the flute?
By Zurinah Hassan
Awards :
Anugerah Penulisan Asia Tenggara (S.E.A. Write Award) 2004
Book Category Award
SYNOPSIS
This poem is about a persona who reminisces the
time he/she spends when in a village. There are
many things that are now luxury to her such as
listening to the melody of the flute itself, gazing
at the evening rays, collecting dew drops, or
enjoying the fragrance of flowers. The village is
now unpopulated as many have moved to the
city. Now that she has moved on with her life,
she wonders whether the flutist is still playing
the flute. This is because, there are many
challenges in the world today such as the world
is dying, the unemployment issue and the people
are disunited because of different political views.
FIGURATIVE MEANING
Stanza 1:
In life, we sometimes have to change our
way of life due to work or family
circumstances. From a lifestyle filled with
values and traditions like in the village, we
may find ourselves embracing a totally
different lifestyle in towns. However, we
may sometimes long for our previous life
with its unforgettable moments.
Stanza 2:
We may wonder if the values and traditions
we believed in and practised are still
observed in our former villagers. Many
people have migrated to towns or adopted
an urban way of life where such traditions
may not be so well-ingrained. In these
places, life is fast paced and they do not
have the time to enjoy the simple pleasures
of life they used to.
Stanza 3:
These people may think back to their days
in the rural areas with guilt. Traditions and
the old values may seem trivial compared
to their present circumstances. There are
economic, political and social problems to
be faced. Some of these problems have
become personal as they affect people who
are close to them.
THEMES
Changes in life
Family commitments
Priorities in life
MORAL VALUES
We face changes in life every day. Learn to accept changes but only if
they are for the good of society. If they are beneficial, work around
them for the general good.
Our family is the most important thing in our life. We should put their
interest and safety first before anything else. Show consideration for
one's duties within the home and carry out family commitments
responsibly.
We should know our priorities in life and be aware of them at all times.
Don't get so taken in by our interests that we forget our priorities.
POINT OF VIEW
Serious atmosphere
POETIC DEVICES
Imagery e.g. blown by the wind, depth
of my heart
Alliteration e.g. fragrance of flowers
Symbol e.g. flute, song
Repetition e.g. Are you still playing your
flute?
Figurative Language Metaphor e.g. The
melody concealed in the slim hollow of
bamboo Personification e.g. sick rice field
LITERARY DEVICES
Personification:
sick rice field - the rice field is
personified as a human who
is not feeling well
- this world is ...bleeding earth is personified as being
wounded
Symbol:
- flute - symbolises a thing of
the past, something tradition
Repetition
Rhetorical question
- Are you still playing
your flute? - the persona
asks a question to which
she does not expect a
reply.
Metaphor
- 'the melody concealed in the slim hollow
of the bamboo' : The song seems to be
hidden in the bamboo when it is actually
coming out from the playing of the flute.
Imagery
a) imagery of sight:
'so quiet and
deserted': This gives a
clear picture of a
lonely village with
hardly anyone around.
'slaughtered
mercilessly': Many
lives were lost in the
war.
b) Imagery of feelings
- 'depth of my heart': The persona
feels deeply and wants to hear
the song played by the flautist.
c) Imagery of touch
-
'collecting dew
drops' someone is
putting their
hands together
to collect dew
drops to feel
the water
d)Imagery of smell
- 'enjoying the
fragrance of flowers':
The flowers are
emitting fragrant
scent.
e) Imagery of sound
-'playing your flute' The music comes
from the flute
Activity 1
1. What did the persona mean when she said
deserted?
Answers
1.the villagers have left/migrated
2.Feeling guilty as she is enjoying the music
when the nation is plagued with problems
3.This is to stress on the activity as
something that should not be done when
the nation is facing so much trouble
4.No, it is not a romantic poem. It is poem
that shows the irony between a leisure
activity and problems faced by the nation at
the same time.