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ELECTIVE: TEXTS IN TIME TEXTS AND CONTEXTS MODULE A: ADVANCED COURSE Teaching notes prepared by Melpomene Dixon BA Dip Ed
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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SYLLABUS CONTEXT
Explore: to study in depth in relation to context keeping in mind how the context influences the composition and reception of the text. Each text promotes particular values about a society through their content and form. Comparative and critical readings invite questioning these values for different contexts. Comparison requires finding the differences and similarities between texts
Module A: Comparative Study of Texts and Context This module requires students to compare texts in order to explore them in relation to their contexts. It develops students understanding of the effects of context and questions of value. Each elective in this module requires the study of groups of texts which are to be selected from a prescribed text list. These texts may be in different forms or media. Students examine ways in which social, cultural and historical context influences aspects of texts, or the ways in which changes in context lead to changed values being reflected in texts. This includes study and use of the language of texts, consideration of purposes and audiences, and analysis of the content, values and attitudes conveyed through a range Students develop a range of imaginative, interpretive and analytical compositions that relate to the comparative study of texts and context. These compositions may be realised in a variety of forms and media
Stage 6 Syllabus English, Board of Studies, NSW, 1999, p 51
Context is the range of personal, social, historical, cultural and workplace conditions in which a text is responded to and composed . Composers and consequently the texts they write are affected by the context in which they are written just as responders are affected by their own contexts in the way they receive a text . Forms: genre and type of text. Media: the physical form of the text eg film print electronic. These are also contexts which can affect the texts meaning Language: techniques used by the composer to convey meaning. This can refer to visual, spoken, auditory and written techniques. The techniques must be linked to the effect and the meaning.
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There can be more than one purpose. Purpose can be moral, didactic, commercial, entertainment, etc. Purpose is closely linked to the desired audience, the form and the medium. Analysis requires the close attention to the detail of the texts form and content especially as that affects values and attitudes. The events of the text must be interpreted and evaluated to show how the language is used to reflect and generate attitudes and values.
The outcomes on which the student may be assessed may be in any form and genre but must relate to the relationship between texts and context and must have or refer to an element of comparison.
MODULE A: Comparative Study of Texts and Context Elective 2: Texts in Time In this elective students compare how the treatment of similar content in a pair of texts composed in different times and contexts may reflect changing values and perspectives. By considering the texts in their contexts and comparing values, ideas and language forms and features, students come to a heightened understanding of the meaning and significance of each text.
English Stage 6, Prescriptions: Area of Study Electives and Texts, Higher School Certificate, 2009 and 2012. p 19 Board of Studies, NSW 2007
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Students will need to: CONSIDER A PAIR OF TEXTS: Frankenstein and Blade Runner (Directors Cut) in their Treatment of similar content What can be identified as common content or concepts in the two texts? In different times and contexts o What were the personal, social, historical, cultural and workplace conditions and values at the time the text was composed and how do these affect the meaning of the text? o Is there evidence of changing values and perspectives and can these be attributed to the different times and contexts? By COMPARING Values o What does each text value? or o What values are implied by each text? o How do the values of each text shed light onto the values of the other? Ideas o What ideas is each text offering? Language forms & features o How does the composer use the techniques of the chosen form to impart the values and ideas? AND COMING TO A HEIGHTENED UNDERSTANDING OF EACH TEXTS Meaning o Bearing in mind that meaning is not a fixed and final thing but a process through which we come to an understanding of texts, how does each text affect how or what the other text means to you? o Having compared the content, the context, the values, the perspectives, the ideas and the language of each text what can you take from each text about how we live our lives and what we value? Significance o Significant texts usually have the power to AFFECT an audience or to change ways of seeing the world as they deal with important and often innovative ideas that are expressed in an interesting way. Having considered the contemporary and subsequent reception of the text, what conclusions can you reach about why the text is regarded as significant?
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INTRODUCTION
The two texts Frankenstein and Blade Runner may be divided by nearly 200 years, be conveyed in different forms and develop their ideas in very different settings but there are distinct similarities between them. I say similarities rather than connections because to use the term connection could be imply that the one is an adaptation of the other. As close as the texts are in thinking, they should not be seen as representing a universal truth about the nature of mankind but rather as texts that are products of their times, that capture the discourses of the historical, social and political contexts in which each emerges. Both texts are now regarded as classics and yet, interestingly, neither was highly acclaimed with initial reviewers. Both texts have had extensive modification and editing by their composers as they changed the focus through rewriting and re-filming in subsequent editions. Both texts have influenced the creation of other texts, signalling that perhaps the early negative reception may have been due to the fact that each text broke boundaries.
A note to students The plethora of academic essays on each of the texts can appear at first to be helpful but it has its disadvantages. You must be careful not to depend on other sources for knowledge. It states clearly in the syllabus guidelines that the personal response is valued. This does not preclude looking at other responses, but it does mean that whatever you discuss must emerge from your own thorough knowledge of the book and film. Know the texts, know what happens and when it happens, use supporting evidence from the text for any statements that you make. If you use any ideas from other writers acknowledge these and only use that evidence that supports your own views and the question you need to respond to. And remember, you are looking considering each text in the light of the other so a commentary on only one text may lead you in directions that are not necessarily relevant to this comparative study. While there are many similarities between the texts, this unit is not about how the earlier Frankenstein has been adapted. The unit is concerned to explore how the same concepts are interpreted in different historical contexts. So the key question for you is: how does the context affect the meaning. Because there is more than one version of each text make sure you use the set text in your discussion. For the film the Directors Cut is the correct text, for the novel the Penguin Red Classics series provides the standard text to be used. Using other peoples essays can lead to the wrong edition being cited and of course you lose than much valued personal touch.
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CLARIFYING A POSITION
Activity: Do you agree or disagree? All infertile couples should have the right to in vitro fertilisation Stem cell research must be supported Cloning will have dangerous consequences Parents should take responsibility for their children Lack of family love can lead to criminal behaviour The thing that distinguishes humans from other creatures is emotions Robots can be made to take on all human attributes Science offers us a rational view of the world while horror texts manipulate our emotions. A genius does not have to answer to the world Science and ethics are antithetical concepts An appreciation of beauty is an intensely human experience Man does not have the right to play god The creation of life is a wonderful natural thing All human beings have a right to have a family Everyone should have access to transplants if they need them Be prepared to explain your choices to the class. Consider What is ethics? What is morality? What role should each play in science? Do Gothic texts ever consider ethics and science? Research Working in pairs, consider the ethics and morality of one of the following topics. Find arguments for and against the topic: In vitro fertilization Robots Stem cell research Cloning Transplants of live human organs Now take on one of the roles below and present a case for your topic: A minister of the church A scientific researcher An ethicist A lawyer A doctor A parent of a child with a genetic disorder An infertile couple (DONT assume that in vitro fertilization is different from the other topics. Historically in vitro fertilisation faced the same arguments about the sanctity of life as the other topics!)
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What human desire does your movie tap into? What scientific breakthrough is suggested by your movie? What fear does the movie tap into? How realistic is your movie scenario? What is the message about science that is being transmitted to you? Is science a positive or negative force in the film? What do you think are the ethical questions which the film raises? b) After listening to the presentations: What is the attitude towards science in most popular culture texts? Do the same activity with a science show such as Catalyst (on the ABC) or Life on Earth and ask the same questions. Do you get the same answers? What is the difference? c) Categorise the following scenarios as horror or science. Scenario A scientist constructs a human being from body parts collected in a graveyard A scientist transplants an organ from a dead body into a living one A scientist uses the DNA of a heterosexual couple to create their own baby A scientist grows embryos which are hatched in a laboratory A scientist joins an egg with sperm in a glass petrie jar and places this in a womans womb for incubation A scientist takes the skin tissue from a human being and grows it so that it can replace damaged skin on a human being A human being created by a scientist from dead body parts is rejected by his father the scientist and becomes a monster, killing those around him A child is brought up in poverty and neglect, ignored by his parents and he becomes a serial killer. A psychologist helps program a robot to have the emotional reactions of humans A psychologist works with a violent child to help develop an acceptable level of behaviour A scientist works with twins separating them and inflicting experiments on one child while the other is tested to see if he/she feels the twins sensations A scientist experiments on the skin of humans testing how much can be removed and how far it can be stretched to make lampshades What criteria did you use to make your decision? Is the decision so clear-cut? Arguments about science and modern intervention in the body and in life have always faced attacks because they can often be regarded as horror. When you study the two texts be aware of the issues that face scientists in each day and age: what claims are being made about life and the creation of life? By the end of the unit you should be able to answer: In what way do the modern ideas about scientific research reflect the concerns of the Romantic period? How do the different mediums available (novel and film) affect the way the readings are offered? 7 H/SF
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FRANKENSTEIN: CONTEXT
THE AUTHOR
Mary Shelleys Life 1797-1851 Mary Shelley (born Godwin) described herself as the daughter of two persons of distinguished literary celebrity, Mary Wollestonecraft and William Godwin. Her mother, an early feminist published A Vindication of the Rights of Woman in 1792, and her father was the author of An Enquiry Concerning Political Justice (1793) among other texts. Both parents were concerned with social justice and how individuals lived their lives in the world. They were concerned about what was ethical and moral. Mary Wollestonecraft died 11 days after her daughters birth but her influence on her daughter can be seen in the independent way Mary Shelley lived her life and in the ideas of her novel Frankenstein. Wollestonecraft already had an illegitimate child, Fanny, and believed in the sexual freedom of women. Despite their opposition to the convention of marriage, Wollestonecraft and Godwin had married to assure their child would be accepted into society. Godwin brought up his daughter and her half sister, Fanny. He believed that the proper way to learn was to read two or three books simultaneously and to this end provided them with access to his extensive library and to the conversations of the creative intellectuals such as William Wordsworth, Charles Lamb, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, William Hazlitt and others who were invited to the house regularly. Mary read widely including books on science and wrote that as a child she scribbled and my favourite pastimewas to write stories. She also kept a journal discussing the books she read and her conversations a valuable source of information about her and the context in which she wrote. The close personal and intellectual relationship between Mary and her father was resented by her stepmother, Mary Jane Clairmont, whom Godwin married in 1801. In November 1812, Mary met the wealthy Eton educated poet Percy Bysshe Shelley and his wife, Harriet Westbrook Shelley. Shelley who had already published two Gothic romances, Zastrozzi (1810) and St. Irvyne (1811), had fallen under the influence of Godwin. Godwin did not approve of and tried to prevent the relationship that followed but on 28 July 1814, Mary Godwin ran away with Shelley to France. Mary gave birth to four children, only one of whom survived to adulthood. Her contact with death is often cited as an influence on her. In the introduction to the 1831 edition of Frankenstein Mary Shelley wrote of the moment of invention, when the story came to her mind. The book Frankenstein was a direct result of a ghost story night with poets Byron and Shelley. Mary Shelley was so affected, trying to think of a story which would speak to the mysterious fears of our nature, and awaken thrilling horror that she spent a restless night dreaming. In her dreams she saw the hideous phantasm of a man stretched out, and then, on the working of some powerful engine show signs of life, and stir with an uneasy, half vital motion. The story she wrote was not of impossible occurrence.
ROMANTICISM
The term Romanticism refers to a literary period from the late 18th Century to the early 19th century. The Romantic writers were characterized by a focus on nature and the emotions with a heightened aesthetic sensibility and a rejection of the mechanical tendencies of classicism. (For a thorough discussion of the way the term was adopted see the Introduction to Romanticism: an anthology edited by Duncan Wu, Blackwell publishers). Romantic writers also had a political purpose: to speak out for the underprivileged. The Romantic period was a time of revolution. The French people had risen against their monarch 8
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as had the Americans against British rule. The everyday person was held up as worthy of consideration against the strictly held social divisions of the previous period. Writers such as Rousseau and Edmund Burke wrote about the rights of the individual. This was echoed in the word of the American Declaration of Independence drafted by Thomas Jefferson and others. A significant feature of this period then can be seen to be the focus on the individual, an idea that was first touted during the Renaissance. Belief in the rights of individuals was not only experienced as a political statement but influenced the creative writing of the period. For example, the poetry of the Romantics tried to capture the nobility of the peasant who toiled in the fields, rather than venerating traditionally great heroes. In so doing, they forged their own revolution against a convention of writing that excluded the masses. Characteristics of Romanticism include: A sense of the sublime The importance of nature A belief in the creative genius A return to the folk tales of the past (including Gothic) A heightened emotional sensibility (including fear) Famous British writers who were regarded as at the forefront of the Romantic movement included: Blake, Coleridge, Wordsworth, Keats, Byron and Shelley. Mary Shelleys connection to Shelley through marriage meant that she had an intimate acquaintance with the ideas he professed. They also shared a friendship with Byron, one of the most popular writers of the day.
SCIENCE
In her preface to the 1831 edition of Frankenstein Mary Shelley reports on the discussions that Byron and P. B. Shelley had about the work of Erasmus Darwin (grandfather of Charles Darwin) Many and long were the conversations between Lord Byron and Shelley, to which I was a devout but nearly silent listener. During one of these, various philosophical doctrines were discussed, and among others the nature of the principle of life, and whether there was any probability of its ever being discovered and communicated. They talked of the experiments of Dr Darwin, (I speak not of what the Doctor really did, or said that he did, but, as more to my purpose, of what was then spoken of as having been done by him,) who preserved a piece of vermicelli in a glass case, till by some extraordinary means it began to move with voluntary motion. Not thus, after all, would life be given. Perhaps a corpse would be re-animated; galvanism had given token of such things: perhaps the component parts of a creature might be manufactured, brought together, and endured with vital warmth (Re-animation = bring back to life Galvanism = the act of bringing back life through the use of electricity Vermicelli = thought to refer to vorticellae - misheard by Mary Shelley)
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Timeline of Attempts to Create Life Science during Mary Shelleys time Science in the 20th and 21st centuries1
1738 - Jacques Vaucanson builds a 1938 - Cloning envisioned. Dr. Hans Spemann mechanical duck that is copied from (Germany) nature (the first robot?). Experiments 1953 - Structure of DNA (deoxyribonucleic were conducted into galvanization. acid) discovered. 1774 - Pierre Jaquet-Droz in Switzerland 1970 - Dr. John B. Gurdon (U.K.) clones a invents the lifelike Lady Musician whose frog eyes follow her fingers and who breathes 1978 - Birth of first child, conceived by in vitro in time to the music to intimate emotion 1980 - U.S. Supreme Court rules that a late 18th Century - Luigi Galvani tries to genetically created new bacterium may bring a frog back to life by passing be patented. electricity though the legs 1984 - Dr Willadsen (Denmark) clones a lamb 1802 Erasmus Darwin writes The Temple of from a developing sheep embryo cell.. Nature and describes vorticellae (the 1994 - Dr. First (U.S.) clones calves from wheel animal) and how they keep alive early embryo cells. when appearing to all effects to be dead. 1995 - Drs. Ian Wilmut and Keith Campbell 1803, January 22 - nephew of Galvani, Giovanni (U.K.) create the world's first cloned Aldini - experiment carried out in London sheep, from embryo cells. with a corpse of hanged murderer George 1996 - Dr. Ian Wilmut and his team clone the Forster "the jaw began to quiver, the world's the first sheep from adult cells, adjoining muscles were horribly contorted, DOLLY. and the left eye actually opened The 1997 - A team led by Drs. Ian Wilmut and climax of the performance came as Aldini Keith Campbell (U.K.) create the first probed Forster's rectum, causing his sheep with human gene in every cell. clenched fist to punch the air, as if in fury, 1999 - Dr. Gerald Schatten (U.S.) leads a his legs to kick and his back to arch team to create a clone (a rhesus violently." He also applied the first electric monkey) by embryo splitting. shock to patients suffering depression 2000 - The first patents for cloning are given to (melancholia) the scientists who cloned Dolly 1803 - Sieur Robertson (in Paris) claims to be 2000 - Japanese scientists clone a baby bull able to reproduce heads and horns of from a bull clone itself snails 2000 - Five piglets are cloned by a company February 1803 - Galvani animates the the eventually wants to reproduce head of an ox organs for humans. 1802 - Humphrey Davy writes A Discourse, 2001 - Scientists Massachusetts clone human Introductory to a course of lectures on embryos. Chemistry and Chemical Philosophy 2001 - President Bush limits federally funded (1812) in which he states a new influence human embryonic stem cell research has been discovered, which has enabled 2001 - cat cloned by a co. - wants business man to produce from combinations of reproducing pets. dead matter effects which were formerly 2002 - California becomes the first U.S. occasioned only by animal organs the state to approve a law legalizing the man of science and the manufacturer are therapeutic cloning of embryos. daily becoming assimilated to each other2 2003 - Britain first country to issue research 1816 - Mary Shelley is reading Davey licences for human embryonic cloning to create stem cells. It specifies therapeutic, not reproductive, cloning. 2004 - Britain announces the first embryonic stem cell bank.
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adapted from: Monster/Information Please Database, 2007 Pearson Education, Inc. All rights reserved. Andrew Roberts Pandoras Box, page 4, http://www.mdx.ac.uk/WWW/STUDY/SHE6.htm
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How would the events (in the first column) have influenced Mary? Do you think that a knowledge of these experiments would change the way readers may see a text such as Frankenstein which is about the re-creation of life from dead bodies? Locate in the novel, the description of the experiments which Frankenstein conducted. Do they reflect any of the scientific testing in the timeline? What differences do you see between the attempts to replicate life in the 19th century and those of the 20th and 21st centuries? The right hand column includes legal and commercial aspects of genetic engineering. Locate these and explain why they are relevant in a timeline on genetics. What change might they indicate about the way we see scientific research nowadays? Consider how the early creation of mechanical dolls in this timeline relate to the film Blade Runner (you can also look at the article on page 22 to see how robotic research is developing mechanical dolls with feelings) What aspects of the research above are significant in Blade Runner? Further Reading If you are interested in finding out more about experiments to create life in Mary Shelleys time then look up the following websites: https://eee.uci.edu/clients/bjbecker/NatureandArtifice/week6f.html for The Times reports on experiments and pictures from the period (note the dates as you will see that these experiments continued for some time through the 19th century after Frankenstein was published). http://www.nlm.nih.gov/hmd/frankenstein/frank_birth.html - brief survey of medical influences on Mary Shelley
CONTEMPORARY RECEPTION
Contemporary reviewers of Frankenstein were shocked by the story and commented also on the poor quality of the writing and yet the book has endured and become a classic. Mary Shelleys name does not appear in the 1818 edition. Because her husband, the famous poet, Percy Bysshe Shelley, wrote the preface and it was dedicated to Godwin there were some who 11
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thought it may have been the work of Shelley. It was regarded as too shocking for a woman to write. Extracts from Contemporary Reviews of Frankenstein or the Modern Prometheus (1818) Review One Such is a sketch of this singular performance, in which there is much power and beauty, both of thought and expression, though, in many parts, the execution is imperfect, and bearing the marks of an unpractised hand. It is one of those works, however, which, when we have read, we do not well see why it should have been written;--for a jeu d'esprit it is somewhat too long, grave, and laborious, We are accustomed, happily, to look upon the creation of a living and intelligent being as a work that is fitted only to inspire a religious emotion, and there is an impropriety, to say no worse, in placing it in any other light.
The Edinburgh Magazine and Literary Miscellany: A New Series of "The Scots Magazine" 2 (March 1818): 249-253.
Review Two But success in this point is still subordinate to the author's principal object, which is less to produce an effect by means of the marvels of the narrations, than to open new trains and channels of thought, by placing men in supposed situations of an extraordinary and preternatural character, and then describing the mode of feeling and conduct which they are most likely to adopt.
Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine 2 (20 March/1 April 1818): 613-620. Written by Walter Scott
Review Three We need scarcely say, that these volumes have neither principle, object, nor moral; the horror which abounds in them is too grotesque and bizarre ever to approach near the sublime, and when we did not hurry over the pages in disgust, we sometimes paused to laugh outright; and yet we suspect, that the diseased and wandering imagination, which has stepped out of all legitimate bounds, to frame these disjointed combinations and unnatural adventures, might be disciplined into something better. but it is a sort of absurdity that approaches so often the confines of what is wicked and immoral, that we dare hardly trust ourselves to bestow even this qualified praise. The writer of it is, we understand, a female; but if our authoress can forget the gentleness of her sex, it is no reason why we should; and we shall therefore dismiss the novel without further comment.
The British Critic n.s.,9 (April 1818) 432-438.
Review Four The main idea on which the story of Frankenstein rests, undoubtedly affords scope for the display of imagination and fancy, as well as knowledge of the human heart; and the anonymous author has not wholly neglected the opportunities which it presented to him: but the work seems to have been written in great haste, and on a very crude and ill-digested plan; and the detail is, in consequence, frequently filled with the most gross and obvious inconsistencies.
The Literary Panorama and National Register, n.s., 8 (1 June 1818); 411-414.
Review Five But when we have thus admitted that Frankenstein has passages which appal the mind and make the flesh creep, we have given it all the praise (if praise it can be called) which we dare to bestow. Our taste and our judgement alike revolt at this kind of writing, and the greater the ability with which it may be executed the worse it is -- it inculcates no lesson of conduct, manners, or morality; it cannot mend, and will not even amuse its readers, unless their taste have been deplorably vitiated -- it fatigues the feelings without interesting the understanding
The Quarterly Review, 18 (January 1818): 379-385.
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Activity Working in groups Locate and copy the positive comments in each of the extracts above Locate and copy the negative comments What is being criticised? Is it the ideas or the writing or both or neither? From these comments what would you have estimated the books success rate to have been? Why do you think it continues to be published? Further reading and discussion For the full version of the contemporary reviews of Frankenstein look up: http://www.rc.umd.edu/reference/chronologies/mschronology/reviews.html Look at what each reviewer valued and what they did not. Look at the quotes from the novel chosen by the reviewers to see which sections stood out for them. Why were these sections important? What do the reviewers comments imply about the values of the society? What insights do these reviews give about the lack of popularity of Frankenstein?
From the Preface written by Mary Shelley to the 1851 edition of the book. In Shelley, Frankenstein, Cambridge literature, edited by D. Stevens
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the words. Techniques such as dialogue, descriptions, statements, imagery, allusions and many others are available to the writer for conveying ideas and themes. As the work of close study progresses in class, students should use their reading journal to note references and consider the following: Thematic concerns Notes and personal comments Dreams and their significance Creativity Women and their role as nurturers and creators of life (a feminist reading would look at the way Frankenstein tries to usurp the role of women and is punished) Obsession (it is often said that Mary Shelleys book especially the later 1834 edition- is a response to the obsessive state that captured Shelley during his creative periods.) Science and its role at the time Physiognomy one of the beliefs of the period was in physiognomy: that you could tell a mans character from his face. This is clearly present in Dracula by which time this notion was popular. Is this relevant in this text? A strong tenet in Romanticism was the insistence on the purity of man in a state of innocence. All men were born with the capacity for good but forces around them produced evil. Consider the creation of the monster. How is this belief reflected in the monster? Consider the subplot of the Turk. What prejudices about the Muslim religion emerge through these scenes? Literature and its influence what books does the monster read? Do research on the writers and the texts mentioned. How does the monster react to these texts? From his reading the monster learnt of the division of property, of immense wealth and squalid poverty; of rank, descent and noble blood. In a Marxist analysis, the critic looks at the marginalised in the text, especially those disempowered by lack of wealth. What would you focus on to produce a Marxist analysis of this text? The role of psychology in the text. How relevant is Godwins idea about the creation of the criminal mind. Why does the monster become a Monster? The sublime in nature is always present. Locate some significant scenes. What role does the scenic play in this text? Read carefully the entreaties of the monster. What important claim is he making about life? Their notes and references will provide the basis for an extended essay at the end of the novel study. 14
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THE INTRODUCTION
Tracing the opening quotation: Did I ask thee Maker from my clay To mould Me man? Did I solicit thee From darkness to promote me? Paradise Lost (X 743-5) In this quotation Adam is addressing his God ( his maker). The quote Mary Shelley uses is written by Milton who wrote Paradise Lost (1667) and Paradise Regained (1671). Paradise Lost is a book length poem about the Fall of Man. What is Adam asking? What is the Darkness to which he is referring? How are we expected to feel about God from this passage? What does this quotation suggest about Mary Shelleys monster? Would this quotation be appropriate for Blade Runner? Why/why not? In Chapter 15 of Frankenstein, the monster reads Paradise Lost which excited different and far deeper emotions: It moved every feeling of wonder and awe that the picture of an omnipotent God warring with his creatures was capable of exciting. Like Adam, I was apparently united by no link to any other being in existence: but his state was far different from mine in every respect. He had come forth from Gods hands a perfect creature, happy and prosperous, guided by the especial care of his Creator but I was wretched, helpless and alone. Many times I considered Satan as the fitter emblem of my condition, for often, like him, when I viewed the bliss of my protectors, the bitter gall of envy rose in me. How is the monster similar to Satan? In what way(s) is the monster different? What makes him wretched? Introductions to novels are always important. In the introduction the author sets up what is to come, establishes a sense of character and introduces a complication. There are four letters sent by Walton to his sister, the fourth letter written over a few days. Consider what is revealed about Walton in each letter. What are his aims? What does he value? (Consider education, solitude, obsession and dreams). Trace the religious references and determine what they add to the text. How does he react to Victor Frankenstein? In letter 1 he refers to Homer and Shakespeare, in letter 2 he refers to Coleridges Rime of the Ancient Mariner. What is the relevance of these references? What do they reveal about Walton? In letter 4 what is it that alerts Victor Frankenstein to his similarity to Walton when he says: Do you share my madness? The letters may seem a distraction from the main plot but they serve to foreground many important ideas and to show that what Frankenstein did was not an isolated act. Summarise what these letters reveal about creative genius and the desire for glory. Consider these ideas when you are watching Blade Runner.
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PLOT SUMMARY
A simple way of covering the novel in one lesson is through the Instant Book. Aside from providing a quick summary, it allows those students who have not finished to at least know what happens in the end so they can participate in activities. Allocate a chapter to each student and the task of summarising the content of that chapter in less than 2 minutes. Have each student present their summary orally and add it to a Word file to be distributed for class use. Each student then becomes the classs expert on at least 1 chapter and will be able to respond to questions about that section whenever they arise during the unit. In pairs students use the collected summary to Identify the important events in the novel Find a key quotation from each important scene Represent the novel as a plot graph charting initial incident (orientation), rise of suspense, complications/ crises, climax, denouement or resolution. Graphs are then shared with the class and compared.
CHARACTERISATION
Working in groups students take one character each and build up a character profile considering the following: Characters are revealed in their descriptions and the clothing they wear. Initial descriptions can change as the character faces challenges or grows Characters are revealed by the setting they are in and their reaction to different settings Characters can be understood by looking at their relationship with others. Characters are revealed in what others say about them. Characters are revealed by their own thoughts. Characters can be revealed by their actions Characters can be revealed from what they read Characters can be revealed through their choice of words. Look at the characters of: Walton, Victor Frankenstein, Clerval, Elizabeth, Victors parents, the monster in the light of each of the above. Often characters are constructed to represent a particular type of person or an idea. In this novel one of the key ideas is obsession consider how the characters of Walton, Victor Frankenstein and Clerval serve to illustrate aspects of this idea. Compare Victor Frankensteins relationship to his parents with his relationship to his creation.
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SETTING
This novel covers many different settings and each setting is important in the text. Complete this table. Setting Home in Geneva University of Ingolstadt The ship The de Laceys cottage in Germany England The mountains near home This novel is very much an international novel. Victors family travels to many different places before they settle. Victor himself is always on the move. The de Lacey family has connections to Turkey through Safie. Consider the type of world they inhabit. Are there any barriers? (This could be an interesting point of comparison with Blade Runner.) What do we do when all earthly places have been found? Where does the spirit of adventure and enquiry take us? Description Effect on Character or Plot
STRUCTURE
Frankenstein can be seen as a series of concentric circles or as parallel plots. The outer circle which frames the novel is composed of the letters of Walton, an adventurous sea captain trying to forge a way to the North Pole which had not yet been reached in Mary Shelleys time. He is writing to his sister about the events of the voyage and meeting a most peculiar man whose story he shares with her. The next circle is the story of Dr Frankenstein who is found wandering in the cold oceans and is taken on board, He is so alarmed at the reflection of himself that he sees in Walton that he delivers his own personal story as a cautionary tale about what happens to those who are obsessed with achieving glory and reject all companionship. The inner circle is the story of the monster, who remains unnamed and who articulately explains his suffering to Frankenstein and pleads for Frankensteins attention to his needs. He is central to the novel as an illustration of the results of obsession. Walton is at the beginning of his undertaking, still filled with the possibility of glory, Victor has completed his undertaking and is facing the consequences of what he has done and the monster is the loathsome terrifying outcome of Victors work. Each story is narrated in the first person but there are more voices that emerge in the letters of Elizabeth and Frankensteins father. Activity Draw a diagrammatic representation of the structure of the novel
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Metaphors Dreams Repetition of the word loathing Absence of a name for the monster Pathetic fallacy
Literary Allusions Mary Shelleys audience would have been well read and conscious of the texts and myths to which she referred. Consider each of the following literary allusions in Frankenstein and think of how her audience would have been influenced by these ideas. To complete the table, students should locate the references, research them to explain what they mean in the context and explain how Shelley positions the audience to a particular set of beliefs, attitudes and values. Allusion and page reference Miltons Paradise Lost Epigram & Ch 15 Promethean myth creation fire Ch 16 , 23 etc The rime of the Ancient Mariner Letter 2, Ch 5 PB Shelleys poem Mutability Ch 10 Sorrows of Werther Ch 15 Plutarch Ch 15 Volneys Ruins of Empires Wordsworths Tintern Abbey Ch 18 Brief explanation Positioning of readers
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Using the information in the table, write a paragraph explaining how allusions affect the meaning of the text, Frankenstein.
In this response Ridley Scott perceives that his life had an impact on his film. What events /images does he recollect that are relevant in the film? Read the rest of the interview above to find out: What films he made before Blade Runner What problems he had making the film Find other interviews with Ridley Scott to see what he says about the film and why he made it.
POSTMODERNISM
Scott Ridleys film Blade Runner was released in 1982, post World War II, Post Cold War and the holocaust, a period of rapid development in science and communication technology, and commercialism. It coincided with the phenomena of economic rationalism and globalization (often seen as American corporate imperialism), the rise of Asian involvement with Western nations and increasing concerns about the environment. 20
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Socially it was a time that saw the rise of feminism, Black Rights, Grey Power, Gay Power leading in general to a change of social attitudes towards marginalized groups. The media became more and more powerful. Medically it was a time of phenomenal change: from IVF to genetic research to DNA and stem cell research. Transplants of human organs became accepted though the implications of selling these has become an ethical minefield. At each stage of medical advance there has been an accompanying debate, an underlying anxiety about the ethical and moral implications of these actions, not necessarily but often using religious arguments. The media has been the prominent force in convincing people of the necessity of such programs as IVF. In Ridley Scott's Blade Runner, a techno-thriller set in the permanent twilight of Los Angeles in 2019, an owl perches in the main offices of the Tyrell Corporation, creators of the cyborgs that have set the story in motion. In a nice visual allusion, this owl takes flight through the penthouse suite, passing in front of a wall of plate glass windows, behind which a brilliant orange sun is setting. Since its first release in 1982, Blade Runner has been taken by critics as a vision of a particular historical epoch, the period many people today are calling postmodernism. Its portrait of ecological disaster and urban overcrowding, of a visual and aural landscape saturated with advertising, of a polyglot population immersed in a Babel of competing cultures, of decadence and homelessness, of technological achievement and social decay, has appeared to many people as prescient. By bringing Mary Shelley's story of the creation of an artificial human into the era of genetic engineering and new reproductive technologies, the film succeeded in crystallizing some of the fears, uncertainties, and desires that surround the coming of the postmodern. Curiously, this updated story is a better replication of the original than any of the adaptations that gesture toward the period of the novel, including Kenneth Branagh's recent version, which pledges fidelity in its very title, Mary Shelley's Frankenstein (1994).
Excerpt from the opening pages of - Jay Clayton, Concealed Circuits: Frankenstein's Monster, the Medusa, and the Cyborg, Raritan 15 (1996): 53-69:0
What are the features of postmodernism in the film, according to this extract?
SCIENCE
The timeline on page 10 offers an overview of scientific concerns in the 20th century and some exercises of comparison with Frankenstein. Robotics Consider also these recent articles about science in our present world and answer the questions that follow: EXTRACT ONE Richard Watson in Future Files states: The more technology becomes embedded in our lives the more we will run away from it By the year 2050 there will be two highly intelligent species on earth: genetically pure humans and technologically aided hybrid humans (naturals versus enhanced). Your toothbrush will be able to analyse your breath detect a disease and alert a doctor We will move a cursor across a screen with our thoughts and exchange messages telepathically.
Are we making history in the making? Richard Neville Review in Australian Literary Review September 5. 2007
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Compose your own creative piece using an idea about the future and present this to the class Extract TWO Gonsalves, 35uses neuroscientific and affective computing research, which explores the possibility of linking machines with emotion, to investigate the production of emotionally responsive videos She attempted to capture her own emotions, making short films and editing them while in a heightened state such as when she was angry or sad. I was asking if we display our emotions would it create more intimate relationships? ..That led to her working with neuroscientists In November Sydney based artist Boyle will join artificial intelligence specialist Lijin Aryananda. In Zurich for six months. Boyle is an expert in karakuri ningyo traditional Japanese mechanical dolls, and her sojourn in Switzerland will bring together two complementary traditionsmechanical dolls and clockwork combined with some of the worlds most advanced robotics.
Going where no man has gone before - The Australian Friday September 7, 2007
Why is an artist being used to help develop robots? Find your own articles on scientific/medical research and the accompanying debates Even though these are recent articles and the film is relatively old, they emerge from the same context and concerns about science. What events in the film can you link to these ideas? Environment Ridley Scott created his film against different concerns about nature to Shelleys time. In the early 1800s, worldwide there were moves to declare national park areas so that all could enjoy the wilderness. This was very much in keeping with Romantic concepts about the power of nature to furnish the senses. But there was also a sense that nature was replenishable. Nature was referred to as Mother Nature, in acknowledgement of the nurturing nature of the landscape. Discussions on nature used the female pronoun she and her so the personification of nature was reinforced. There was a greater consciousness of the vulnerability of nature in the twentieth century. In 1964 the status of national parks was assured in America through the Wilderness Act which paradoxically also drew attention to the existence of destructive forces of development, pollution, corporate misuse and other environmental enemies. Since then activists have been fighting against: land clearing, damming, water pollution, nuclear disaster and in defence of endangered species, as well as other perceived environmental threats. In 1986 there was a nuclear disaster at Chernobyl, and in 1989 the Exxon Valdez disaster reminded the world of the fragility of the environment and its vulnerability against human error. There were constant scientific predictions of the destruction of the world and also a search in the skies for other worlds. Global corporations became strong influences on an economy but also exploited third world countries. This is the context of the world that Ridley Scott inhabited. How have environmental disasters of the twentieth century such as Exxon Valdez and Chernobyl affected world perception about the environment? Look closely at the environment depicted in the film. Work in groups and list ten features of the world that Ridley Scott depicts what is the effect of the camera angles he uses when depicting the landscape? What impact do you think the environmental issues of the late 20th century disasters had on the environment created in the film? What is the significance of the pyramid? Look at the way it is decorated externally; look at the inner rooms. What is each aspiring to? Activity Construct a comparative table summarizing the information offered in on the contexts of Blade Runner and Frankenstein. 22
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FILM GENRE
Now, the film is not really about that at all, it's simply leveraging that possibility into one of those detective film-noir kinds of stories. People were familiar with that kind of character, but not with the world I was cooking up. I wanted to call it San Angeles, and somebody said, "I don't get it." I said, "You know, San Francisco and Los Angeles. Well, people want a comfortable preconception about what they're seeing. It's a bit like 20 years of Westerns and, now, 45 years of cop movies. People are comfortable with the roles. Even though every nook and cranny has been explored, they'll still sit through endless variations on cops and bad guys, right? In this instance, I was doing a cop and a different bad guy. And to justify the creation of the bad guy, i.e., replication, it had to be in the future.
Q&A: Ridley Scott has finally created the Blade Runner he always imagined by Ted Greenadol, 26.09 07 , in Wired Magazine Issue 15.10, www.wired.com/entertainment/hollywood/magazine/15-10/ff_bladerunner?currentPage=all
The quote above is an explanation offered by Ridley Scott on why he used the genres he used. Blade Runner has been described as a hybrid of romance, Gothic thriller, film noir, crime and science fiction genres. The film noir was a genre popular in America during and after World War II. Just like science fiction films about invasion by aliens, it captured a sense of the anxiety of the period, of the suspicion and the insecurities that abounded. Shadows, dark lighting, smoky rooms all served to create a mood of fear and the unknown. Much of the visual effects came from German Expressionism and such films as Cabinet of Dr Caligari from earlier decades. Some of the features of film noir are: Location and visual effects: Expressionistic lighting: eg dark rooms with light slicing through venetian blinds or struggling through fans Unusual camera angles that show the vulnerability of the characters Silences broken by garbage bin lids, swishing of the fan or subdued voices Spiraling smoke Dark alleyways, backstreets, narrow apartment building corridors and gloomy offices Skewed camera angles- disorienting visuals Jazz tunes Characters Dried out detective who has seen it all and has a cynical view of life- misogynistic antiheroes Two types of female : in the worthy traditional supportive role or femme fatale, leading the anti-hero into a spiders trap Mood and ideas Criminal violent Moral conflict Sense of hopelessness Melancholic Alienation from environment and from people Bleakness Disillusionment Weary of fighting evil The most famous of film noir are the Raymond Chandler inspired films where the detective delivers dreary monotonous monologue. The 1982 edition of Blade Runner included a voice over which was removed in the directors cut for a more subtle effect. 23
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Scott also refers to Westerns where good and bad are in conflict. Research: What are some of the features of Westerns that are relevant to this film? Locate elements of film noir in the film and explain how it affects meaning. What features of Gothic film are there in this film?
CONTEMPORARY RECEPTION
Blade Runner failed to take out any Oscar Awards in 1982. It was a box office failure. Even before its release it had a chequered existence. Film studios demanded a voice-over in a film noir style. They also wanted an upbeat ending to thwart what they perceived as an overly negative film. They failed to gauge the impact of the film fully. Twenty years on there are dedicated internet sites to the film: blog sites, interviews, connections, readings and reviews for Blade Runner. When the film continued to resonate with audiences a directors cut version was released in 1992. This time the voice-over was missing; certain scenes which had been cut were resurrected and the ambiguity of Deckard was clarified with subtle but clear messages that he was a replicant himself. Discussion Listen to Ridley Scotts discussion on The Ultimate Edition DVD tracing the decision making process of the film How important is the audience reception of a text? Should decisions be made according to the box office or does this compromise the integrity of the text?
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INTRODUCTION
The film starts near the end of the quest. The viewer is filled in on the background with the text incorporated in the opening titles: Early in the 21st Century, THE TYRELL CORPORATION advanced Robot evolution into the NEXUS phase - a being virtually identical to a human - known as a Replicant. The NEXUS 6 Replicants were superior in strength and agility, and at least equal in intelligence, to the genetic engineers who created them. Replicants were used Off-world as slave labor, in the hazardous exploration and colonization of other planets. After a bloody mutiny by a NEXUS 6 combat team in an Off-world colony, Replicants were declared illegal on earth - under penalty of death. Special police squads - BLADE RUNNER UNITS - had orders to shoot to kill, upon detection, any trespassing Replicant. This was not called execution. It was called retirement. In this exposition, we learn the date, 2019, the place, earth, and what has happened, that rebel replicants have returned to earth and have to be hunted. These replicants have used their artificially created free will to determine their destiny. Interestingly their name Nexus means a bond, a link, a connected group and yet they are regarded as the other. Their intelligence is mentioned but their use is to be slaves and they are expected to accept their status as slaves.
PLOT QUIZ
1. What does blade runner refer to? 2. Who represents the father in Blade Runner? 3. Where does he live? 4. What are the replicants designed for? 5. Why are they being eradicated? 6. What failsafe measure has been added to them? 7. What distinguishes replicants from humans? 8. Why is Rachael so remarkable? 9. Who has to go back for his photos? 10. What do photos signify in the story? 11. Who makes origami figures? Why and where? 12. What memories does Rachael have? 13. What memories does Deckard have? 14. What does he see in Leons photos that alerts him to another replicant? 15. What is that makes Sebastian feel at home with the replicants? 16. What poem does Roy quote when he goes to see the eyemaker? Why is this relevant? 17. Why does Tyrell call Roy the prodigal son? What is the significance of the reference? 18. What does Roy ask for? 19. How does he get to see Tyrell? 20. What are Roys last words? 21. What are the clues that Deckard may be a replicant himself? 22. What animals are associated with each of the replicants? 23. What are the features of the world of 2019?
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Activity: In groups 1. List the principal events in each plot (see structure). 2. Just like a novel the plot can be graphed. Locate on a graph the orientation (establishing shot) the complication/conflict and trace the storyline to its climax and resolution. 3. Examine a key scene in each plot and analyse/ evaluate the effectiveness of the techniques used by the composer to heighten the main points in that scene 4. Examine the ways in which the three plots are brought together/ integrated Compare your findings with the rest of the class.
CHARACTERISATION
In a novel, characters can be revealed in their appearance and the clothing they wear by the setting they are in and their reaction to different settings by looking at their relationship with others. in what others say about them. by their own thoughts. by their actions from what they read through their choice of words. As well as the above we have additional resources for the revelation of character in film. Characters are revealed by their position in the composition the objects that surround them the lighting that surrounds them the colours associated with them the music that accompanies them the camera angles. Activity This may be completed as a group task per character and the results shared with the class. 1. Construct a character sketch of the following characters: Deckard, Roy, Elden Tyrell, Rachel, Pris and Sebastian in the light of each of the above. Many of the characters are associated with an animal which becomes a motif in the film. 2. Locate the place in the film where the animal motif appears and explain its significance in terms of what it reveals about the character. Character Leon Zhora (Murder kick
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Inclusion of animals invites a discussion on the discourses that surround animals. Dogs are mans best friend and you can always tell the type of person someone is from how they treat their animals. In this film, animals are still being exploited by humans who keep them in cages and who use them for commercial purposes. The replicants are the ones who are associated with animals and yet one of the main questions in the film concerns the nature of humanity. If animals are indicative of a type of humanity then it is clear that in this world human beings have lost their humanity. The event of Roy Battys death is symbolically marked by the flight of a dove, whose purity and connection to the spirit elevates Roy to the status of a human being with a soul. Ultimately, in a world that is dominated by corporate greed, it is the artificial humans with their connection to animals who retain the qualities traditionally associated with humanity. For this module you need to consider how this relates to Frankenstein. Nature and what is natural are predominant considerations in Frankenstein but animals are absent for the most part.
SETTING
Our next vision is an aerial view of an urban wilderness, over which Satanic mills loom (Blakes writing provides an appropriate analogy here as Blake is later quoted in the film). Towers belch fires into the night sky and illuminate the dreary world below. This view gives some insight into why men are seeking colonies off the earth. The fires are reflected in a close up of an eye which we seem to enter as the films action begins. Setting Exterior: Urban landscape form above Exterior: Street scene Interior: interrogation centre Exterior: Tyrell corporation Interior: Tyrell corporation Interior: Deckards place Interior: Leons place Sebastians place Tyrells bedroom Description
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Here are two examples of ways of writing about the setting of the film and analysing how Ridley Scott has created the context. Note how the discussion includes close details and integrates examination of techniques such as camera angles and sound in a fluent way that captures a sense of the text. Example One The opening wide shot, of Los Angeles 2019, frames a vast, drab landscape, cluttered with dilapidated buildings, seedy bars, and squalid strip shops, and intended as a composite of Los Angeles and San Francisco. An oppressive atmosphere is created by images of burning fires, lurid neon signs and giant electronic advertising posters against a colour palette of black and brown, devoid of natural colour. People of Asian appearance crowd the screen and animals and plants are absent. Drenching acid rain, alluding to Ray Bradburys There Will Come Soft Rains, suggests that nuclear war has ravaged the earth. Overhead, in the congested airways, a blimp advertises a new life in the off-world colonies. The camera pushes in, forcing us into this unnatural place. The huge bulk of the Tyrell building is filmed from a low camera angle, its powerful pyramidal structure emphasised by the pattern of strong vertical and horizontal lines to flatten the street stalls below into insignificance. The production designs use of retrofitting, of thick corrugated pipes snaking around the exteriors of buildings, adds a surreal effect. On his first appearance the motionless Deckard is isolated and excluded by the camera placement, obscured by moving passers-by in the foreground.
Jeanette Heys, Daily Telegraph HSC English Study Guide, 2005
Example Two The Tyrell Corporation, residence and business place of Eldon Tyrell, the Godlike scientific genius behind the creation of the replicants, occupies a space central to Blade Runners narrative as well as this analysis. From the very outset of the film, in which we see an extreme long shot overlooking the futuristic cityscape of Los Angeles defined by massive techno-towers and near perpetual twilight, interrupted only by violent lightening strikes and fiery explosions resulting in stunning plumes of flamethe camera visually guides us towards the grandiose Mayan-style pyramid structures that are the headquarters of the Tyrell Corporation. The slow-moving journey over the cityscape is never comfortable, and the ominous non-diegetic music makes matters all the more disconcerting. Throughout the movement, there are several cuts to an extreme close up of an eye, in which we see the fireballs of this horrific worldspace vividly reflected in the iris. The flames become the sensorial experience through which the eye relates to its physical environment, and because the eye is never associated with a specific character, it easily becomes our eye. Experience becomes something which must be negotiated via a non-natural, technologically overdetermined worldspace, whereby we are alienated by the extreme lack of anything familiar. The characters in Frankenstein are able to articulate their experience through the spatial surround of Nature, whereas Blade Runner is completely devoid of Nature.
Evan L. Wendel, Worldspace in Mary Shelleys Frankenstein and Ridley Scotts Blade Runner: From Romantic Nature to Artificiality, mETAphor, Issue 2, 2008
STRUCTURE
Blade Runner is a film with multiple plots. All three significant plots are connected by Deckard the blade runner: Plot One: The detective story: Deckard, a blade runner is asked to complete the retirement of six rogue replicants who have returned to earth from the colonies. Plot Two: The rebellion: Six rebel replicants have escaped from the colonies to earth where they are seeking their Maker, Elden Tyrell, owner of the Tyrell corporation which specializes in creating the ultimate in artificial life. They have been equipped with a 28
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failsafe four year life span which they want to exceed because they have tasted life and want more. Plot Three: The romance: Deckard meets and grows close to the latest in the replicants, Rachael, a sensitive woman, who is not aware of her artificial status.
Lighting Hazy
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Editing Mise en scene Mood Mood is a very important element of this film and is created from the beginning through sound, camera, editing and lighting. What is the predominant mood in the film? How does this mood develop the themes of the film? How do sound, lighting and camera work together add to mood? Identify a striking example of sound, camera, editing and lighting ( one example for each) and explain how these work to create mood
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Point of View Cameras like novels often position us to see through someones eyes or they can capture an omniscient author position. Discuss how we are positioned to see the film. Consider the opening shot and the point of view that is established- describe how the camera does this. Does the point of view change? Deckard is the main character- are we seeing through his eyes? How does the camera work to position us? Describe a particular scene where point of view is created. Allusion in Blade Runner Allusions in Blade Runner are to visual as well as to literary texts. In the earlier section on genre the allusions to the film noir traditions are clear. There are, however, other allusions. Read the examples of allusions given below and complete the spaces wherever necessary: Literary Allusion Fiery the angels fell: deep thunder rolled around their shores, burning with the fires of Quote: When: Who says it: To whom: Source:
Orc Roy goes to Chew the eyemaker to get into contact with his maker Roy Batty Chew, the eyemaker William Blakes: America: A Prophecy, 1793 William Blake is a poet and illustrator of the Romantic period. From an early age he had visions of angels. In this poem he celebrates the conflict against British rule by the Americans. He was a supporter of the French and American revolutions, believing in the freedom of everyday people to stand for their rights. Fiery the angels rose and as they rose deep thunder rolld/ Around their shores indignant burning with the fires of Orc
Original words: What it shows about character Why it is said: Consider in your response the greatness that Blake must have envisioned for America in the late eighteenth century. Compare this to the situation depicted in the film. Consider that here is a new race fighting for the right to live longer, pleading to their father for mercy, just as the American nation rose against their father nation. Why make this statement here, with the eyemaker? Biblical Allusion Quote: Youre the prodigal son. Youre quite a prize When: Who says it: To whom: Source: Original : Why it is said: Christian Allusion Image: Roy thrusts a nail through his hand so that the pain reminds him of life When: Original Why the is image used:
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Philosophical allusion Quote: When: Who says it: To whom: Source: Descartes Original I think, therefore I am words: Why it is said: Intertextuality Perhaps the strongest intertextual reference is to Frankenstein but Blade Runner creates its own meaning relevant to its own context. Other intertextual references include to Paradise Lost, the Promethean myth, and to the novel Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?.
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Conventions of Gothic
Setting A ruin, A castle far away from mankind, Perched on a hillside, A madhouse, Dreams, Night Themes About the psyche Reacting against oppression Evil versus good Attraction to the dark side and temptation Where the spirit world has power The presentation of the unpresentable Characters A sensitive heroine/ impetuous lover A persecuted maiden The supernatural A hero/heroine who can resist evil A man of science A mad person
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Science fiction deals with: The fear/uncertainty of the possible The opposition of technology/new knowledge to religion The nature of humanity (measuring this against science) Warnings about reliance on technology
Conventions of Sci Fi
Setting The science lab The ordinary world ( serves as contrast or place under attack) Other worlds/planets Difficult to find places, away from civilisation Characters The mad scientist The everyday people The artifical life/ a new invention The sceptics Themes Humanity is under attack Religion is under attack Nostalgia for the past Science as antithetical to goodness The natural is overwhelmed by the unnatural
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Write a paragraph explaining why Frankenstein or Blade runner can be regarded as Gothic texts or science fiction.
TEXTS IN TIME
This section will build on the previous sections focusing on the relationship between the two texts. The exercises and examples will give ways of understanding how each text is a product of its own context as texts in different times.
TEXTS IN CONTEXT
Text A If the power of reflecting on the past, and darting the keen eye of contemplation into futurity, be the privilege of man, it must be granted that some people enjoy this prerogative in a very limited degree. Every thing new appears to them wrong; and not be able to distinguish the possible from the monstrous, they fear where no fear should find a place, running from the light of reason, as if it were a firebrand.
Mary Wollstonecraft, A Vindication of he Rights of Women, 1792, quoted by Jay Clayton in Frankensteins Futurity: Replicants and Robots, in Cambridge Companion to Mary Shelley.
Text B By bringing Mary Shelley's story of the creation of an artificial human into the era of genetic engineering and new reproductive technologies, the film succeeded in crystallizing some of the fears, uncertainties, and desires that surround the coming of the postmodern. Curiously, this updated story is a better replication of the original than any of the adaptations that gesture 33
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toward the period of the novel, including Kenneth Branagh's recent version, which pledges fidelity in its very title, Mary Shelley's Frankenstein (1994).
Jay Clayton, "Concealed Circuits: Frankenstein's Monster, the Medusa, and the Cyborg," Raritan 15 (1996): 53-69:0
Text C while deeply conscious of Frankenstein, Blade Runner evokes the earlier text not with the intention of adapting it but rather of re-engaging with the issues it raises in a new and altered cultural context: at the end of the industrial age and the beginning of the computer era. Back at the beginning of industrial modernism Mary Shelley interrogated the Promethean character of human potentiality with an ambivalent spirit of celebration and apprehension celebrating the overreaching spirit of the creative imagination in Victors daring, at the same time pondering the cost of such arrogance in a world that had not yet had to deal on a mass scale with the effects of industrialization and technologisation In Blade Runner the society it depicts is the questionable effect of two centuries of industry, technology and moral indifference what gives each of these texts its power is the way the creators have anchored their vision in the social and cultural realities of their time. Frankenstein takes the idea of the creative arrogance of the Romantic imagination and the amorality of industrialised technology as its point of departure for fashioning a Gothic world in which creation turns on its creator in revenge for the indifference of its monumental egocentricity. In a similar way Blade Runner takes 1980s globalisation as its point of departure for imagining a dystopic future we soon realise that the human propensity for irrational hatred and violence remains.
David Kelly, Sympathy for the Double: Replication from Frankenstein to BladeRunner New Directions, English Association, University of Sydney edited by R. Madeleine.
Consider carefully what each of the above says. What statement is being made about texts in contexts? What feature of each context is being foregrounded in the discussion? A critical view
The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk. Hegel, 1821
Blade Runner conveys the advent of a new age by the paradoxical means of marking its end. The flight of the owl is one of many apocalyptic touches that define for the viewer the limits of a period, the far end of an epoch just now getting underway. Hegel's words from my epigraph refer to the wisdom that comes only with hindsight, the retrospective understanding available at the end of an epoch. But the film's use of the owl is not exhausted by this insight. The owl has spread its wings, though. What has the power to deconstruct so evocative an image? A monster, of course. But at first the viewer is unaware that a monster has entered the scene. As the bird settles serenely back onto another perch, a handsomely dressed woman strides into the room, introducing herself with a question: "Do you like our owl?" Deckard, a police officer played by Harrison Ford, has come to Tyrell to examine one of its new generations of cyborgs. "It's artificial?" he replies. Still advancing, the woman answers, "Of course it is." The camera lingers on her face, forging a link between owl and woman. The implication that both are equally artificial flickers to consciousness before being submerged in a more powerfully sexual suggestion--that both are property, objects to be bought and sold. "Must be expensive," Deckard comments, the innuendo audible in his voice. The camera remains focused on the woman's face. "Very," she replies, then adds, as if to underline the association, "I'm Rachel." The image of the owl is destabilized in at least three ways-- as artificial creature, as commodity, and as woman--which in the film's terms turn out to be the same way, as monster. 34
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1. What does the owl represent according to this extract from Claytons article? 2. Note the inclusion of references to the techniques in the film (in bold). What techniques are referred to and how do they work to position us to a point of view? Note the detail with which the critic describes the text, explains its meaning and then connects it to the concept. 3. What does this mean: Blade Runner conveys the advent of a new age by the paradoxical means of marking its end? 4. Explain in your own words the meaning of the owl.
1818: Frankenstein or the Modern Prometheus Mary Shelley writes her book in which Dr Frankenstein acts like Prometheus in trying to steal the secret of life from God and as a consequence he is punished by the monster who stalks him and his family eternally.
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Prometheus Unbound by Percy Shelley -1820 Shelley takes liberties with Aeschylus ideas and focuses on the results of Prometheus release. He is influenced by Miltons depiction of Adam and of Satan in Paradise Lost. 1831 the second edition of Frankenstein is published with changes 1982 Blade Runner - how does Blade Runner follow the Promethean myth? Look for the Greek references in the setting as well as ideas that emerge.
Each of the above texts builds on ideas that have come before and creates its own new text. The Preface to the 1818 edition of the novel, Frankenstein, was written by Percy Shelley and acknowledged influences such as The Iliad, Shakespeares The Tempest and Midsummer Nights Dream and especially Miltons Paradise Lost. Intertextuality Percy Shelley, wrote about the act of imitation in the Preface to his play Prometheus Unbound. He made a conscious decision to alter the story, seeing Prometheus as a fallen angel, influenced by Miltons depiction of Satan (consider this also in your analysis of Blade Runner). He doesnt apologise for changes he has made but sees these as part of a writers craft to create a text that reflects its own contemporary concerns: As to imitation, poetry is a mimetic art. It creates, but it creates by combination and representation. Poetical abstractions are beautiful and new, not because the portions of which they are composed had no previous existence in the mind of man or in nature, but because the whole produced by their combination has some intelligible and beautiful analogy with those sources of emotion and thought, and with the contemporary condition of them(a poet must not) exclude from his contemplation the beautiful which exists in the writings of a great contemporary. A poet is the combined product of such internal powers as modify the nature of others; and of such external influences as excite and sustain these powers; he is not one, but both. Every mans mind is, in this respect, modified by all the objects of nature and art; by every word and every suggestion which he ever admitted to act upon his consciousness; it is the mirror upon which all forms are reflected, and in which they compose one form. My friends say my Prometheus is too wild, ideal, and perplexed with imagery. It may be so. It has no resemblance to the Greek drama. It is original; and cost me severe mental labor. Authors, like mothers, prefer the children who have given them most trouble.
Preface to Prometheus Unbound by Percy Shelley1820
One of the features of postmodern texts is pastiche which refers to the combination of seemingly dissimilar objects and texts. Many conservative modern critics react negatively to the alteration of texts wishing to see them as original and without alteration. DISCUSSION: After reading the extract above, how do you think Mary Shelley or Percy Shelley would have reacted to any 20th century alteration of Frankenstein to create a more contemporary text?
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PARENTAL RESPONSIBILITY
Frankenstein Do your duty towards me, and I will do mine towards you and the rest of mankind. When faced by his Father, the monster reminds Frankenstein of his duty as a father with these words. The parent/child relationship is seen as a reciprocal one. Good conduct from the father leads to good conduct from the child. This idea was very much part of Mary Shelleys world view. Both her parents had very strong social sensibilities and had written about the responsibility of the state to the people and the parent to the child. Her father William Godwin was conscious of the importance of upbringing in the development of good human beings when he wrote: What is born into the world is an unfinished sketch, without character or decisive feature impressed upon it. There is for the most part no essential difference between the child of the lord and of the porter. ..Various external accidents, unlimited as to the period of their commencement, modify in different ways the elements of the animal frame. Everything in the universe is linked and united together. 4 Mary Shelleys mother voiced her concerns about upbringing even more explicitly, declaring that: A great proportion of the misery that wanders in hideous forms around the world is allowed to rise from the negligence of parents.5 Frankensteins nameless creature looks like a monster and acts like a monster but doesnt always speak like a monster. Frankenstein creates a monster whose appearance is so frightening that he runs from his own creation. From there follows a sorry tale of an abandoned child who wanders the countryside, seeking companionship and love. This child has within him the capacity to learn and is able to miraculously read about the world from the greatest of texts, from Milton to Werther and others. Unfortunately his appearance frightens others just as it did his creator; alone and deserted he turns on his makers family and sets out to destroy all that Frankenstein loves. Murder and violence confirm Frankensteins belief that he has created a monster and yet the reality is that Frankenstein has to accept responsibility for his actions. Look at the following quotes about family from Frankenstein. Locate who says each Consider what ideas each quote develops about the parent and the child. Compose a response to this statement, using the quotes and any other evidence you locate: Ultimately Frankenstein is about the responsibility of the parent to the child
Elizabeths father exerted himself to obtain the liberty of his country . He became the victim of its weakness obsession leading to the breakdown of a family (Chapter one) My parents were possessed by the very spirit of kindness and indulgence. when I mingled with other families I distinctly discerned how peculiarly fortunate my lot was and gratitude assisted the development of filial love. (Chapter two) A new species would bless me as its creator and source; many happy and excellent natures would owe their being to me. No father could claim the gratitude of his child so completely as I should deserve theirs.(Chapter 4) How can I describe my emotions at this catastrophe, or how delineate the wretch whom with such infinite pains and care I had endeavoured to form? His limbs were in proportion, and I had selected his features as beautiful. Beautiful!--Great God! His yellow skin scarcely covered the work of
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muscles and arteries beneath; his hair was of a lustrous black, and flowing; his teeth of a pearly whiteness; but these luxuriances only formed a more horrid contrast with his watery eyes, that seemed almost of the same colour as the dun white sockets in which they were set, his shrivelled complexion and straight black lips. (Chapter 5) You, my creator, abhor me; what hope can I gather from your fellow-creatures, who owe me nothing? they spurn and hate me. ( Chapter 10) For the first time, also, I felt what the duties of a creator towards his creature were, and that I ought to render him happy before I complained of his wickedness (Chapter 10) I heard of the difference of sexes; and the birth and growth of children; how the father doted on the smiles of the infant, and the lively sallies of the older child; how all the life and cares of the mother were wrapped up in the precious charge; how the mind of youth expanded and gained knowledge; of brother, sister, and all the various relationships which bind one human being to another in mutual bonds. (Chapter 13) Like Adam, I was apparently united by no link to any other being in existence; but his state was far different from mine in every other respect. He had come forth from the hands of God a perfect creature, happy and prosperous, guarded by the especial care of his Creator; he was allowed to converse with, and acquire knowledge from, beings of a superior nature: but I was wretched, helpless, and alone as the fitter emblem of my condition; for often, like him, when I viewed the bliss of my protectors, the bitter gall of envy rose within me. God, in pity, made man beautiful and alluring, after his own image; but my form is a filthy type of yours, more horrid even from the very resemblance. Satan had his companions, fellow-devils, to admire and encourage him; but I am solitary and abhorred. (Chapter 15)
Consider also the role of other parents in the text: Safies and Justines parents; Frankensteins mother; the woodcutter. Blade Runner In Blade Runner there are two parallel plots. Deckard, a blade runner, is searching for missing replicants who have to be retired before they wreak havoc and destruction on the world. Their maker, Eldon Tyrell, has placed in them a failsafe measure of a shorter life span. The second plot centres on Roy Batty, a combat model replicant who is searching for his maker. He has grown to love life so much that he wants Tyrell to correct the tragedy of his short life. Unlike Frankensteins monster he is attractive, blonde and blue eyed, physically perfectly formed, very much the Aryan ideal aspired to by Hitler, and yet he is still despised. Watch the scene in the Tyrell Corporation when Batty approaches Eldon Tyrell. Add film directions to the script below as you watch and consider how the techniques reinforce the ideas. Describe the setting. Why is the action in a papal bedroom? Why is Tyrell wearing papal robes?
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How do the film directions reinforce the words and create ideas?
Tyrell : Can the maker repair what he makes? A coding sequence cannot be revised He kills his maker close up - his face is filled with remorse and pain -
Choir voices -Shot of skylight with star; light beams on Roy; soft fade into next scene.
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Both Frankenstein and Blade Runner make Biblical allusions at the moment of the request. Why is this? Compare the attitudes of each father to the son What is the meaning of Roys reference to the god of biomechanics? In what way does the different context of each text influence meaning in these scenes from novel and film? Consider also: How does Leon react to questions about his mother? How does Rachael remember her mother? Mothers of the monsters are obvious by their absence in both texts: what conclusions can you draw from this omission?
IN SEARCH OF HUMANITY
William Godwin, Mary Shelleys father wrote: Man is in truth a miracle. The human mind is a creature of celestial origin, shut up and confined in a wall of flesh. We feel a kind of proud impatience of the degradation to which we are condemned. We beat ourselves to pieces against the wires of our cage, and long to escape, to shoot through the elements, and be as free to change at any instant the place where we dwell, as to change the subject to which our thoughts are applied. 6 To be human is not necessarily to have humanity. Humanity suggests something elevated from the everyday human acts of living, eating and breathing. Humanity involves a spiritual, moral and ethical dimension that separates man from animal. In a novel the sense of humanity emerges through the descriptions of the setting and the character, the words the characters speak, their actions and the reactions of those around them. In a film humanity can be suggested by the same elements as the novel but rather than words the filmmaker uses lighting, setting, camerawork and editing to influence the audience. Consider: How are Godwins sentiments about humankind illustrated in Frankenstein and Blade Runner? Look at the following quotations and analyse them to determine the way humanity has been interpreted in each text. You may find it helpful to prepare your material in a table such as the one below. Their declarations: Frankensteins monster
I shall no longer see the sun or stars, or feel the winds play on my cheeks. .The light of that conflagration will fade away; my ashes will be swept into the sea by the winds (Chapter 24)
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I've seen things you people wouldn't believe. Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of OrionAll those moments will be lost in time like tears in rain. Time to die.
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The films theme of dehumanisation has also been sharpened Deckard, the replicant hunting cop is himself a replicant. Mr Scott confirmed this, yes hes a replicant. He was always a replicant. This may disappoint some viewers. Deckard is the films one person with a conscience. If he is a replicant, it means that there no more decent human beings.
Cult classic restored again, Fred Kaplan, New York Times, Sept 30, 2007
If we read the novel closely and look at the entreaties of the monster, Frankenstein alerts us to the possibility that men do not always have the capacity for humanity. The monsters argument is not only central to the book physically but it is also central to the ideas of the book. The monster reminds us - in a beautiful natural alpine environment - that because we create the monsters of the world, we are also responsible for them. Blade Runner further develops this idea by presenting us with a world which is the consequence of lack of responsibility. It is a monstrous world of fires and acid rain, filled with dehumanized buildings where even the skies are inhabited by machines. The humans who inhabit the streets lack any sense of community or connection; even the animals have disappeared due to the selfishness of man. This world is the consequence of an obsessive corporate culture that forgets about the human and uses science to its own ends. Elden Tyrell tells us that: Commerce is our goal here at Tyrell. More human than human is our motto. Tyrell regards his replicants like any other machine; theyre either a benefit or a hazard. He illustrates a lack of humanity in his inability to extend human fellowship to his creations. Blade Runner can in this way be seen as the natural progression of the ideas presented in Frankenstein.
Write a paragraph responding to this question: Can the monster become more human than the humans? Write an essay responding to this question: How does the context of each text affects the way it explores the concept of humanity?
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Blade Runner
Tyrell: We began to recognize in them strange obsessions. After all they are emotionally inexperienced with only a few years in which to store up the experiences which you and I take for granted. If we give them the past we create a cushion or pillow for their emotions and consequently we can control them better. Deckard: Memories. You're talking about memories. . Roy to Leon: Did you get your precious photos? Rachael: You think Im a replicant don you? Deckard: Hah Rachael: Look its me with my mother Deckard: Yeah remember when you were six? You and your brother snuck into an empty basement windowyou remember the spider that lived in a bush outside your window?... Implants, those arent your memories There somebody elses.
The extracts above both express sentiments that grow out of memory stimulated by a picture of a loved one and yet one is spoken by Frankenstein and the other by his monster. It seems therefore that the power to be moved by the memories evoked by a picture is a human trait that can be shared by the monstrous creation. Elden Tyrell takes this understanding further and incorporates it into the creation of his replicants. He realises the danger of lack of attachment, and endeavours to create a cushion or pillow for their emotions. Emotions become a force for control of the replicant and in the end it is this emotional knowledge that leads Roy to save Deckard. Modern science provides a context of technology for creating these memory implants Writing: Write an essay in response to the following question: How does context affect the way image and memory are explored in each text?
The sublime refers to the effect of nature on the human - the beauty or terror of the scene creates a sense of awe in the observer. This power of nature to transport the senses was therefore manifested not only as a positive force but also as fear. Mary Shelley prefaces many of her chapters with an exploration of the scene as an immense and overwhelming presence. It seems quite appropriate then that the beautiful regions of the alps where Frankenstein walks to relieve himself of the pain of all the tragedies that have befallen him, is also the place where he comes upon his creation. In this way the sublime can be enacted as the full range of emotions. 41
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Look at the following extracts and answer the questions that follow. Extract One - Chapter 7
From: I quitted my seat, and walked on, although the darkness and storm increased every minute, To: Alas! I had turned loose into the world a depraved wretch, whose delight was in carnage and misery; had he not murdered my brother?
1. Find 5 adjectives used to describe each scene and determine whether they carry positive or negative connotations 2. Find emotive words. Locate the exact element of the scene that causes this emotion (cause and effect) 3. Find references to the senses. Which sense is most prominent? 4. How does imagery of light and dark work in the text? What connotations does this binary opposition hold? 5. Find ten poetic figures of speech such as metaphors, personification and similes and explain how each works in the extracts. 6. Pathetic fallacy is a term coined by Ruskin who criticized the way nature was personified as if having emotions. This connection with feelings (pathos) was a fallacy (misunderstanding). An example would be when Autumn is represented as a woman. Find an example of the use of a pathetic fallacy and explain its function in the text. 7. Find references to a sense of God. What role does God have in each scene? 8. Find any Gothic references and determine their role in this part of the text. What would Gothic references have suggested to Shelleys contemporary audience? 9. What has happened before the extract? What happens after the extract? In what way is this extract pivotal to the action? 10. What is the mood of each extract. How is this mood created? 11. How could you show the sense of sublime in an urban modern setting? Look carefully at Blade Runner and identify relevant scenes of the sublime. Write a creative paragraph describing a setting in Blade Runner as if it were in a novel.
WORLDSPACE
The following extracts give an idea of how to write a comparison of the worldspace in each of the texts. 1. Highlight all the words referring to techniques.
The Tyrell Corporation, residence and business place of Eldon Tyrell, the Godlike scientific genius behind the creation of the replicants, occupies a space central to Blade Runners narrative as well as this analysis. From the very outset of the film, in which we see an extreme long shot overlooking the futuristic cityscape of Los Angeles defined by massive techno-towers and near perpetual twilight, interrupted only by violent lightening strikes and fiery explosions resulting in stunning plumes of flamethe camera visually guides us towards the grandiose Mayan-style pyramid structures that are the headquarters of the Tyrell Corporation. The slowmoving journey over the cityscape is never comfortable, and the ominous non-diegetic music makes matters all the more disconcerting. Throughout the movement, there are several cuts to an extreme close up of an eye, in which we see the fireballs of this horrific worldspace vividly
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reflected in the iris. The flames become the sensorial experience through which the eye relates to its physical environment, and because the eye is never associated with a specific character, it easily becomes our eye. Experience becomes something which must be negotiated via a nonnatural, technologically overdetermined worldspace, whereby we are alienated by the extreme lack of anything familiar. The characters in Frankenstein are able to articulate their experience through the spatial surround of Nature, whereas Blade Runner is completely devoid of Nature.
2. Find the topic sentence of the following paragraph 3. Highlight all the points of comparison 4. In a table of two columns, list each point made next to the evidence given for each point
What is especially interesting here are the noticeable differences between the two mountains, that is, Mont Blanc and the Tyrell Corporation. In Frankenstein, Victor reaches the village of Chamonix and later wanders the valley below Mont Blanc, and states that these sublime and magnificent scenes afforded me the greatest consolation that I was capable of receiving. He elaborates further, saying: They congregated round me; the unstained snowy mountain-top, the glittering pinnacle, the pine woods, and ragged bare ravine; the eagle soaring amidst the cloudsthey all gathered round me, and bade me be at peace (Shelley, 91-92). Any such peace, articulated through Romantic language evoking Nature is simply not possible in Blade Runner. Unlike Mont Blanc, and the valley below it, the Tyrell Corporation does not exhibit the illusive, indefinable beauty of sublime Nature, but rather embodies a synthetic artificialityit is a structure which is both mathematically and mechanically defined because it is, like almost everything else in Blade Runner, a manmade creation.
From : Evan L. Wendel : Worldspace in MaryShelleys Frankenstein and Ridley Scotts Blade Runner: From Romantic Nature to artificiality. ( In mETAphor, Issue 2, 2008)
5. Using this passage for reference, how does each composer capture a sense of the sublime while using such different media for transmission of meaning? 6. How different is the postmodern sublime to the Romantic sublime? (in other words how does the context affect the way the sublime is viewed?) Locate evidence from each text to complete this grid World Interior World Frankenstein Blade Runner
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Extended Writing Write a paragraph explaining how Shelleys references to the sublime extend her ideas. Write a comparison of use of the sublime in Blade Runner and Frankenstein Write an imaginative piece of work about a time when you felt a sense of the sublime when faced by nature Write an imaginative piece of work using a modern urban scene to create a sense of the sublime Essay Topic: How has the context of each of the composers (Mary Shelley and Ridley Scott) affected the representation of their respective worlds and the place of nature and the natural in these worlds?
Reflecting changing values and perspectives Eg About science About creating new life About the creative genius About humanity About the sublime About parental relationships About monsters
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EXAMINATION PREPARATION
Return to the rubric Once the texts have been studied and comparisons drawn it is important to return to the rubric. Students should read the rubric again to make sure they are able to answer any of the questions raised by the rubric statements. Anticipate the question Working in groups students should analyse the requirements of the rubric, considering what might be necessary in an examination. Examination questions should reflect the statements of the rubric. With this in mind students should devise five question that bring together both texts and the elements of the rubric. Students should list these questions and as a group rank them as most likely to least likely explaining their choices. Suggestions can be made to refine the questions. Practise writing These questions can form the basis of class practice or a students own program of study. Answer the question Any answer MUST respond directly to the set question. Its important to know when to leave out information if it isnt relevant to the question. Know the texts Knowing the texts is essential but only that knowledge which is relevant should be used and care has to be taken not to tell the story. A way of avoiding recount is by organising the essay under paragraphs that refer to ideas rather than following the novel or film from beginning to end. Use evidence from the texts All statements must be supported by evidence from BOTH texts. This evidence should be balanced between paraphrase and direct quotation. Use quotations Quotations add evidence but must not be too long the essence of the quotation should be located and only this should be used in an examination essay. Focusing on the essentials of the quotation allows the student to develop their own explanation and illustrate understanding and personal engagement with the text. Placing the quotation first changes the focus of the sentence and implies that the student is jumping from quotation to quotation. Making a statement about the topic and then using the quotation to illustrate this, foregrounds the idea. Quotations should become part of the sentence as much as possible rather than inserted. Refer to techniques Understanding HOW the author and director have created meaning is important but this information must SUPPORT any answer and not DRIVE it. There are samples in this unit of good paragraphs where the techniques offer valid justification of how meaning is created, without becoming a list of techniques disconnected from overall meaning. Write a balanced essay There are two texts to write about so there should be as much as possible an equal time spent on each. There are two ways of constructing the essay: under ideas that emerge from the question (comparing the elements of each text under these ideas) or dealing with one text then the other. If the second option is taken there must be space given to the comparison of the two texts. Both methods work.
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Becker, B., 2006 Nature and artifice: animation. Sighted 2.10.2007 https://eee.uci.edu/clients/bjbecker/NatureandArtifice/week6f.html Clayton,J. 1996 Concealed Circuits: Frankenstein's Monster, the Medusa, and the Cyborg, Raritan 15 (1996): 53-69:0 Clayton, J. 2003 Frankensteins Futurity: Replicants and Robots, Cambridge Companion to Mary Shelley, ed by E. Schor, Cambridge University Press: Cambridge English Stage 6, Prescriptions: Area of Study Electives and Texts, Higher School Certificate, 2009 and 2012. p 19 Board of Studies, NSW 2007 Fraistat, N. Jones, S. Stahm C. (editors) 2006 Romantic Circles University of Maryland Sighted 2.10.2007 http://www.rc.umd.edu/reference/chronologies/mschronology/reviews.html
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Stevens, D. 1998, ed Shelley, Frankenstein, Cambridge Literature: Cambridge Stevens, D. 2000, The Gothic Tradition, in Cambridge Contexts in Literature series: Cambridge Wendel, E. L. 2008, Worldspace in Mary Shelleys Frankenstein and Ridley Scotts BladeRunner:From Romantic Nature to Artificiality, mETAphor, Issue 2, 2008
Wollestonecroft, M. 1792, A Vindication of the Rights of Women, Chapter XII Duty to Parents http://www.bartleby.com/144/
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