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1
Original
Traditionally, to guarantee the quality of LED, the packaging
factory is used to relying on human inspectors. LEDs produce
diversity type of defects containing surface stains, wrong
coating, foreign marks and contour defects in the
manufacturing process, while it will destroy the whole
packaging ribbon if anyone is wrong polar orientation or over
turn in the packaging process.
Revised
In practice, ensuring LED quality necessitates that the
packaging factory depends on human inspectors. LEDs
produce diverse defects involving surface stains, wrong
coatings, foreign marks and contour defects during
manufacturing, subsequently destroying the entire packaging
ribbon in case of an erroneous polar orientation or a turnover
during the packaging process.
2
Original
As supply chain of LED manufacturers face competition
from raw wafers to packaging, a greater emphasis for
packaging factory is being placed on responsiveness to
downstream vendors.
Revised
As the supply chain of LED manufacturers competes
with producers of raw wafers to packaging, packaging
factories must increasingly respond to downstream
vendors.
3
Original
Results of this study provide a demonstration in
manufacturing cost reduction by using of early-warning model
for the power failure crisis, get further with providing more
accurate reliability specifications for higher products reliability,
to effectively solve the problems of product quality surplus
and parts inventory excess.
Revised
Results of this study demonstrate the effectiveness of the
proposed early-warning model in reducing manufacturing
costs during a power failure crisis, subsequently achieving
accurate reliability specifications to enhance enhanced
product reliability and resolve problems involving a surplus in
product quality and excess of parts inventory.
4
Original
Although merger is one of the strategies for the company
which is goingto expand, the long term result can have
far reaching influence like R&D capability enhancement
or destruction. The merger can also help or harm the
whole industry, and even the general public, because of
the close relation between drugs and public health.
Revised
Although a merger represents an effective strategy for
company expansion, the long term outcome can either
enhance or inhibit R&D capabilities of the entire industry,
as well as the general public since pharmaceuticals and
public health are closely related.
5
Original
To foster its competitiveness, cosmetic companies must
put more funds and manpower to study the products
which have better qualities, extractive ingredients, no
side effect and exquisite package.
Revised
Fostering market competitiveness depends on the ability
of cosmetic companies to more heavily invest capital and
personnel in exploring the use of products with added
benefits, extractive ingredients, no adverse impacts and
exquisite packaging.
6
Original
However, when traditional technologies were transferred
into new tools, some of the process and tools were
different than traditional one. Therefore, it would induced
electrical test couldnt on target, lower yield and even
couldnt sensor RGB three colors.
Revised
However, incorporating conventional technologies into
new tools makes it infeasible to reach targeted goals for
electrical testing and achieve a satisfactory wafer yield
and sensor with respect to the three colors of RGB
owing to differences in processes and tools.
7
Original
There are two kinds of processes to handle the batch
scheduling problem. One is doing the batching strategy
first and deciding the sequence of the batch next. The
other is determining the sequence of jobs first and
batching the sequence next.
Revised
The batch scheduling problem can be solved either by
implementing the batching strategy and then determining
the batch sequence or determining the sequence of jobs
and then batching the sequence.
8
Original
There are two directions needed to do in future research.
One is testing the more simulation scenarios for medium
and large jobs to ensure the stable ability of this ILS
algorithm. Next is to compare some of the more methods
to demonstrate the effectiveness of this ILS algorithm.
Revised
Two areas of research warrant future study: further
simulating medium- and large-sized jobs to ensure the
stability of the proposed ILS algorithm and comparing
additional methods to demonstrate the effectiveness of
the proposed ILS algorithm.
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