• Despite his talent at writing and the fact that it is his profession, Aschenbach
views his writing with distaste and frustration. It isn’t that he dislikes literature
itself though, he is simply tired of “tr[ying] to break or untie the knot.” (7). Being
an artist, he strives for perfection but that struggle is what tires him and alienates
him from writing. However, “in his youth, indeed, the nature and inmost essence
of the literary gift had been, to him, this very scrupulosity.” (7), which suggests
that it is just the relentlessness and prolonged nature of this process that
• One of Aschenbach’s heroes is Frederick the Great, the subject of one of his
works. Aschenbach points out one of Frederick’s favorite mottos: “Hold fast.” (9).
Similarly, Aschenbach’s father is arguably one of his heroes. His father and his
family however, are “men who lived their strict, decent, sparing lives in the
service of king and state.” (8). Whereas Aschenbach is an artist and deals with
creativity, his father is an official who lives by certain rules. The fact that
career and has even been very successful at it, but it doesn’t seem to be right for
him.
Aschenbach is clued in on this for himself, when he sees how the “skey and sea
remained leaden, with spurts of fine, mistlike rain.” (18). Moreover, the “garish,
badly built houses” (18-19) and the pestilent “lukewarm air of the sirocco” also
convey how Venice is a false paradise. This is not entirely relevant, but experts
also say Venice is slowly sinking as water erodes away at the buildings’
• Aschenbach initially views the strangers he meets on his boat to Venice with
some disdain. He describes them as very rowdy, shouting “derisory remarks” over
the railing (17). However, he views the old man who associates with the younger
men with absolute disgust: “Aschenbach was moved to shudder as he watched the
creature and his association with the rest of the group.” (17). This disgust is
condescending tones when he says “That is my own affair. I may want to give my
luggage in deposit. You will turn around.” (22). He goes to the extreme of
bemused by the raucous performer. Mann uses very colorful words to describe the
from nature’s own hand.” (31). Tadzio also is a symbol of the artistic beauty that
They boy then acquires a “final human touch” too (31), which only increases
idolatry when he describes the boy as a “godlike work of art.” (43). Throughout
the novella, Aschenbach only worships the boy more and more, indicating his
• Aschenbach’s love of the boy is tempered slightly when he notices that the boy is
imperfect. His “teeth were imperfect, rather jagged and bluish, without a healthy
glaze, and of that…” (34). Considering how Mann uses Tadzio as another
perfection, Tadzio’s sickness indicates how this perfection is impossible. The fact
beginning, Mann uses straightforward sentences such as “He had been young and
crude with the times and by them badly counseled.” (12). On the other hand, by
the end of the novella, twisted sentences such as “That night he had a fearful
dream – if dream…” (65). The latter sentence employs much more complicated
syntax and the structure is not as direct. Mann inserts this change in structure and
syntax to mirror how Aschenbach’s thoughts become more convoluted as the
novella progresses. By the end of the novella, Aschenbach’s fantasies about the
little boy become intertwined with his grasp on reality, as epitomized by his
dream the night before he dies: “His senses reeled in the steam of panting bodies,