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Framing a shot, The shots have
including and excluding been taken with
elements as appropriate scenery
appropriate to the
album name. Clear
sense of genre.
Using a variety of shot Close up on cover
distances as appropriate used to connect
immediately. Mid
and long shots used
throughout DPS.
Shooting material Shots are clear
appropriate to the task although only
set music reference is
to the album name.
Selecting mise-en-scene . Neutral tone kept
including colour, figure, throughout images,
lighting, objects and dark lighting
setting. throughout, setting
relating to artist.
manipulating Photos editing to
photographs as keep neutral/dark
appropriate to the tones. Images
context for cropped to fit
presentation, including amongst the page
cropping and resizing and not over take
the writing.
Accurately using Register is
language and register appropriate for
style of magazine,
grammar is
accurate and clear.
Appropriately Balance of
integrating illustration imagery/text works
and text well, DPS well
separated.
Showing understanding Clear/aesthetically
of conventions of layout pleasing on all
and page design three pages- extra
image on contents?
Showing awareness of Text size is varied,
the need for variety in emphasis on
fonts and text size headings and main
features.
Using ICT appropriately Overall,
for the task set professional and
aesthetically
pleasing to read
and look at.
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Framing a shot, All shots are clear
including and excluding and positioned
elements as appropriate well.
Using a variety of shot Close up and mid
distances as appropriate shots varied
throughout.
Shooting material Clear genre
appropriate to the task portrayed, image
set including ipod
emphasises music.
Selecting mise-en-scene Clear colour
including colour, figure, scheme, low
lighting, objects and saturation photos,
setting. props used well
although maybe a
photo with a
background could
be included?
manipulating Each photo black
photographs as and white with
appropriate to the clothes in colour,
context for images resized to fit
presentation, including well with text,
cropping and resizing especially contents.
Accurately using Register continued
language and register throughout,
grammar accurate.
Appropriately Front image and
integrating illustration text integrated
and text well. DPS works
well, an extra photo
could possibly be
added.
Showing understanding DPS nicely
of conventions of layout overlapped, clear
and page design use of three on
contents page.
Showing awareness of Headings continued
the need for variety in and body text kept
fonts and text size the same,
date/price could be
smaller.
Using ICT appropriately Good editing of
for the task set images and colours,
text and images
work well together.
Over all looks
professional and
appeals to the
correct audience.
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Framing a shot, Shots are varied but
including and excluding little music relation.
elements as appropriate Carpet shots could
be taken away.
Using a variety of shot Close up and mid
distances as appropriate shots have been
used. Helps to
identify the genre.
Shooting material Clothing could be
appropriate to the task darker to relate to
set rock more, more
music relation
could be used.
Selecting mise-en-scene Colours kept
including colour, figure, throughout, lighting
lighting, objects and varied, setting
setting. colour be clearer
though.
manipulating Photo sizes are
photographs as appropriate,
appropriate to the although editing
context for could be more
presentation, including consistent
cropping and resizing throughout images.
Accurately using Register meets the
language and register purpose well, some
incorrect spellings.
More ͚rock͛ terms
could be used to
illustrate the genre.
Appropriately Text on cover
integrating illustration works well with
and text image, DPS could
be more integrated
to break up the
text.
Showing understanding Columns are clearly
of conventions of layout shown, although an
and page design image could be
taken away from
the contents and
added to DPS.
Showing awareness of Varied sizes used
the need for variety in on each page, fifty
fonts and text size one could be
smaller on DPS.
Using ICT appropriately Over all, clear with
for the task set editing used to
create a specific
image.