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APPENDIX A: LITERATURE REVIEW
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My research contains information that has been very well researched because
it happens to be the most talked about topic in the news today. Since Barack Obama
was elected president on November 4, 2008 there have been many articles about his
character and how his ideals fit with that of the nation he has just persuaded to vote
him into office. By using articles, like Gorge Lakoff’s “What made a great Speech great,”
I was able to better understand from a linguist and scholar understand the
importance Obama has made in creating unity in our country. According to Lakoff,
Obama bring the country together because he speaks about our collective ideals and
values and the importance of helping each other, a kind of social responsibility. I
used Lokoff because he is a scholar that has done research on government politics
which I found useful as well. I would not, though, include an article that is bias and
The second piece of evidence that was crucial to my research was the speech,
‘A More Perfect Union’ by Barack Obama. The reason why I chose this speech was
because as I watched it, the emotions stirred inside my soul, and I knew this was a
very special moment. Later, with the news media, and the conversations in class it
was confirmed. The speech helped mend the sadness and helped unify a country
racially divided. More importantly it was a speech that reminded the people of
America what we stood for, what we were founded on, and how we can help make
the American dream a reality. With empathy, compassion, a new form of politics
Obama has begun the journey for us, and he has given us the opportunity to follow.
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APPENDIX B: INTERDISCIPLINARY REFLECTION
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I was seventeen when I took my first Human Communication course, HCOM 211:
Reading Writing and Critical Thinking. Fresh out of High School and with no real
others. I believed being bold, loud, condescending, and, of course, winning was the goal
in any conversation, and I was wrong. I have come a long way from those adolescent
years, and have continued to work on becoming a socially conscious, ethical thinker. This
course, as young as I may have been, and as long ago as it was, gave me the power to
better world, and to believe that as a diverse society, we can become partners in changing
Communication Relating to Whiteness course this semester, I was reaffirmed that this is
true. The culmination of courses I received have given me the opportunity to become
aware of the injustices of the past and in societies today, but they have also given me the
The HCOM department has not only been a great place to start and finish my
undergraduate work, it has also been a great place to study history, learn media skills,
archive oral histories, and create lifelong friendships. I suppose the one thing I do regret
is not making more time in the courses I have taken, in order to retrieve all the
information I could. These courses have given me the strength to make my current
relationships work and the tools needed to teach my daughter how to become an
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This capstone was definitely a journey. I started off strong in pre-capstone by
allowing myself ample time to research sources and create the beginnings of a great
interdisciplinary capstone. As the Capstone course began I saw there were challenges in
my capstone topic I was unable to fix in a short period of time so I changed my topic and
I made several adjustments, two 10 page drafts that were rejected, and finally
after a month or so of deliberating a topic I began writing the capstone you hold in your
hand. I stayed up late, woke up early, borrowed books, accumulated about 100 pages of
Yet I was not worried, I knew I had the tools and resources it took to make a great
capstone, and ultimately, I had professors that believed in me. Once I garnered a topic, I
pulled all the necessary books from my shelf that I had kept from other courses and
reviewed the scribbled notes I left at the end of the chapters. I used the internet as a
Ultimately, what I learned throughout the process was to create and keep up to
date appointments wit your professors, and to write as much before the course begins in
order to work out the kinks. I also learned that keeping books from previous courses are
extremely useful because they are somewhat summarized, and are highlighted. I also
leaned that taking math and a capstone course at the same time is stressful, but with help
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APPENDIX C: ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPY
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Corbett, Edward P., and Robert J. Connors. Classical Rhetoric for the Modern
This book includes material that explains rhetoric in three different forms:
ability to persuade is not merely used to prove an argument; as it may be, we are
human being that have are free to make good and bad choice, thus persuade on
behalf of good will and/or self interest. This was a great resource because it helped
me better grasp the concept of persuasion, and the different definitions that have
research based, and contains information from many different scholars that make
This is a helpful tool in shaping my argument because it proves that the art of
Ideally, we assume that someone who has the ability to persuade, “exclusively on the
level of reason,” but this is not very common. Therefore Barack Obama, who has
chosen to take the path less taken to create social change, should be considered one
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Lama, Dalai. Ethics for the New Millennium. New York: Riverhead Trade
(Paperbacks), 2001.
that dependent from on another, and lays out the groundwork to help us achieve
this. Through different levels of commitment, like virtue, restraint, compassion that
provide how compassion does not only create well being to those you help, but it
does so to the person being compassionate. I found this source extremely useful in
trying to understand how ethics play a role in building a greater society, and how
Obama identifies through his speech such thinking. I find this book reliable because
it comes from a person who lives his beliefs in his daily life. He is educated in his
good person above all else, and to help others achieve this as well.
how important being ethical in the new millennium and beyond really is. That we
must cherish one another’s core values at the human level in order to have peace and
harmony. It gives me the compare his work to that of Obama’s and how they are
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Lakoff, George. "What Made Obama's Speech Great." Alter Net. 26 Mar. 2008. 29 Oct.
2008. <http://http://www.alternet.org/election08/80549/>.
As individuals we have different ways of seeing and being in the world, yet
we all want similar things and hold similar values. The most fundamental of them is
democracy and our ability to hold the law of the land as a stepping stone to what we
want to achieve. So when Barack Obama was under “severe political attack” he
choose not solely to talk about race or policies, instead he described the country as
he sees it. Lokoff did not, though, disregard the speech as a race speech, yet he
concluded that it was much more “about inclusiveness not divisiveness; about
responsibility for each other not just oneself; about seeing the country and world in
This is a great example of how I plan to lay out the foundation to my research
paper. I will use this article as a tool to better understand how and why the speech
was written. It creates a better understanding of how I may see and understand the
“race speech” Obama gave, but better yet and example of the way people are seeing
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Gutierrez, David G. Walls and Mirrors - Mexican Americans, Mexican Immigrants
Walls and Mirrors is meant to inform the reader of the past 100 years of
range of history that starts from the early 1848 to 1980’s. He informs the reader of the
tragedy’s, hope, and the importance behind the history, and of the ethical dilemmas
occurring in politics throughout these times. This book also covered Cesar Chavez
that pertains to my research to depict who and what he has done for the Farm
workers in California.
I find this book to be extraordinarily precise, on topic, and factual. This book
is a great resource if trying to understand or learn the history of the Mexican people,
Gonzales, Mr. Gutierrez relies on statistical data that includes personal quotes that
make his arguments stronger, and more helpful. The goal of this book is merely to
inform the reader of the historical value behind the Mexican people, and to
This book was extremely helpful because it gave me the resources to fill in the
blanks for Cesar Chavez, and the history behind and throughout his fight to create a
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Hall Jamieson, Kathleen. Eloquence in an Electronic Age : The Transformation of
There are many arguments Jamieson tries to point out in her book, but the
most relevant to my research was about how a great speech is able, and will to
transcend through time. She is able to put together a compilation of speeches and
cite their significance today, as well as one could have at the time they were made.
She covers the different eras and how those eras are now marked by their famous
speeches.
This is an extremely useful book because it was bias, she agreed and wanted
other to agree with her that there is significance behind speechmaking, and now
with a new era of technical gadgets it will become more impressive. This book,
however fairs rather well when it is compared to current articles about, for example,
how Obama’s speech is a new force because of his eloquent style and will, like JFK
and MLK depict to other generation the turmoil that was happening at the beginning
This book was useful because it laid the foundation to better understand how
speech, or the eloquence of speech can and will transcend time. A theme I will use in
my paper. This book correlates with what I want my research paper to resonate, the
importance of speech, and how Obama, with his ‘A More Perfect’ Union resonates.
The book, though, is a bit outdated, and lacks current information that includes
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Mandela, Nelson. Mandela: An Illustrated Autobiography. Boston: Little Brown &
Company, 1996.
The point of this book was to describe Mandela’s process from being a young
help his country move towards a more equal society. He points out the many
atrocities that have occurred in South Africa, and how the government has aided in
those efforts to keep the African people away from the minority ‘white” Afrikaan’s.
It ends when he leaves prison, after being in jail for 27 years, to become part of the
He won that election, and became the first Black President. This source is
himself. Mandela stays objective. He does not denote anyone, rather he lays the facts
down so others can make their mind over what they think should be considered ill-
minded. The information corresponds to what was happening in the country at the
time, and it comes with pictures to really bring life to his words, as sad as some may
be.
This book was helpful in understanding Mandela for whom he was and who
he has became, as well as giving me the history of South Africa. I was able to pick
out the similarities and the differences between Obama and Mandela, and the
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Obama, Barack. "'A More Perfect Union'" Press Speech. Constitutional Hall,
The foundation of this country was completed with the understanding that
we are not a country of individuals; we are a country that believes "we cannot solve
the challenges of our time unless we solve them together.” Obama clearly marks
how important it is and has been for change to happen to a country that has yet been
able to understand its potential. And although the nation is not perfect, "This union
may never be perfect, but generation after generation has shown that it can always
be perfected." Our strengths then is our democracy and our ability to unite in order
to make sure things become better for the people of America, and beyond.
Obama's speech depicts not only love for this country, his family, or religious
values he is also able to stretch the understanding of how and why we should care
and be a more empathic society. "The children of America are not those kids, they are
our kids, and we will not let them fall behind in a 21st century economy." That we
can achieve greatness and our kids can be great, united we can make thing happen.
states where the majority of the nations way of being and seeing is in the 2008
presidential election. His ability to use rhetoric not only persuade but to place the
importance of empathy as a core value is one main reason the nation is becoming
more aware of its individual role in the policies of today, and tomorrow.
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Obama, Barack. The Audacity of Hope: Thoughts on Reclaiming the American
Obama argues about the important of shared values, and the inconsistencies
the government has avoided in acknowledging them. He points out that we must be
able to able to understand how our country was formed to truly understand its
magnificence. He covers his own personal life story as well as his stance on the war
This was a great source because I was able to learn more about what Obama
stood for, and what his thoughts were on many pressing issues that have also been
dealt with in the past by others. This is a reliable source because it was written by
Obama himself, which makes it just as reliable as the speech he gave in Philadelphia.
The goal was to inform. To inform the audience about who he was, where he has
been and how this has shaped his thoughts for a better future.
I thought this was a great resource because it gave me a chance to read what
was important for him, and how he felt about the situation he was writing about.
This book helps shape my argument that Obama is currently our agent of change.
He has been able to effectively communicate his values and beliefs for the future of
this country and beyond by helping others see them and taking action because they
want to see that vision come true too. That is the power Obama has the ability to
responsibility.
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APPENDIX D: ELECTRONIC POSTER
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HCOM SENIOR CAPSTON
DIGITAL POSTER
FALL 2008
Beatriz Mendoza
Agents of Change
History, Oral History and New Media and Writing and Rhetoric
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