Dialogue
A Publication of the San Diego Area Writing Project Spring 2009
Dynamic Relationships:
When the Visual Becomes the Rhetorical
By Marla Williams—SDAWP 2008
The famed theorist and writer Susan As a lecturer at San Diego State Uni- curriculum aimed at analysis of ar-
Sontag once said, “As photographs versity in the Department of Rhetoric gument still don’t fully understand
give people an imaginary possession and Writing Studies I am constantly their own use of rhetoric.
of a past that is unreal, they also help pushing my students to not only
people to take possession of a space understand the rhetorical moves So last spring with my students, col-
in which they are insecure.” Having they see other writers make, but to lege juniors and seniors enrolled in
taught many students who would become aware of their own writ- a course vaguely named “Writing
quickly identify themselves as “inse- ing choices and actually view their in Various Settings,” I set out to see
cure” writers, I see this lovely senti- writing task as a series of strategies what would happen if I shifted their
ment by Sontag as a banner of sorts aimed at bringing their audience “Profile” essay, similar to basic fea-
over both my teaching demonstra- into a relationship with the author. ture writing, to a “Photo Essay” and
tion from last summer’s Invitational During SI and for the spring confer- required that they include at least
Institute and further developed for ence, I chronicled some of the prob- one photo with their writing. I made
“SDAWP 2nd Annual Spring Confer- lems I encounter in the classroom— it clear that they had complete con-
ence: Voices from the Summer In- mainly that students have difficulty trol over their choice of photos. I did
stitute.” When I initially decided to generating interest in their assign- not limit the maximum number of
explore the role that the image can ments; they write for the grade and photos. I offered no formatting rules
play in crafting good writing, I had don’t actually think, engage, take and gave no penalty for composi-
no clue exactly how powerful the risks or truly own their own learn- tion or image quality. They could
possession of the photograph was to ing. My students who have been use expensive software, or do it old
become. pushed by a rigorous departmental school and cut and paste; they could
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.
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born.
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heart forever.
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.
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.
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of your tongue.
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that brings you happiness.
I’m from the threadbare blanket
that loves you so much.
I’m from your heart.
Summer
By Hannah Montante
With a furtive glance towards the mark writing assessments and read- lum’ and for those teachers to then
door, I hurriedly yank the plasti- ing grades, the obvious progress not regard writing as a subject in
cized covers off the phonics books encourages me. I am amazed at the school day. I regard this as
and toss the worksheets into the the perseverance of my students a problem.” She further states,
recycle pile. You know, the pages to produce a book of poetry and a “Children’s success in many dis-
with the word box at the top and the research book about a habitat of ciplines is utterly reliant on their
directions that state, “Please choose their choice, both of which took abilities to write; children deserve
the correct word from the box that over two months to complete. I writing to be a subject that is taught
completes the sentences below,” or also observe how confident they and studied just like reading and
you might have a reading response are when asked to write in different math” (2006). With lower class size
as a prompt which almost always subject areas such as math or social and less demanding content stan-
initiates this question from your studies. How did we get there? It dards in the primary elementary
students, “How many sentences do certainly didn’t happen by filling out grades, I believe we can teach writ-
I have to write?” —Hardly authentic blanks on worksheets. ing first while embedding and sup-
porting it with science, social stud-
In Your
in that sense, I prevailed. But when
I got home, I fumed, complained,
I Long To Be
and dawdled. One incident allowed
me to waste precious hours that
could have been spent cuddling
with my husband, or, more realisti-
Lisa Muñoz, SDAWP 2008 cally, grading papers.
Ok, so I’m listening to Audioslave would be amazing, but by Tuesday Thus, I realized I am nowhere
(hence the title) as I’m grading I was exhausted with the task and near a superwoman. I won’t even
papers and I’m distracted. Not just had nearly given up. Here’s the become Batgirl at this rate.
by the music, but by my thoughts. deal: teaching sometimes is the
My husband, Alex, wrote this huge equivalent of being in an abusive Basically, according to Nietzsche,
Humanities paper on Nietzsche’s relationship. You’re told you’re not I need to be above all that taints
ideologies and how they relate to good enough, even when you’ve and clouds my path and goals. Not
the decadence of society today. I stayed up till three the night before, there yet. On the other hand, I
gave Alex ideas and resources, and making sure lesson plans were per- don’t teach because of some vague,
he honestly did me a favor by let- fect and all essays were graded. impersonal sense of “duty,” which
ting me “teach” him what I know. You’re told to do and be more, even is a step in the right direction. In
When I start reading and thinking when you regularly work seven “Morality as Anti-Nature” Nietzsche
about various perspectives I get so days a week, missing birthdays and wrote, “What could destroy us more
immersed that it’s all I do. This past Sunday family lunches. You get to quickly than working, thinking, and
weekend, my family and friends lis- your class, ready to expand minds feeling without any inner necessity,
tened to me prattle on and on about and change lives (or at least get without any deeply personal choice,
seven or eight different philosophi- them to grasp the concept of the without pleasure—as an automaton
cal concepts and how they pertain
to society, life, religion—the whole
world—for, I don’t know, every wak-
Basically, according to Nietzsche,
ing second of every hour. Oh, did I I need to be above all that taints and clouds
tell you I’m going to be a renowned
philosopher someday? Yeah, I don’t my path and goals. Not there yet.
exactly have philosophical theories On the other hand, I don’t teach because of some
per se, but I read a bunch and talk
a lot, so I’m sure I’ll be able to firm vague, impersonal sense of “duty,”
up ideas soon. which is a step in the right direction.
Anyway, Nietzsche wrote about of ‘duty’?” He promoted intrinsic
this concept of the “Superman,” comma) and only three students desires and motivations rather than
and I very much would like to show up. And, you get the random extrinsic ones. I teach because
know how to become superman… student who verbally abuses, dis- I am compelled by forces deeper
um superwoman. By the end of regards, and patronizes you, even than any monetary or social gain.
the weekend, I decided I would though you’ve shown that student When I was around five, I used to
become the rare, extraordinary the utmost respect. For these rea- teach my dolls letters and numbers.
human he writes about. He began sons, the job can feel pretty emo- I would prop them up and write
“The Antichrist” (by the way, I’m tionally and physically draining. on my little chalkboard. I would
Christian, so go work out that para- Yet, you keep coming back, like the encourage my stuffed pug and plas-
dox) with “This book belongs to a injured, jaded soul that you are, to tic Shamu to finish their homework
select few. Perhaps none of them start up another semi-dysfunctional and would tell them they were on
yet live.” Then he described this relationship the following semes- the right track.
super human: (s)he is truly honest ter.
in all intellectual matters (I’m still As with writing, I can’t imagine not
working out what that means) and On Tuesday night I had directed an teaching. Maria Montessori, echoed
must be accustomed to living away especially insightful class discus- this sentiment by saying, “Everyone
from civilization, above the “gossip sion, followed by an unpleasant has a special tendency, a special
of politics and national egotism” (I (and highly inappropriate) outburst vocation, modest perhaps, but cer-
think I’ve failed on both counts). from one student. I’m usually all tainly useful.” While I know I’ve
about specifics in my writing, but found mine, I don’t think it has
But! His main argument was that they just aren’t important in this necessarily made life easier. But,
people should think for themselves, case. what a life. I have an opportunity
rather than follow “herd mentality” to work with at least 140 students a
(aka mankind). Well, I’m all about What is relevant is the fact that I semester. Imagine the potential.
my own ideas. I mean, I’ve accept- let a student throw me off track for
ed years ago that I don’t think like the rest of the night. I did man- Last night, I shared this with Alex
most people. I’m okay with that. age to compose myself in around by emailing it, and he spent about
thirty seconds to make it through an hour writing non-stop while I
So, I decided on Monday that I my three-hour night class without
Dialogue, Spring 2009 13
was sleeping. This is a big deal, as
I’ve always wanted him to write me
something. So this would have been
his first time. Anyway, this morning,
as I woke up, he said he loved read-
ing about my ideas so much (you’d
think that he’d get enough of it liv-
c MUSE BOX Stacey Goldblatt, SDAWP 1999
ing with me!) that he felt compelled In his book The Courage to Write: How Writers Transcend Fear, author Ralph Keyes
to write back his own views. By the asserts:
way, today he will present his huge
final project in order to graduate, yet
he sacrificed an extra hour of sleep Considering directly how scary writing can be, and why, can do more to facilitate
to write me back. Just as he was writing than a dozen classes on technique...Finding the courage to write does
about the hit send, he accidentally not involve erasing or ‘conquering’ one’s fears. Working writers aren’t those who
deleted it all. have eliminated their anxiety. They are the ones who keep scribbling while their
heart races and their stomach churns and who mail manuscripts with trembling
Ironically, he was writing about the
absurdity of life and the philosophy fingers. The key difference between writers who are paralyzed by fear and those
of absurdism. He questioned his who are merely terrified is that...the latter come to terms with their anxieties. They
own purpose in life and asked me learn how to keep writing even as fear tries to yank their hand from the page.
(and himself) why he’s even trying They find the courage to write.
to find meaning. He said he didn’t
have the energy to write me again,
so he emailed me a quote from the We all want to write. We believe in it. We know that when we write with our stu-
Myth of Sisyphus by Camus: “If there dents, we model the joys and obstacles we as writers face. But what’s getting in the
is no meaning in life, why live? If way of your own writing? What stops you from sending out your manuscript? Write
you feel as though there is no mean- about what fears cause roadblocks in your writing. What prevents you from pub-
ing in life, is it worth suicide? No. I
lishing that piece you have tucked away in your mind or even your filing cabinet?
have the freedom to choose what I
want to do. Life doesn't make sense, Challenge yourself to write with a racing heart and mail your manuscript off despite
but death doesn't either. I decide not trembling fingers.
to kill myself. I decide to live my life
knowing that life has no meaning. For inspiration, take a peek at the National Writing Project website for some possible
I will live my life as if it has mean-
places to send your work:
ing.”
http://www.nwp.org/cs/public/print/resource_topic/being_a_writer
He then wrote, “I'm tired and sad
that I wrote so much to you, only to
make such a stupid mistake. It really
shows how absurd life can be.” SDAWP NOTES
And yet, we will continue to look for
purpose in our daily lives, even if Congratulations to Divona Roy, SDAWP 1996, whose ninth grade student, Erin
it is all an illusion. Even if we are
Singer, won first place in the CATE writing contest. This year’s contest topic was “change.”
stuck in the cave that Plato wrote
about, looking straight ahead and Erin wrote about her experience in the fourth grade when she couldn’t run, and she was
admiring mere shadows, I will con- made fun of for it. Her teacher helped her overcome her insecurity. Her personal narrative
tinue to make my life worthwhile.
A student once told me (after I was was published in the February edition of the California English Journal.
particularly animated about sea life
and my desire to learn more about Kudos to Patricia Jeffery, SDAWP 2008. Eleven of her students were selected as sweep-
the depths of the ocean) that I need
five lives to live out the passions I stakes winners in this year’s San Diego City Schools History Day competition. The kids were
have (if you knew how many inter- required to make a poster describing a person in history and his/her legacy (using only 350
ests I have, you'd think so, too). But
words). They competed at the county level on March 14th.
why not this life?
Quite importantly, Plato said that we Congratulations to Karen Wroblewski, SDAWP 1989. As principal of San Diego
are all-knowing souls before birth.
High School of International Studies, she has been named the Magnet Schools of America
Then, as we live this illusory life, we
forget everything and have to "re- National Principal of the Year. This award recognizes an outstanding school leader who has
learn" it, or as I like to say, remem- succeeded in providing innovative programs that promote equity, diversity, and academic
ber it. I want to remember it all. Is
that so much to ask? excellence for students in magnet schools. Karen's award was announced during the Magnet
Schools of America conference held in Charlotte, North Carolina, April 27-29, 2009.