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Dear Kalpesh Ji,

Please find the changes below:

I would appreciate it when you and Esha look at the mail give me a call so page wise I can explain you
the same.

Group Website:

-The Photos need to be changed, corresponding to the sector, if you are not able to decide between
them, then as suggested we will run team viewer, but for the same have the pictures selected and then
we can choose.

- On the main page where pics are… the tagline for each sector needs to be mentioned after mentioning
the sector ie; Software and IT solutions- Simplifying e-business, this will be mentioned on the pic. All the
taglines and sectors will be in the same place on every picture and present all the time.

- Please remove the picture from the Md message box.

- the Origin, again as mentioned various times proof reading and grammatical errors and run on
sentences and the sentence formation needs to be checked,

In the origin there should be a comma after Rajasthan. Small difference, it is in the above welcome to
Chandra group matter but not here. The matter shows 46 years near the seedling, but in the main
matter it says 49 years.

The matter is being repeated three times for the orgin near the sapling, the matter next to the sapling
and the matter in welcome to Chandra and again the same matter is in the over view. I hope after all
these discussions you can understand the group and about us, and I feel you can make couple of lines
on the same lines which make it stand out.

- It was told before in my previous mail that Corporate responsibility is to be changed to


Corporate Social Responsibility. The Matter is really bad in this… we need to mention the
community service we do, we have done many donations for various institutions, the names
don’t need to be mentioned and specific events but the matter needs to be good.

The line above Corporate responsibility which is below, doesn’t make sense and is irrelevant:

Community Involvement

We listen carefully to our customers, applying the insights we gain 


from them to meet their different needs and wishes

Even in the matter mentioned THE CHANGES ARE IN BOLD. PLEASE again the matter needs to be
checked if it makes sense, the formation of sentences and the flow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:
At Chandra, Corporate SOCIAL Responsibility is part of everyday business. We are committed to make a
positive contribution wherever we operate and help build a sustainable future for OUR COMMUNITY.

- Instead of the MD message on the bottom menue it is better we have a staff/ member login.
Give it a good name. but we would like to access our accounts by this website.
- The Chandra logo on the top is not aligned with the box on the bottom
- Sectors near the pics make it aligned, also if possible make it stand out a bit when the
corresponding pic is show next to it or when we scroll on top of it.
- The scroll down menus the sector. The logos should be in a horizontal line, 5 in a row or so. As a
common person seeing the website will not be able to see .. and will not scroll down so much.
- About Us:
- Overview- again the flow of the matter checked, I think it is fine, I have not checked spellings.
- The BOD: the matter is not good for the BOD, please write meaningful lines. Kalpesh ji
you have meet both of us, so atleast for us make some sensible good comments. For
Lalit sir as well it dosent seem like an intro for the Md of the group. The Matter for Viral is
good. He is also a CS.. so add that,
- in Ashish sir matter it seems like a sales manager matter, for brief given, he has had extensive
training in UAE in retail and has handled Ganesham.
- For amit sir, his MBA is from UK. He has started the new diversification of relaestate in Mumbai
and Jaipur.
- Myself am handling advt and events, experience from USA, not my MBA.
- Ridhimas matter is good she is also an mba, but a little extreme cuz the terms used even I am
not aware of properly
- For you refrence, not to copy, here is a link http://www.goldsgymindia.com/aboutus.asp?
GID=1&FID=24
- The way the team is elaborately mentioned is showed, something similar if you have uestions
about any you can ask but it should be good.

Md message: the spelling of Lalit is wrong, come on now… such a big mistake

CSR- give a common good picture on top and then have temple pic showing with the heading on the
photo dictating which temple it is and remove the pics from the middle of the page.

Sectors:

For sectors I need all the pages to look similar. My suggestion is the logos of the companies be on the
left top hand corner which can be divided by a space or a thin line and the matter is indented and
written after that. All pages should be same, the entire left side left blank as many companies or sectors
have a couple of companies.

Distribution: logos as mentioned before need to be added they have been sent to you.

The photos of the companies to start with a complete product range which I will be sending you.

Advertsing: I have mentioned many many times I do not want matter from my old website, it is clearly
cut and pasted, please go to a few ad websites, I have also sent you many links and plzzz make good
matter same for the events website, I have send you many pics for both of them have the pic showing
and changing, newspaper advt is in trio websites and the events in entrepreneurs.

Both should have a unique way of showing our many clients, so find a space and tell me how many
names or logos can be added.

Like in trio, in events add the services, not the clients below the matter.

Electronic Showrooms:

Start with ganesham pictures, then Sony center and then haier, the new pics of haier I am sending you.

Chandra appliances logo to be removed, like in all the pages, the logos horizontally on the left hand side
and then the matter. The sony showroom name is sonycenter, the logo also I think is given if not please
tell me.

Franchisee:

Start with range of all products again. In the map below , Ganesham name should be first and the name
and number is manjula Sharma, 98292972031, same in ganesham website.

Telecom: pics on the top should be changing, we are working for Vodafone and airtel postpaid
connections, Videocon mobile distribution. All the companies like others can have a page like feel,
maybe an ad or something off their website which will scroll, in Videocon show a range of mobiles but
not the model numbers.

Remove the pics in the middle of the matter and the logo again on the side.

Hospitality: the logo or name of company is Sunrise Chandra health resort. The visit website on the
bottom. Give a good few ending lines as the matter is ending abruptly.

Career development matter seems very irrelevant, we do not give any type of training or such things.
The matter is also cut and pasted, it says Join us at Chandra Group Showroom, what showroom… please
recheck it again. And make it understandable and something which makes sense.

Contact us: the 28 will come in the second line, its 28, Indra Colony.

In our team the following names need to be changed or added:

In gati its vipin and vikas, not bipin and vishal.

Sailesh removed from trio.

For Retail Franchisee ass vijay goyal and sunil verma names, pics will be sent

For real estate, am sending you pics of the projects we are doing so add that pic and the logo of
ganesham infratech developers, change in the home page logos as well.
Ganesham:

IF the color can be changed please change and show me to purple

Add the pics and product ranges of lg, whirlpool and godrej

Franchisee pic change, the shopping bag pic removed

Main beginning pic on the home page to be of product range

After time pics stop changing on the front page after a while.

Scroll of all brands on the bottom of the pages whole length.

Welcome matter: Ganesham with time, has adapted to customer’s choice, expanded its store brand range and
increased its service offering to meet our customers’ needs. 
New store concepts have been introduced in response to evolutions in our customers’ lifestyles.

Franchisee map again ganesham on main map, contact and number as above.

We have given a round logo please place that in the website.

There are many places where the matter of our insight, and our expertise and strength is same. So either
don’t put the box in all the pages, and if box there then change the matter. The matter of little more
about us is good, and the our inisight is good, so can use it alternative on each page, and above or below
it have the round more choice best price logo.

In apply now, the current profile box should be bigger, the franchisee type single or multiple removed
and the area of interest added which would mention the city they want to open the franchisee.

About us: in our group, the bottom where matter starts you can have chandras logo instead of our
group again. Also the visit website button should be prominent.

Also on the bottom of the webpage have a venture by Chandra group.

Latest offers changed to only offers as they are old offers.

Companies added in the logos in products and also on the main page are: Lloyd, inalsa, morphy
Richards, phillips logo checked, glen, kaff, faber. The logo again placed where scrolling or shown all
times, no need to scroll down

The golds changes page has been attached so kindly go through them.
Ganesham:

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