Cahyani

(17/42061/PKG/01148)
Rinda Wanodyatama
(17/420664/PKG/0116)
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Interesting
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consists of two parts

The first part explain
about the reasons of
the research (1st
paragraph)
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about the the aim of
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 Materials : chemicals,
tools, machinery
Subject: human

inklusion & exclusion

methods

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but no reason about the
amount
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research
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subject approval
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important variables
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group before the intervention
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earlier research
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research and any other earlier research
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application in general dental practice
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reader. The words and grammar used by the
writer mostly correct. Hence this Journal is
easy to understand by all
The result of this Journal is very useful for us
in our dental practice