Hello Admins,

I would like to become a Moderator, so I am applying for it.

First of all, I'll give you a view about my knowledge about the commands and suc
h:
I'm playing ~2 years Tremulous, so I had some experience with admin commands on
other servers... I know very good how to use them, and I'm aware of the permissi
ons I got.
I would like to obtain that position, because of the following reasons:
I would like to help more in the Moderator section, that means I d like to help th
e players In-Game or in the Forums.
I d like to clean our servers from deconners, mute/ban evaders, or even aimbotters
.
I ve always behaved well, and I ve never done abuses, so I wouldn t abuse my permissio
ns as a Moderator aswell.
I would also like to become a Global Moderator too, anytime, to help even MORE t
han a normal Moderator can, but before I must apply for Moderator.
I know the rules very well, and when I have to ban/kick/mute/put someone to spec
tators. I know all the rules you have to know as a Moderator.
Being a Moderator in KoR is very great. Since all my friends became Mods, e.g. A
lex Alfista, Athens, Metal, even Meds and DS, I d like to be in the same group lik
e them, because I want to support them with my permissions, and overtake a part
of the work they usually have to do.
I m active on our servers, mainly in the evening(afternoon in America).
I m sorry that I ve left KoR about 1 month ago. But I really thought I will never ha
ve time for it.
I hope you like my application for KoR Moderator. Have fun in gaming.
I ll see you ingame :D
Best regards
-Alex (|KoR|Brrrr)

Hate> Here are some fixes.

A few lines you wrote are technically "correct", but could be better for differe
nt reasons.
I changed those lines or made a note. Most "major" edits were for redundancy.

Hello Admins,
I would like to become a moderator, so I am applying for it.
[NOTE: This is correct, but perhaps it would be better worded as
"I would like to become a moderator, so the following is my application submissi
on:"]
First of all, I'll give you some idea of my knowledge of the commands and such.
I've played ~2 years of Tremulous with admin commands on other servers [NOTE: Ex
amples?]. I know very well how to use them appropriately, and I understand the p
rivileges (responsibilities) I would have.
I would like to obtain this position for the following reasons:
[NOTE: I think this is correct, but "obtain" is usually used as "receiving an ob
ject", not a service.
It would probably be better to use "attain".]
* I would like to help more in the Moderator section, so that I could help playe
rs in-game or on the forums.
[NOTE: Redundant, might want to change to "I would like to support players with
problems in-game or on the forums" or something like that.]
* I'd like to clean our servers of deconners, mute/ban evaders, or even aimbotte
rs.
[NOTE: When I changed 'from' to 'of' in the above sentence, it made it mostly co
rrect.. but it seemed unnatural to me somehow. Perhaps it would be better phrase
d as
"I'd like to clear out deconners, mute/ban evaders, and even aimbotters from ou
r servers."
* I've always behaved well, and I've never abused my current privileges. I would
n't abuse them as a moderator either.
* I would also like to become a global moderator eventually to help further, but
I'm applying for moderator first to prove myself.
* I know the moderator rules very well. I know when it is necessary to ban/kick/
mute/forcespec.
* Being a moderator in KoR is very great. [NOTE: This previous sentence is corre
ct, but it would be more conversational to word it as "Being a KoR admin is awes
ome/fun."] Since all my friends became Mods, e.g. Alex Alfista, Athens, Metal, e
ven Meds and DS, I'd like to be in the same group [NOTE: Perhaps use "be one too
" instead]. This would allow me to support them and share some of the workload.
* I'm active on our servers, mainly [NOTE: This is correct, but "mostly" sounds
more conversational than "mainly"] in the evening (afternoon in America).
Now, for your consideration... I'm sorry that I left KoR about a month ago. I ho
nestly thought I wouldn't have time to play any more, but things changed.
I hope you approve [NOTE: "Approve of" maybe? I don't know if you meant to say "
like" or "accept" here] my application for KoR moderator. Have fun gaming.
I'll see you there :D
Best regards,
-Alex (|KoR|Brrrr)

*************************************************************

Hate> So here is the application mostly re-written as I would change it.

*************************************************************
Greetings KoR Admins,
I would like to become a moderator. Accordingly, what follows is my application,
including reasons, qualifications, and comments:
I want this because...
* I could support players with problems in-game and on the forums.
* I could help clear out deconners, mute/ban evaders, and aimbotters from the se
rvers.
I am trustworthy because...
* I have always behaved well and never abused the privileges I already have.
* I know the rules very well regarding when it is (and is not) appropriate to ba
n/kick/mute/forcespec.
* I am quite active on the servers in the evening (afternoon in America).
I also wish to say...
* I have played ~2 years of tremulous with (again, appropriately used) admin pri
vileges on several servers: ATCS Corner/Battleground, X, tHc, other private serv
ers, and my friend's server.
* Since many of my friends became mods (e.g. Alex Alfista, Athens, Metal, even M
eds and DS), I'd like to support them by sharing the workload.
* I would like to become a global moderator eventually, but I am applying for mo
derator first in order to prove myself.
For your consideration, I'm sorry that I left KoR about 2 months ago. I honestly
thought I wouldn't have time to play any more, but things changed.
I hope you approve my application for KoR moderator.
Have fun gaming, and I'll see you in trem.
Best regards,
-Alex (|KoR|Brrrr)

18:40Uhr MEZ = 12:52 PM

17:48Uhr MEZ die nächste Application senden, falls die jetzige failt.