A little advice from our friend, William Strunk Jr., author of Elements of Style
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.
John has been quite ill for a really long time. John has been ill for a long time.
Eliminate or Replace Meaningless Adjectives Good, Nice, Bad, Okay, Important, Significant
Suzy is a good teacher who makes a significant impact on her students and faculty.
Suzy is a talented teacher who makes an impact on her students and faculty.
Before At the present time Due to the fact that 12 midnight In my opinion, I believe
Trimming the Fat (Cont.) Before In the event that In spite of the fact that After If Although Near Until
In the vicinity of
Until such time as
All things considered, it seems like the new tax cut imposed by the administration will without a doubt make the wealthy wealthier and the poor poorer. When the administrations new tax cut is passed, the children living in poverty will be affected the worst.
The new tax cut imposed by the administration will undoubtedly make the wealthy wealthier and the poor poorer. Consequently, children living in poverty will be severely affected.
Over three thousand students attend College of the Siskiyous. These students pay the teachers salaries.
Using these phrases will put your reader to
The End!