 Business letters are formal paper

communications between, to or from businesses

 Business letters are sometimes called "snail-mail"
(in contrast to email which is faster).
 Business letters includes:

· Letter
· Memo
· Fax
· Email
 Lettersare written from a person/group, known
as the sender to a person/group, known in
business as the recipient.

 Some examples of senders and recipients:

· business «» business
· business «» consumer
· job applicant «» company
· citizen «» government official
· employee «» employee
· staff member «» staff member
· To persuade
· To inform
· To request
· To express thanks
· To remind
· To recommend
· To apologize
· To congratulate
· To reject a proposal or offer
· To introduce a person or policy
· To invite or welcome
· To follow up
· To formalize decisions
 What do I want the reader to know?
 What kind of business letter am I writing?
 Letter of inquiry
 Letter of application
 Letter of complaint
 Letter of regret
 Thank you letter
 Be clear, brief and businesslike
 Do not write confused, overlong or pointless
letter
 Be polite and friendly
 Do not be rude or patronizing
 Write concise and purposeful letter
 Do not try to write in a litrary style
 Do not try to impress with your writing
 Use block style - do not indent paragraphs.
 Include address of the person you are writing to at the
top of the letter, below your company address.
 After the address, double space and include date
 Double space (or as much as you need to put the body of
the letter in the center) and include the salutation.
Include Mr. for men or Ms for women, unless the recipient
has a title such as Dr.
 State a reference reason for your letter (i.e. "With
reference to our telephone conversation..."
 Give the reason for writing (i.e. "I am writing to you to
confirm our order...")
 Make any request you may have (i.e. "I would be grateful
if you could include a brochure..."
 If there is to be further contact, refer to this contact (i.e.
"I look forward to meeting you at...")
 Close the letter with a thank you (i.e. "Thank you for your
prompt help...")
 Finish the letter with a salutation (i.e. "Yours sincerely,")
 Include 4 spaces and type your full name and title
 sign the letter between the salutation and the typed
name and title
 1. Short
 2. Simple
 3. Strong
 4. Sincere
 Keep the letter brief and to the point
 Do not use shortened verb forms - write them
out (i.e. "don't instead of do not")
 Always keep a copy of correspondence for
future reference
 How well do I know
them?
 How much do they
know about my
subject?
 How will they feel
about my message?
 What vocabulary will
set the tone?
 Choose a font that is easy to read.
 1 to 1½ inch left and right margins.
 1 to 1½ inch top and bottom margins.
 Present information
 completely
 concisely
 professionally
 Be consistent – block or modified block.
 Heading 1” - 1 1/2”
 Writer’scomplete
address (Return
Address) QUAD
 Current date
 Inside Address
 Receiver’s complete
name, title, company
and address (Letter
Address)
 Ifyou have a letterhead, you don’t need the
Return Address…

123 Pine Street

Oak Ridge, NJ 07438
 Salutation
 Begin with Dear:
 Use Mr. or Ms. before the receiver’s name
 Use Dear or Attention followed by an
appropriate title, such as Customer Service
Department or Sales Manager.
 Use Dear Sir or Madame or Ladies and
Gentlemen. Include BOTH genders for a general
audience.
 AVOID ABBREVIATIONS EXCEPT FOR STATES AND
TITLES.

(Mr., Mrs., Ms., etc. – FL, NJ, OH)

 PLACE A SINGLE WORD TITLE AFTER THE NAME

SEPARATED BY A COMMA.

Mrs. G. DeGraw, President

 PLACE A LONGER TITLE ON A SEPARATE LINE.

Mrs. G. DeGraw
Executive Director of Safety
  Body
1” - 1 1/2”
 Single-space paragraphs,
double-space between
paragraphs.
 Two paragraphs.
QUAD  Avoid long phrases.
 Avoid making business
letters longer than one
DS page.
 Heading on Page 2.

DS Ms. Moss 2 or Ms. Moss

Page 2
 Complimentary
closing
 UseSincerely, Sincerely
yours, or Yours truly.
Capitalize only the first
word; end with a
comma.
 Signature lines
 Leave four lines (QS) for your handwritten
signature
 Type your name and title below the signature
line.
 Type the words Enclosure(s) two lines below the
typed signature.
 Sending a copy of the letter elsewhere?
cc: PLUS the person or department name.
This line goes beneath the enclosure line.
 Reference initials…
 Doublespaced after the typed signature line
 Lowercase initials

Examples:
/ged Sincerely,
HE:ged
GED Mrs. G.
DeGraw
Mrs. G. DeGraw, President

/ged
 PARTS OF A PERSONAL-BUSINESS LETTER:
 Return Address (includes DATE)
 Inside Address
 Salutation
 Body
 Complimentary Close
 Reference Initials
 Enclosures (if any)
123 Pine Street
Oak Ridge, NJ 07438
October 30, 2005

ABC Company
345 Spruce Street
Whatever, IL 01233

Dear Mr. Brown:

Insert the part of the body of the letter here. The

body of the letter should tell something about what
you hope to convey.

It should also have a closing paragraph in it. There

should be at least two sentences per paragraph.

Sincerely,

Mrs. DeGraw
Mrs. DeGraw, Chairperson

/ged

Enclosure
BLOCK MODIFIED BLOCK
 All parts of the  The heading and
letter begin at the complimentary
left margin. close begin at the
 Paragraphs are center of the
NOT indented. page.
 Paragraphs ARE
indented.
 Problems:

1. Wordiness
2. Sentence fragments
3. "Apostrophe’s" for plural nouns
4. Subject/verb inconsistency
5. Awkward sentences (rude)
6. Lack of transitions between
paragraphs
7. Wrong words
8. Repetition of words or phrases
 Sample Business Letter
 (Please revise it the way that fit your needs and print it out on your company
letterhead.)
 Date:
 Consulate General of the People’s Republic of China
 Visa Office
 500 Shatto Place, 3rd. Floor
 Los Angeles, CA 90020
 Dear Sir/Madam:

This letter is to inform you that John Smith, General Manager of ABC
Company is planning to travel to China for one week starting on March 18,
2005. While in China, he will be meeting with XYZ Company in Shanghai (or
other city) to explore business and trade opportunities (or sign contract, form
partnership and joint-venture project, service equipment, etc.).
 Our company guarantees expenses for Mr. Smith, including round-trip
international airfare. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact
us. Thank you for your assistance in granting this business visa for John Smith.
 Sincerely,


________________ (signature)
Name of official
 Title
 Phone #