Li & Li, 2012). Those claims above might be
the gap for other research to examine the most appropriate type of feedback that can be
As stated above, previous research argue the certain feedback is more effective
than others for low proficiency learner, but how if the studies involve intermediate
proficiency learners? The study run by Alhumidi and Uba (2013) emerge that students
provided by indirect corrective feedback is better than those with direct corrective
feedback in spelling errors. Here, Alhumidi and Uba (2013) utilize Arabic course at
intermediate level students as the sample of their study. The findings are in line with study
significant effect on writing a composition for intermediate level. The similar argument
claimed by Li and Hegelheimer (2013) indicates that learners may conduct self-editing
finds that students who got treatment with focused meta-linguistic corrective feedback
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Abualsha’r (2014) point out that recast feedback group result better writing than
metalinguistic feedback one, but both treatment outperform the control group. The similar
finding reveals that intermediate level students gains more language accuracy when peer
In contrast, Santos, et al. (2010) show error correction feedback is more effective
than reformulation feedback. Interestingly, Hosseiny (2014) claims that direct corrective
feedback has the same significant effect with indirect corrective feedback for intermediate
level students. This finding corresponds with Ellis, et al. (2008) which show that focused
and unfocused CF have similar effect for the learners with intermediate level of
proficiency.
Through the current issues above, it can be stated that indirect corrective feedback
is more effective than direct corrective feedback for intermediate level. Some types of
corrective feedback, such as focused meta-linguistic CF, recast, and negotiated feedback
Both learners from low and medium proficiency level believe that written
corrective feedbacks provided by teacher are very valuable in improving students’ quality
in EFL/ ESL writing. However, previous studies also examine the effect of written
corrective feedback for high proficiency level (advanced level). Providing corrective
feedback for learners with high proficiency level, Farid and Samad (2012) declare that
direct corrective feedback is appropriate to show the learners’ use verbs. This finding is
supported by Mirzaii and Aliabadi (2013) who say that direct corrective feedback is better
than indirect corrective feedback in the context of genre-based instruction. Chandler (2003)
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also finds that undergraduates with different L1 produce better using direct corrective
feedback than indirect corrective feedback relating to grammatical accuracy, but indirect
accuracy. The other study also finds that direct corrective feedback combined with written
and conference contributes significantly in using simple past tense and English articles on
ESL writing (Bitchener, et al., 2005). Evan, et al. (2010) argue that written corrective
feedback is very helpful for experienced and well-educated L2 practitioners. Later, Li, et
al. (2015) also claim automated writing evaluation as corrective feedback is helpful to
Moreover, Johnson (2012) addresses that high level leaners believe that strategies
feedback. Additionally, Li (2010) finds that using meta-analysis shows the following
results; (1) implicit feedback outperforms explicit feedback, (2) there is sustained effect,
(3) treatment conducted in laboratory is better than conducted in class, (4) the short effect
is gained than longer one, (5) It is better for EFL writing than ESL writing. In sum, direct
corrective feedback is also preferred by high proficiency learners since it guides them in
feedback for different proficiency levels. Tootkaboni (2014) pinpoints out; (1) indirect
corrective feedback is more powerful than direct corrective feedback for long term-effect,
(2) direct corrective feedback is more superior than indirect corrective feedback when the
long term-effect is targeted, (3) the effect significantly occurs for three linguistic targeted
(simple present, articles, and prepositions). By using Blogs and Portfolios, Arslan (2014)
The previous studies indicate that corrective feedback is worthwhile, not only for
the high proficiency L2 learners but also low one in their writing (Bruton, 2007; Bitchener
et al, 2005; Bitchener and Knoch, 2008; Bitchener and Knoch, 2010; Chandler, 2003;
Ferris, et al., 2003; van Beuningen, et al., 2012). Different level of proficiency causes the
various errors produced by the EFL learners. It needs to remember that EFL writer acquires
the mastery of not only of grammatical and rhetorical devices but also conceptual and
written corrective feedback, language features targeted, and learner’s proficiency level), it
can be seen that written corrective feedback leads two big groups. First, the groups agree
with corrective feedback and the other does not. Many studies on corrective feedback have
been conducted since it emerged in 1980s and it has been a controversial issue up to now
whether it contributes positive or negative effects for EFL and ESL learners. It leads to a
positive effect because corrective feedback can improve the language gains (Bitchener et
al.,2005; Bitchener, 2008; Bitchener & Knoch, 2008, 2009, 2010; Chandler, 2003; Evan et
al, 2011; Fazilatfar et al, 2014; Kao, 2013; Grami, 2012; Shintani & Ellis, 2013; Santos et
al, 2010; Storch & Wiggleswort, 2010; van Beuningen, et al., 2012; Vyatkina, 2010) and
EFL (AbuSeileek & Abualsha’r, 2014; Ahmadi et al, 2012; Ajmi, 2015; Ebadi, 2014; Ellis,
et al., 2008; Eslami, 2014; Evans, et al., 2010; Frear & Chiu, 2015; Hosseiny, 2014;
Jamalinesari, et al., 2014; Khanlardazeh & Nemati, 2016; Lee, 2007, 2008, 2009;
Lundstrom & Baker, 2009; Maleki & Eslami, 2013; Mirzaii & Aliabadi, 2013;
Montgomery & Baker, 2007; Rahimpoor, et al., 2012; Soori et al, 2011; Sanavi & Nemati,
2014; Tootkaboni & Khatib, 2013; Vasquez & Harvey, 2010). To test their arguments,
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those studies have examined the effect of written corrective feedback on EFL/ESL writing
L2 learners’ writing have been carried out (Bitchener, et al., 2005; Bitchener, 2008;
Bitchener & Knoch, 2008, 2009, 2010; Bruton, 2007, 2009; Chandler, 2003; Evans, et al.,
2010; Lundstrom & Baker, 2009; Montgomery & Baker, 2007; van Beuningen, et al.,
2013; Vasquez & Harvey, 2010;). The other studies also indicate that by having WCF, L2
learners not only gain the accuracy on one writing occasion but also they can keep the
accuracy on the other similar occasion (Bitchener, et al., 2005; Bitchener, 2008; Bitchener
& Knoch, 2008, 2009, 2010; van Beuningen, et al., 2013). For example, Maleki and Eslami
(2013) show students with written corrective feedback outperformed than those without
corrective feedback. With the same results, Fazilatfar, et al. (2014) report learners get a
fruitful contribution in syntactic and lexical complexity. The students notice mainly lexical
problems at the writing stage but could not only find a new solution to this problem in the
model provided (Esteban & Larios, 2010). Spelling errors is not significant because the
existence of Microsoft word 2007 spell checker (Bestgen & Granger, 2011). Furthermore,
L2 learners and their acquisition are reached by effective written corrective feedback
(Bitchener, 2012).
Moreover, examining grammatical and lexical errors, Chandler (2003) found that
the direct corrective feedback on direct correction and simple underlining of errors are
significantly superior to describe the type of error. Then, Chandler (2003) concludes that
students feel that they learn more from self-correction, and simple underlining of errors
From the recent studies, it can be considerably inferred that most researchers
judge the ESL/EFL writing quality from the aspect of linguistic features while
nongrammatical aspects are frequently ignored. To bridge the gap between teacher
feedback and actual student needs, several studies have criticized that partial claim about
writing quality. Jonsson (2012) shows utility is not only key feature for students using
feedback, but it is important to see lack of strategies and understanding. Teachers think that
suggest that they need not only corrective feedback but also more comments from the
teachers about their writing (see Lee, 2008a, 2008b, 2008c; Montgomery & Baker, 2007;
Lundstrom & Baker, 2009; Vasquez & Harvey, 2010; Evans, et al., 2010). Frequent errors
reasons (Evans, et al., 2010). So, we need more longitudinal naturalistic studies, adopting
both cognitive and socio-cultural SLA frameworks to investigate the role of feedback and
The other studies attempt to explore the other aspects of writing. They examine
students’ response and teacher’s belief of WCF. Frequently, feedback learner’s desire is
markedly different from what learners receive (Mustafa, 2012). Therefore, investigating
other components of WCF shows that teachers’ beliefs are very prominent in conducting
WCF (Lee, 2008; 2009). However, there are still some gaps between teachers’ beliefs and
written feedback practice. For example, teachers mark errors comprehensively although
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selective marking is preferred (see Lee, 2008). Han and Hyland (2015) add teachers are
Furthermore, Rummel and Bitchener (2015) indicate that beliefs might have
impacted on the extent to which Lao students improve their accuracy since the student
receiving their preference type of feedback were more successful at eliminating the target
errors than the one who did not. The use of WCF is useful but formal knowledge of
language rules played a limited and sometimes even counterproductive role in their self-
editing and composing. Lundstrom and Baker (2009) find out that in low proficiency who
give feedback made more gains than those in high proficiency levels. This is supported by
Yang and Meng (2013) saying that the less-proficient students gain improvement more
during text revision than the more-proficient students did after online training on error
correction. Different opinion argues that recent research only focuses to use “one off”
treatment, and only provided certain limited errors, but avoid the goal and attitudes to the
feedback belonged to the learners (Storch, 2010). William (2012) argues corrective
feedback should encourage cognitive processes and interactive moves to promote language
acquisition.
separated. The relationship between teachers’ self assessment and student perceptions of
teacher-written feedback is very strong (Montgomery & Baker, 2007). Miao, et al. (2006)
add students applied feedback given by their teacher and peer feedback to better their
writing, but feedback given by the teacher was preferred by the students which caused the
greater improvement in writing. The other opinion says that the tutor offered suggestions
for overcoming time constraint, motivation, and fear of making mistakes (Guenette, 2012).
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More support was given, the tutor had more learning opportunities, but then there were
fewer opportunities for the tutee, and vise versa (Topping, et al., 2013). The problem is that
most teachers are not totally aware of local and global issues (Montgomery & Baker, 2007;
Lee, 2007). Their arguments are in line with Mahmud’s (2016) which says that the teachers
were unaware of the available WCF types to provide in the teaching of ESL writing.
Additionally, many teachers focus to give corrective feedback on local aspects (language
use, vocabulary, and mechanic) while global aspects (content and organization) do not get
much attention.
writing has been made by Truscott (2001) saying error correcting is not good if it only
emphasizes on grammar errors, even though it can be given by selecting some certain types
of grammar targets. It is easy to claim that learners’ writing ability improves because
learners merely can revise their subsequent writing after having teacher’s written corrective
feedback. Truscott & Hsu (2008) conclude that “improvements made during revision are not
Different statement reveals that grammar instruction has enabled the transfer of learned
Other similar studies argue that corrective feedback do not improve L2 learners’
2015). Similarly, the improvement during revision in the first draft does not guarantee that
L2 learner will do better on the subsequent writing. It is not very fair to focus on error to
see the quality of L2 learners’ writing (Truscott & Hsu, 2008; Bruton, 2007).
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it does not reveal language gains”. Bruton (2007) reports there are no relations between the
second errors and the errors corrected in the first writing made by the learner. It is
concluded that the effect of correction on subsequent writing is not proved since the errors
in the second draft are not related to the errors corrected in the first draft.
someone passes the writing course or not, but also in contributing to the learner’s language
gains. Without a concern to the role of corrective feedback given by the teachers or
lecturers, the function of corrective feedback is only used to pass writing examination. In
investigating the role of corrective feedback in writing thesis, Kumar and Stracke (2011)
remind the crucial role of feedback in postgraduate thesis examination practice. Kumar and
Stracke (2011) state that “without feedback, there is no little impetus for the candidate to
progress, to close the gap between current and desired performance, and to attain the level
CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
examples both in speaking and writing. The examples of errors are taken without regarding
the level of L2 learners where they are beginners, intermediate and advanced. Frequently,
almost errors are made by the beginners because of some logical reasons such as their
linguistic knowledge and competence. Here are some examples of 1) Formal misselection:
(a) They haven’t difficultness again (suffix type), (b) The setting of their sit is male and
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female (vowel-based type), (c) Teachers and students fell dissatiafaction with it
(consonant-based type). 2) Misformation: (a) The third reason is the fasilities (coinage) in
this school are very less (calque), (b) Then, absent the students one by one 3) Distortion:
(a) Teachers and students fell dissatisfaction with it (overinclusion), (b) It can help the
teacher to maximal when lern the material (misselection and omission), (c) The condition
of classroom is quite too because the classroom is far from the road (misordering)
It is not doubtful that second language learners acquire feedback from their
teachers to improve their second language competence. Teachers only give feedback on
students’ productive knowledge (spoken and written). As giving a corrective feedback has
been debatable for many years among the researchers, the most important of giving of
feedback should be taken into account. It is not dealing whether the errors must be
corrected or not, but what to correct and how to correct are more prominently regarded. It
is not wise to let students do the errors without correcting their errors.
A. Research Design
examples both in speaking and writing. The examples of errors are taken without regarding
the level of L2 learners where they are beginners, intermediate and advanced. Frequently,
almost errors are made by the beginners because of some logical reasons such as their
linguistic knowledge and competence. Here are some examples of 1) Formal misselection:
(a) They haven’t difficultness again (suffix type), (b) The setting of their sit is male and
female (vowel-based type), (c) Teachers and students fell dissatiafaction with it
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(consonant-based type). 2) Misformation: (a) The third reason is the fasilities (coinage) in
this school are very less (calque), (b) Then, absent the students one by one 3) Distortion:
(a) Teachers and students fell dissatisfaction with it (overinclusion), (b) It can help the
teacher to maximal when lern the material (misselection and omission), (c) The condition
of classroom is quite too because the classroom is far from the road (misordering) It is not
doubtful that second language learners acquire feedback from their teachers to improve
their second language competence. Teachers only give feedback on students’ productive
knowledge (spoken and written). As giving a corrective feedback has been debatable for
many years among the researchers, the most important of giving of feedback should be
taken into account. It is not dealing whether the errors must be corrected or not, but what to
It is not wise to let students do the errors without correcting their errors. Some
people who encounter that errors must not be corrected should consider the better
treatment to solve the problem and not abandon it without any alternative solution.
B. Participant
This study was conducted in STIKES Surabaya students who were from first
semester which consisted of two classes (class A to B). There were 40 students from A
class, 40 students from B class. Therefore, the participant totally were 80 students.
C. Instruments
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video and whap up messages. Video was the final task given by the lecturer and their
D. Data Collection
To ensure the feasibility of direct and indirect corrective feedback, those methods
were given to the students’ essays in the preliminary study. The researcher provided DCF
and ICF to 17 students. The researcher made two groups of writing class; DCF class and
ICF class. DCF class consisted of 8 students and they were awarded DCF and ICF class
consisted of 9 students and they were given ICF. These students wrote two topics: (1) A
horrible experience which I have experienced, and (2) A place that is special to me. The
students were given 60 minutes to finish writing. The results indicated that most students
could comprehend how to revise based on both direct and indirect corrective feedback.
E. Data Analysis
CHAPTER IV
DISCUSSION
Perhaps, many learners are aware that their production in writing and speaking are
not always accepted by the native speakers’ understanding or advanced English users. The
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lack of vocabulary knowledge is the reason why it happens. Many of learners formulate
their production of second language which is dominantly affected by their first language.
The affection is unavoidable since it is easier to adopt the L1 patterns into L2.
623 L2. For beginner level, errors are conducted without consideration that they have made
errors, but for intermediate and advanced level, the errors occur because of the careless of
using L2. It means that intermediate and advanced level students should think whether
their sentences or utterances are correct or not. It seems very hard to do this on speaking
Direct feedback is the most preferable type of feedback that both students and
teachers like. Yet, it does not contribute significantly in the future. It indicates that the
effect of direct feedback merely emerges in short-term quality. Teachers have to check
whether their feedback improve the students’ quality in acquiring L2 in the future meaning
the long-term effect. Later, the teachers’ belief has also important rule. Feedback strategies
cannot work without teachers’ beliefs that the strategies can work or their readiness to
innovate in their own classroom (Lee, 2011) This article suggests that in giving corrective
feedback a teacher has to considered three important things; (1) consistency, (2) long-term
effect, (3) individual student record of errors, (4) possible solution. To gain long-term
effect of corrective feedback, a teacher must be consistent in what area the feedback should
example(s), is the best type of written CF for long-term accuracy (Bitchener and Ute.
2010). Finally, the long term effect can be evaluated if a teacher is able to identify,
categorize, find the best solution, and check whether the same errors which have been
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corrected still occur in the future (Does he/she still make the same errors in the future or
not).
1. A: Do you mind if I open the door? It’s very hot here B: Oh, yes. Sure. The
correct reply is “No, I don’t / No problem” Frequently the request should be replied by the
positive form of phrase or sentence. B assumes that A wants to open the door and needs B’s
permission, so B simply responses with showing an agreement. I have tested many times
this request on my speaking class, and I found most students replied my request with the
positive one for examples, Bolehkah saya…, Apakah boleh saya…, and these two sentences
boleh….
The best correction to this error probably can be given by showing some other
exceptions of English request using “mind”, for examples would you mind shutting the
door please!
It is a misselection error where the expected response is not what the request
wants. The possible solution for this error above is by showing some exceptions of
replying request in English which explain that some requests should be replied with
expression ‘No’ to show the acceptations. A teacher has to use the request using ‘Do you
mind… or Would you mind if...’ which make students accustomed with this expression.
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2. Where do you from? / Where are you from? The correct question is (Where
have you been) Tense in English has a very crucial in determine the meaning of an
utterance. In some occasion, Indonesian L2 learners only use their Indonesian form into No
if I Open the door? B: Yes, of course √ 2 Where are you from? √ 3 I breakfast at 6 in the
625 English without regarding the sense of sentence in the target language (English). Their
These question is merely derived from L1 (1)“Dari mana kamu? Kok lama tidak
kelihatan?, (2) Anda dari mana? Saya tunggu ga datang-datang. This error is categorized
as misselection error. The question maker selects an inappropriate way to get the
information. The appropriate way to solve this error is by showing the function of every
tense in English. When students study present perfect, they have to be told the different
between ‘Where have you been?’ and ‘Where are from?’. 3. I breakfast at 6 in the morning
the correct one ( I have breakfast at 6 in the morning) The word “breakfast” probably is
assumed as a predicate. What happens next is that the sentence looks like correct because it
consists of subject (I), predicate (breakfast) and adverb of time and place (at 6 in the
morning). Another example is “They absent today”. Perhaps, L2 learners have to know that
an English sentence is always needed a predicate. The predicate can be verb (go, study, eat,
and etc) or be / linking verb (am, is, are, were, was, etc). It proves that the error made by
the speaker is a misformation error because the speaker uses the wrong L2 linguistic form.
that this pattern of the sentence is the same with I am absent or I am busy. This error
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should not happen in intermediate and advanced learners if they have learner the form of
adjective + to infinitive. It probably occurs because the speaker adopt Indonesian “ Saya
sulit untuk melakukan itu”. It is called as misformation error because the speaker gets the
certain linguistic pattern can be applied into the other linguistic pattern. Probably, students
assume democration has the similar pattern in the words such as solution, revolution,
always difficult). Here, the writer of that expression cannot find the appropriate form of
students hear or listen the word (s) of L2 have influence to what students think. The
without‘s’. Then, this trivial matter reveals on students’ writing. The suffix‘s’ probably can
be easily neglected since the word ‘congratulation’ cannot be changed into the plural one.
7. I go to school with my father? For Indonesian context, that example has three
propositions; (1) I go to school, (2) My father goes to work, and (3) We go together. This
sentence is very confusing in native speakers’ interpretation because it has a meaning that
(1) I am a student, (2) my father works in school where I study, and (3) we go to same
place (school) together. The writer uses L1 linguistic form into L2, but the meaning can be
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interpreted in some ways. It does not matter if the hearer knows Indonesian context well.
Otherwise, the message is not going to be understood or gained. From the explanation
CHAPTER V
Have EFL teachers thought that their feedbacks to their students’ writing and
speaking are effective or not? Is there any students’ progress or improvement of their
writing and speaking in the future? Have teachers’ feedbacks fitted students’ perception?
There are few questions rising of students’ perception and teachers’ feedback in the context
of EFL classroom. EFL teachers have to evaluate the effectiveness of feedback they have
been giving to the students. It can be conducted by looking how the students response
toward the feedback. Direct feedbacks do not figure out the actual performance of students’
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comprehension in correcting the errors because teachers have provided the correct one.
Teachers have to invite students to be active finding the correct one from their errors they
produce. This is necessary to utilize the students’ metalinguistic. It means students are also
active to empower their prior knowledge to correct their own errors. The other possible
necessary to evaluate the effectiveness of corrective feedback and the long term quality of
corrective feedback.
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Lampiran – Lampiran
2. Pembelian Bahan
Habis Pakai
Harga Satuan Harga Peralatan Penunjang
Justifikasi
Material Kuantitas (Rp) Tahun
Pembelian
ke-1 Tahun ke-2 Tahun ke-3
Bahan habis pakai 1 Kertas HVS 4 50.000 200.000
Bahan habis pakai 2 Catridge 3 100.000 300.000
Bahan habis pakai 3 Flash Disk 2 100.000 200.000
Bahan habis pakai 4 Refil Tinta 2 200.000 400.000
Bahan habis pakai 5 Memory 2 50.000 100.000
Bahan habis pakai 6 Copy bahan 8 20.000 160.000
Bahan habis pakai 7 Media Gambar 10 50.000 500.000
Sub Total (Rp) 1.860.000
3. Perjalanan
Harga Biaya Per tahun (Rp)
Justifikasi
Material Kuantitas Satuan Tahun
Perjalanan
(Rp) ke-1 Tahun ke-2 Tahun ke-3
Perjalanan 1 Dalam kota 5 85.000 425.000
Perjalanan 2 Luar kota 1 115.000 115.000
Perjalanan
Sub Total (Rp) 540.000
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4. Sewa
Harga Biaya Per tahun (Rp)
Justifikasi
Material Kuantitas Satuan Tahun
Sewa
(Rp) ke-1 Tahun ke-2 Tahun ke-3
Sewa 1
Sewa 2
Sewa 4
Sub Total (Rp)
TOTAL ANGGARAN YANG DIPERLUKAN SETIAP TAHUN
(Rp) 4.000.000
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Waktu
analisa
analisa
A. Identitas Diri
2 JenisKelamin Laki-laki
5 NIDN 0706127601
7 E-mail suhartawan.budianto@unitomo.ac.id
10 NomorTelepon/Faks 031-5944922
B. Riwayat Pendidikan
Tinggi
Nama Pembimbing Drs. Syamsuri Ariwibowo, M.Pd Prof. Dr.Abbas, A Badib, M.A., M.A
Sumber Jumlah
2012 The Use of Worksheet Entry Form (WEF) of Mandiri Rp. 1.000.000
Corrective Feedback to Improve Speaking Ability.
2016 Local and Global Aspect of DCF and ICF on EFL Mandiri Rp. 1.500.000
Writing Performance
Sumber* Jumlah
Surabaya
Speaking Ability.
2 Local and Global Aspect of DCF and ICF The University of Queensland 1
4 One day- conference Strategies in teaching EFL writingUniversitas Negeri Malang, 2015
Penghargaan
Semua data yang saya isikan dan tercantum dalam biodata ini adalah benar dan dapat
dipertanggungjawabkan secara hukum. Apabila di kemudian hari ternyata dijumpai
ketidaksesuaian dengan kenyataan, saya sanggup menerima sanksi. Demikian biodata ini
saya buat dengan sebenarnya untuk memenuhi salah satu persyaratan dalam pengajuan
Penugasan Penelitian dosen pemula DIPA Universitas Dr. Soetomo.
Ketua Pengusul
NIDN : 0706127601
Dengan ini menyatakan bahwa proposal saya dengan judul: Students Perception
of Lexical Errors and the Teachers Feedback Long-term Effects yang diusulkan
dalam Penelitian dosen pemula DIPA Universitas Dr. Soetomo untuk tahun
anggaran 2016/2017 bersifat original dan belum pernah dibiayai oleh
lembaga/sumber dana lain.
A. Identitas Diri
4 NIP/NIK 96.01.1.215/
5 NIDN 0722037201
7 E-mail wjyksm22@gmail.com
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B. Riwayat Pendidikan
No Nama Temu Ilmiah/ Seminar Judul Artikel Ilmiah Waktu dan Tempat
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NIDN : 0717075701
Dengan ini menyatakan bahwa proposal saya dengan judul: Students Perception
of Lexical Errors and the Teachers Feedback Long-term Effects yang diusulkan
dalam Penelitian dosen pemula DIPA Universitas Dr. Soetomo untuk tahun
53
NIDN : 0706127601
Dengan ini menyatakan bahwa saya sanggup dan bertanggung jawab untuk
melaksanakan dan menyelesaikan penelitian DIPA UNITOMO Tahun 2016-2017
dengan judul: Students Perception of Lexical Errors and the Teachers Feedback Long-
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term Effects yang diusulkan dalam Penelitian dosen pemula DIPA Universitas Dr.
Soetomo untuk tahun anggaran 2016/2017.
Bilamana pengusulan proposal saya disetujui namun hingga akhir masa penelitian saya
belum bisa menyelesaikan dan memenuhi tuntutan dalam kontrak penelitian, maka saya
bersedia menerima sanksi yang berlaku serta mengembalikan seluruh biaya penugasan
yang sudah diterim ke Kas Universitas.
Dekan,
Mengetahui,
Ketua Lembaga Penelitian,