BETTER?
SUBJECTS
USE NOMINALIZATIONS
CAREFULLY
Verb
Nominalization
Adjective
Nominalization
Decide
Decision
Precise
Precision
Fail
Failure
Frequent
Frequency
Resist
Resistance
Intelligent
Intelligence
CHARACTERS
The clearest characters are flesh-and-blood
people
Yet your writing may deal with abstract
characters: thought disorders, demographic
changes, social mobility, isotherms, gene pools
Choose the characters that are important to your
paper, even if they are abstract nominalizations.
Examples:
The
MAIN CHARACTERS
Decide who or what is the main character of each
sentence or of your paper as a whole:
Examples:
If
If
If
If
If
B.
Identify
Revise:
Put
The
Use
COMPLEXITY LAST
Begin sentences with familiar information
End sentences with complex, new information.
When:
When
OTHER REVIEW
length
Grammatical correctness
Remove unnecessary words; simplify and clarify
Coherence of paragraphs
Spelling
Punctuation
Proper capitalization, citation, quotes, spelling
numbers, formatting foreign words.
See http://owl.english.purdue.edu/ for more
formatting information.
REVIEW
1.
2.
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5.
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