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How did they produce Honda Asimo? It is a robot does some things very awesome like a real human. It recognizes voices and faces like human. It can deal with people very well. That robot became very famous all over the world. Therefore, Honda became well-known. That Honda Company was only for manufacturing motorcycle. In 1980th started to produce automobiles. It became in 2000th second best car in Japan. The other companies were manufacturing cars before 1980th for along time. Thus, they did imaginary achievements. That is because of competitions and hard working. Honda and other Japanese cars became very awesome in America and Europe. European and American people prefer Japanese cars more than their national production, because of many things like saving fuel. The strange thing is that some people in Germany prefer Japanese cars more than their national cars. Germany is very famous in manufacturing mechanical machines and other things. The stranger thing is that American people were saying that Japan in 1950th like China now. Now, Japan is very an awesome country comparable to all countries in the world. Therefore, China improved in the latest years so much a little bit like Japan. So, it can be like Japan after a few years. China did a lot of accomplishments in their industry and reached to say for sure that it is developed country. That is away from their problems in living including densely populated. Their products are almost in all countries including developing and developed countries. Chinese people were struggling and still are struggling to be distinct all over the world in industry. China is exporting to many countries, and a lot of products nowadays are made in china, but there are a lot

of categories high quality and low quality. They are awesome in some products but not in at all. A lot of products became made in china, because of the Chinese struggling. The efforts of Chinese government are wonderful to protect made in china statement. "The Chinese government has an enormous stake in protecting the "Made in China" brand. Creating the millions of jobs required each year for new college graduates and farmers abandoning their fields for a better life in the cities demands strong export sales" according to David J. Lynch in his article Do cheap Chinese goods have to mean trade-off in quality?. It does not matter for Chinese government that they give small salaries to their population. The most important thing for them is that most of Chinese people take experiences in manufacturing to develop their country. Another good thing in the Chinese government, which improves China, is that they have the ability to control and force America to do some things for their desires. They stipulated that they do not import anything from America, except if American produces those products in China. So, they forced America to built branches of their companies in China. Thus, it raises the economy in China, and of course it is under American supervision. So, the Chinese Engineers and workers can learn from those American supervisors to help their own Chinese factories. It is also good for Americans in many things. They build branches of their factories because of the low salaries. They gain a lot of money by selling to Chinese nation, because it is a big nation, in addition to selling those products with that low cost to the developing countries like our country Egypt. The leaders of China are very wonderful, they want to China amazing in products and invent new technologies. A president of China his name is Hu states that the real improvement comes from the independent innovation. Furthermore, companies in China are struggling to invent new technologies.

Companies are competing each others in new invention and researches. Therefore, companies in China are working together after new inventions. After that they come together to benefit their country. That is what the Chinese government wants to improve the country. One of the good improvement in China that helped the made in china statement in products is the changing of women. They forgot the living in homes and in rural areas. "Women make up the backbone of production-line workers in China's private, export-oriented factories, and gravitate to professions such as medicine, journalism and teaching" according to Lucy Hornby in her article China's women struggle for a foothold in power. Thus, women in China became absolutely like men. They are working in factories and workshops, which is originally hard for men. This makes the country so industrial. China succeeded in manufacturing many products, but failed in the big products like cars on their own. Unfortunately, automobiles manufacturing requires experience so much, which is little in China. China started in manufacturing from a few years comparable to other countries. It seems that it began very recently especially comparable to America and Europe. That is because these countries are saying that Japan in 1950th like China now, and they did not like it in that time. Japan now is an awesome country in industry and everything. So, what they think about China now?. Automobiles manufacturing requires intelligent engineers and scientists, and intelligence comes from high experience. Experience bequeaths, and New American or European generations inherit it from older generations. They are trying to take that experience from the foreign factories. Sometimes they buy designs and technologies from the famous companies to produce in their own factories. Like the famous story of Brilliance Company, that bought some designs from Porsche. There are five Chinese companies in China export automobiles, but they are originally

Chinese not branches of other foreign companies. Therefore, the Chinese people invent and think. Therefore, they failed to sell their cars in Europe because of many things. According to Qiang Xiaoji in his article China's automobiles struggling to enter EU market "Zhong Shi, an automobile expert, said that he knew China's car export to the EU was low but did not expect numbers to be that poor". There are only two original Chinese companies that they exported to Europe in 2009. Both they exported six cars to Europe, which is very poor. Many other Chinese companies failed to enter Europe. Western Europe people are intelligent, and they do not accept anything to enter their country easily. There are a lot of tests. At the beginning Chinese companies failed in those tests. The main test for automobiles is for safety. Their most important matter that they care about it so much is the life of humans. Thus, they crash every car enters Europe to check its safety. They give starts for each car, and it is shown on their website to show to people, how the car is safe. There is a committee responsible for that in Europe is called Euro NCAP. So, Europe and other countries reached to high safety, because they are manufacturing cars from along time. They knew from the experience, how to make in their cars' design to make them safe. That what China failed at the beginning to make it. Therefore, no Chinese car was allowed to enter Europe because of Euro NCAP committee. Now, Chinese car can enter, but with little starts and little number of exporting. Europe say that no safety in Chinese cars. Especially, Germany said that they are "low quality". That is because they are importing row materials to their products from Nigeria and other countries, which are with low costs. Furthermore, the big Chinese nation plus, which makes low salaries, plus row materials with low fees, leads to be cheap in final products. China exploits these to sell their cars and products to developing countries, like in Middle East and South Africa. In these places people cannot recognize quality

and that safety. They care about having the ability to buy a cheap car with options. They established in Chinese cars many options. Of course, China is also wants to enlarge their exports, and they are struggling to develop their industry. Thus, they succeeded to sell cars. Divide this paragraph into two smaller ones. The best thing in China, which is that they are trying to know the required needs in a country, then produce those needs only for that country. They care about events in countries to produce the needs for those events. For an example, in African cup in Egypt a girl wanted to buy an Egyptian flag, when she returned to her home. She was shocked, when she knew that it is made in china. She knows that Chinese products everywhere, but she could not imagine that a country produces flags for another country. The wondrous thing is that the Egyptian flag that is made in china is cheaper than the Egyptian made. In addition to its better material, and it is more longer life than Egyptian. The more amazing matter is that they produce some products, which are very personal, cultural and lead to be related to traditions in religious events. That is like lanterns in Ramadan and playable rockets or fireworks in feasts. How do they know and observe these events? Some Egyptians say that they send girls to sell products, and know information. These Chinese girls became so numerous in Egypt. They sell their needs in market between Egyptian sellers. Furthermore, they also knock the Egyptian doors, and say "Mama mawgoda". They know this in Arabic, plus very little words in Arabic. They do these jobs illegally. According to Dena Rashed in her article China comes to town "the market is all about Chinese products now. The quality is good compared to the cheap prices, and importing Chinese goods is easier than ever." Some people believe that Chinese products in Europe not so many like in Egypt. Egyptian traders do not want to make risks by buying expensive products, which are more profitable, but hard to sell them.

If they do not have the ability to sell these cheap products, losses will be smaller than the valuable products. Revise the paragraph organization. Your sub ideas (topic sentences) have to be relevant to the thesis statement. Conclusion??